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Posted: 9 years ago
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Don't get shacked ! Next update will be on the weekend for sure ! 😆
Chapter 2 - The End or The beginning ?

Where am I ? Who brought me here ? What is going to happen ? What if they do something ? All what's and ifs running a marathon in my tiny head. I was struggling like a caged rat trying to come out from its trap . The fear inside me overpowered my strength . I could do nothing but just struggle , struggle and struggle . On being unable to anything , tears formed in my eyes , but no , I can't lose hope . Why the hell am I not able to open the rope ? The plaster tied in my mouth was suffocating me even more . The moron who did this will surely not have kids in future ! What did I do ? arrrhhh I couldn't think rationally now . A lump was forming in my throat , where am I oh god !

Umesh bhai's wedding , what will happen to that now ? All of them will be searching for me . This can't happen oh god please not this !! Please wake me up from this . Its just a nightmare ! It should be ! I was trying to please myself . Only if someone could hear me ! Damn it ! I cried like for hours and I could do nothing ! I looked around for sharp edges and it was far away from my place and my legs too were tied up and moving a inch was impossible for me . As I tried to move , there was something that stopped me and I saw myself tied towards a weight much heavier than me . I sighed as my last hope turned decayed . I didn't have any more strength to struggle . I slowly drowsed off with heavy heart with hundreds of unanswered questions.

I felt completely weak , opening my eyes was far away task for me , but still I could feel the surroundings . Noises of footsteps and that vibrating around . Many people came around like a mass of elephants stamping together, it was such a headache . I slowly opened my eyes as I opened I could only project one person who looked sinfully handsome with the chocolates iris looking like a Greek god with perfect physique . I'll be the first woman on earth , who on getting kidnapped is drooling over a male damsel . Trying my best to get away my eyes off him , I kept ending up looking at him . I felt like a trash now !

" This is not the girl we wanted ! ..It's Gurpreet Aman Kaur...She was the one to be kidnapped ! " A harsh man voiced out looking taller than the brown eyed one . Aman ? Why did they want Aman bhabhi ? Oh Thank god it's me instead of her , she would have lost her sanity seeing the amount of people gathered . Pathetic! "How could you people be so damn careless ? " He roared ! God My ears !!! "She is one hell of a scary cat ...Umesh Jain would have lost his minds over her ! " he screamed again . How dare they ? " hhhmmm" I tried to scream if I didn't have my mouth tied , I would showed what a typical *Female Gaali * will be . All of the men diverted their attention to me. Now I sure this is going to bring the worse. " Bhai ...This is Nisha Jain - Umesh's sister ; she can help us too " a man behind replied . Wow ! The people whom I don't even know, have so much information about me . Help my foot, I'll kill each and every one of them if they try to black mail my brother or sister in law. " Hmmm" an involuntary screech bubbled up from my larynx . Oh god ! The handsome guy there stared at me . I didn't know why , but I felt conscious of myself . Why is this happening without my own want ? I wanted to kick myself . " Lagta hai yeh ladki darr gayi " the man behind again told to his so called boss . And they took out a gun from their pocket . My fright knew no boundaries . The girl who used to scare people around using fake guns , is now facing people threatening me with the real one . Is this called Karma ? my mind asked me . Grrr all my rational thinking flew away in the stink air here . The guy pointing the gun at me .

I should be scared right ? Yes I am , but I saw the guy behind him over whom my half the attention was . Heaven knows what kind of a trust built inside me from the minute I saw him, I didn't get scared. Will he save me ? I thought Right! He looks like superman with red chaddi for you ? My mind quarreled - whatever I sighed.

I saw the guy keeping the gun over my head . If , I f I had my hand untied , this guy would be teeth less ! Looser ! . " Call Umesh ! " the tall one ordered . How do they know him ? Some loop hole Nishu ! " Kabir " the harsh guy called the tall one and I turned to see him . Kabir was his name ? Did I hear that before too ? This guy seems to be familiar. Was he stalking me ? You are Pryianka Chopra right for him to come behind you ! My mind made me into fits again ! I felt like smacking my head somewhere . I definitely hated the sense of humor I had for myself .

"...Nishu ! Khoti kahi ki ! Where are you ? How times should I call you ! " I heard Umesh bhai's voice . They used my phone ? How dare they ? How did they know my password ? What the freaking hell ? . The guy holding the gun next to my head warned me to reply politely . " Your sister is in our control " the ruthless one replied . " What ? " Umesh bhai was surely more scared than me . " Vi..Viraj " my bhai stammered . Holy shit ! Umesh knows them ? I just can't understand what's happening . " Right guess bro ! " he replied evilly . "Your sister ...I'll finish her off for sure ...If you don't ..Ahem " Viraj tried to speak . There was something fishy for sure. Fear ignited my brains more now. " Don't ! Please don't do anything to her ! I'm helpless please ! " Umesh bhai broke down .

What did Umesh bhai do ? I hope he is safe . They removed the tape from my mouth and I was drastically sinking down seeing my brother cry . " Bhai .." I shouted . I had a lots to speak but only one thing came out from my mouth hearing my brother sobbing . " Nisha ...Nisha ..those people are very dangerous ! " he tried to speak and before that the call got hanged . " What the hell ! " I shouted . " Auh huh ...lower your voice you damn girl ! " the so called Viraj tried to control over me . " One sound more and you will know what I can do to your bhai ! " he winked . I felt disgusted . His men brought two other girls from some other room who shocked me to the core . It was Kaira along with some other girl who was horrified to the core .
I couldn't believe my eyes ! The nave girl whom I know was looking all so bold and disgusting . Even before I could understand what was going on , I found the other girl dead . My breath got struck , I couldn't think , couldn't say anything but just watch , tears formed in my eyes with twitching pain in my stomach , A life was being brutally killed ! How can they be quiet ? Why are they being this cruel ? What about the girl's family ? What about her life ? These losers!!
I was nowhere safe . These people are killers . I wanted to run away to my home , to my bhabhi , to my cousins . I was feeling so helpless . The feeling was just numbing my cells . Kaira slowly moved towards Kabir hugging him in all ugly ways. I felt my heart breaking . But why ? ...I couldn't be sure enough . No he won't save me , I can't trust him , I have to fight it alone . I closed my eyes and my tears endlessly flowing out . The first time I fell for someone , turned out to be bitter . I know it was just an infatuation, but couldn't control myself for I was just a nineteen year old . I was red in shame . The feeling made me dizzy and the last thing I remembered my was head touch the ground .
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I know its being like too fast - bear with me ...Chappals , tamatars all are welcomed
Edited by -abz- - 9 years ago
Sujayricky thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
#22
Awesome 👏
Thanks for the pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
#23
It is too good Abi ☺️
Superman in red chaddi! Priyanka Chopra 🤣
Nishu is infatuated towards Kabir🤪
Kaira! Viraj?! Killer 🤣 I might die while I accept 😛
But it was really amazing!
Yay! I did not have to wait for weekend 😃
By the way I am Krishi 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#24
Awesome update abi
Do pm me from next time
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Posted: 9 years ago
#25
Abi... trying to kill me i never ever can think of something like this... but on the contrary i luved it... and i fell for nishu's sense of humour... so me 🤣
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Read both the parts at one go awesome yaar...👏
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Posted: 9 years ago
#27
Read the prologue, part 1 & 2 together...interesting concept...continue soon...n plzzz pm me whenever u update...😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#28
read both d parts together...

it was awsm n m loving it yr concept...

it was different n amazing😊

nisha ko jis baat ka dar tha whi hua

viraj ne aman ki jagsh nishu ko kidnap kia n she was chrcking out kabir...n he felt connection wid him n she wants to trust him.

poor umesh...

update fast cant wait to read more abi
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Posted: 9 years ago
#29
aryyy bhaii plz continue kar na m waitinggg
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Posted: 9 years ago
#30
Have read the prologue and the two parts in one go..
Interesting story...
Do continue soon...

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