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Posted: 9 years ago
#91

Originally posted by: .Anjum.

More than lovely ! Haste what an update 😳👏

really???...thanku!!

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Posted: 9 years ago
#92

Originally posted by: 17.sonal

Awww i really love this story.

A very Good Mixture of Evrything..
Love, Anger, comedy...
Its Cute, emotional Travel Love story..
Do update Soon dear...
And Rahul scene ws super cute..
Kunj way of apologizing is Very Charming..
Looking forward..


is its o...thanku sooo much!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
#93
amazing update Vidhu. pls update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#94
awesome update dear
loved it very much
plzzz do continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#95
it's just splendid 🤗 👏
superbly well
continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#96
Please update soon eagerly waiting for the next update
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Posted: 9 years ago
#97
i dont really know wether anyone of you remebr this FF or not!!
but all i wanted to do after watching today's episode was continue this FF!!
i have actually decided that this month i would post all the parts of this FF!!
Soo here u go with this part!!
Chapter-5
Romance Spreads

Twinkle- dil se sry kunj

Kunj(in attitude)- bola naa its okk

Twinkle- kunjjj!!!

Kunj- acha baba its ok

Twinkle- pakka

Kunj- han pakka

Twinkle- ok then byyy!!

She jumps and goes from the room to chinki

Kunj- goshhh!! This girl has DKiven me crazy

Twinkle enters in chinki's room

Twinkle- Chinkiii!! Chinkiii!!

Chinki- are kya hua baba!!

Twinkle(guilty)- are bahut bura hua mere sath

Chinki- bura!! Kya bura??

Twinkle(guilty)- kaise bataun its a bit personal

Chinki(mocking)- ohh wait!! Wait!! Personal haan

Twinkle(suspicious)- chinki!!

Chinki- okkk baba jab aisa lage ki u can share tab bata dena

Twinkle(smiling)- cool!! BTW meri aaj ke liye DKess select karne mein help kar...kyun ki mai toh bas unhi packing kar ke le aayi aur abb kuch samajh nahin aa raha

Chinki- okk

They both goes to the luggage area of their room

Kunj overhears their convo by mistake from outside of the room

Kunj- ye c2 bhi naaa completely mad hai!! (Giggles and then leaves)

After an hour or two everyone was there standing near the bus but this time kunj and Rahul were late

As kunj and Rahul enters the place they see their girls and chinki andTwinkle too looks at them

Rahul and chinki shares a romantic glare

Where kunj and Twinkle shared an awkward look

Guide- okkk gyzzz today is the shoping time hope u gyzzz r ready

Everyone hoots

Guide- okkk then lets gooo

(song starts- I feel good, anjana anjani)

Teri meri teri meri kahani

Ek dastan nayi purani

Chori chori

Ye kahani chali ahi

Theri thi jo tere aajane tak

Tuning...

(Teri meri teri meri kahani

Ek dastan nayi purani

Chori chori

Ye kahani chali hai

Theri thi jo tere aajane tak)

(note: DT= duplicate Twinkle DK= duplicate kunj RT- real Twinkle RK- real kunj)

They all were moving and kunj was able to see a duplicate kunj and Twinkle with each other Twinkle and kunj were moving together in maRTet and kunj was watching DT AND DK dancing together as the tune starts Twinkle snaps her finger in front of kunj and they moves to some shop and were watching different gujrati things and there too again Rk could see DT AND DK romancing with each other

(Tere aane se maine jana

Ki tu hi jeene ka hai bahana

And I

Don't know why

But I feel gud

Tere aane se maine jana

Ke har safar ho gaya sunhana

And I

Don't know why

But I feel gud)

As these lines starts all the peole were on the road RT does sharukh khan style and then starts jumping and dancing pointing at Twinkle with some background dancers (the one who comes in all movies with hero to dance for the heroine :P)

Then RT too adjoins him and dances for a bit

Tuninggg...

During the tuning they were visiting shops as the tune was finishing they get on roads chinki and Twinkle were moving continuously while kunj stops watching them

Har dishaa

Rastaaa naya

Har ghadi rahe nayiii

DT was standing and doing some sweet moves by her hands looking to the world

Meri rahe tujhe paake

Tujh pe hi tham gayi

Hamsfar thi magar tu hi

Manzil ban gayiii

Teri meri teri meri kahani

Ye raaste likhte jaye bass!!

DT WAS with the pose of her hands in air and then DK comes from back hugging her from side and then holds her by waist and keeps his hand on her face and she too keeps and then recites the lines looking in their eyes reciting the lines (Teri meri teri meri kahani Ye raaste likhte jaye bass!! )

(Tere aane se maine jana

Ki tu hi jeene ka hai bahana

And I

Don't know why

But I feel gud

Tere aane se maine jana

Ke har safar ho gaya sunhana

And I

Don't know why

But I feel gud)

As these lines starts RT comes and holds Rk hands Taking him out of hisDream land and taking him in the mall where some people were dancing on the same song

And RK was able to see DT and DK sitting at side with each other

Tunnninggg...

In the tuning RT nad chinki were dancing with each other but as the tuning was eplified in the other track(when u will listen the song u will get to know)kunj took Twinkle too the stage where the dancers were dancing and they both starts dancing

(Roshni asiii miliii

Raat kaaa chehre khilaa

Andhero se gile the jo

Raakh wo hoo gaye

The jo mere

Sheeshe dil ke

Saaf wo hooo gayeee

Teri meri teri meri kahani

Jaisa raat ko subah mil jaye bas)

Twinkle said the first two lines by rising her hands up in the air feeling the song and the air kunj with no time singing the lines picked her up in the air and starts swirling her and then by the end or starting of lines(Teri meri teri meri kahani Jaisa raat ko subah mil jaye bas) kunj was keeping her down facing her itself and as she comes down she rubs kunj's face by looking in his eyesss for the first time their eyes got locked

(Tere aane se maine jana

Ki tu hi jeene ka hai bahana

And I

Don't know why

But I feel gud

Tere aane se maine jana

Ke har safar ho gaya sunhana

And I

Don't know why

But I feel gud)

The song was amplifyied at last but still there was no effect on them they were still in the same position looking at each other in eachothers eyes tightly gripped by the arms after a few seconds the song got over and they were sepratedby that the hooting and clapping of everyone after being seprated they looked at eachother, Twinkle smiled at him and left frm there

Kunj took a long breathe and left

All of them left to their hotel and were in the hall

Guide- I hope that all of u enjoyed this gujrat shoping part don't worry tomorrow even for half day till lunch we will be here itself soo the girls who wanna shop up fr the last time can go. N one more thing I hope that all of u r happy with the rooms and can manage today too

Everyone- yaaa sure

But kunj n Twinkle looked at each other...but they knew it very well that the circumstances has left no option with them!! Everyone left to their rooms with a large number of shopping bags kunj and Twinkle too left from there and entered to the room kunj was on the door where Twinkle kept all the bags on the table

Twinkle(not looking at kunj)- kunj aaj kitna maza aaya naa I mean look I did a lot of shopping it wasjust soo awesome and the dance ohh my god!! That was just soo

Before she could speak any word now he came, held her by waist and came near her

Kunj- soo flawless

Twinkle was about to ay smthn but kunj kept his finger on her lips

Kunj- Twinkle tumhe ye toh dikha ki dance bahut amazing tha and hamne enjoy kiya lekin kya ye dikha ki we were soo close we were together we were busy in an eyelock

Kunj removed his finger and left her

Kunj- sochna!! BTW aaj mai aram se sounga and better agar tum mujhe aaj raat phir hug karo toh kal subah marna mat

Kunj went and laid on the bed while Twinkle stood there thinking what kunj said to her

Kunj-mmm aab sochti hi rahogi ya phir sone bhi aaogi

Twinkle didn't listen

Kunj(shouts)_ Twinkle!!!!

Twinkle gets shocked and shouts

Twinkle- abbb.bbb han aayi (she was too confused she goes forward and then comes back blabbering smthn eating her nails and then finally shouts

Kunj starts laughing badly watching her like this

Twinkle- abb tum itna kyu has rahe ho

Kunj-aao idhar aao sit here

He said getting up making space for her

Twinkle- nooo

Kunj- comon is bed pe hi sona hai tumhe

Twinkle- okk

Twinkle comes and sits there

Kunj- bolo why r u sooo confused

Twinkle- tumhe pata hai!!

Kunj- naa nahin pata

Twinkle- I was thinking about what u just said to me

KUNJ SMILES SILENTLY

Keeping a had on his mouth hiding face in order she could not see him laughing

Kunj- aur kya kaha tha maine!!

Twinkle- kunj!!

Kunj- are bolo naaa mujhe mujhe yaaad nahin hai

Twinkle- yahi ki I noticed everything except of us being close

Kunj removed his hand and was smiling blushingly

Twinkle- y r u sooo smiling??

Kunj- u don't know?
Twinkle- nooo

Kunj- u wanna know?
Twinkle- mm yaaa

Kunj bended forward towards her

Kunj- u really wanna know??

Twinkle bended back

Twinkle- yaa

Kunj came forward up to her face

Kunj- see we r close

Twinkle pushed him back

Kunj chuckles

Twinkle- kunjjj!!

Kunj- what!! So jao tumhe samjh aa jayega...soon

Twinkle- okk

Twinkle gets up and lies on the bed

Kunj- door rehna kal subah chappal nahin khani mujhe

Twinkle- kyu khud par control nahin hai

Kunj- what !!

Twinkle gets up and sit at side of him by the bed head

Twinkle- haan obviously jab itni beautiful and hot ladki sath me soyegi toh control bhi kaise karoge!!

Kunj gets a bit side

Kunj- nthn like this mai control kar sakta hoon

Twinkle again gets forward and then sit with him

Twinkle- peeche kyu hue control nahin kar sakte

Kunj gets more back

Kunj- maine bola naa aisa kuch nahin hai

Twinkle gets close to him very close

Twinkle(whispers)- aab kar paoge

kunj sees in her eyes and then shifts a bit back and falls down

Twinkle(giggles)- control hogaya!! Sojao abb

kunj- huh!!

Twinkle was chukling watching him

And finally they both sleeps

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P.S.- plzz dont forget to leave your comments!!

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Posted: 9 years ago
#98
I do remember. ...
It's so cute...
Btw,
Hello,
I m Shaveerkti...😳
It's only the stories of Twinj now...
Baki to...😭
Edited by Shaveerkti - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#99

Originally posted by: Shaveerkti

I do remember. ...

m glad!!
It's so cute...
awww...thankoos!!
Btw,
Hello,
I m Shaveerkti...😳
hii...i am vidhi
It's only the stories of Twinj now...
Baki to...😭
yup i can understand!!

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Posted: 9 years ago
yayyy !!
she is backkk !!
im so glad you continued this
I thought you forgot about it, I missed this one so much !!
another great update yaar, I mean, twinj are twinj and they get cuter In your story
oh and the twinj watching twinj part was so good, kunj's fall ws adorable
please please ab jaldi jaldi se update karna
great job
keep writing
love,
sakshi

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