TwiNj OS || If the Noodle Breaks - Page 4

Originally posted by: ZawraMalik

Gur i loved it yar..

It was amazing and hott to the kiss..hii

I loved this wali twinkle ..hw she was denying the kiss pehly but when its the matter of her marriage she can kiss him even infront of the family.. wah

Originally posted by: Iansomer1

And it was amazing as usual

Anything u wrote us breath taking.

Loved twinkles inner monologue

The noodle didn't break yippee.

Loved the ending

Both didn't give a damn abt family as it should be sometimes.

Originally posted by: hailly

Awesome os. Loved it.

Originally posted by: Abhia2Twinj4eva

And I am super glad that it's back , darling 😳😉

All were telling about you taking down the OS 🤔 Now I guess it's this only .. happy that finally read this piece 😳😃fabulous n fantastic one 👏

Continue your this work , dear 😉

Originally posted by: Anam Ali

Amazing os Gurleen

Very well written

Glad you startes writing again really proud of u hugs

Originally posted by: .FlightOfEagle.

Finally after a long time An OS By you..

It was damn amazing Gurleeen!

Loved it,Twinkle Kissed him so that the noodle dosen break,Wohhoo☺️

I hope aisa show mai bhi hota!

Originally posted by: _Meena_

Gur! You put it back, girl! That's brilliant. 🤗

Originally posted by: dmgomg

Aah! WHY CAN'T SOMETHING LIKE THIS ACTUALLY HAPPEN IN THE SHOW? Lovedd it!!