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Posted: 9 years ago
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The current storyline is lacking in terms of connectivity.Last few weeks had been very interesting with the Isha-Sahir interview and the Gia-Azhar controversy, not only because the track was interesting and well executed but also because it didn't seem forced. There was a smooth flow with one thing leading to another but off late some things are very unrelatable.

Gia -Azhar relationship
I personally love the couple cuz both Barkha and Yuvraj play their parts well but this sudden proposal is too off for me. I mean Azhar wasn't even on talking terms with Gia two days earlier, he also confessed to Nadia about being upset with Gia for the fake story and suddenly ,out of nowhere the proposal scene came up. I don't think its a bad idea to bring Azhar and Gia together ,but this sudden increase in pace just takes away their love story's charm. The proposal scene was sweet ,but it really felt out of place. No monologues given ,not a single scene where Azhar did actually understand Gia's point of view or her helplessness ,neither any scene where Gia felt apologetic for blaming Azhar for the mishap. Instead of a proposal,probably both of them sorting out their issues or even a completely opposite track where they are falling apart ,could have been more interesting and relatable.

Sahir and Azhar's friendship
Until today's episode these guys have just been shown having merely a one or two word conversation . They never went beyond a 'Hello ' or "how are you doing " and all those kind of formal talks. But in the today's episode they were bonding like long time friends. Who shares/makes plan of proposing a girl with someone whom you barely know.? Even if we consider it just as Sahir's help to Azhar,both guys bonding on such a personal level ,hugging and dancing around was a little too much.( Shantanu was smiling a lot today and its been such a while I saw him like that! Did distract me for a while :P)

I really thought that the proposal scene would have been with just Gia and Azhar,but well if IshIr were present, I think even Revati should have been there to be a part of the moment.

Sahir is supposed to be a musician but all he does is thinks about Isha. His character as a musician is never brought to light. They may show him dancing out of the blue,but no scenes where his passion for music can be seen. Zero connectivity there when it comes to Sahir ,the singer...All I can see of him is Sahir ,who is Isha's ex.

Rev and Guru's relation is going no where. The same tracks are being repeated where they are having a good time once,then Revati insults Guru , on realizing it ,very casually apologizes to him and they are back to square one. Some of the moments they shared were really cute but I feel their story needs to acquire some pace with a proper buildup so that they are more connectible.

~Shreya
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Posted: 9 years ago
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You wrote it all. Screenplay of this show is so bad.
I can't really say much about Azhar Gia coz I haven't watched their scenes for quite some time.
Coming to Sahir Azhar bonding...it just came from nowhere. How did they connect? When did they bond ? How did they hatch the plan of going to Gia's place etc...literally nothing was shown. It looked so out of the blue.
Sahir's character sketch is just one dimensional. I don't have a problem with Sahir dancing ( Watching SM dance is a treat) but Sahir is a singer at the end of the day. It's okay if they want to focus on his love life more but there has to be more to Sahir than that.
And oh man it's a task to withstand Saloni's lack of expressions , horrendous voice , lack of voice modulation ...3 months and still no sizeable improvement . Tonight particularly I felt irritated coz their romantic scene was nicely framed but but but Saloni managed to pull down that too.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: LiveEatLove

You wrote it all. Screenplay of this show is so bad.

I can't really say much about Azhar Gia coz I haven't watched their scenes for quite some time.
Coming to Sahir Azhar bonding...it just came from nowhere. How did they connect? When did they bond ? How did they hatch the plan of going to Gia's place etc...literally nothing was shown. It looked so out of the blue.
Sahir's character sketch is just one dimensional. I don't have a problem with Sahir dancing ( Watching SM dance is a treat) but Sahir is a singer at the end of the day. It's okay if they want to focus on his love life more but there has to be more to Sahir than that.
And oh man it's a task to withstand Saloni's lack of expressions , horrendous voice , lack of voice modulation ...3 months and still no sizeable improvement . Tonight particularly I felt irritated coz their romantic scene was nicely framed but but but Saloni managed to pull down that too.


Exactly , Azhar and Sahir suddenly turning into longtime buddies from strangers just doesn't go down well with me.
Watching Shantanu dance is not just a treat to us but also a way to shoot up the trps I guess , so its just added randomly in the scene ,without a proper background. Sahir is a singer but you get to see him dancing more, rather just dancing. It would be better if the dance sequences are added for a reason other than just for raising trps, and ofcourse his singing talent is concentrated more on.

Sahir and Isha had some good scenes in this week, but yeah the impact is not great cuz Saloni is still the same. I really liked the kitchen scene they had, but then again it fell flat cuz of her :(
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Posted: 9 years ago
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so sweet jodi azhar and gia i like barkha and yuvraj,but show me sab itana jaldi jaldi ho raha hai kuch pata nahi chal raha, or achanak azhar ne gia ke vaha aagaya or prapose kar diya. ye sab bahot jaldi jaldi me huva hai.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Very nice post. I agree with all your point except Sahir (shantanu) dancing. I don't need any reason for his dance. I will love them to add his dance even if it sound illogical (sorry for being his such a biased dance fan.) But yes I do agree his passion for music should be shown along with Isha's ex-boyfriend. Only time they showed his passion was when he fought with Isha for his self respect.

Regarding Gia and Azhar proposal. I agree it was so sudden. Till yesterday Azhar was kind of angry with Gia then with Nadia he discussing about giving some time and today suddenly proposal. I think this mainly happen due to lack of monologues and thought process of them.
As for Sahir and Azhar friendship even I felt it was sudden development. But can still give them benefit of doubt as boys personal life is rarely shown other than their relation to the girls so they might have started meeting in background and become good friends specially after gia azhar and sahir Isha controversy. Even though it is quite difficult to believe they become such close friend overnight.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: kapoormenka

Very nice post. I agree with all your point except Sahir (shantanu) dancing. I don't need any reason for his dance. I will love them to add his dance even if it sound illogical (sorry for being his such a biased dance fan.) But yes I do agree his passion for music should be shown along with Isha's ex-boyfriend. Only time they showed his passion was when he fought with Isha for his self respect.

Regarding Gia and Azhar proposal. I agree it was so sudden. Till yesterday Azhar was kind of angry with Gia then with Nadia he discussing about giving some time and today suddenly proposal. I think this mainly happen due to lack of monologues and thought process of them.
As for Sahir and Azhar friendship even I felt it was sudden development. But can still give them benefit of doubt as boys personal life is rarely shown other than their relation to the girls so they might have started meeting in background and become good friends specially after gia azhar and sahir Isha controversy. Even though it is quite difficult to believe they become such close friend overnight.

No I didn't mean it that way. I am a Shantanu fan too ! And a bigg one!!! I just mean that he's supposed to be a singer and he's shown doing everything else other than focusing on singing. Watching Shantanu dance is something I'd like to do everyday: P ,but it doesn't justify the character Sahir.


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Posted: 9 years ago
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I agree with you that gia and azhar's proposal scene came out of no where and the sudden bond between sahir and azhar too. But I think sahir and azhar would have become friends well they didn't show their blossoming friendship coz the show concentrates only on isha's point of view. They didn't even show when they (sahir and azhar) planned on the proposal. They really need to show others POV before they shoot a scene like that which came out suddenly and it becomes so confusing for us. But I luved their bond yesterday.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Sahir sahir sahir! I think the show is not able to meet up our expectations,which are very high !
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Spark.Shreya

No I didn't mean it that way. I am a Shantanu fan too ! And a bigg one!!! I just mean that he's supposed to be a singer and he's shown doing everything else other than focusing on singing. Watching Shantanu dance is something I'd like to do everyday: P ,but it doesn't justify the character Sahir.


I know you are right and I agree with you on character part but still can watch his dance everyday without any logic. Yes I agree he is not shown doing anything for his music. this singing reality show also came his way as favor from Isha and in the show also instead of singing focus is more on his and Shreya pairing. I don't mind they want to show this pair getting trps and how it is affecting Isha but sometime they should show real part of the show also that is contestant singing and their competition.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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As much as the good plotline , theme and concept GOT has...the screenplay and storywriting is bad.
The main issue with story is its pace. The story moves in rush. Its like it ends before I feel something. There are so many plots which remain unanswered and unaddressed and moreover everything the character development is bad.
I can write down the whole list of issues i have wid story but I am too tired to do that rite now...may some other day😉

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