Arjuna's injury Draupadi's Anguish- An OS

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Uma90

@Uma90

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#21

nice one... 👏 i didnt expect the twist 😆 Poor Yudi...🤣 Arjun is very smart !! he let his wifefy touch touch and then tells her the truth 🤣 Lovely os 😳👍🏼

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Semanti Chakraborty

@DharmaPriyaa

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Posted: 11 years ago

#22

Varaali didi:

I don't know what to say after reading you extremely touching OS!!!!!!!! I am now under a deep feeling within my heart for all three of them! But I must say that you showed a very real picture 👍🏼⭐️ I hope that people who think that Yudhishthir was jealous to Arjun regarding Draupadi will be positively effected by your writing.

Please keep writing didi 😊

P.S: some members here found the end part funny, but I felt pain for Yudhishthir 😭 it showed his patience & tolerance again.

Edited by Urmila11 - 11 years ago

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smrth

@smrth

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#23

Great work Varaali ji. 👏

Draupadi's mental state here is straight reflection of Vyas's description- A passage on her in Vana Parva. Incidentally, there too, baring her deep feelings (for Arjun) to Yudhishthir only.😆 But with a slight difference; Arjun had recently left them on his individual ascetic quest and Yudhi was not as unperturbed as here. 😛 He was 'all concerned'! Perhaps a base for His ultimate 'assessment'?

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Yajnaseni

@Yajnaseni

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Posted: 10 years ago

#24

This one is really nice. Do tell me if you write any further OSs. I hv sent u a buddy request.

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sankadevimaha

@sankadevimaha

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Posted: 10 years ago

#25

Ohhh superb os..👏👏 draupadi's love fr arjun s unlimited... I feel bad fr yudi.. bt its fate... wt v cn do fr dt???

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JazzyM

@JazzyM

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#26

Awesome twist to the tale...love how you manage to bring the balance back into Draupadi's emotions...Good job!

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draupadidevi

@draupadidevi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#27

Your ideas are quite interesting and covering with a light hearted tecnique of story telling you have very clearly indicated the inner turmoil of their mind. Good work but why have you not continued with some other interesting moments of pandavas and panchali's lives?Please update soon.