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Awww Neeru & Soni 😳 ...that was sooo lovely...specailly Vada raha 😭 ...plz continue..

Thanks everyone 😃 A cute little scene w/o any troubles:

Anupama stares at Chetanya who looks up, his face completely red and confused. 😕 "Yeh ghana aapko...?" Chetanya looks around, baffled. "Woh...waise hi..." Anupama in the meanwhile moves up and lets her hand run over his face as the song "Na Jaane Koi...kaisi hai yeh zindagani...zindagani...HAMARI ADOORI KAHANI..." 😳 Chetanya's eyes well up and he laughs in a sad way. "Kisi ne such hi kaha hai, Anu. Pyar apna raasta doond hi laita hai!" he whispers in her ear. Anu feels the light brush of his lips against her cheeks and closes her eyes, letting tears of joy fall down. She slowly smiles and looks at him. She takes off the sindoor from her maang and takes a new bottle. "Main jaanti thi, Chetanya. Hamara 7 janmu ka vaada itna kamzor nahin hai!" Chetanya nods, also crying. He takes the sindoor and fills in her mang as the song "Ho Agar Teri Ijazat..." plays. Anu hugs him tightly. "Kahan chale gaye thay aap, Chetanya! Aapki Anu aapke bina adoori hai!"
Chetanya holds her face in his hands. "Tho agar Anu akeli hai, tho Chetanya bhi dukhi hai! Agar saans main hoon, tho dhadkan tum ho...agar zindagi main hoon...tho jaan tum ho," he whispers. Anu smiles and stares at him. "Main samji thi maine aapko kho diya, Chetanya!" she cries. Chetanya kisses her forehead in a sweet manner. "Pagli kahin ki. Mere vaade per kya barosa nahin tha?" The song from the version Thoda Sa Pyar Hua Hai Thoda Hai Baaki comes on...."Tum mere saamne ho...sach hai yaan khwab hai koi...teri yaadoon mein aksar maine palkein bigoee..." 😛

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I feel like reading your guy's stories more than actually watching the real thing. Please keep up to good work.

Thanks Dipti, bsbgirl and Raji. I am hopeless about Chet's return to the drama after reading the cremation scene today. Anu had Chet's ashes on her hands and crying. So it was Chet's body. They did not show the faces because Chet has alreadt left the show. I am sad. 😭 I don't know whether I should continue with the fan fiction or not. Looks like Soni is done with the scene. I will write next scene and see how far I can go.

Anu, Sahil and Ridima are in the car. Anu is in the back seat. Sahil is watching Anu through the rear view mirror and bored with Ridhima's useless talks. On the way to Goa Sahil has a flashback of something and stops the car. He sees a person being beaten up by gundas but cannot recognize the faces. Ridhima asks him about what happened. He is confused.

Three of them reach Goa and stay in the hotel. This is the same hotel where Anu and Chet had come for their honeymoon. Anu hesitates to go inside. Sahil says that he is surprised that he came first time but everything looks so familiar. Everyone sleeps in different rooms. Sahil has another dream of their honeymoon. Faces are not clear but he knows something strange is happening with him.

Sahil cannot go to sleep and wanders in the hallway. The manager comes there and asks him if he needs anything. Sahil says he cannot go to sleep. The manager says he did not have this problem last time. Sahil asks him if he knew him. Manager tells him that he came with his wife three months ago. Sahil is confused and surprised. He calls his mom and asks where she found him. He is surprised to know that it is the same place where he had the blackflash of someone being beaten up.

Sahil goes outside and sees Anu sitting on the bench and crying. He goes near her and sits beside her. He asks her why she is sitting outside. Anu wipes her tears and tells him that she couldnot go to sleep because the memories from her past are attached to this hotel. Sahil feels sad for her. He thinks that something attracts him towards her. He looks at the moon and Anu's face and the song plays in the background "Naya asmaan bana kar, tujhe chand sa saja doon."

Hi gals, I have no words to say thanks to Sonikudi 1 and attitute03, you two made me happy, otherwise I was very depressed and sad, due to Anu. DSK is now making too much sugar and high BP patients. DSK forgot their tradition too, because after too much painful episodes they always give us one happy and full of life episode, but without Chait this is not possible. But you gals made this post and almost released the tension. Thanks again!

Please Neeru..dont lose hope. 😭 ..I know the night is very dark..no ray of light can be seen..but why quit hoping???..when its just a while until dawn..and I still have a strong feeling that Amit will & will be back for sure 😭 ..please lets not give up looking at the cremation scene..lets take it as a challenge & still keep hoping and trying to bring him back 😊

Hi attitute03,you wrote a wrong phrase the correct is
NAYA ASMAAN BANA KAR, TUJHAY CHAND SA SAJA DOON
HO AGAR TERE EJAZAT, TUO MAI RAAZE DIL BATA DOON

I was so depressed watching the scenes 😭 Are dramas there to make us cry? 😕 But anyways, continuing from were I left off:

While Anu and Chetanya were hugging, Inderjeet steps up behind them. "Tum tho...tum tho Rajeev thay," he states angrily. Chetanya stares at Inderjeet. He has flashbacks of the goons hitting him. "Sache pyar ki haar nahin hoti, Inder. Aur jo tumne meri Anu ke saath kiya--"Inderjeet cuts him off with a high-piched laughter. 😕 "Chetanya, Chetanya, Chetanya!" he says. "Tumne bahut badi ghalti ki mere saamne akar. Tumhe kya lagta hai...main tumhe aise hi rehne dhoon ga? Aray tumhe tho pehle bhi khatum kiya tha...dobara kaun rauke ga?" He runs to the guns hanging and points it at Chetanya. "AAj tho koi Ma nahin hai, Chetanya!"
Chetanya stared at Inder almost shocked. 😲 Inderjeet laughs and is about to shoot when Anu begins to walk up the steps. "Ruk jao, Anupama!" Inder shouts. Chetanya is worried as he raises his hand. Anu continues walking with a stone face. "Bas!" she shouts. "Mere Chetanya ko agar aanch bhi ayee tho tumhe...!" Inderjeet is about to shoot when Anu reaches him and hits the gun. It falls out of his hand as he stares at her. He then begins to laugh. "Waah, Anupama, waah!" he yells. "Apne pati ki jaan bachane lagi ho?" HE tries to hold Anupama but Chetu reaches up the steps and punches his face. Inder hits Chetu 😡 and Chetu falls to the ground. As Inder is about to hit him again, Anupama grabs him arm and slaps him with a vase in the face. She remembers as he chased her and bothered her after Chetu left and she hits him harder with glass. Padmini is crying and she tries to save her hubby 😆 Anupama however grabs her hair and throws her down the steps...

wow 👏 anu is now become a fighter she is actually fighting like wrestler 😃 well said sonikudi1 pls continue i am enjoying my self and waiting for next episode thakns for giving us a smile. 😊