MANAN FF : My perfect life with my life ( NOTE... pg 3)

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Posted: 9 years ago
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PROLOGUE


"Aru.. where are you" ..i pretened as i cant see my 2 yr old angel...but i knew she was hidind under d table ..

"Aru come beta have milk.. dnt u want to be a strong girl like ur dad" .. ya ya she is completely daddy's girl...i knw nw my angel will come running.. being like her papa is her all time dream...
N here she came..with a big smile..

Aru (A): mumma m stlong gal see my takat( mumma m so strong see my takat) .. she showd me here cute hands and arms..making me go all aww over my cute bundle of joy..

Nandini (N): wow my aru is sooo strong u want to be like papa na.. i told her and she bobbled her head...Then plz hv ds milk .. aapko pta h milk me itni saari takat hoti h..

And she agreed.. to drink it.. so i made her sit on my lap n feed her with her favourite minnion cup

After feeding her.. we both sat in living room..watching tv ..when a car came and aru ran to the gate..

A: papaaa... aa gye.. yeee..

N she started jumping clapping her hand
Yes he was manink malhotra.. my manik.. aru k superdad..n my life..

Manik pov..
M: princess how are u...i asked her..
And she showed me her biggest smile.. awww she is my cute little angel..
I picked her nd kissed her cheeks and in return she kissed me back...

This is what i need after a tiering day..

"Jaan" ...i called out as i didn't saw my nandu.. bt no reply..

Jaan where are you.. i called again.. but again no reply

I knw she is angry with me as i scolded her in the morning..

I went to Pia's room and asked her about jaan..

Bt no use she was in her team so she didn't told me.. ahhh this is not fair.. all the girls make a team..

so i asked aru to be with pia and went to our room but she was not there .. i was about to go out.. when i saw something moving behind d curtains and i knew she was my baccha hiding from me...

I slowly went dere n removed d curtains...

She is such a cute baby sometimes..
My cute angry girl..
Jaan ... i called her .. thinking she will look at me.. but
She just closed her eyes as if she didn't saw me..

Haww itna gussa...

M.. jaaan.. i said cupping her cute bubbly face..

N.. mmm.. yaa she is angry...

M sorry baby.. i said with all the sweet n my voice..

N :ni.. she said with a cute pout..

M : succhi sorry.. i said golding my ears...

N :par mai gussa hu.. she said with angry pout..

M :..sorry .. i said Holding nandus ears..

N :nai pehle tmhe meri baat manni hogi.. here came her gussa wala demand..

M :..ok bolo kya baat.. i will do whatever you want..

N :mjhe 5 icecrms khilo.. she demanded ..

M: what ... 5 ni nandu tmhe sardi ho jayegi.. this is wrong... jaan. . Ur health is first priority to me.. but she cut me in between..

N :ni hogi...plz mani.. she said with hope in her eyes...

M : .accha ok.. 2 icecrm..

N :ni 5 .. ok now she is lookingvat me with those puppy cute face and eyes..

M :sadly.. ok

N: promise .. she asked me with full excitement..

M: promise.. i said nd kissed her cheeks..

Nandu huged me tight n kissed my chest .. ohh god.. i luv her sooo much..

Nd i smiled and hugged her back..
My jaan..

Ok guys do tell how was it..
Acctually this is my story in wattpad but i wanted to post it here too..
Do tell howz it.. do vote.. n comment..

SUGGESTIONS ARE ALWAYS WELCOME..



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Posted: 9 years ago
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superb...
Gonna read it again as read already on wattpad..
Just a suggestion COULD you just make the font size smaller ..It would be more comfortable...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Its awesome
Can u pls share the wattpad link of this story
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Amazing update...
So cute...
Plz continue soon...
Waiting eagerly...
Take care...
Stay blessed...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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It's so cute dear...😳
Loved it.
And plz try to make letters small... Size 2 will b better I think.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awww so cute loved it.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice lovely continue waiting take care 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Guys can anybody help me..
How do i post next part of this story..

M not understanding..
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: mananonrocks

Guys can anybody help me..

How do i post next part of this story..

M not understanding..



Just post the new chapter on comment box and edit the topic
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Posted: 9 years ago
#10
character sketch

MANIK MALHOTRA- a business tycoon,
A complete package of looks hotness attitude love care adorable cute and sometimes arrogant..he is everything a girl dream for her life partner ...full of life n emotions ... nandu is his life n her princess is his lifeline

RAJ MALHOTRA- father of manik
Best father nd grand father one could hv owner of malhotra empires rich but down to earth

NEONIKA MALHOTRA- mother of manik(positive) loves her family and very morden

NANDINI MALHOTRA- a down to earth girl
Cute n very sesitive love her family to d core n d only person who can handel her monster nd mini monster

PIA MALHOTRA daughter of raj n neonika a happy go lucky girl n crazy for bhai as she is his little doll

AROHI MALHOTRA : 2 yr old angel of malhotra family heart of d family
Cute naughty n mini monster
Apple of everyone's eye
Fab 5 ki jaan

FAB 4 same as show

NAVYA same as show

DHRULIYA MUKBHI CABYA ARE MARRIED

ABHIMANYU :mukti's husband n loves hr d most a doctor n very lovely person

AS MORE CHARACTERS WILL B ADDED I'LL INTRODUCE THEM

Edited by mananonrocks - 9 years ago

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