New SS-Her loss Epilogue Part 4 Updated 31/7 Page 16

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This SS is purely based on Swadheenta's grief for Asad.This story is in with a twist.Abhay is alive in my SS.I did not like the idea that makers took both of Freedom's brothers.So I hope you like it.
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She was kneeling in front of Asad's grave pouring her heart out,the feelings she had bottled up for over 2 months.The moment she had decided to fight her mamu and Asad's case she had decided that she had to be steel strong to fight this case.Adarsh was standing there but could not muster up the courage to tell her to not to cry-she had every right to grieve for her brother,her bandar but he was worried about her health.Doctor had strictly told him that she had been too much in emotional stress and bottling feelings up had not helped her either but he could not stop her either.His chotu was alive but his wife's brother was not going to come back.

Jaya looked at Swadheenta crying and remembered she telling her not to cry for a terrorist and also the harsh words she had used against her.Swadheenta was the first one in the family who had the courage to stand up against Mumma and this had to level agitated her.She herself had never spoken against her mother-in-law even when she was living in loveless marriage for 4 years.But Swadheenta was different,she would never tolerate a lie,never stand for dishonest people,was highly idealistic and even if her family member had done wrong she would never support that-much like mumma herself.She never understood Swadheenta and Asad's relationship.Though she knew that Swadheenta adored Asad and loved him like she would have loved her own brother.But crossing the "Dahleez" of the house was something she never even thought of.Maybe she did not have the courage for it.Even when Simmi used to voice her opinion against mumma it was she who would silence her down.Maybe what Jaydev said was correct.She always tried to be a perfect bahu and never thought on her own thinking.

Simmi looked at Swadheenta with pain.This girl lost her brother on her own wedding day.Her mamu was arrested for terrorism , her parents asked her to obey her in-laws and forget those people who practically raised her,her husband and in-laws did not support her when she needed them the most.She had hated Swadheenta in the beginning but than started understand her and than started considering her own sister.SHe never felt this connect with Jaya bhabhi as well even though she had stayed with her longer than Swadheenta.But now she not only considered Swadheenta her sister but also respected her.For her courage,for speaking the truth,for standing up against wrong.Swadheenta was slowly becoming her moral compass.She had no one to tell her what was right and what was wrong maybe Swadheenta could change it.Abhay was right- Swadheenta will set the house in order.

Abhay looked at his bhabhi or his sister as he had said to Adarsh in pain.She was in deep pain but not the pain of being Stabbed but in pain of losing her brother.Radhika Deshmukh had told him as to how Swadheenta had fought for Asad and alone.Nobody to support her.Frankly he was ashamed at his family for treating her the way they had.But most anger he felt at Adarsh.He had loved her before the rest of family.He knew what ideals she held and how she would never compromise them but everybody failed her.He felt guilty for Asad's death.He should have sent him back but than again he never knew of Yash'd dubious plan.DCP Abhay Sinha looked at Asad's grave and promised him that no matter what till he is alive he will always be Swadheenta's brother first than her brother-in-law.He will always be her brother before anything else and now as brother it was his responsibility to bring his sister out of this grief and pain.He would do everything in his power.

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So guys this was the prologue and pretty much what each character is thinking right now.Rest will follow.And please donot worry i will write tons of Adarsh-Swadheenta scenes but this will also revolve around Abhay and Swadheenta-the new brother- sister on block.

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hey Bonny. Very nice!

There is no one who can take Asad's place in Swadheenta's life. But I do hope Abhay fills that void to some extent through this story.
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Thanks for the update dear and we will wait please update soon
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This is really a very interesting idea and do continue please waiting
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interesting prologue
loved to read more
i loved abhay's character apart from swadarsh
update soon
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Wow...finally a story with Abhay alive 👏 I was wishing ki show mein Abhay aur Asad ko zinda rakha hota...Abhay could hav been in coma aur Maamu ki jagah Asad jail chala jaata...in the end Asad is freed aur Abhay starts recovering...kitna accha hota.

The story is very nice and beautiful...i dont think Abhay can take Asad's place but hope he makes Swa feel better...but if Abhay was alive how did Asad get shot?

Plz update soon
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I share the same opinion, killing both abhay and Asad was a major blow for Swadheentha and so so unfair I wanted to see development in Abhay and Swadheentha bond but then makers had to go through such tragic route...
Lovely prologue...Keep me updated as and when you write!
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interesting prologue
I wanted abhay or Asad alive in show but it is fulfilled in your ss
do continue soon
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I love this story!! I want Abhay to call all the sinhas out for their behavior towards swadheenta. Abhay is the next best brother to swa after asad!! I hope he can help swa through all this and teach adharsh to be a better husband ;). Out of all of the sinha boys, i think abhay is the best husband!!
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Part 1
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Adarsh and the rest of them had brought Swadheenta home.Adarsh wondered what type of strength did his wife have.During their visit to Asad's grave Swadheenta had completely broken down but here he was standing next to her while Suhasini did their Gruh Pravesh.She was all smiles not even a glint of tears or complain were seen in her eyes.Everybody who had seen her at Asad's grave was shocked everybody but Abhay.Abhay knew the kind of love his sister-in-law carried for her Bandar.She could go to any extent for him if he was right.Asad had told him that the night he had carried a knife to Radhika's bedroom to elope with her that was the first time his freedom had slapped him.He vowed he would never do anything that would disappoint his freedom.Abhay could see the pride in Swadheenta's eyes.Pride of being Asad Gilani's sister-a matryr's sister.

On the other hand Suhasini was all happy to have finally welcomed Swadheenta Sinha into the family.Suhasini was proud to have a daughter-in-law like Swadheenta who took care of her family but can also stand against them.She was proud to have a student like Swadheenta Ramakrishnan Sinha.Suhasini always knew that a girl which Adarsh chooses will always be special.Jaya was a fantastic homemaker but was also naive when these kind of matters came to fore which came to her notice after all this matter started.Simmi on the other hand may not be a good homemaker but she was very protective of her entire family and even she cannot deny it and that which left Swadheenta- she was smart,understanding,mature for her age and will be a highly regarded lawyer.Her gut and intuition always impressed Suhasini.Suhasini saw her younger days in Swadheenta And now Suhasini knew she had high amends to make to her daughter Swadheenta.Each and every family member had to make amends to her for giving such a horrible start to her life in this new family.She saw that even though she pretended to be happy underneath she shredding to pieces for her brother.

Suhasini:Swadheenta now you need to rest completely for 1 week until these stitches are off.I have assured the doctor that you will completely rest.You have to keep my word there.

Swadheenta:Mom I am completely fine.The pain has also lessened due to this medication.

Suhasini:No nothing doing you have to rest.Adarsh tum le jao Swadheenta ko room mei and janab Abhay Sinha even you need to rest.Coma se aabhi bahar aaye hai.Sher mat samajh ye aapne aap ko.Go both you .Simmi you go and sit with Abhay varna aaram bhi nahi karega.

Adarsh:I know Swadheenta tumhare man mei abhi bhi kuch to chal raha hai.

Swadheenta:Aisi koi baat nahi hai.Tum na hamesha Paityam he rahoge.Kitna sochte ho.

Adarsh:Mai zyada nahi soch raha hu.Sit here.I need to talk to you.You have been so silent ever since the court hearing.I was expecting that you will go all angry woman once the trial is over but it seems as if you are heavily ignoring me.Swadheenta mai tumhara gussa bardahst kar sakta hu par tumhara ignorance nahi.I know I have heavily messed up but I promise I will try to set everything in order.

Swadheenta:Adarsh...Please donot promise anything.Promises always break.

Adarsh:See tumhare maan mei abhi bhi ye sab chal raha hai.I know you have not forgiven me but this time I will earn your forgiveness Mrs Sinha and I will be making these amends till I am alive.But you need to talk to me.Clear out your frustrations.Bottling up emotions is not good for you even the doctor said that.If you want to grieve for Champ you can do that.This is your own house and he was your brother.But do not keep it inside.

Swadheenta:The only reason I kept it inside me was because I was fighting the case and also because I had been advised not to show my emotions for "A Terrorist".So much so that I could not be vulnerable while with my husband.I could not even grieve in front of him.

Adarsh:I am so so sorry Swadheenta...I will never repeat the mistake of not trusting you again.

Swadheenta:Sorry doesnot cover everything Adarsh.I had known you before anybody in the family.You always knew that I would never support Asad in wrong work.When he did wrong it was me who had slapped him.I did not expect from the rest of the family to understand me because they had know me for a fewer amount of time but you...we fell in love with each other that means you knew the kind of person i was yet you choose to ignore my screams,proofs.I understand that you did not know Asad more but you knew me right ????? Or what Jaya bhabhi said was true Had it been better had you married Vanshika ?

Adarsh's heart breaks at that question.His wife was questioning his love and trust for her.He knew she had the right to shout at him even slap him for his dis trustfulness or foolishness he had shown in these many days.But he will not let his idiocy let get in the way of this relationship once again.He had to repair it fast or he was going to lose her completely.

Adarsh:(He holds her hands)Swadheenta I know I have been utterly foolish in dealing with the situation.Chotu was in coma and I was furious and mind had stopped working.And when I realized that you were right you had even left the house.I know very well that I have damaged the working of our relationship.But believe me when I say this You are my life and I cannot imagine this life without you.Please give me one chance to repair it.

Swadheenta:Adarsh I need some time.The murder of my brother is still fresh in my mind.I am not going anywhere.I am with you in this very house itself.I have forgiven everybody but unfortunately even that has not set my mind at ease.I just cant get past the fact that my bandar is gone forever.(Tears has started welling up in her eyes)I will not see him every day.He will not eat my head.Woh mujhe chod kar chala gaya even after promising me that he will always be with me when needed.

Adarsh:Swadheenta sambhalo aapne aap ko(He hugs her tightly)I am there with you at every point.We will deal with this together as well as our relationship.Your stabbing had got everyone worried.Even Amma and Appa had called.They are flying down from Chennai tomorrow.They had called Mom.

Swadheenta:Mujhe unse nahi milna hai.They left me when I asked for their Support Adarsh.I am their daughter and they felt that I should have kept quiet than what difference does it make if I live or die.For me my parents are mamu and mami.They ran away when they needed their support when I needed their support.I will never forget that.

Adarsh:Swadheenta listen to me atleast...

Swadheenta:I cannot have this conversation with you right now Adarsh.My this decision is final.Mujhe amma and appa se nahi milna hai.ANd tell them not to go to meet Mamu and Mami as well.They are hurt enough.I am going to get freshened up.
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Precap-Adarsh goes to Suhasini for help and finally the conversation between Mother-in-law and daughter-in-law.
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So this was part 1.Please tell me how was it.


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