OS - Misunderstanding

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Okay guys I am writing a one shot. This os was inspired by a scene that Symphony mentioned she wanted to see. So I am giving full credit to her for the idea. I hope you don't mind Symphony? The story is set after today's episode.

It is night time and Dhaira is looking for Santoshi and can't find her anywhere. He thinks "Kahan yeh ladki?" He goes to his room and sees no one in there. He then thinks to check the room Santoshi always stayed in and doesn't see anyone in there either. He is about to turn around when the lights go out. Then a pair of hands cover his eyes. He smiles and says "Santoshi tum?" No one answers. Dhairya says "Oh I see you want to play games?" He turns around and grabs Santoshi and pulls her close. She felt different, but he ignored it as she was letting him get close. He then thinks to kiss her when she starts tickling him. He then tickles her back and they end up on the bed. He tries to lean in to kiss her again when the lights go on. When Dhairya looks down he sees it is Sindoori not Santoshi who he was about to kiss. He is horrified and says "Tum?" He then hears a sob. He turns to the door and sees Santoshi looking at him with so much hurt and tears in her eyes. Before he can say Santoshi's name she runs away from there wiping her tears. Dhairya gives one angry look at Sindoori and yells "Santoshi!" before running after her. Sindoori sits on the bed smiling contently. Santoshi ends up in Dhairya's room and Dhairya comes in after a few seconds and says "Santoshi listen to me." She has her back to him and he says "Listen, I thought that it was you." "I would never do anything like that with anyone else." "You have to believe me." He goes to grab her hand and she jerks his hand away and says "Don't touch me." Dhairya is taken aback by Santoshi's tone as he has never seen her this angry. Santoshi says "I should have known you could never fall in love with a girl like me." "You want a girl like Sindoori right?" "One who will come close to you and who you can be close too?" Dhairya says "It is not like that Santoshi." Santoshi says "Then what is it like?" He goes towards her and says "You are my wife Santoshi." Santoshi says "I was your wife after you forcefully put sindoor on me and then told me that it was a sin to even touch me." Dhairya recalls his harsh words to Santoshi and cringes. He says "I admit I was horrible to you back then, but things have changed." "I have changed." She looks at him and says "Oh really?" He cups her face and wipes away her tears and says "Really" "I understand that because of how I treated you it is hard to believe me." "But believe me when I say "I love you Santoshi." "You are the only woman for me." "When I was paralyzed you were by my side." "You took care of me day and night." "You are the reason I was able to walk again." "That is when I realized you are the woman I want to spend the rest of life with." Santoshi cries and knows that Dhairya is telling the truth. He says "Please, don't cry." She smiles and says "These are tears of happiness." He smiles at her and kisses her forehead and they hug.

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Perfect OS dear 👏 👏 👏.Thank you for the OS. 😃.I dont mind Oci 😊 Just give us Sairya 😆. ⭐️ for you dear. Sindoori fooled Dhairya & poor Dhairya was thinking it was Santoshi .Santoshi misunderstood & ran to her room crying. 😭.Dhairya went after his heroine 😉.I liked how Santoshi reminded him that he used to feel disgust to come near her.Dhairya recalled his harsh words & felt terribly bad 😊.Dhairya tried to make her understand how important she was to him. Finally Dhairya confessed his love for Santoshi the original Santoshi 😃 & Santoshi believed him 😃.Dhairya asked Santoshi not to cry but it was tears of happiness 😊.Liked the end - Dhairya hugged Santoshi.
😃.Your imagination is awesome Oci 👏.Agree I thought of this type scene but you made a perfect OS. ⭐️
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: SymphonyStar

Perfect OS dear 👏 👏 👏.Thank you for the OS. 😃.I dont mind Oci 😊 Just give us Sairya 😆. ⭐️ for you dear. Sindoori fooled Dhairya & poor Dhairya was thinking it was Santoshi .Santoshi misunderstood & ran to her room crying. 😭.Dhairya went after his heroine 😉.I liked how Santoshi reminded him that he used to feel disgust to come near her.Dhairya recalled his harsh words & felt terribly bad 😊.Dhairya tried to make her understand how important she was to him. Finally Dhairya confessed his love for Santoshi the original Santoshi 😃 & Santoshi believed him 😃.Dhairya asked Santoshi not to cry but it was tears of happiness 😊.Liked the end - Dhairya hugged Santoshi.
😃.Your imagination is awesome Oci 👏.Agree I thought of this type scene but you made a perfect OS. ⭐️



Thanks for the praise Symphony.😃 I am glad you think my imagination is awesome.😆 It is my love for Sairya I guess.😆 I really liked the scene you mentioned and thought to write an OS. I really hope they do something similar on the show.😊 Also I added the part where Santoshi reminds Dhairya how he hated touching her because that was the scene she recalled in the episode the other day. So I thought that it tied in nicely. Also unlike the show that will likely never mention these things I wanted to in my story.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: oceanus85



Thanks for the praise Symphony.😃 I am glad you think my imagination is awesome.😆 It is my love for Sairya I guess.😆 I really liked the scene you mentioned and thought to write an OS. I really hope they do something similar on the show.😊 Also I added the part where Santoshi reminds Dhairya how he hated touching her because that was the scene she recalled in the episode the other day. So I thought that it tied in nicely. Also unlike the show that will likely never mention these things I wanted to in my story.

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: oceanus85



Thanks for the praise Symphony.😃 I am glad you think my imagination is awesome.😆 It is my love for Sairya I guess.😆 I really liked the scene you mentioned and thought to write an OS. I really hope they do something similar on the show.😊 Also I added the part where Santoshi reminds Dhairya how he hated touching her because that was the scene she recalled in the episode the other day. So I thought that it tied in nicely. Also unlike the show that will likely never mention these things I wanted to in my story.

I want exactly your OS like scene in the show.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: SymphonyStar

I want exactly your OS like scene in the show.


If only there was a way to get my scene to the writers.😊 Better yet I can quit my day job and go write for Santoshi Maa.😆 I would actually take the fans opinions into consideration.😃 When I have watched Indian shows I have always said, I could write better stuff then this when I have been frustrated with a show.
Edited by oceanus85 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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perfect excellent mindblowing os. kaash cvs khuch aisa dikhate.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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This is awesome 👏 👏 ...really like it 😳
Thank you Oceanus85 ⭐️ 😃

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