||Tumse Hi Tumse||FF||Twinj|| Chapter 6 pg-17||Something Special|| - Page 8

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Posted: 9 years ago
#71

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Awesome update .

Loved it.


thanku...
glad you loved it!!😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Chapter-3
something good...something bad

Next morning...

Everyone was busy in getting in the bus but the two beauties were yet left to come

Non other than Twinkle and chinki

Some peps were in the bus while sum out

Kunj nil and Rahul were outside waiting for they both to arrive and they were just talking when chinki and Twinkle enters

Twinkle was wearing a pair of blue jeans and a white sleeveless top and open hairs looking absolutely gorgeous

They both without even noticng boys there went inside the bus

Rahul- just look at them ham unka wait kar rahe the aur wo hame bina dekhe hi andar chali gayi

Nil- unka unka kya kar raha hai chinki bol naa

Rahul- aisa kuch nahin hai dude

Kunj- han apni bari aayi toh kuch nahin hai warna kunj Twinkle kunj Twinkle re Twinkle karta rehta hai

Rahul- abb chale andar

Kunj- han chalo

They three get in the bus and then see that two girls occupied Rahul and nil's seat kunj- acah beta tum khade hoke jana

Kunj went and sat on his seat with Twinkle

Twinkle-hey

Kunj- hey

Rahul- ham kahan baithe

Twinkle- apni seat par baitho

Nil- dekho!! (pointing at their seat)

Twinkle- ohh wait!! (turned back) excusme girls wo in dono ki seat hai kya aap yahan se hat jayengi

Nil- no no no no wait wait aap baithe rahiye koi bat nahin!!

Twinkle- but

Rahul- are baitho rehne do Twinkle

From other side chinki says

Chinki- mmm if u gyz don't mind then koi mere sath baith sakta hai!! This seat is empty

Nil- han thik

Rahul(cutting nil in btw.)- thik hai mai mai baithta hoon na

Rahul quickly went and sat with chinki

Kunj(in quite imitating way)- aisa kuch nahin hai dude

Nil and kunj starts laughing

Twinkle- you boys are just soo same!! Huh!! Ladki dikhi nahin ki latoo ho gaye

Guide- mmm excusme nilesh aap ravi ke sath baith jaiye

Ravi was sitting in front of Rahul and chinki

Nil makes a face and then sits with ravi (ravi was a chashmish and book worm not at all the type of nil)

Rahul laughs in a sarcastic way to make fun of nilesh

Ravi- heelo (doing his specks up)

Nil- aae chal chal book padh!!

Kunj Rahul chinki and Twinkle all bursts in laughter watching nil

Kunj- best of luck

Nil- mujhe uski bahut zaroorat thi

After some time...

Rahul and chinki were busy in admiring each other while Twinkle busy in wtching nature and kunj watching her

Nil goes on his knees on the seat to look back he sees that chinki and Rahul were lost in each other and kunj in Twinkle

He messages kunj in order not to disturb anyone else

Kunj- kya hai?

Nil- tu kya kar raha tha???

Kunj- baitha tha!!

Nil looks back and gives him a look

Nil- Twinkle ko kyu nihar raha tha

Nil again looks back and raises his eyebrows with an evil smile and kunj shows him a punch

Kunj- tujhse kya matlab

Nil- are mera best frn ek ladki ke peeche latoo ho gaya hai toh mujhe jan ne ka toh poora hak hai ;)

Kunj- >.<

Nil- kya gussa kyu ho raha hai

Kunj- toh aur kya teri aarti utaroon

Nil- bata naa tu use like karta hai naa

Kunj- nahin

Nil- bata na

Kunj- nahin

Nil- bata na

Kunj- acha thik hai

Nil- kya thik hai?

Kunj- I mean yes I like her

Nil stands up and starts dancing saying balle balle

Kunj was saying him stop and then hids his face

Everyone was laughing at him

Rahul- abe kya hua jo tu pagal ho gaya

Nil comes and whispers that kunj like Twinkle in his ear

Rahul(shouts)- kya? Kunj ye sach bol raha hai??

Kunj nods a yes

Rahul too starts dancing with nilesh

Twinkle- kunj kya pooch raha tha ye?

Kunj- kuch nahin

Rahul- wo Twinkle mai ye pooch raha tha ki kya kunj sach me

Before he could utter any word out kunj shut his mouse with his hand

Kunj- K.Kuch nahin Twinkle

Twinkle with a weird face

Kunj (in Rahul's ear)- aur tu kamine choop kar ke baith jaa warna mujhse bura koi nahin hoga

Guide- okk gyzzz plzz settle down

They all sits and share a look

Twinkle- kunj!!

Kunj- han

Twinkle- ye sab kya tha

Kunj- kuch nahin Twinkle!!

Twinkle- ok

Guide- gyzzz we r about to reach at hotel aur ham lunch karne ke baad aaj raat seedha gujrat ke ek hotel me rukenge hame wahan pahuchte hue zyada time hojayega soo wish that aap sab is time hi apne sath kuch eatables le le so that afterwards koi problem na ho!!

The bus get stopped and they all gets of the bus at a hotel and by luck there was a marriage reception being held at the hotel

As goes of the bus she sees it and gets stoped chinki was back of her

Chinki- Twinkle!! Twinkle!!

Twinkle- huh!!

Chinki- chale

Twinkle- han

Twinkle's face was not at all nice and kunj sees itbut don't say anythn

Whole team was having lunch but Twinkle stands

Kunj- kya hua?

Twinkle- mujhe bhook nahin lag rahi

Twinkle comes and stands at window and was then sseing the bride and groom

Twinkle- how lucky she is!!

Kunj comes from back

Kunj- u too r lucky!!

Twinkle- huh!! Lucky!! Meri shadi toot gayi I lost my love and u say that I am lucky

She looks forward folding her hands

Kunj- tumhara toh pata nahin but mai bahut lucky hoon bcoz I got a frn like u Twinkle Yuvi tumh chodke gaya wo uski galti hai and y the hell r u being sad

Twinkle(shouts)- because I loved him kunj

Kunj- but that doesn't matter

Twinkle- kunj plzzz leave me

Kunj(ordering)- ok f9 tumhe akela rehna hai naa!! Toh pehle aake khana kha lo and then raho akele

Twinkle- mujhe nahin khana

Kunj- mujhe bhook lag rahi hai chalo

Twinkle- kunj no

Kunj- agar tumhe nahi khana toh mujhe bhi nahin kahna

Twinkle-kunj ye natak mat karo

Kunj holds her hand was taking her too the table

Twinkle(shouts)- kunj just stop it!! Mujhe nahin kahan matlab nahin kahna why the hell r u forcing me aur agar tumhe nahin khana toh mat khao bcoz m not gonna eat

Twinkle goes from there and sits in the bus and starts shredding tear drops

Kunj was angry now

Rahul- kunj tu aake khale

Kunj- I don't wanna eat

Kunj too goes in the bus and sits beside Twinkle not facing her and Twinkle too was now quietly shredding tear drops

Either kunj was trying to be harsh but inside inside he was feeling bad for her

Kunj(softly)- Twinkle!!

But then he sees that she was having her phone in her hand and was staring at her and Yuvi's pic

Kunj was quiet heart seeing that he takes her phone and deletes all the pics of Yuvi from the phone

Twinkle- ye tumne kya kiya!!

Kunj- u loved him right

Twinkle- tumse matlab

Kunj's anger was 9th cloud

Kunj- tumne kaha tha ki tum use pyaar karti thi abb nahin karti toh ye kya tha

Twinkle- kunj what is your problem!!

Kunj- my problem is that , (he pause) that(shouts) I don't know!!!

Twinkle was now not at all able to bear this she stands and goes to chinki's seat

After when all enters

Rahul- Twinkle tum yahan kyu baithi ho

Twinkle didn't utter a word!!

Chinki- Rahul u sit with kunj mai Twinkle ke sath baithungi

Twinkle- no need meri wajah se tum dono apna mood mat spoil karo

Twinkle then goes and sits with kunj again and don't even see his face!!

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Edited by vidhu1 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#73
those who want a PM please like this Post so that i could avoid confusion...
thanku!!😊😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#74
Very lovely update.
Kunj is really falling hard for Twinkle.
Hoping she will not be mad at him,for long.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#75
Vidhu this is so good
Aww kunj has fallen for her so badly and twinkle is still coping with a bad breakup
I loved it all
Nil is hilarious. Just like he was in the show
Lol rahul and chinky
They'll look good
I am sure kunj will heal twinkle's broken heart
continue soon
Ty for the pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
#76
This A truely Amazing..
I read all the parts in In go..
Sorry for walking In so Late..
I love the Tarvel Love stories. so this is this is definitely my one of the Favorites..
Its light, Sweet, Fun .. Almost Everything in A Teen Love story...
I am Loving It..
Please PM me.. i am Hooked to This..
My Favorite Characters R Rahul and Nil...
Thy the Best... Reala Friends..
Kunj Likes Twinkle.. This scenes ws the Best... I jus Loved the Way i showed the Connection between these 3 friends..
Twinkle's constant Fight with her Broken Heart is wel portrayed..
Very Nyc.. Please Continue soonnish..😉
Edited by 17.sonal - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#77
superb update. pls continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#78
Fantastic...kunj is falling...hope twinkle comes out of her break up...oh twinj got into fight...plz patch up them soon... update next part soon...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#79
Very lovely update 😳😛
Hope soon twinj patch up...
Continue soon 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#80

Originally posted by: Duumps

Very lovely update.

Kunj is really falling hard for Twinkle.
Hoping she will not be mad at him,for long.


thanku soo much!!
yup he is falling for her..hmm being mad is a thing which wont work here as this is a fun filled story!!
Edited by vidhu1 - 9 years ago

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