Anu-Chetu Writing Scene-Chetu back-MORE

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Hey, guys...let's assume our Chetanya is back in the drama...how would you present his re-entry? Let's post little cute writing scenes here...😳I'll go first:

Anu is mopping the floor while Maya, Nani and Riddhima sit on the couch and laugh.😡Anu slowly begins to bleed from her foot as she has been working from the whole day. Suddenly the door opens and Indraneil steps in🤢Maya and Nani stand up, shocked.😲Anu looks up and is scared. She stands up and begins to cry. "Bhabhi," says Inder. "Bhabhi, woh ghar aapke bina bahut soona hai. Chaliye hamare saath!"

Maya smiles an evil smile and says, "Kya baag hain Anu ke. Ussai tho uske apne sasural vaale laine aye hain!" Anu moves back. "Nahin, MA! Main iske saath nahin jaoon gi!" Inder folds his hands. "Please, bhabhi," he says. Nani looks at Anu angrily. "Aray kyun nahin jaye gi," she says bitterly. "Chal ja!" They sort of push Anu towards Inder, who smiles and his "Evil" music comes on. He pulls Anu out of the house, laughing. Outside he smiles. "Maine kaha tha na, Anupama, tumse main apna badla loon ga? Tho main agaya!"👎🏼As he raises his hand to Anu's shoulder, Anu raises her hand and slaps him. She begins to run in the woods as he chases her...Anu suddenly falls down and Inder comes close to her.

Suddenly, a hand goes on Inder's shoulder. As Anu stares its no one other than Vikram👏The sad song of DSK comes on as Vikram slaps Inderjeet. Inder pushes Vikram, who stumbles backwards and lands in someone's hands. The camera zooms up as Chetanya's face is revealed. The words "Koi paraya door se ake..le jaye ga Doli Saja Ke..." come on in the back....😳

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Posted: 18 years ago
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wow!!!!!!!!!!!!! fabulous i dont have words to describe cool u made my day thank u thanks alot
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Posted: 18 years ago
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MASHALLAh.. ur a great writer.. u should practice writing stories like this.. n one day u'll see the beautiful fruits of ur seeds... i'm not kidding.. hope u take it seriously.. keep up the good work.. take care..
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Thanks guys 😳 I love writing and I thought I'd share it with my favorite show 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Christ!!! 😲 ..Your a Fantastic writer!!! 👏 👏 👏 ..Wow!...I mean..I would be on cloud nine if this happens! 😍 ..Thanks Soni for making me feel like that for a minute 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
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i think you should start writing the further story of dsk instead of dsk ,s writers 😉
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Excellent talent u have got soni khass u were the writer of this show 👏 .
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Posted: 18 years ago
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yo this is amazing, for a second i thought that would be the real continue ! thats awesome, you should really become an writter

Monica
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Oh i swear if the writersmake the story go like that it'll be awwesooommeeee. I would then kill to watch the drama everyday. Heheheheheheee. 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Soni, I liked your storyline better than the real one. OK you asked to write how Anu and Chet (if he comes back) would meet each other. I am thinking of this one:

Anu and Vikram come closer to each other as time passes by. 😊Anu asks Vikram to start a job as designer to help him financially. Vikram takes a while to give her permission and then finally he agrees. Anu goes couple of places but does not succeed.

One day Anu is walking on the road and she sees a woman (Aroona ji) being robbed by some gundas otside an expensive mall. She saves her from gundas but gets hurt in saving her. Aruna ji is a rich lady and she asks her to forget about her purse but ask Anu to take care of her wounds. Aruna ji is also hurt and cannot walk because of broken ankle. Anu asks people to help them but no one comes forward. She calls the taxi and takes her to the hospital.

In the meantime Aruna ji's driver comes to the hospital and Anu leaves. Aruna ji tries to find Anu but fails to find her. Next day Aruna ji is interviewing some people in her office for a designer's post and sees Anu waiting in the line of people who came for the interview. Aruna ji sends the manager to call Anu and the manager interviews her and tells her that she is selected for the position. Anu does not know about Aruna ji being the boss of the company she is being interviewed for.

Anu is so happy and finds Aruna ji in the office next day. Aruna ji tells her that she left without any reward on the day she saved her, so this is her reward. Anu works really hard and the company improves a lot because of Anu.

After two months Aruna ji tells everyone in the office that her son is coming from US after finishing his MBA there. Surprise!!!!!!!! (Backflash-----Aruna ji saved Chet on the day he was killed. Chet looses his memory. Aruna ji does not have any child so she tells him to be her son and names him Sahil. Aruna ji sends Sahil to US to learn more about business because he did not remember anything. Now he is coming back).

Aruna ji throws a party for Sahil's return from US and invites Anu too. Anu refuses nicely and tells her that her parents won't let her stay out late at night. Next day Sahil comes to office. Anu and Sahil donot face each other first day. Sahil asks her mom about the new designer and tells her that he would like to see her. He calls Anu in his office. Aruna ji is also there. Anu come in the office. Sahil has his back towards Anu. As soon as Sahil (Chet) turns, Anu's eyes are dilated and she faints right there. Sahil and Aruna ji are stunned.

When Anu comes back to her senses Sahil is not there. Aruna ji asks her about what happened. Why did she faint after looking at her son Sahil. Anu thinks he cannot be Chet. He just resembles Chet. So she refuses to tell anything.

But lot of things happen between Anu and Sahil. They fall in love again. 😉

Ok guys I think the story is gonna take six months to finish in bringing Chet's memory back. So I will stop right here. Let me know how you liked it?

Edited by attitude03 - 18 years ago

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