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Maine bhi hubby aur bete ko puchha par woh toh bol rahe hai ki normaly aisa nahi hota par thumara kuch nahi keh sakte😆 😆...ab mail karke post kar do!

Originally posted by: anuradha.nandam

ye sahi comment hai ,. actually me waiting for such a comment from yesterday ,.. thank.u ummm,.. tell me do u have any idea to solve this?

No dear i dint have soultions for this 😒

MG FF-ESSENCE OF LOVE-Th-1 1 /part-156/epilogue/pg.156/23/9/2015

Geet:- came on to his chest ,..keeping her head on it ,..Maan ,.. thank.u.

Maan:- Thank.u tho mujhe hi kahna chahiye Geet,.. thumne mujhe ek isa amanath dena chahthi ho ,.. is ke baare me mai kabhi sapno me bhi nahi socha,..per mai kya karu misty ,.. mai thumhari ye kwaish pura nahi karparaha hu ,.badi muskil se mujhe thum mili ,. thum,. humara betia, ye pariwaar mujhe sabse jyaada important hogaya,.. ab mai thumhare bina nahi ji saktha,.. i am sorry misty,. he nuzzled his face in her bosoms in his restlessness and helplessness' hugged her tightly bringing her on to him fully and kissing her every where expressing his love and his affection undressing her to claim her.

Geet submitting to his passion drowning in him contented closing her eyes in the ecstasy of their passion and fascinating him to have him in her .she is now contended to have him like husband, and now she want him as her baby with his ansh in her arms giving a shape to their love and to create a life with him and shower her love on him.

Closing her eyes in sheer satisfaction and in their passion. when she realized,..yes she realized ,..a strong belief ,.. a strong notion,.. that she is already having him in her,..she felt contented and smiled,. yes,..she know now that she is already pregnant with his child. Her whole jerked with this realization ,.. yes she is conceived.

With this gleaming happiness and with lot of hopes and eyes with full of expectations she asked him,.."Maan ,. agar mai pahle hi pregnant hui tho?

Maan still panting of their passion and burying his face in her bosoms without thinking a second,. ."tho thumhe ye baccha girana ,..[hoga agar kuch pblm hue tho,..ye bat maan ki muh me hi rahgaya]as Geet closed his mouth with her palms with a deep hurt and red fury eyes those r spitting fire ready to pounce on him like a wounded tigress.

"How could he say like that? how could he? does this baby meant nothing to him? its his baby also? he is the father,.. its their love,..how can he say this to a mother? how dare to say it?

"Yes she is a mother. A true mother,. a mother can never bare this at any cost. Agar ye baat kisi aur ne kiya tho .. she will tear them with her naked palms.

Maan stunned to see this Geet.,.. a wounded lioness who is ready to lounge on him to tear him. with the stream of tears showing how deeply he broken her she pushed him and turned to other side showing him her back ,.. which shattered him never ever bare her refusal ,..her simple gesture pinched him deep in his heart.

"How can he forget? she is Geet,. what means baby for her. After all she lived till now for the sake of her children ,.. she fought with destiny and with life only for the sake of her children,.. for whom he fall,.. how can he forget? ye sab unhe pahle hi sochna chahiye tha,.. he now understand the mistake he did,.. now have to make over it,..to woo her again

Maan turned her forcibly cupping her face in his palms ,with tears in his eyes ,.. I am sorry jaan ,.. mujhe se galathi hua ,.. mujhe isa kahna nahi chahiyetha,..baby is mine too misty,.. I am sorry its our love ,.. i understand wat it means to u,. please jaan mujhe maaf kardo ,.. isa muh math modo mujhe se,.. rutna math mujhe se,.. baat karo mujhe se jaan,.. mai ji nahi saktha ,..mai ,.. mai ,.. dargaya hu ,.. mai mere insecurity ki wajese isa bina soche baat ki ,.. i am sorry Geet ,.. please Geet meri taraf dekho ,. mai marr jaunga geet,.. galathi ki maine . please maaf karo mujhe ,..he begged her like anything ,. he feared for his life.

Geet still not convinced ,..:-aap isa kaise kahsakthe Maan,..ye humara baccha hai maan ,.. humne ise janm di ,.. ye humara pyaar ki nishani hai ,.. ise hume samalke rakhna hoga,.. hum dono ka hi hai ye ,humara apna ,.. she sobbed still as ye baat hit her like arrow which knocked out her heart.

Maan:- hissing still in pain I know ,.. i know,. jaan ,. i am sorry ,.its precious to me also jaan,.. i too love our baby ,.he moved to her still flat belly and showering kisses on it ,melting her ..she forgave him

They hugged drowning in emotions , consoling each other, later cherishing .the happiness feeling satisfaction,. and Maan wondering how she is sure of their baby and she explaining,.. Geet gleaming to have her armaan .and Maan still wondering about the consequences and about Geet's health.

Isi duvidha me kuch din gaye Geet aur maan r still in thier sangharsh ,.. ek taraf tho wok khush hai per duseri taraf ,.. duvidha ,. kaise bathana ye baat bachhon ko aur kya hoga? And Maan's worry and pareshaan for Geet's health.

Apitha @Ankitha r observing all this ,. Geet ka activities slow hogaya ,.inki body changes and moods ,. may be due to her stress r due to pregnancy,..and Maan all became silent , khoe khoe hogaya ,. kisi se thiki se baat nahi karpaarahe ,. humesha kisi soch me lagne lage ,bahut maayuz hogaya,. wakth guzarrahe,..aur geet ko check up keliye bhi leke jaana hai ,.

Maan:-Geet ,.. ab dekho thumhari haalat ? hum aur der nahi karsakthe hume dr. ke pass jaaana hai thumhe check up karwaani hai..ab tho hume bachhon se baat karnahi padega,..,..

Geet:-ji ,.. per hum kaise bathaonge unhe , mujhe samajme nai araha hai ,.,.. kya hoga? agar wo galat samjhe tho ?

Maan:- jobhi ho ab humara pass aur koi raastha nahi hai,. hume face karna hi padega ise kitne din chupa sakthe ,.hume baatana hi hoga,.

Arpitha who is going to their room to call them for b.f. heard their talk , came forward asking ,."kya batana hai papa? aapl log kyu itna hichtahat horahe ho? isa kounsi bat hai , jo batane keliye aap itna sochrahi ho?kya hua? aur maa kya hua aapko kuch din se mai dekhrahi hua ki aap na thik se kha nahi ho na pi rahi ho bahut tension me lagrahi ho? aur papa aap bhi bahut gumsum honelage ,.. kisi se baat bhi nahi karrahe ,.. kya hua ?

Geet:- wo ,.. wo ,.. mai ,. mai ,.. batana chahthi ki ,..ki,..[ murmering in her mai kaise batau ki mai ,...]just then all [Prasant. Aakash,and Ankitha]came and stood listening their discussion

Arpitha :- ki aap phir se maa bannne waali ho? haina mama?

Both Maan @ Geet stunned hearing this ,. astound how did she know?

both:- hardly opening their mouths,.. thumhe kaise pata..?[not only they,.. remaining also felt astound]

Arpitha:- Kyunki mai bhi ek aurat hu ,. aur ek maa hu ,.jabse Ankitha ghar ayi tab se maa ,.. mai aap ko observe karrhi hu ,.. aap bahut gumsum hogayi ,. maa mai samajsakthi hu ki aapkya gujar rahe hai,..aur mai jaanthi hu aap papa ko kitna pyaar karthe ho,.. aap ye soche rahe haina ki ye baat hum se kaise bathana? aur hum per kya beethega ,. haina maa? maa banana har aur ath ka haq hai maa,.. isse koi tal naih sakthe ,.. aur aap ko kisike bare me sochneka ya rukne ka koi jarurat nahi hai . Hum sab yahi chahthe hai maa ,..iss jyaada khubsoorat tofa aur kya desakhthe ho aap papa ko? ye baat aap hum se batane keliye kyu itna sochrahi ho? ek patni apni pathi keliye isse accha tofa kya desakthi hai?

Papa ,.. aap hume sab kuch diya ,.. sabkuch ,. apni puri dil se hume apnaya papa,.. pyaar ,.. mamatha ,.. aap ki naam izzat sab kuch ,. sab kuch diye aap , aur hum aap ko is ki alawa aur kya desakthe hai papa?

Maan felt touched by their love and affection on him. Making Maan all dumb founded by their innocent love and affection towards him and overwhelmed by their warm welcome to his baby in to this family.

Arpitha:-aap kyu isa sochrahe papa ,ki hum apni bhai/behanko apana nahi karpaayenge? kisiko pyaar karnekeliye aur mamaha jathane keliye ye khud ki rishtha ya khoon ki sambandhi honeki koi jarurat nahi hai papa,.. ye baat aap saabit karke dikhya papa,.. tho hum kyu nahi karsakthe ye,..she kept her palm on Geet's stomach and caressing it she said with tears of happy in her eyes ye hamara hai papa ,.. humara apna,.she said this welcoming to the new member to their family ,..hum sab yahi chahthe hai papa

Just den arrived Dev Annie, Arjun with their angel . They came to invite them for their daughters naming ceremony ,..when they heard this,... Annie jumped in happiness ,.. her dream from long .. of playing with h er bhanjhe [maan's baby ] is now coming true,..

He became emotional and stirred from his core of his heart with their open acceptance. He felt blessed to have them as his daughters. Per he still not felt contended as he is fearing to loose Geet ,.. not that satisfied,.. his worry is still there. Arpitha looked at him ,.. confused by his reaction ,.. doubting that still he is not believing them ,..

Arpitha:- aapko abhi bhi hum per viswaas nail haipapa? aap ko hum per shak hai ur doubting us still? she looked hurt aap hume yakeen nail karrahe ho?

Maan:- knowing his fault ,. though he felt elated by their acceptance in his worry he didn't give any head to her ,.. he immeadiately looked at her and taking her hands in him,.. ,." nahi maa mai thum per nahi shak kkarrahi hu,.. mujhe pata hai aap log mujhe se kitna yaarkarthe ho ,. mai ,.. mai ,.. thumhare maa ki bare me pareshaan horahi hu ,.. kayi ye bachhe ki wajese unki health ko pblm hui tho ,.. koi pareshaani aur takleef hue tho ,.. mujhe dar hai maa ,.. per thumhari maa meri nail sunrahe ,"..

Arpitha:- Papa ,.. aap ko pareshaan karneki koi jarurat nail hai papa,.. meri maa bahut strong hai papa wo apni bachhe keliye kuch bhi sahthi hai ,.. chahe wo kitna bhi muskil khu na ho wo bardaash karthi hai unki mamathame itni taakat hothi hai .. iski example hum hi hai papa,.. hume pal ne keliye posne keliye unhe kya kya karna pada kitna takleef ,. pareshaan aur kitne ladayi ki wo zindagi me wo bhi akele ,.. ye sab unki mamtha hai papa ,.. ab aaj bhi phirse wo ye sab karthe hai ,.. aur iss baar aap ki pyaar unhe ye taakat dethi hai ,.. aap unki ki saath hai papa,. tho darna kya? aur hum sab bhi hai ,.. hum unhe kuch bhitakeef nahi hone dethe ,..hum sab ka puri madat hai ,.. hum dab maa ki khayaal rakthe hai,.. kyu choti? she looked to the remaining family members seeking their approval. She said this lightening his heart.Maneet overwhelming to their support.

Ankitha:- who is listening this quietly till now responded to her di,."per mera ek sharat hai,"..making all stunning ,.. Maneet felt sunked hearing this ,.. they know this will come ,..its not that is to accept this ,.. crashing all Geet's hopes and desires devastating her expectations.

Prasant:- Ankitha ,. thum kya bolrahi ho? kya hogaya thumhe ,.. job hi bolne se pahle socho ,. thumhari maak e bare me ,..aur papa ki bare me ,. kya beethega ,. unper ,.. [ prasant is fearing by this ,. phirse family me kuch pblm hua tho]

Aakash:- ha Ankitha,. kya chahiye thumhe ? dekho papa ne itna sab kuch diya thumhe ,.. badle me thum kiya diya unhe? au kya chahthe ho thum ,.. dekho itna selfish math bano ,. ye thik nahi hoga,.

Arpitha:- she is too much shocked hearing this she never opposed her till now for anything that too related to her mother why now ? why is behaving like this? ab kya hoga? kaise inhe manana? ankiha itna selfish kab bangayi ,.. "sharat,.. kounsa sharat,. kya chahiye thumhe ,..dekho thum,.. she stopped when Ankitha showed her palm to her to stop.

Ankitha:- she went near Maan looking deep in to his eyes,.. "chahe to hum maa ko kisi ke saath share karsakthe ,.. per papa ko nahi ,.. ye sirf aur sirf humari papa hi rahega,.. she came close to him and hugging hum by keeping her head on his chest ,.. papa hum aap ko share nail karsakhthe ,.. aap sirf humari hai papa ,.. we love u papa ,..melting him and every one in her love to him ,.. yes now they become possessive for him.

Arpitha too came to him joining in their hug saying ,.. haa papa ..choti is right we cannot share u now ,.. we cannot loose u papa,..

Maan drowned in their selfless love melted to tears ,.. with his chocked voice ,.. " jarur maa,.. mujhe per pahla haq humesha sirf thum dono ki hoga "he kissed on their heads. .

Geet's heart filled with joy satisfaction and mostly with great fullness towards her children ,.. as they understand her ,.. her motherliness and her love to Maan ,.. she felt contended and the feelings cannot be explained in words,.. tears filled in her eyes,. she came to Arpitha and hold her hands and with chocked voice," pata nahi pichle janm me mai kounsi soneki phoolonse bhagwaan ki puja ki,.. mujhe thumhari jaisa betia mili,..ek aurat ko sirf ek aurat hi samaj sakthi hai ,. ur ek maa ko sirf ek maa hi samajsakthi hai aaj thum ye saabit karke dikhaayi maa,.. mai teri ye esaan kaise chauk sakthi hu,..aaj tak ,..aaj tak mai teri maahu ,. per aaj thum meri maa bangayi maa,.. she folded her hands before her daughters making them emotional ,..

Arpitha@Ankitha:- at once caught her hands ,. saying maa aap ye kyakarrahi ho? aap ko isa nahi karna chahiyetha,.. hum ne kuch bhi nahi kiya maa ,.. esaan humari nahi aap ka hai ,.. aap ne hume itna achha papa diya ,.. hum jita bhi karo kabhi nahi chuka paayenge maa ,..

Ankitha took her baby from Akash and gave her to Maan saying ,. she is ur Maanvi papa aapka pothi . Maan flabbergasted hearing this taking the baby in to his arms. Yes she named her daughter as "Maanvi"as she is papa's pet .

Annie took her baby and bring it to Geet saying ,.. Bhabhi ,.. its ,.. ur "Maneeta" looking to both of them she said ,.. Maan aur Geet ka "Maneeta"she also wanted to name her daughter as she loves both her bhai aur bhabhi throwing them in bewilderment. All stood numb and in amusement by the events done one after other.

Dev came and hugged Maan saying congrats bro ,.. aap nahi samajthe ki aap hume kitna khushi derahe ho ,.. bro aap nehumare papa ki kami kabhi mehsoos nahi honediya ,.. ab mujhe mouka mila ki aapki bacche ko mai mera haathonse paalnaeka ,. jopyaar aap ne hume diya wo mai aapki bachhe ko dena chahtha hu bro,... aapne kaise parwarish diya jaisa mai unhe dena chatha hu bro,..

Arjun came and hugged Maan saying ,.. cogrates jiju ,.. hum bahut khush hai ,. ab aap ki family pura hogaya jiju hum bahut khush hai,... per ek bat ka ofsoos hai mujhe ,. [he wanted to lighten this all emotional situation,]...all looked at him confused ,..like ab ye kya kahrha hai? and maneet a little bit nervous .

Arjun looked at all of their faces as if he is studying and understanding their turmoil's and tensions,..he told to lighten the situation,. "ab tho do do MSK ka attitude badash karna padega hume".Making all of them laugh and Maan gritting his teeth ,.. mai ,.. aur attitude ..abhi dikhata hu thumhe saale".

And there came his angels to protect their papa,.." khabaddaar humare papa ko kuch kahe tho",..waking their fingers to him,.. warning Arjun. Arjun handsup surrendering.

when our cute possessive angel Dishu jumped on Maan saying " ye mera Dost hai aap sab chodo,.. dur raho unse" showing every one away from him. All laughed seeing our little possessive cutie. Now god only can save Maan from all his possessive angels , these r grown ups and two r just born and one is yet to be born.

Epilogue follows

You may find this an weird type of epilog,.. generally job hi epiloge me hotha hai wo iss me nai hai,. meri khayaalse mera story pichli update[part-156] mehi khatam hogayi,.. Geet kaise ye pregnancy se deal karthe hai ,.kya kya pblms face karna pada aur Maan kaise unhe pamper ki,.. unki kwaishe kaisa pura ki ,..aur Geet kounsi babay ko janm di ,.etc,.. etc,.. is me nahi hai ,. mai ye sab aap logonki imagination per chode di. Jis ko jo chahiye waise imagine karo.

But in this epiloge I want to share something else. In this u may find only my views ,my perspectives and points which I want to share with u and discuss with u . And wat I want to discuss with u ? and from where I get inspired and wat is the main theme of my story etc,..etc,..

Till now u all thinking about that main theme of my story is a "Middle aged love " how it happens and wat r the pblms they have to face to succeed in their love etc..and through this ff I present my perspectives on love and I think I dealt it well with all your support and encouragement. yes this is my main point .

Besides this there is one more point that is bugging me right from the very beginning,. that is to say right from my child hood,.. but in this journey of love saga ,.. I too distracted and carried away by the flow and got deviated from my point .[thanks to my dearest ,dearest buddy ,.. Shetal who pestered me to give epilogue,..then only it striked m where I lacked why i started this ff wat i have to share with u] I saw ,.. heard. read and to some extent experienced [ not from my own but from others]too . And the questions those r lingering in me r not yet got answers to them. The point is " Southelapan"".Yes u too may heard so many stories ,read, witnessed r experienced it to some extent. Even in our ffs almost in every one,.. ye ek main point hothi hai story lead karnekeliye ,.. ya vilan ki jarurat hothi tho eventually we jump in to this and took this right? I too took this in my ff like others. But I took this to discuss something with u. Actually I inspired it from a real life.

Meri daughter's friend ka hai ,.. Her [naam ki jaruat nai samjho some X] mother got divorced fr. her father after these two sisters birth[ reason u may find weird ,.. she don't want kids]that's it she left. And her father got remarried , who is also a divorcee and had a daughter with her first husband.

Now the actual pblm is ,. the very purpose of this second marriage of both her parents not been served. He married her expecting a mother to his daughters. and she married expecting a father to her daughter. I don't know wat went wrong ,.. but this purpose is not fulfilled and they r living separately. He with his daughters and she with her daughter.[ I must say one thing here ,...he is really a great father ,.. he is truly performing both mother s and father's roles in their life . Daily he cooks food for them and even make plats for them at this age also [ he learns from you tube]]They didn't divorced but not even living together. Only meets in holidays . Then also my daughters friend runs to my house to avoid her step mother.They r not giving anything to others. Ek dusere keliye koi kuch nai lagthe,. kuch nai depaarahe ? isa kyu hua? kyu kiya ye dono duseri shaadi?

Mera sawaal ye hai,.. agar koi mard ya aurat ,. jab haalat ki wajese ya majboori se duseri shaadi kiye tho,.. wo duseri partner ki sab kuch apna lethe hai ,.. unhe apanthe unse ristha jode the . us ski saath bachhe bhi paida karthe , unki property aur duseri jimmedaari ko apnathe,.. per unki bacche ko nai apnapaathe? isa kyu hotha hai? uss me bacchonk kya galathi hai?

Ye unki marzi se duseri partner ki life me unki patni ya pathi ki jagape ayetho unki bachhe ko apni puri dill se apnana padtha hai,.. agar isa nahi karpaaye tho shaadi nahi karna chahiye,. kyu maasoom bache ki zindagi khraab karna?kya ye jaayaj hai ? why this hatred? we all know this , we saw this intolerance , hatred, jealousy, kayi na kayi hum sab ko ye ehsaas hai why this animity?

kya ye sab inki insecurities ki wajese horaha hai? aur chahe wo mard ho ya aurat ,.wo unki partner ko . share nahi karsakthe. possessiveness ki wajese horahai ,..Duseri shaadi karna unki majboori hai ,.. unki jarurat hai , unki marzi hai ,per uski anzaam tho bachhon ko hi bhugatna padraha hai?ya maa ki mamtha isi hothi hai ki wo khud ki khoon ki bache se bahut jayaada pyaar karthi hai,..duseronko nahi ,.. o.k per why this unnessary hatred?

We cry for justice to sirian refugeess, cry for humanity,.. cry for all the inhumanities done by evils. Social justice keliye hum cheekthe hai , chillathe hai per wat about this domestic violence and indifference towards their step children?

I feel this is also a social evil like intolereance to other religions , ecquality for woman, dowry , molestation etc,,.etc,..social evils. This is also a social pblm,.. jiskeliye hum awaaz uthani hai,.. sawaal karna hai.. those people who will cry for social justice but at homes they cannot wide their hearts towards their step children .Ye jelousy wajese, selfishness ki wajese , intolerance ki waje se najaane kitne zindagi barbaad karrahe?

Only a little bit love , affection and broaden their hearts is enough to solve this. Apni dil ko thoda aur badhana,..

jaisa ki mera Maan kiya mere " Essence of Love " me.

Problem humesha step parents ka bhi nahi hothi ,.. kabhi kabhi bachhon ka bhi hosakthi hai,.. wo bhi unhe apna ne ki ready nai hothe, jo bhi apni parents ki jaga aya ho.thanks to the people who intentionally spread venum in their masoom dil.Bachhon ko bhi apni puri dil se apna step mother ya step father ko apnana padtha hai,..jaisa ki Arpithas @Ankitha kiya ,.. Maan ko apnaya aur unki baby ko bhi apnana hai ,.. even though some of u felt no need baby for maneet maine ye story extension me maneet ki baby ki part isliye likhi nahi tho jo point maine uthi thi in this ff wo adhura rahjaayegi. Hope u understand me . Pyaar aur mamatha baat nekeliye wo apni khud ki khoon ki hone ki jarurat nai hai . Thoda dil ko badhana kaafi hai sab ki khushaal zindagi keliye. Thoda selflessness banana kaafi hai.. Maine mere ff dwaara iss pblm ki ek solution nikalneki khoshish ki. ab aap hi bathana , how far I succeeded..

Discussions r most welcome .

Thanks to u all for this lovely journey and those who walked along me , guided me with their precious suggestions. U all supported me well when I felt low and discouraged. Its ur encouragement that I reached here. Thanks to u all.

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Congrets for completing thos story

Amazing update, more amazing epilogue and completely agree with the questions which you raise in epilogue.

Part-156

Wow Amazing,Speechless and Mind blowing update 👏

You nailed it dear 👍🏼

Not only geet i was also so angry when Maan said to abort baby without thinking

I felt really proud of Arpita and Ankitha 😃

I am really happy that they accepted unborn baby truly 😃

All Angels are so possessive for Maan 😆

When Ankitha and Annie named their babies using Maan and Geet name i felt immense happy

I cant even say in words

I loved when Arjun said from now they have to bare two MSK attitude 😊

Such a wonderful story

I loved this part ❤️

It directly touched to my heart ❤️

You did a wonderful job dear and i am so proud of you 👏

Hope you start another story soon

I will be waiting for that

Thanks for PM 🤗

Epilogue

Your each and every point is right dear

It would be hard for childern accept their siblings but little love can change everything

Parents should also help them to make each other comfortable and then developing the love between them

If parents doesn't corporate it will show great impact on children which is not good at all

Only love can change any relationship beautifully

Will miss this story

Wonderful ud