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RUBAB

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Posted: 9 years ago

Gur i loved it yar..

It was amazing and hott to the kiss..hii

I loved this wali twinkle ..hw she was denying the kiss pehly but when its the matter of her marriage she can kiss him even infront of the family.. wah

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asmaanixx

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Posted: 9 years ago

Just wanted to let you all know that I don't want you to get any ideas from this. This is the very last story that I will be publishing on this forum for the next foreseeable future. Because as silly as it may sound, the noodle has broken for me.

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Iansomer1

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Posted: 9 years ago

And it was amazing as usual

Anything u wrote us breath taking.

Loved twinkles inner monologue

The noodle didn't break yippee.

Loved the ending

Both didn't give a damn abt family as it should be sometimes.

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dmgomg

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Posted: 9 years ago

Did you take this down already? Wish I could've read it :(

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Anjum

@Abhia2Twinj4eva

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Posted: 9 years ago

And I am super glad that it's back , darling 😳😉

All were telling about you taking down the OS 🤔 Now I guess it's this only .. happy that finally read this piece 😳😃fabulous n fantastic one 👏

Continue your this work , dear 😉

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Supernatural_10

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Posted: 9 years ago

Amazing os Gurleen

Very well written

Glad you startes writing again really proud of u hugs

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Scarlet Wizard

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Posted: 9 years ago

Finally after a long time An OS By you..

It was damn amazing Gurleeen!

Loved it,Twinkle Kissed him so that the noodle dosen break,Wohhoo☺️

I hope aisa show mai bhi hota!

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MJ1009cc

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Posted: 9 years ago

Gur! You put it back, girl! That's brilliant. 🤗

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dmgomg

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Posted: 9 years ago

Aah! WHY CAN'T SOMETHING LIKE THIS ACTUALLY HAPPEN IN THE SHOW? Lovedd it!!

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asmaanixx

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: areeba_blossom
[font=verdana]So filmy and perfect! {/font]

Thank you! 😳

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