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Posted: 9 years ago
#61

Originally posted by: areeba_blossom

omg omg omg ok so I think the story on the show would go this way as of now but with a face change and all the fancy illogical jazz but dude OMG!

So much drama but also subtlety and I am loving this. Also Kunj's pov is so refreshing.

I love the girl shritii. I am conflicted whether she is his child because of what Anand said but I feel that there might be some confusion and red herring here as well. Ugh.

I love the kaka already and Anand had a useful role. Bebe seems very collected which Usha does not. I'm so excited this is literally so amazing and I'm mad at myself for not reading this before.

How many parts in total this is? You need to update soonish because I cannot wait at all!! Ugh sadistic scenes for Kunj/Sid are so good! I can totally imagine him pulling through. My heart!



Thanks! Glad you liked it 😳
I tried using all the characters to the potential 😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
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@Arpi - 🤣 Too much into it? 😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
#63
This is awesome
Loved it tremendously
Please update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Duumps

This is awesome
Loved it tremendously
Please update soon



Thanks 😳
Will try my best.. No promises 😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
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I'm late but I finally made it! 😆

Amazing update, I swear the anticipation is too much now! I think she might MahiRajs child too! Or she's Twinjs child but MahiRaj maybe adopted her because Twinkle wanted her to have both parents for a better life or something? So even though Twinkle is her mother, she calls her Maasi.

I'm going to go classic and say that Twinj did consummate but he doesn't remember because he might have been intoxicated or something along those lines.


I've watched too many indian tv shows clearly 😆

Update soon, this story is really good!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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for chapter 2:

this didn't seem like a filler episode at all...it was perfect and very much important to be updated..as we readers have to know what is kunj's pov...to say...I feel so disgusted ...its my love for twinkle...she always receive the bad things and try to make others happy ...still no one pays heeds to her...feeling very angry on kunj...he is doubting...well I have a wish to make...pls don't let twinkle accept his apology so sooon..please its a request...let kunj also feel some pain from her ignorance...the girl cud be yuhi's ..maybe...
and for the first time I loved and admired anand's role...his trust on twinkle...please keep it intact...I have a feling he knows something about twinkle...I loved how he said that if the girl with twinkle is not kunj's then its not her either...that was the best part I loved in this whole update...coming to bebe ,Manohar and cherry...they seem sad..as if even they r trying to mend things between tinj...usha leave her I hate her to core..
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Posted: 9 years ago
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for chapter : 3

its pakka confirmed that stuti is yuhi's daughter...I looved her...as much as the kaka's words are intriguing kunj...I am also bery intrigued...I want to know the backstory already...tell me onething is usha the villain??why did kaka tense up hearing her call out...one more doubt who called on the phone.. iam quite sure its not twinkle it can mahi or yuvraj tooo...plss continue soon and thans a ton for the pm...sorry for late comments ..I was a bit busy
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Tranquility123

I'm late but I finally made it!😆

Amazing update, I swear the anticipation is too much now! I think she might MahiRajs child too! Or she's Twinjs child but MahiRaj maybe adopted her because Twinkle wanted her to have both parents for a better life or something? So even though Twinkle is her mother, she calls her Maasi.

I'm going to go classic and say that Twinj did consummate but he doesn't remember because he might have been intoxicated or something along those lines.


I've watched too many indian tv shows clearly😆

Update soon, this story is really good!



😆 You actually have watched too many indian shows.
I have got time from a few assignments so might update by Tuesday...

Thanks for the comment 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: mahadev07

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for chapter 2:

this didn't seem like a filler episode at all...it was perfect and very much important to be updated..as we readers have to know what is kunj's pov...to say...I feel so disgusted ...its my love for twinkle...she always receive the bad things and try to make others happy ...still no one pays heeds to her...feeling very angry on kunj...he is doubting...well I have a wish to make...pls don't let twinkle accept his apology so sooon..please its a request...let kunj also feel some pain from her ignorance...the girl cud be yuhi's ..maybe...
and for the first time I loved and admired anand's role...his trust on twinkle...please keep it intact...I have a feling he knows something about twinkle...I loved how he said that if the girl with twinkle is not kunj's then its not her either...that was the best part I loved in this whole update...coming to bebe ,Manohar and cherry...they seem sad..as if even they r trying to mend things between tinj...usha leave her I hate her to core..



Thanks for the lovely comment... I agree... Somehow Twinkle's character was always dominated initially and I don't think this will change even now. I hope I don't disappoint you :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: mahadev07

for chapter : 3

its pakka confirmed that stuti is yuhi's daughter...I looved her...as much as the kaka's words are intriguing kunj...I am also bery intrigued...I want to know the backstory already...tell me onething is usha the villain??why did kaka tense up hearing her call out...one more doubt who called on the phone.. iam quite sure its not twinkle it can mahi or yuvraj tooo...plss continue soon and thans a ton for the pm...sorry for late comments ..I was a bit busy


Hehe... You'll have to keep reading if you want answers😳
It's completely alright... i am happy that you read it😃

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