Arjuna's injury Draupadi's Anguish- An OS

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Srishti

@srishtisingh

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#11

wow varali another superb one after a long time! it was really hearttouching, subtle and funny

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sohini

@sohiniluvsmusic

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#12

aww varaali u're amazing!! suddenly @ d end d story turned out to be yudi-drau's understandable love story!! loved it..

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Sonia

@princessSonia

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Posted: 11 years ago

#13

Amazing Os..

i m irrevocably in love wid Ardi..😳

hate CVS fr nt gvng us der scenes..[:X]

keep writing n if u write on Ardi plz do pm me if possible..

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luv_sakshi

@luv_sakshi

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#14

Aww too cute...Varaali...great work with the writing yaar!👏👍🏼..the climax was funny..😆😳..u should consider writing more Ardi OSs for us😉

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Cotswolds

@Cotswolds

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#15

Varaali, what a lovely brilliant OS..

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varaali

@varaali

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: thearcher
Oy Varaali

You took my ArDi fantasy and turned it to YuDi 😆

Not at all...It is Arjuna- Draupadi all the way...

Poor Yudi is the one left alone.

BTW- thanks for the inspiration.

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varaali

@varaali

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: devashree_h
OMG I laughed out loud in the end.🤣 This was awesome, loved it.👏 Arjun sounded sheepish when he told her who was actually injured.😆

@ bold: Naturally. He was enjoying his wife's care and attentions while the one who was actually injured is lying alone, unattended. 😆

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RosChel.Lobster

@RosChel.Lobster

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#18

Varaali is it possible for u to write an OS on Arjun n Satyabhama please? 😳

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varaali

@varaali

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: Rushika
Varaali is it possible for u to write an OS on Arjun n Satyabhama please? 😳

Arjuna and Satyabhama????? 😕

Edited by varaali - 11 years ago

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RosChel.Lobster

@RosChel.Lobster

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: varaali

Arjuna and Satyabhama????? 😕

Satyabhama krishna's wofe...they were friends na...not a romantic 1 just a casual or sumthing funny 😊

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