MANAN FF : My perfect life with my life ( NOTE... pg 3) - Page 2

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Part 2

Manik pov..

bhabz aru is crying...Pia called ..

Me n nandu rushed to Pia's room... as to wht happened to aru.. why is she crying.. i just hope she didn't got hurt..

N: aru kya hua baby..
M : kya hua angel.. we both asked together

Aru hugged me and hide hr face in my neck

M,: kya hua meri aru ko.. i asked hugging her back..

A: kuch ni.. she said in a low tone..

M: papa se share ni karegi angel.. i tried to ask her again..

A :aru ko bhuk lagi h.. she said cutely..

M: to aap bta dete bua ko ..roye ku..

A :mjhe mumma k pass jana h.. she said nd went on Nandu's lap..i could feel she was not ok.. but i let her go..

aru hugged hr tight.. as if trying to hide herself ..

I found it little different as she alway came to me for her worries ...and more over she never cry if she is hungry..

Pov end..

N: mumma aa gyi ab btao kya hua.. nandu asked consoling her..

A: kuch ni..

N: accha chalo garden me chale.. she tried to divert her mind..

A: haa .. she agreed at once..

As it ws only 7 in d evening .. so they went to the garden..

N : aru u know problems na btane se solve hota h.. she tried to make her speak..

Aru looked at her.. and then looked down and said..
A : mumma mai dal(dar) gyi ti..

N: ku baby kya hua..

A: mjhe na kl dleam ( dream) me monstl( monster) dikha tha aul ( aur) wo to bad hota h na..

N: baby monsters na real me ni hote.. its all imagination.. she tried to convey this fact to her little baby..

A: bt mumma monstel tha aul wo aapko hult( hurt) kl ra tha.. aww my baby.. u r such a cutie pie..

N : see baby mumma is fine na .. aur mumma k pass itni brave beti h.. to mumma ko monster hurt ni kar sakta.. hai na...

Mumma papa ko bolegi ki monster ko bhaga do ..ok.. now smile please..

A : smiling ok mumma.. she said with a big smile.. as she knew her papa will shuu the monster..

Manik came from behind and asked aru ..

M: icecrm khana h kya kisi ko.. he said with a straight face

A :ha muje ... she said with a big smile..

M: ni aru ne to papa ko i luv u ni bola ab tk.. he said with a sad face..

Aru started jumping and said stretching hr hand... i luv u papa itta salaaa..

Manik laughed n picked hr n kissed hr cheeks...

Nandini was all the time admiring them..

They went inside and saw pia smiling howing her all 32 teeth..

Manik smirked and said..haa janta hu tu b ice cream khane jayegi.. dont show your teeth..

Bt first sb dinner karenge... ok..?

All : ok papa.. all of them shouted and laughed..

With this they all settled in hall..

Manik side hugged nandu n aru sat on Pia's lap..

They were chit chatting when they heard a car honk..
Aru shouted maa aur dadu aa gye.. and ran towards gate..but manik stopped her..

And then entered a couple of early 50s..

Raj (R) : kya baat h sb kya baate kar rahe h.. he asked sitting on one of the couch..

N: nothng papa aap logo ka wait kar rahe the aaplog baitho mai pani lati hu..

Saying this she went to the kitchen..

Neonika ( Neo) : aru look what maa bought for u..( maa means dadi here) and gave her a pink teddy..

Aru went to neo and hugged her.. and took the teddy smiling..

M: mom dad how was your day..

Nandu also came with water.. and passed the glasses to neonika and raj..

R: all gud .. bs bht bhook lagi hai yaar.. he said rubbing his stomach..

N: ya dinner is ready ..aap sb fresh ho k aa jao.. mai table set karti hu..

After sometime..
All were settled on dinning table.. enjoying food.. and sharing their happening in life..

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Amazing c.s...
Awesome update...
Luved it...
Plz continue soon...
Waiting eagerly...
Take care...
Stay blessed...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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awesome update..loved it... 😊 ...waiting 4 the next update...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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