FS: Behind You [UPDATED: LAST PART] - Page 7

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Posted: 9 years ago
#61
It was Perfect...šŸ‘


Thapki's outburst was so real...we never really got to know in the show how Thapki felt at that time when Bihaan blamed Thapki in front of the family...their making up was so ā˜ŗļø...loved how they viewed themselves in the mirror and realised how perfect they are for each other...😳


Bold Thapki was pretty good...getting down to business...šŸ˜†



Great work...šŸ‘šŸ¼


Do write more...😃
Edited by fun4ever89 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#62
Lovely 😳 u wrote it so well, loved that mirror part, that was beautiful and thapki wants to get in the business staright away šŸ˜‰ bihaans reaction was perfect šŸ˜†
Looking forward to read more of ur work...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#63
Wow!!,such a lovely one..i was laughing the whole...superb...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#64

Originally posted by: fun4ever89

It was Perfect...šŸ‘



Thapki's outburst was so real...we never really got to know in the show how Thapki felt at that time when Bihaan blamed Thapki in front of the family...their making up was so ā˜ŗļø...loved how they viewed themselves in the mirror and realised how perfect they are for each other...😳


Bold Thapki was pretty good...getting down to business...šŸ˜†



Great work...šŸ‘šŸ¼


Do write more...😃


Hey, Thank you! 😳 Yeah, I really wanted a confrontation in the show, however in my FS, I cut down any mushy dialogues they might have said to each other if they showed a scene like this šŸ˜†
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Posted: 9 years ago
#65

Originally posted by: SanyaEterna

Hayee what an awesome end! Loved it! "Business" huh? Thapki not so seedhi ab!


Definitely not šŸ˜‰
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Posted: 9 years ago
#66

Originally posted by: Neha99

Lovely 😳 u wrote it so well, loved that mirror part, that was beautiful and thapki wants to get in the business staright away šŸ˜‰ bihaans reaction was perfect šŸ˜†
Looking forward to read more of ur work...


Thank you!ā­ļø
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Posted: 9 years ago
#67

Originally posted by: pupra

Wow!!,such a lovely one..i was laughing the whole...superb...


Glad that I could make you laugh šŸ˜†
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Posted: 9 years ago
#68
Excellent Update...
N wat a FS...
IT started as a spookey one n ended as a romantic one...
Good job done...
Do write more...will b waiting...ā¤ļø
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Posted: 9 years ago
#69
Beautiful, really beautiful ending. Love it ...
Plx write another one soon...
Will wait for it.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#70
I howled with laughter reading the last two paragraphs. Loved it!!!

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