FS ....TEAR IN MY HEART {CH-2(A)on pg-3} 11April - Page 2

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Posted: 9 years ago
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CHAPTER 1 (B)

BAMM...
Door slammed open so hard clearly shows that his personal volcano is going to erupt soon.

"Nandu u are taking everything wrong."he said helplessly

"Ok now this is also my fault ...right"she shouted . Her face became red like a tomato with anger . 😡

"yes"she looked at him with disbelief."i mean no... ahh nandani. i was just trying to help her ok aur kuch nahi."

"oh so Mr . Busy Malhotra has time for that girl ... that soha rather than his own wife." She said angrily

"tum baat ko kaha se kaha le ja rahiho. soha is new in office that's why i was helping her."

"oh yeah right ek dusre ke upar hoke in some awkward position."

"tch ... she slipped ok ... so i was just trying to help her but unfortunately i also fell down with her .. that's it nothing else. Now will u plz stop investigating me like i did some crime. Bhalayi ka toh zamana hi nahi raha."
he said irritated . and sat in the sofa running his hand in hair. Nandani looked at him for some time and went to kitchen tapping her foot showing that she is still pissed off.

*********
"i was just trying to help her huh."
" mere liye kabhi time nahi hota.par us chipkali ke liye time hi time arghh..."

she is continuously murmuring this doing work in kitchen.

Manik peaked inside the kitchen and came toward her holding guitar in his hand .he lean in the counter . she ignore him. he sing...

Maybe I annoy u with my choices. Well, u annoy me sometimes too with ur voice.

She glare at him and turned to go. he smile and hold her.and came near her ear making her shiver.

But that ain't enough for me
to move out and move on
I'm just gonna love u like the woman i had love.


she blushed at this but quickly hide it and try to move but he hold her in fraction of second and slide his hand on her waist and pull her with a jerk. .

We don't have to hurry
You take as long as you want
I'm holding steady
and my heart is at home
with my hand behind u
i will catch u if u fall
I'm just gonna love u like the woman i had love


she struggle under his grip and freed herself.she stand up in a stool and searched for something which she also don't know in kitchen cabinet.she is closing and opening the cabinet making loud sound and irritating face.

sometimes the world make u feel.
You're not welcome anymore
and u beat urself up
u let urself get mad
and in those time when u stop loving
the woman i adore
you can relax
because babe i got ur back


suddenly she stumble while searching and was about to fell but manik catch her. she close her eyes in fear.

mmm.. i got u

he smile looking at her. slowly she open her eyes and look at that chocolaty brown magical eyes and get lost in it.he removed her hair strand which is falling in her face.and caresses her already flushed cheek gently.

I don't wish to change u
u have got it under control
you wake up each day different
Another reason for me to keep holding on
I'm not attached to u any way you're showing up
I'm just gonna love u like the woman i had love
I'm gonna love u
you are the woman i love...


as he finished the song broke their eye contact. she looked here and there with totally red cheek this time not becoz of anger 😉

" so we are ok now..."manik said with hopeful eyes. she look at him for sometime and kissed him softly which left manik shocked.
"ok as if like this.. ."she asked naughtyly . manik smirk and kissed her back
"yeah like this.."she giggle and manik mesmerized his lady love
"I love u nandani"
he whispered and hug her.
"and I love u more ..Mr malhotra"was the instant reply.
**********
'manik' ...'manik'. .'wake up''manik'...
"nandani"he get up with jerk . and looked at photo frame which he was holding at night. he looked around the room..crused roses broken vase and his broken heart. it was just his memory lane ...oh how he wished that this time also she will forgive like always. but truth is that she left. leaving him alone.

'manik' a voice came again then he register that mukti is also here.
"mukti ... what are u doing here.?"he asked rubbing his face.

"manik what have u done with u? looked at ur self man.. u are looking so worked up. and what happened between u and nandani.. rishab told me she came last night and she is leaving town today."
this take manik breath away.No he can't let her go like this. no he just can't.

"I'm leaving'
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so how was it? do tell me by commenting on it..
THANK U
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Posted: 9 years ago
#12
Awesome update
Manik was just dreaming
He is broken
Update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#13
Wow awesome update...
Manik was dreaming...
Dream was soo beautiful and loveable...
Manik is soo broken...
Jst hope manik stops Nandu..
Luved it..
Waiting for next..
Update soon...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#14
I hope Manik gussa na karey aur nandu ko mana Ly continue soon waiting eagerly take care
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Posted: 9 years ago
#15
Hey there... Read both the parts in one go... Awesome,loved it... Nandu wants divorce... Manik was so hurt... Nandu is leaving...
I hope manik use rok le aur mna le...
Please pm me if possible...

Continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#16
CHAPTER 2(A)

"come on pick up the phone" he was continuously calling Nandani but she is not answering anyone.
"DAMN" he bang his hand on steering wheel of car while driving it . He think for sometime and dial no. It answered after few ring.
"Hello"

"Hello Rishab , where is nandani?"
"jiju... di toh subha hi airport ke liye nikal gayi.. kuch bataya bhi nahi. sab thik hai na " he said worriedly but instead getting an answer . call disconnected.

As soon manik came to know . he turned his way toward the airport.

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"NANDANNIII..." manik shouted loudly .. when he saw her at entrance of airport. she turned to face him.He came toward her running and stood front of her .

"you are leaving... leaving me " he said hurtfully..she stare at his face for sometimes saying nothing.

"speak up damn it" he yelled.

" yes ... i think it's over last night. You yourself ended it .
Remember ." she said directly looking at him . And turn to move.

"No.. it's not over. ok . we can solve our differences . just give a last chance to this relationship." he said helplessly.

" manik why you are not understanding. NOTHING left between us now... dooriya itni ho gayi hai ki hum ek dusre ko dekh hi parahe... solve kaise karenge? i know we both are at fault. we ruin our relation .but i try ok.. to make it but now i can't it suffocates me now. just ask yourself manik does anything is same ?...US ...OUR LOVE.NO ..deep in your heart u also know it... and i think iam that enough to accept it...I QUIT FOR GOOD MANIK" she said with no emotion. he froze at his place... he know she is right but he doesn't want this to end like this..so he try one last time

"Iam Sorry... sorry for everything... but . plz don't go" he said almost begging.she smile faintly

" manik i forgive u like always ... but now i can't do this anymore... i have to go."

" BYE manik ... " she said hugged him .lightly and try to move out but he tightened his grip.on her.

"plz don't go plz" he whispered in her ear ..holding her

" just let me go manik ...let me go.. " she said slowly and freed herself.
" Take care" and she is gone...He watched her until she vanished from his sight.
He stand there don't know for how long.

**********
" manik ...let's go home" mukti voice snapped him out pf his trance . He looked at her confused

"Rishab told me that u must be here . " she said and drag him to his car. and drive to home.
*******
"she left ...she left me mukti" he murmured. when they reach home.

" everything will be alright manik " she said painfully and hugged him

" she said she don't love me anymore...how..can she ... i said sorry ok ...i said but she left..." he is blabbering making no sense and fully broken.

" shhh... get a grip on yourself manik..." she pacify him. fought back tears by seeing her best friend so vurnerable

" i want her back in my life... " he said before he dozed off in her arm
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THAT'S IT FOR NOW... ENJOY AND DO COMMENT.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#17
Awesome update soon. Hope they reunite.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#18
Awesome update
Loved it
Nandini is definitely hiding something
He loves her so much
Update soon
It's been too long you haven't updated
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Posted: 9 years ago
#19
nice story

so heart touching

plz update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#20
update soon.
.don't show she has some disease plz...don't repeat same crap


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