A SanLak OS: Brothers In Arms - Page 9

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Viji baby...
Marvelous update...

Well sansku is known as wise n intelligent n lakshya as impulsive n immature..but after marrying ragini ..she has profound effect on him..his is changing positively..more responsible...grown up...together both are on quest to help sansku..his brother n her jeeja/jethji...loved how they found sansku secret n lucky confronted him...they want him happy n get his life back swara..

overall amazing dialogues ..beautifully woven..like like like sooo much...loved the bond sanraglak share...

Love
Talia

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: krishuuu

Viji baby...

Marvelous update...

Well sansku is known as wise n intelligent n lakshya as impulsive n immature..but after marrying ragini ..she has profound effect on him..his is changing positively..more responsible...grown up...together both are on quest to help sansku..his brother n her jeeja/jethji...loved how they found sansku secret n lucky confronted him...they want him happy n get his life back swara..

overall amazing dialogues ..beautifully woven..like like like sooo much...loved the bond sanraglak share...

Love
Talia



Hey Talia sweetheart 🤗 🤗

Yes, Lakshya has certainly become more mature and responsible. It does seem that he has sincerely repented for his rather juvenile and fickle behavior in the past; and has acknowledged his own missteps that landed all of them in such a mess. And I get the feeling he has sincerely resolved to redeem himself; by being a loving, caring husband to Ragini; a supportive and affectionate younger bro to Sanskaar; and a good friend to Swara.

The SanLak bond looks genuinely brotherly and affectionate these days. They have gone back to being the "Bhai" and "Lucky" which they were during their childhood and teen years.

Ragini and Lakshya both want to ensure that Swara and Sanskaar are happy together; that this misunderstanding Swara has owing her retrograde amnesia, is resolved soon. They do want to support Sanskaar in whatever they can, in his quest to woo Swara back.

I am so very happy you loved this OS, my dear.
🤗 🤗

Loads of Love,

-----Viji

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Thanks Sujay, will revert the soonest I can on your lovely comment. 🤗
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sujayricky

Res

Unres finally

Viji so sorry for this most late unres a very big sorry again 🤗

No worries yaar Sujay.
🤗 No need for Sorry at all, I understand studies and personal commitments.

Such a superb os and a unique one also because in this forum i didn't see os on sanlak so congratulate for your first sanlak story 😆

Thanks yaar. 🤗🤗 Very glad you liked this one. Yeah, there weren't other SanLak OS's when I wrote this, I guess. I've written two now...this one, and another one called "Float Like a Butterfly, Sting like a Bee". 😊 I think you've read the other one, too.

I am very happy with the way they have been building up the bond between SanLak. It seems much more genuine than Swaragini. It feels so nice to see Lakshya stand by Sanskaar in his time of need.

I completely agree. 😊 The SanLak bond is really being shown well now. It really does look like Sanskaar and Lakshya have restored their bond to what it used to be in their childhood and teen years---that of brothers, close friends, and confidantes. Lakshya has really become very supportive of his elder bro; and has stood by him like a rock in this time of need.

That was very lovely part when lakshya was lost in thought of ragini and i really liking this mature lakshya no childish. I really love their bond in this os. Sanskar feeling was superbly written

Lakshya has really become more mature, more responsible as a person now, I feel. He has realized the consequences of his actions, and has become a devoted, loving husband to Ragini, and affectionate bro to Sanskaar, and a true friend to Swara.

I am so happy to know that you found the portrayal of Sanskaar to be superbly done here. 😳 That is a lovely compliment, as Sanskaar is the most layered and compelling character on the show, with a lot of depth, shades and angles to his fascinating nature.

One's again you have written it beautifully 👏

Do write more
Thanks for pm



My Dear Sujay, 🤗🤗

Thanks for your comment, buddy!

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Loads of Love,

----Viji

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