|TwiNj SS - Dooriyan-Nazdikiyan| Chapter 3 -Page 6 [30/5] - Page 6

Originally posted by: Arpimugfan

Awesome part, loved Kunj's interaction with his daughter... (As of now i am assuming she is Twinkle n Kunj's daughter let's see what you have planned) 😉

Awww she addressed her papa "Handsome" 👏

Looking forward to TwiNj meeting...

Update soon, loving this FF

Originally posted by: Arpimugfan

Oh! Yeah possible she can be MahiRaj's daughter also... She mentioned her Papa n MAASI... So Twinkle is most probably her Maasi ...
How I wish she turns out to be TwiNj's child... After all the leap is of 5 years 😉 😛

Originally posted by: Arpimugfan

Like button is not working from phone... Plz do pm me the next part

Originally posted by: neverlandspirit

This story is sooo amazing!!!

I love it to pieces. The characterization is perfect and the storyline is fantastic and the narration is wonderful!!!

👏

'Stuti' Nice name...is it 'Shruti??

Ahhh...he met his own daughter and yet he didn't!!!!! My heart!!!

Great update!

Eagerly looking forward to more.

Originally posted by: Black_Maniac

I like when people are all guesses😆

Giving in a hint, I mentioned that Kunj knows it can't be his daughter... 😉

Oh! That means in this fiction TwiNj are YET TO Consummate their marriage 😆 Thanks for the hint I guess I am yet not over the consummation sequence of Tashan so 😆

kunj's interaction with the little girl was SOOO cute!!

Awesome Update Krishi!!!!!

omg omg omg ok so I think the story on the show would go this way as of now but with a face change and all the fancy illogical jazz but dude OMG!

So much drama but also subtlety and I am loving this. Also Kunj's pov is so refreshing.

I love the girl shritii. I am conflicted whether she is his child because of what Anand said but I feel that there might be some confusion and red herring here as well. Ugh.

I love the kaka already and Anand had a useful role. Bebe seems very collected which Usha does not. I'm so excited this is literally so amazing and I'm mad at myself for not reading this before.

How many parts in total this is? You need to update soonish because I cannot wait at all!! Ugh sadistic scenes for Kunj/Sid are so good! I can totally imagine him pulling through. My heart!

Originally posted by: ...Shakti...

kunj's interaction with the little girl was SOOO cute!!

loved every bit of it!

can't wait to find out who she really is!

krishi yaar you should write more! you're writing is AMAZING!! i love reading it!

the update was amazing! you have to update soon!!!!! :D

Thanks Shakti 😳
If you are saying, I might be amazing but I am too lazy.. The stories don't go anywhere except my brain..
I'll try my best! :D

Originally posted by: harshi2000

Awesome Update Krishi!!!!!

Very Well Written

Just Loved It

Thanks 😳