||Tumse Hi Tumse||FF||Twinj|| Chapter 6 pg-17||Something Special|| - Page 9

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Posted: 9 years ago
#81

Originally posted by: .Ragini.

Vidhu this is so good

thankuu!!
Aww kunj has fallen for her so badly and twinkle is still coping with a bad breakup
yup...i really hope she do soo fast!!
I loved it all
i am really glad that you loved it!!😃
Nil is hilarious. Just like he was in the show
hahah...i know!!
Lol rahul and chinky
yuppp...they are funny yet cute!!
They'll look good
hope soo 😃😃😃
I am sure kunj will heal twinkle's broken heart
that's for sure...
continue soon
😊
Ty for the pm
no need of thanks..

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Posted: 9 years ago
#82

Originally posted by: 17.sonal

This A truely Amazing..

really...thanku soo much!!
I read all the parts in In go..
thanks for devoting this much time to my story!!
Sorry for walking In so Late..
its absolutely ok...no need of sorry
I love the Tarvel Love stories. so this is this is definitely my one of the Favorites..
wow...that's great m really happy!!
Its light, Sweet, Fun .. Almost Everything in A Teen Love story...
yup...its written by a teen so its just like what a teen love story should be!!
I am Loving It..
m sooo glad..😃😃
Please PM me.. i am Hooked to This..
yup sure..
My Favorite Characters R Rahul and Nil...
Thy the Best... Reala Friends..
yup...the true friends!!😆
Kunj Likes Twinkle.. This scenes ws the Best... I jus Loved the Way i showed the Connection between these 3 friends..
heheh...the real friends have to be like this...specially when they are boys!!
Twinkle's constant Fight with her Broken Heart is wel portrayed..
thanku...she indeed is a very strong girl!!
Very Nyc.. Please Continue soonnish..😉
heheh..thankuu

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Posted: 9 years ago
#83

Originally posted by: amlavs

Fantastic...kunj is falling...hope twinkle comes out of her break up...oh twinj got into fight...plz patch up them soon... update next part soon...


yup they would patch up in the next chapter...thanku!!!
next part will soon be up!!😉

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Posted: 9 years ago
#84

Originally posted by: .Anjum.

Very lovely update 😳😛

Hope soon twinj patch up...
Continue soon 😊


thanku soo much!!😳😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
#85
Chapter-4
The Patch Up

Rahul- Twinkle tum yahan kyu baithi ho

Twinkle didn't utter a word!!

Chinki- Rahul u sit with kunj mai Twinkle ke sath baithungi

Twinkle- no need meri wajah se tum dono apna mood mat spoil karo

Twinkle then goes and sits with kunj again and don't even see his face!!

Time passed but nither they looked at each other and nor they uttered a single word

Twinkle was quite and looking out of the window while kunj was now feeling guilty

kunj(in mind)- galti toh maine hi ki hai! Kya zaroorat thi mujhe uspe gussa karne ki!! Abbb kiya hai toh manana bhi padega hi na mujhe!!

Kunj slowly forward his hand to her shoulder and tapped it slowly

Kunj- Twinkle!!

Twinkle(anger)- now what!!

Kunj- mmm I am sorry

Twinkle- u know what kunj tum boys ka ye bahut acha hai ki pehle hurt karo aur phir ake sorry bol do

Kunj held her both hands in his hands

Kunj- sorry sorry sory galti ki maine I am sorry

Twinkle jerked his hands and freed her hands

Twinkle- don't dare you touch me

She said with cute frown on her face

Kunj thought that she is not gonna listen to him anymore so he stood up and clapped to catch everyone's attention

Kunj- kya aap sab mujhe batayenge that if our friend gets angry from us and we say sorry from heart so the friend should forgive us or not ?

Twinkle kept hand on her forehead hiding her face

Kunj- come on tell me gyzzz

Boy- ofcourse Twinkle ko tumhe maaf kar dena chahiye

Kunj looked at Twinkle and Twinkle at kunj they both shared a glance Twinkle of anger and kunj of sorry

Kunj- but aap ko kaise pata that I have fought with Twinkle

Chinki- tumhare shakal par likha hai kunj

Kunj- what is smthn written on my face!!

Kunj rubbed his face in order make Twinkle laugh

Twinkle silently smiled on this but not a perfect one

Girl- Twinkle forgive him naa

Boy- yes forgive him

Twinkle was sitting the same hiding her face

Kunj- are sab bolo naa

Everyone- plzzz Twinkle forgive him plzzz plzzz Twinkle!! Twinkle!! Twinkle!! Twinkle!!! Twinkle!! Twinkle!!

Twinkle stood up and everyone hated more

Kunj- sorry!! (Holding ears)

Twinkle smiled wide and hugged kunj and after few seconds of shock kunj too hugged her with a wide grin

Twinkle (in his ear) - nautanki

Kunj (in her ear) - my friend love

Twinkle kicked him from down itself

They broke the hug and sat on their seats

Twinkle- u r really a jerk kunj

Kunj- thanks for the compliment!!

Twinkle- huh!!

Kunj(Looking at her and says in mind)- kam se kam man toh gayi

Everyone was gossiping and time passed it was about 10'o clock about whole bus was slept only kunj and Twinkle were awake having chat with each other

Twinkle- kunj bhook lag rahi hai!!

Kunj- hmm bhook toh lagegi hi abb tumne subah se kuch khaya jo nahin hain waise bhook toh mujhe bhi lagi hai

Twinkle- toh abb

Kunj- wait!! Rahul!! Rahulll!!

Rahul(shocked and shouts)_ huh!! Kya kya hua

Kunj- shhh!! Chup

Rahul- kya hai be sone de naa

Kunj- bhook lag rahi hai hame kuch khane ke liye de

Rahul- ham kaun

Kunj- mai aur Twinkle

Rahul- upar se mera bag utar le!! Aur abb disturb mat kariyo ache khase chinki ke sapne dekh raha tha

Kunj and Twinkle giggles on his stupid yet cute behavior

Kunj stands and takes his bag but due to a jurk he falls in Twinkle's lap...kunj was smiling and looking at her but then Twinkle pushed him with an irritating face

Kunj- irritate kyu ho rahi hoo?... ladkiyan tarasti hain iske liye aur tum ho ki

Twinkle- toh unhi ke sath kara karo not with me!!

Kunj- okk my bad!!

Kunj opens his bag and sees a lot of snacks

Twinkle- ye sab kya hai

Kunj- Rahul maha bhukkad hai uske pas khana hamesha hota hai

Rahul(In sleep)- thanku thanku sooo much kunj

Twinkle giggles and kunj starts starring her Twinkle sees him and raises her eyebrows kunj suddenly comes out of his dreamland and gives Twinkle a packet of lays and close the bag

Twinkle was trying hard to open it while doing soo she hits kunj's eye kunj screamed in pain

Twinkle suddeely held his face and starts blowing air while he was continuously watching her

Twinkle- abb thik hai kunj

Kunj didn't gave any answer

Twinkle- kunj!!

Kunj- abb han han thik hai

Twinkle- tumhara kuch nahin ho sakta

Kunj- itna maza aa raha tha tumne pehli baar itna pyaar jataya mujh par

Twinkle- what!!

Kunj- han warna toh hamesha ek c2 ki tarah mere sar par chadhi rehti hoo

Twinkle- c2??
kunj(by doing shoulders up)-commited chudail

Twinkle- haw!!

Twinkle starts beating him

(bg tuning- tune of tumse hi tumse)

They eat some snacks and then sleeps

2:00 A.M.

Guide- plzzz aap sab uth jaiye everyone gets up except the two sleeping beauties Twinkle and kunj

Twinkle's head was on kunj's shoulder and kunj's head on her head

Rahul- chinki unhe dekho pakke love birds lag rahe hai haina!!

Chinki- han they look too cute together!! Bas problem ye hai ki no one of them like each other dono sirf dost hai

Rahul smiles on her words thinking how come she cant see that kunj is deeply falling for twinkle

Guide- gyzzz we have been to our hotel but the problem is that we were not able to arrange seprate rooms for everyone I hope u gyzz will manage

As they all start departing from the bus kunj wakes up

Kunj- ye kya ho raha hai

Boy- hotel aa gaya hai

Kunj- ohh ok

Kunj notices that Twinkle was sleeping and looking really super cute!! He was lost in her and bus gets empty

Guide- kunj!! Chalna hai??
kunj- abbb.bb.b obviously

Kunj(slowly)- Twinkle!! Twinkle!!!!!

Twinkle gets up

Kunj- chalo hotel aa gaya

Twinkle(sleepy)- hmmm

Kunj and Twinkle stands up they went out of the bus

Twinkle- kunj i am sleeping

she side hugs kunj and closes her eyes

Kunj- Twinkle!!

Twinkle(sleepy)- kunjjj!!

Kunj- ok wait

Kunj picks her up in his arms and gets in

Kunj(calls out)- chinki!!

Chinki- han!! Ye Twinkle!!

Twinkle- soo rahi hai!!

Chinki- hahahhaha!!

Kunj- tum dono ka room!!

Chinki- nahin hai!!

Kunj- matlab!!

Chinki- rooms less hai so mai 2 girls ke sath room share kar rahi hoon everyone has gone to their rooms and no more room left

Kunj- god!!!

Chinki leaves!!!!

Guide- kunj kya hua

Kunj- no more room and (pointing at Twinkle)

Guide- don't worry I have one extra room aisi situation ke liye hi book kara tha soo if u both can share a room

Kunj(shocked)- we both

Guide- yaaa I mean problem kya hai u both r frns right!!

Kunj- yaa but!!

Guide- do u have any other choice??
kunj- noo

Guide- but the room is single bed!!

Kunj- but ham kaise!! Y not we go to the bus

Guide- not possible bus has already left for the garage

Kunj- extra bedding?

Guide- finished!! Abb no option u both will have to share the room

Kunj-ok f9

Guide takes them too the room and leaves from there

Kunj with his leg closes the door and then was about to make Twinkle lie on the bed but she wraps up her arms around him and hugged him

Twinkle(in sleeps)- why did this happened with me

All the shades from kunj's face got dissapered for a min or few... then he make her lie on the bed but due to her tight grip he was about to fall on her but he manages and get rid of her grip

Kunj sat on the other bit empty side of the bed

He tries not to sleep but his luck was nice... he slept

He was sleeping facing Twinkle and Twinkle was even facing him Twinkle was moving again n again bcoz of which kunj's sleep was getting disturbed again n again Twinkle then hugged kunj tightly which woke him up

Kunj- Twinkle!! Hey bhagwan ye toh sach me hi c2 hai par jo bhi hai jaisa bhi hai mujhe bahut pasand hai

Kunj too slowly slowly and blushing hard keep his hands around her and sleep

Next morning...

Twinkle wakes up first

Twinkle- goodmorning kunj

Kunj rubs his hand on her back

Kunj- huh!! Goodmorning

Twinkle senses smthn and shouts

Kunj(shouts)- whaat!!

And they both falls on ground the same position they were sleeping kunj down and Twinkle was up

There eyes got locked but again Twinkle broke the eye contact and stood up kunj too stood up holding his back

Kunj was moaning in pain

Twinkle- ww.w.what was this

Kunj- what was what

Twinkle took the glass of water and threw on his face

Kunj- what the crap

Twinkle(angry and shouts)- yaaa kunj what the crap was this

Kunj was frustrated firstly the pain in back and then Twinkle was shouting... kunj held her by the waist and pulled her towards him

Twinkle(shouts)-kunj

But before she could speak anything he keeps finger on her lips and then looks in her eyes and she too was looking in his eyes but no more Twinkle bit his finger

Kunj(shouts)- aaa

He was jerking his hand

Twinkle(shouting)- what the hell kunj tum samjhte kya ho apne aap ko

Kunj- urghhh

He pins her in the wall and was very close to her

Kunj- chup bilkul chup ho jao c2 agar aur kuch bhi bola na tumne toh mai apni limits cross kar dunga...u wannna know what happened right!!

Twinkle nods her head slowly

Kunj tells her the whole thing of how they were forced to share 1 rooom then 1 bed and then who huuged kunj and what happened in morning

Twinkle was feeling guilty

Kunj leaves her and gets back

Kunj- abb samajh aa aa gaya

Twinkle- yes

Kunj- gud idiyot c2

Twinkle- mm kunj sry

Kunj( in attitude)- its ok

Twinkle comes in forward of him

Twinkle- dil se sry kunj

Kunj(in attitude)- bola naa its okk

Twinkle- kunjjj!!!

Kunj- acha baba its ok

Twinkle- pakka

Kunj- han pakka

Twinkle- ok then byyy!!

She jumps and goes from the room to chinki

Kunj- goshhh!! This girl has driven me crazy


sorry for the delay...
hope you like it!!
thanku...
please leave your reviews about the story!!

Edited by vidhu1 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#86

really...thanku!!😳😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
#87

Originally posted by: chaaru26

Such a cute update 👏


awww...thanku soo much!!😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
#88
More than lovely ! Haste what an update 😳👏
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Posted: 9 years ago
#89
Awww i really love this story.
A very Good Mixture of Evrything..
Love, Anger, comedy...
Its Cute, emotional Travel Love story..
Do update Soon dear...
And Rahul scene ws super cute..
Kunj way of apologizing is Very Charming..
Looking forward..
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Posted: 9 years ago
#90
Awesome update.
Very cute.
Loved Kunj's apology.

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