New SS-Her loss Epilogue Part 4 Updated 31/7 Page 16 - Page 2

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Posted: 9 years ago
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AWESOME CHAPTER !! i liked all the things swa said to adarsh. that was very much needed. 😊 Also liked the mention of amma and appa and how even they deserted the gilanis and swa. they weren't dealt with in the end on the show. Plus, i like how swa told adarsh to not make promises since they break (at least his). He needs to learn to put his words into action. Hope to see more of abhay-swa bonding too and swa-gilani bonding😃. Please update soon!!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Thanks for the update dear it was really an awesome part waiting eagerly for the next update
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Plz continue
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Soapoperasrfun

Hey Bonny. Very nice!

There is no one who can take Asad's place in Swadheenta's life. But I do hope Abhay fills that void to some extent through this story.



Yep know nobody can replace Freedom's bandar but trying to experiment with ABhay-Swadheenta bond since the makers could not explore it.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: sushfiza

Seems interesting

Cont soon



Thank You so much.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Aimsha

This is really a very interesting idea and do continue please waiting



Have updated first part.Will post a index on main page so you all can know.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#17

Originally posted by: dh19

interesting prologue

loved to read more
i loved abhay's character apart from swadarsh
update soon



Yep Abhay was really an interesting character.His love for Simmi was the trait in him that I liked most about him.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#18

Originally posted by: chemgirl

Wow...finally a story with Abhay alive 👏 I was wishing ki show mein Abhay aur Asad ko zinda rakha hota...Abhay could hav been in coma aur Maamu ki jagah Asad jail chala jaata...in the end Asad is freed aur Abhay starts recovering...kitna accha hota.

The story is very nice and beautiful...i dont think Abhay can take Asad's place but hope he makes Swa feel better...but if Abhay was alive how did Asad get shot?

Plz update soon



In my SS as well Abhay was shot and than slipped into coma but police thought Asad shot him hence they killed him.Rest I will explain in future updates.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Manonidz

I share the same opinion, killing both abhay and Asad was a major blow for Swadheentha and so so unfair I wanted to see development in Abhay and Swadheentha bond but then makers had to go through such tragic route...

Lovely prologue...Keep me updated as and when you write!



I hope I do justice to this SS I have thought.I have updated part 1
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Originally posted by: ttom

I love this story!! I want Abhay to call all the sinhas out for their behavior towards swadheenta. Abhay is the next best brother to swa after asad!! I hope he can help swa through all this and teach adharsh to be a better husband ;). Out of all of the sinha boys, i think abhay is the best husband!!



Yep Abhay was the best husband.Though I loved Adarsh's character but I knd of liked Abhay in this category.He loved Simmi despite all the problems beared all wrath of his own family members.

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