FF : Coin has two sides - Pure & Evil (Ch10A - Pg126) *Pms Later*

hiya

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Chapter 6

Meanwhile, ladies purchase vegetables & fruits after lots of bargaining & eating vendors head. While returning, Bhavana says, "Aae ruko, mujhe 3 books leni hai. Me yahan dukan se le leti huu."

Lajjo asks, "Bhavana Bhabhi, kal aapne kaha tha na Bhairavi ko 3 kitab Lane. Toh woh nai leke ayi? Aapko aagya ka palan nai kiya?"

Bhavana replies, "Chakudi, meri aagya ka palan naa kare aisa kabhi hota hai? Woh palan karti hai? Aur aisa kaam karti hai ki meri aagya mujhe hi bhari padti hai."

Lajjo says laughing, "Toh is baar usne ke gadbad ki Bhavana Bhabhi?"

Bhavana replies making an angry face, "Tere saamne Lajjo, maine kaha tha na, ki chakudi bachho ko padhne ke liye dictionary le lete hain, unko kai baar shabd ka matlab samajne me taklif hoti hai. Phir baar baar sab shishir ke pass jate uske superpower se pata karne. aur bechare ko bhi apne dimag ki dictionary me dhundhne me waqt lagta hai na. Aur usse puchne gaye to phir khelne hi baith jaate hai. Toh maine socha ki sab bachho ko alag alag de dete hain taki sab apne aap khud se padhai kar sake. Toh maine Chakudi se kaha tha ki Chakudi 3 dictionary leke aana. Toh...

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Flashback starts

Bhavana angrily glaring at Bhairavi, & Bhairavi afraid of her. "Baa.."

"Chup!! Ekdam chup!! Maine tujhse laga tha ki dictionary leke aana bachho ko matlab samajne me assami ho. Toh tu yeh kya leke aayi, Chakudi!" Questions Bhavana.

"Baa, aap kuch bhi mat boliye!! Mitesh Pritesh ke Papa!! Aap gawah hai, Baa ne kahi pe bhi dictionary shabd kaha tha? " Says Bhairavi.

Bhadresh nods his head in a no & sleeps again.

"Arey pan Ben, itna to soch matlab samajne me dictionary ki hi jarurat hoti hai na." , tries to explain Bhavana

"Kuch bhi mat boliye Baa , matlab samajne ke liye achha dimag hona chahiye aur bolne wale ko sahi bolna chahiye. Waise uski jarurat aapko jyada hai kyun ki aap hamesha samajane me gadbad karti hai. ", says Bhairavi with showing her bulb eyes

"Haan have! Arey Ben par yeh nibandmala(essay book), writing pad aur yeah istriwale ki hisab ki kitab isse bachho ko kya matlab samajega. " Asked Bhavana.

"Kyun, Baa !! Yeh dekhiye nibandmala, isme har niband ke baad mushkil shabd ke matlab samajne gaye hai. Aur yeah writing pad!! Baa aap bhi Na kuch nai samajti, writing pad pe toh bachhe mushkil shabd ko unke matlab ke saath likhegi. Aur yeh istriwale ki hisab ki kitab!! Baa isse to bachhe hisab kitab lagana sikhenge." , Replied Bhairavi.

Bhavana shocked at the answer again questions her, "Chakudi!! Par tu yeh 3 alag prakar ki kitab kyun leke ayi koi bhi ek kyun nai lai?"

Bhairavi sighs & says, " Baa !! Aap hi toh bolo thi!! Chakudi 3 alag alag kitab lana. 3.. alag.. alag.. aise 3 aur alag alag pe jhor deke. Toh me 3 alag alag kitab leke aayi."

Bhavana now angry, "Arey mere kehne ka matlab tha 3 alag alag kitab matlab 3 ek hi kitab lekin 3 copy. "

Bhairavi starts nodding her head, "Baa!! Kitni baar samjana hai aapko!! Matlab baad me samajane ka kya matlab!! Aap please abhi toh samaj jayiye Baa!"

Flashback ends..

All laugh, then Lajjo asks, "Bhavna bhabhi aapne 3 alag alag kyun kaha?"

Bhavana replies, "Arey pichli baar usse kaha tha 3 kitab le aa to woh 3 no ki kitab lai thi."

Liza asks, "Aunty Bhavana man!! Toh tum 3 copy kyun nai bola?"

Lajjo replies on this,"Kyun ki!! Phir woh ek kitab leti aur uski 3 Xerox copy bana kar leke aati. Kyun ki copy toh Xerox hi hoti hai na." Bhavana nods on this. & They all laugh loudly.

Liza remembers sumthing, & speaks, "Aaee Aunty Bhavana man, kal raat ko humare gharpe Jo new year ki raat ko Jo samaan chori hua tha Na, woh wapas rakh ke gaya koi man. "

Bhavana replies, "Tere ghar pe bhi? Mere gharpe bhi chor samaan wapas rakh ke gaye aur saath me ek chithi bhi chod ke gaye."

Liza says, "Haan man Aunty Bhavana mere gharpe bhi ek chithi chod ke gaya woh chor man. Matlab humare ghar pe ek hi chor ne chori ki thi."

Talking about these things they reach back to colony. & disperse to their homes to cook lunch.

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In market, after going to few shops Rutu tells, "Hey hum yahin raste pe ghumte hain na. Abhi mujhe yeh dukan me nai jana."

Both the boys agree without arguing as both were excited & relieved to be with Rutu. They dint think of anything else other than making Rutu happy & agreeing to her. They dint even think of Anna. But Rutu notices Anna & with a girl probably her friend trying to follow them. She hated this. As she wanted a time with her boys alone & just wanted to enjoy & also make her boys happy as now a days they are more heartbroken though they don't show it.

Rutu was just sightseeing the market, where her eyes caught 2 girls giggling over sumthing & gossiping. Yes they seemed to be gossiping. The girls went near pani puri stall & ordered their plates. Rutu thinks sumthing & with a smirk says to both boys, "Hey woh kya hai? Pani puri hai Na? Mujhe woh khana hai? Maine suna hai Mumbai ki pani puri mmm hoti hai."

Boys agree & the trio go towards the stall. They start eating, even the girls are there as the girls were having 2 plates. All finish their pani puri together. A girl goes to wash her hands & Rutu tells Manav to help her wash her hands & they too move there.

After washing the hands Rutu purposely makes the girl slip in Manav's direction. The girl slips & was about to fall backwards but Manav saves her & catches her in his arms. Both have eye lock. After about 2 minutes Rutu did a noise of coughing so both come out of trance. Both get conscious.

"Hey am so sorry, meri wajah se tum ghirne wali thi. Achha hua Manav tumme isse ghirne se bachaya. By the way, am Rutu." Saying this Rutu forwards her hand towards the girl.

The girl immediately says,"Am Mehek, it's okk meri bhi galati thi, mujhe dekhke chala chahiye tha. Thank you Manav, mujhe bachane ke liye. Friends?" Saying this, she forwards her hand towards Manav & gives a shy smile.

Seeing this, Rutu was satisfied, & when she looked towards Sharad she smiled widely.

As the girl with Sharad was trying to flirt with him & he wasn't understanding.

The girl says, "Thank you!" Sharad confused. Girl continues, "Woh aapke dost ne meri behen ko ghirne se bachaya." Sharad understands & nods. Girl forwards her hand, "Anamta"

Sharad gets confused but then bows down. "Hey yeah kya kar rahe ho?" Asked the girl shockingly.

Sharad replies, "Aap hi ne kaha na, Aa nam ta, matlab juko hota hai na."

Listening this she started laughing & pulls his cheek, "Cutie Buddhu" listening this word he remembers Anna & starts to do yayayayayayayaya but stops.

"Me apna naam bata rahi thi, Anamta"

"Oh! Haan, Sharad", saying this he shakes hand with her. " Nice to meet you" the girl has a mischievous glint. But hides it well from others.

Rutu comes there & does friendship with Anamta & is impressed with her. Rutu tells them they live in sunshine colony & invites them at Ghotalas for dinner as part of her appology. The girls accept it happily. Seeing this Rutu was more excited where as Manav & Sharad were confused as what was Rutu up to.

There was Anna standing with her friend behind them & was angry.

After sumtime the trio return back home. Sharad goes to his home & informs Vasant-Varsha about the girls arriving for dinner & they decide to invite others too. They start preparing dinner. All colony ladies are shocked at the dinner invite & decide to help Varsha in preparations, though they wanted to save themselves from further ghotala in dinner. All ladies have lots of fun while preparing food & also gossip a lot.

In hotel room, two girls were sitting dreamily. One of them smiles & other sees this & questions her, "Anamta!! Tu hass kyun rahi h? Akele akele, koi joke ho toh mujhe bhi suno, me bhi hasungi."

Anamta replies, "Kuch nai Meheku, me us ladke ko yaad karke hass rahi thi. Pata hai maine usse apna naam bataya to usne apna sar jhukaya kyun ki usse laga me usse jhukne ke liye keh rahi."

Listening this Mehek is confused, "Anu!! Tere naam me aur jhukne me kya sambandh?"

Anamta Says, "Arey woh Bhavana Aunty ke gujurati me jhukna ko namvu kehne hai na."

& Both girls start laughing. Anamta continues, "Par tu bata Meheku, tu kiske sapne me thi?? Hmmm, kisiki baho me rehne ka mann kar raha hai., hmm"

& Both gals starts teasing the other. Then after sumtime they decide to get ready for the dinner & impress their boys.

Now it's party time, & Rutu wonders if the girls will arrive or no. She had developed a liking towards the girls & when she knew they were sisters she was more happy. Meanwhile, Sharad & Manav decide to introduce Rutu to all colonywale. She meets all. She already had me Manav's family. She knew Ghotalas since years. They introduce her to bhatts & d'souzas . She liked Bhairavi when Vasant told she is like their daughter but gets afraid when he says she is like Hemant, pure hearted & total clean brain. Manav gets shocked when Rutu gets afraid. Ghotalas knew this reaction would come so they were waiting for her to come around. Rutu talked with all most all the colonywale & befriended them. She was dying to meet Pritesh & padmavati Devi. Though at first she was angry on them but then she accepts them open armed & gifts both of them few chocolates.

Finally the girls arrive. Both looked gorgeous. Amar Akbar Anthony drool over them & reach their dreamland. Rutu's exciting voice brings them back to earth. All are introduced with girls. All start to take selfies with each other. Them Rutu thinks of sumthing & whispers sumthing in Varsha's ears & she also gets excited. Varsha tells Vasant to start the music player. He starts it with his superpower. There was a collection of romantic songs. So they decide all couples to have a dance. Though murlidhar wanted to dance with either of girl he was asked to dance with Lajjo by Manav. Bhairavi-Bhadresh, Ronnie-Liza, Vasant-Varsha join in. Anna was confused that with whom she would dance. Manav thinks let Sharad dance with Anna & he moves towards Mehek to ask her for dance & at the same time thinking Manav will dance with Anna, Sharad too moves towards Anamta. Both boys are shocked & realise their thoughts matched once again. But now how could they back off from these girls so they dance smiling. As Anna was left alone Hemant felt bad & he moved towards Anna & asked her if she would teach him such dance. She teaches him. Then all decide to let one couple dance at a time.

First Ronnie-Liza dance on Tera Hone Laga hoon

Shining in the shade in sun like
A pearl upon the ocean
Come and feel me.. How feel me

Shining in the shade in sun like
A pearl upon the ocean
Come on heal me.. Go heal me

Thinking about the lovin making
And life sharing come and feel me
How feel me

Shining in the shade in sun like
A pearl upon the ocean
Come on feel me
Come on heal me..

Hua jo tubhi mera mera
Tera jo ikraar hua
To kyun na main bhi keh doon keh doon
Hua mujhe bhi pyaar hua

Tera hone laga hoon, khone laga hoon
Jab se mila hoon
Tera hone laga hoon, khone laga hoon
Jab se mila hoon

Shining in the shade in sun like
A pearl upon the ocean
Come and feel me.. How feel me

Shining in the shade in sun like
A pearl upon the ocean
Come on heal me.. Go heal me

Waise to mann mera, pehli bhi raaton mein
Aksar hi chahat ke haan
Sapne sanjonta tha

Pehle bhi dhadkan ye, dhun koi gaati thi
Par ab jo hota hai woh, pehle na hota tha

Hua hai tujhe jo bhi jo bhi
Mujhe bhi is baar hua
To kyun na main bhi, keh doon keh doon
Hua mujhe bhi pyaar hua

Tera hone laga hoon, khone laga hoon
Jab se mila hoon
Tera hone laga hoon, khone laga hoon
Jab se mila hoon

Aankhon se choo lun ke bahein tarasti hain
Dil ne pukara hai haan, ab to chale aao
Aaoge shabnam ki boonde barasti hain
Mausam ishara hai haan, ab to chale aao

Baahon mein dhalein, baahein.. Baahein..
Baahon ka jaise haar hua
Haa manaa maine mana mana
Hua mujhe bhi pyaar hua

Tera hone laga hoon, khone laga hoon
Jab se mila hoon
Tera hone laga hoon, khone laga hoon
Jab se mila hoon

Shining in the shade in sun like
A pearl upon the ocean
Come and feel me.. How feel me
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Shining in the shade in sun like
A pearl upon the ocean
Come on heal me.. Go heal me

Thinking about the lovin making
And life sharing come and feel me
How feel me

Shining in the shade in sun like
A pearl upon the ocean
Come on feel me
Come on heal me...

Then Bhairavi-Bhadresh dance on Jeena Jeena

Hmm.. hmm...

Dehleez pe mere dil ki
Jo rakhe hain tune kadam
Tere naam pe meri zindagi
Likh di mere humdum

Haan seekha maine jeena jeena kaise jeena
Haan seekha maine jeena mere humdum
Na seekha kabhi jeena jeena kaise jeena
Na seekha jeena tere bina humdum

Dehleez pe merey dil ki
Jo rakhe hain tune kadam
Tere naam pe meri zindagi
Likh di mere humdum

Haan sikha maine jeena jeena kaise jeena
Haan sikha maine jeena, mere humdum
Na sikha kabhi jeena jeena kaise jeena
Na sikha jeena tere bina humdum

Hmmm.. hmmm..

Sacchi si hain yeh taareefein
Dil se jo maine kari hain...

Jo tu mila to saji hain
Duniya meri humdum
O aasma mila zameen ko meri
Aadhe aadhe poore hain hum
Tere naam pe meri zindagi
Likh di mere humdum

Haan seekha maine jeena jeena, kaise jeena
Haan seekha maine jeena, mere humdum
Na seekha kabhi jeena jeena kaise jeena
Na seekha jeena tere bina humdum

Hmmm... hmmm..

Then murlidhar-lajjo dance on Khuda Jaane

Aaa aa...

(Male)
Sajde mein yun hi jhukta hoon
Tum pe hi aa ke rukta hoon
Kya yeh sab ko hota hai

(Female)
Hum ko kya lena hai sab se
Tum se hi sab batein ab se
Ban gaye ho tum meri dua

(Male)
Sajde mein yun hi jhukta hoon
Tum pe hi aa ke rukta hoon
Kya yeh sab ko hota hai

(Female)
Hum ko kya lena hai sab se
Tum se hi sab batein ab se
Ban gaye ho tum meri dua

Khuda Jaane ke mein fida hun
Khuda Jaane mein mit gaya
Khuda jaane yeh kyun huwa hai
Ke ban gaye ho tum mere khuda

Tu kahe to tere hi kadam ke
main nishanon pe
Chalun rukun ishaare pe
Tu kahe tho khwabon ka bana ke
Main bahana sa
Mila karu sirhaane pe

Ohhh
Tum se dil ki baatein seekhi
Tum se hi yeh raahe seekhi
Tum pe marr ke mein tho
Jjee gaya

Khuda Jaane ke mein fida hun
Khuda Jaane mein mit gaya
Khuda jaane yeh kyun huwa hai
Ke ban gaye ho tum mere khuda

Dil kahe ke aaj tho, chupa lo tum
panahon mein
Ke darr hai tum ko kho doonga
Dil kahe ki sambhal zara khushi ko
Na nazar laga
Ke darr hai mein tho ro dunga

Hooo
Karthi hoon sao vaade tum se
Bandhe dil ke dhaage tum se
Yeh tumhe na jane kya hua

Khuda Jaane ke mein fida hun
Khuda Jaane mein mit gaya
Khuda jaane yeh kyun huwa hai
Ke ban gaye ho tum mere khuda

(Male)
Sajde mein yun hi jhukta hoon
Tum pe hi aa ke rukta hoon
Kya yeh sab ko hota hai

(Female)
Hum ko kya lena hai sab se
Tum se hi sab batein ab se
Ban gaye ho tum meri dua

Khuda Jaane ke mein fida hun
Khuda Jaane mein mit gaya
Khuda jaane yeh kyun huwa hai
Ke ban gaye ho tum mere khuda

Ke ban gaye ho tum mere khuda

Then Manav-Mehek dance on Tum Hi Ho

Hum tere bin ab reh nahi sakte
Tere bina kya wajood mera (x2)

Tujhse juda gar ho jaayenge
Toh khud se hi ho jaayenge judaa

Kyunki tum hi ho
Ab tum hi ho
Zindagi ab tum hi ho
Chain bhi, mera dard bhi
Meri aashiqui ab tum hi ho

Tera mera rishta hai kaisa
Ik pal door gawara nahi
Tere liye har roz hai jeete
Tujh ko diya mera waqt sabhi
Koi lamha mera na ho tere bina
Har saans pe naam tera

Kyunki tum hi ho
Ab tum hi ho
Zindagi ab tum hi ho
Chain bhi, mera dard bhi
Meri aashiqui ab tum hi ho

Tumhi ho... Tumhi ho...
Tere liye hi jiya main
Khud ko jo yun de diya hai
Teri wafa ne mujhko sambhala
Saare ghamon ko dil se nikala
Tere saath mera hai naseeb juda
Tujhe paake adhoora naa raha hmm..

Kyunki tum hi ho
Ab tum hi ho
Zindagi ab tum hi ho..
Chain bhi, mera dard bhi
Meri aashiqui ab tum hi ho (x2)

Then Sharad-Anamta dance on Tum Hi Ho again

Hum tere bin ab reh nahi sakte
Tere bina kya wajood mera (x2)

Tujhse juda gar ho jaayenge
Toh khud se hi ho jaayenge judaa

Kyunki tum hi ho
Ab tum hi ho
Zindagi ab tum hi ho
Chain bhi, mera dard bhi
Meri aashiqui ab tum hi ho

Tera mera rishta hai kaisa
Ik pal door gawara nahi
Tere liye har roz hai jeete
Tujh ko diya mera waqt sabhi
Koi lamha mera na ho tere bina
Har saans pe naam tera

Kyunki tum hi ho
Ab tum hi ho
Zindagi ab tum hi ho
Chain bhi, mera dard bhi
Meri aashiqui ab tum hi ho

Tumhi ho... Tumhi ho...
Tere liye hi jiya main
Khud ko jo yun de diya hai
Teri wafa ne mujhko sambhala
Saare ghamon ko dil se nikala
Tere saath mera hai naseeb juda
Tujhe paake adhoora naa raha hmm..

Kyunki tum hi ho
Ab tum hi ho
Zindagi ab tum hi ho..
Chain bhi, mera dard bhi
Meri aashiqui ab tum hi ho (x2)

Then last couple Vasant-Varsha dance on Gerua

Dhoop se nikal ke
Chhaanv se phisal ke
Hum mile jahaan par
Lamha tham gaya

Aasmaan pighal ke
Sheeshe mein dhal ke
Jam gaya to tera
Chehra ban gaya

Duniya bhula ke tumse mila hoon
Nikli hai dil se ye duaa
Rang de tu mohe Gerua
Ranjhe ki dil se hai duaa
Rang de tu mohe gerua

Haan nikli hai dil se ye duaa
Ho.. Rang de tu mohe gerua

Ho tumse se shuru.. tumpe fanaa
Hai Sufiyana yeh dastaan
Main kaarwaan manzil ho tum
Jaata jahaan ko har raasta

Tumse juda jo
Dil zara sambhal ke
Dard ka wo saara
Kohra chhan gaya

Duniya bhula ke tumse mila hoon
Nikli hai dil se yeh duaa
Rang de tu mohe gerua
Ho.. Ranjhe ki dil se hai duaa
Rang de tu mohe gerua

O.. veeraan tha, dil ka jahaan
Jis din se tu daakhil huaa
Ik jism se.. ik jaan ka..
Darza mujhe haasil huaa

Haan.. pheeke hain saare
Naate jahaan ke
Tere saath rishta gehra ban gaya

Duniya bhula ke tumse mila hoon
Nikli hai dil se yeh duaa
Rang de tu mohe gerua
Ranjhe ki dil se hai duaa
Rang de tu mohe gerua

Haan nikli hai dil se ye duaa
Ho.. Rang de tu mohe gerua

Rutu imagines herself with Vasant & they dance on Tum Se Hi

Na hai yeh pana
Na Khona hi hai
Tera Na hona jane
Kyun hona hi hai

Tum se hi din hota hai
Surmaiye shaam aati hai
Tumse hi tumse hi

Har ghari saans aati hai
Zindagi kehlati hai
Tumse hi tumse hi

Na hai yeh pana
Na Khona hi hai
Tera Na hona jane
Kyun hona hi hai

Aankhon mein ankhen teri
Bahoon mein baahein teri
Mera na mujh mein kuch raha hua kya
Baaton mein baatein teri
Raatein saugatein teri
Kyun tera sab yeh ho gaya
hua kya
Mein kahin bhi jata hoon
Tumse hi mil jata hoon
Tumse hi tumse hi

Shor mein khamoshi hai
Thodi se Behoshi hai
Tum se hi tum se hi

Aadha sa wada kabhi
Aadhe se zayada kabhi
Jee chahe karlu is trah wafa ka
Chode na chote kabhi
Tode na tute kabhi
Jo dhaga tumse jud gaya wafa ka

Mein Tera sarmaya hoon
Jo bhi mein ban paya hoon
Tumse hi tumse hi
Raste miljate hai
Manzile miljati hai
Tumse hi tumse hi

Na hai yeh pana
Na Khona hi hai
Tera Na hona jane
Kyun hona hi hai

All applaud for Vasant-Varsha & Rutu comes out of her dream.

All have dinner then. Rutu gifts Mehek & Anamta bracelets. All praise the food. Varsha reveals all ladies together cooked but desert gulab jamun was cooked by Rutu with help of Manav & Sharad at Manav's house.

The girls are impressed. They finally take a leave. Rutu asks Manav & Sharad to drop the girls in the car, to the hotel they are staying. All go back to their home.

End of Chapter 6

Edited by coolhi1988 - 9 years ago

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hiya

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Posted: 9 years ago

#282

Chapter 7

I know this chapter gave u all some answers but created new questions too...
But i wil only say...
To know further stay tuned...

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hiya

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Posted: 9 years ago

#283

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I know i have been very late in updating my story but i was caught up with one or the other task so couldn't. so m making up for it & giving u all 2 updates back to back..

Plus this week was very special to me...
as the start of week was NO's birthday..
then midweek Ku Twins Birthday...
& then week is ending with birthday of my dearest Friend MTA..

the birthday thread of these are put up...
anyone who havent wished them do so without fail...

This Chapter 6 was Birthday gift to MTA & NO From me... I really hope they both like it...

Please dont loose interest in this story..
wil surely update soon...

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hiya

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Posted: 9 years ago

#284

Originally posted by: ..optimist..
Hey Hiya... How are you 🤗
Read the two promos... Very interesting... So this is a story of humans and aliens in human form...
Will read the chapters soon... and comment 😊

PS : I know I am very late... So sorry for that... Please don't mind 😳

Hey Neha 🤗
m f9...
well u r reading my story without even knowing d characters isnt that great..
y wil i mind..
i know u had ur xams & u just got free now...

continue reading...

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hiya

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Posted: 9 years ago

#285

Originally posted by: To-Barobar

please try to give bhairu's dialogues & if not then atleast her background expressions plz...

update soon..

ohh yes dear..
see this time i have tried to give a flashback with dialogues for bhairavi.. now to imagine the expressions is ur work...😉

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hiya

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Posted: 9 years ago

#286

Originally posted by: ..optimist..
Read the first chapter... Seems very interesting... I have no idea about the serial... But i am enjoying your story...
So Manav is hiding something from everyone and everyone is curious to know about it...
Sharad reads his mind and knows that he is waiting for someone...
A lady comes out from the spaceship and meets a guy...

Manav is a human, right? That's what Varsha thought...
Loved the Vasant-Varsha scene... And Hemant ka karnama 😆

Will read the next chapters soon...

PS : So so sorry for the delay...

dont n sorry neha...
ab aur kitna sorry bologi,...😆😆
manav , human,,, ammm.. read further u wil know... 😉
but varsha was also confused as u all r😆😆
m glad all loved vava scene...
😳

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#287

Hiyu hiyu kaha hain tubhaan jhappi deni hain tujeh double update was mast..mmm update tha ..mujeh bahut mazza aaya

Okay first rutu wapas gayi nahi aur manav ke ghar rahi ..anaa jealous as both guys giving attention to rutu..varsha and sharad not talking to vasant..and varsha and sharad accepts rutu but vasant manna kar raha hain..okay yeh story kya hain of rutu,vasant and varsha..rutu scared of Hemant??? Plus yeh log kon hain jo rutu ka picha kar rahe hain...??? Really want to no..

Hemantgiri mmm thi...

Okay rutu ne mehek and anamata ko karib laaya manav and sharad ke pass she knows abhi dono ladke udaas hain..haaye Anna kya jealous thi I like it...bhairavigiri mmm thi ...

Rutu ko kya khatara hain...really want to know

Aage jaldi update dena...hiyu

I really like it..

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