Ts: Tum meri hu Teaser on page 21 30/July

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hi guys one more new story this is something and got new idea today so here is the Prologue
Prologue

Ishita: Leave me...choro mujhe kun laye hu mujhe yahan

Raman: nahi aj purey 2 saal bad mein apna badla pura kerun ga mein tumhe aj nahi chorun ga

Ishita: mein tumhe janti nahi hun mene tumhara kuch nahi bigada pls leave me mujhe janey doo

Raman smiled and slapped ishita so hard and Ishita cried loudly

Iyer residence

Mrs iyer: kuch pata chala ishu ka

Mr iyer: nahi har jaga dhunda nahi mil rahi hamari ishu humein

Mrs iyer cried and mr iyer complained police




Thats it plz buddy me for pm plzz



Part 1 page 2
Part 2 page 5
Part 3 page 9
Part 4 page 11
Part 5 page 18
Edited by nimoash21 - 9 years ago

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Interesting
Plz pm me next time
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Posted: 9 years ago
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update soon update soon update soon update soon update soon update soon update soon update soon update soon update soon update soon update soon update soon update soon update soon update soon update soon update soon update soon update soon update soon update soon update soon update soon update soon update soon update soon update soon update soon update soon update soon update soon update soon update soon update soon update soon update soon update soon update soon update soon update soon update soon update soon update soon update soon update soon update soon update soon update soon update soon update soon update soon update soon update soon update soon update soon update soon update soon update soon update soon update soon update soon update soon update soon update soon update soon update soon update soon update soon update soon update soon update soon update soon update soon update soon update soon update soon update soon update soon update soon update soon update soon update soon update soon update soon update soon update soon update soon update soon update soon update soon update soon update soon update soon update soon update soon update soon update soon update soon update soon update soon update soon update soon update soon update soon update soon update soon update soon update soon update soon update soon update soon update soon update soon update soon update soon update soon update soon update soon update soon update soon update soon update soon update soon update soon update soon update soon update soon update soon update soon update soon update soon update soon update soon update soon update soon update soon update soon update soon update soon update soon update soon update soon update soon update soon update soon update soon update soon update soon update soon update soon update soon update soon update soon update soon update soon update soon update soon update soon update soon update soon update soon update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: ruhi_ishra

Interesting

Plz pm me next time

Ok dear 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Interesting... Plz pm me from nxt..
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Originally posted by: fSharm

Interesting... Plz pm me from nxt..


Ok dear :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: rufana10

interesting!

cont it...


Will cont it soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nyc prologue... Please update soon...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hi guys I'm updating the first part of Tum meri hu for this I want many comments and likes

Part 1

Mrs.Iyer was crying Mr.iyer was talking to the police officer

Police officer: I tried a lot sir but I am not even getting any clue about her
Mr.Iyer: I don't know but I want my daughter at any cost
PO: please sir try to understand my staff are trying to find her pls relax sir this is my promise I will find her
Mrs.iyer: I want my daughter I don't know how is she pls bring her back
PO:we are trying and soon we will find her
Police officer take leave from there and Mr.iyer and Mrs.iyer hugged eachother
Mrs.iyer: vishwa we will get our daughter back na
Mr.iyer:soon we will get our daughter back don't take stress it's not good for ur health

In a dark room

Ishita:help anyone here help help!!!
Ishita was tied with ropes in a dark room
I: choro mujhe janey do amma appa help koi hai
After 15 mins Raman came inside the room open the lights and sat infront of her
Ishita: I don't know you but still you have kidnapped me
Raman:you don't know me but I know you very well and I will take my revenge by hurting you
Ishita:pls leave me pls at least open the lights mujhe andheray mein dear lagta hai
Raman smiled and went out of the room before switching off the lights
Ishita cried

Mihir:Raman do you think by kidnapping her and hurting her we can take our revenge
Raman: I don't know but now I won't leave her
Mihir: ok give her food than we will go to our home mom must be waiting
Raman nodded and went inside taking the food

Raman open the lights and than open the ropes of Her hands he put the food infront of her
Ishita:please mujhe janey do mujhe kahna nahi khana
Raman:kha lo kunki mein tumhe itni jaldi nahi marney dunga subha she kuch nahi khaya
Ishita: no I don't want to eat
Raman: eat it or you will get a tight slap
Ishita became scared and started to take bites but her hands were shivering she could not take the bite in her mouth it was falling from her hands Raman took the morsel and start feeding her she started to eat.

Tu hi ye mujhko bata de
Chahun main ya naa
Apne tu dil ka pata de
Chahun main ya naa

Food was finished Raman was again tying her hands but Ishita took her hand away
Ishita:please don't tie my hands they are paining.
Raman didn't answer and was going out of the room he was closing the lights when Ishita: please light mat band kero don't close the lights
Raman:yahan per koi farmaishi program nahi chal raha he went after closing the lights
And than both the brothers went to their home

Bhalla residence

Raman and Mihir came and saw their mother crying

Raman: maa ap phir se ro rahi ho why are you crying mein apke ek ek ansu ka badla le raha Hun ka

Mihir: yes mom...and we are always with you

Mrs.Bhalla smiled and said: I know my sons are with me and both hugged their mother

Mrs.Bhalla: ok you now both go to sleep seems like you both are tired

Both of them were going to their room when Raman said: Mihir don tell mom about this that we have kidnapped Mr.iyers daughter


This is it friends hope you like it
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Edited by nimoash21 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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nice update
want to know why raman kidnapped ishu...
update soon

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