twinj ss :::GREEN: THE COLOR OF JEALOUSY::

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Posted: 9 years ago
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here comes the promised ss or ff on a jealous kunj, its called, GREEN : THE COLOR OF JEALOUSY.
well, not proof read, so ignore and forgive my mistakes

also this is just the background setting of the coming story, as the first chapter, hope you enjoy.
loads of love'
sakshi


GREEN : THE COLOR OF JEALOUSY
a queen imagination


well, turns out kunj wasnt the jealous type, he was the overly jealous type. and before you get him wrong, lemme correct you, he trusted twinkle to love him till the very end, yes her second family seemed nice enough too, but he hated the fact that the boys knew more about twinkle that kunj , they knew when she would say what, and trust me, it wasnt easy to see all of his family members impressed and all, forgetting the guy on the couch, who felt lonely and left out.
he saw twinkel as she giggled, sadwhiched between kushank and aditya, he smiled at the sight of her eyes twinkleing with happiness, but hated the fact that he wasnt the reason behind either of tehm, her giggle or her twinkle. he shifted his gaze to bubbly and chinky, who seemed super absorbed in what kushank was saying, and suddenly the group burst into loud laughter holding their tummies, twinkle fell to the floor laughing as aditya laughed harder, pulling her arm to get her on the couch again.
he shifted his gaze then to ma and ma and bebe. the trio seemed lost and in the eyes of this lady who sat infront of them. twinkel called her BEBO, bebe had seemingly felt jealous at teh cool nickname, that was better than babe, or bebe, but she had soon got the fact that bebo was actually teh coolest person on earth, he saw how bebo reached and hi5-ed twinkle at something she had spoken and the duo held hands and laughed hard. leela shaking her head, and side hugging anant, twinkle's big brotehr, he was a farrr of cousin, and twinkle called him bhai, she loved him to the moon and back, she had said during the introduction of teh fellow, and kunj felt bad at the fact that twinkle's love, which was reserved only for him, was goinging to be shared, not by one or two, but by FOUR new members of her happy family she had just met. he noticed how pinni burst into happy smiles at something anant said and ruffled his hair, as mamu slapped aditya's back and the fellow quite fell down.
he made a face at the fact that he was completely forgotten and decided to move out of teh room, to get some fresh air and grasp the new information that he had just got. he did as he thouhght, and to his dissapointment, nobody noticed. not even twinkel. he consoled his paining heart that everything will be okay, as he climbed the stairs up to his room and plopped down on the balcony swing, with an utterly agonized expression.
the past hour had been adventurous, he had met a family he never knew existed.
he was moving to his car when he saw three tall and well built guys staring at the taneja mansion, their aviators disallowed him to see their expressions clearly but when bubbly came into view and one of them started whisteling, kunj moved to punch them, only to meet the sight of bubbly gasping and then running straight into the arms of teh guy who was whisteling.
"kya ho raha hai yahan? bubbly ?" kunj enquired with full haq, not knowing the consequences.
"arre, you must be kunj na? kunj sarna?" one of the guys inquired, as kunj frowned, how come they knew him and he didnt know them? the trio removed their glasses and kunj noticed they were extremly good looking, well built tall men, who seemingly belonged to the army. kunj nodded.
"hi" the whisteling guy extended his hand, "i am anant, anant singh rathore" kunj hesitated and gave him a cold look, pulling bubbly's arm to pull her aside, hiding her behind him,
"i dont care about who you are, or what do you want." he said with a cold glare"but no one whistels at my saali and goes off free, do teen laate aur mukke toh bante hai na?"
the anant guy smiled lightly as the duo behind him hi fived and laughed,"oh bhai, hogi teri saali, but humari toh pari hai na? kyu?"
bubbly nodded and smiled huge, removing kunj's hand to turn him around,"jeeju, aap aniviye gussa ho rahe hai, apko bharosa nahi hai na inpar?" she motioned towards teh three idiots who stood with smirks on their faces, kunj shook his head,
"toh theek hai, ab aap deed's ke reaction par hi bharosa karna" she took them all inside the taneja mansion and called for twinkle, who was setting the dining table while leela and usha and bebe chatted having breakfast.
twinkle dropped the spoon on the table as tears reached her eyes, she pushed aside the chair in her way and ran to the guys, embracing anant and sobbing into his shoulder, and tehn removign himself from his hold and double hugging the duo behind him, crying harder still
"saale kamino, na khabar na pata, bata toh dete, hum lene aa jate?" twinkle scolded the trio who made faces and kunj gaped,
"arre tara, hum apne hi sheher mein thodi na gum honge, apni jagah hai, apne log hai, anviye thodi hi ghum jayenge?" one of the two unnamed men spoke, his voice husky, as he side hugged her again, while the other spoke "oye tara, tere liye na ek surprise laye hai, dekhe gi ?"
twinkel nodded, as a lady enetered, she looked 60-ish, as twinkel whispered "bebo"and fell to teh ground sobbing.

much later when the family reunion got over, kunj had gathered sufficeidnt information, kushank khurana and aditya singhania, two cousins were the childhood to now, best friends of twinkle and chinky, anant singh rathore, was twinkle's big cousin brother(imagine kunj's reaction on knowing that!!) and bebo was well, kushank's bebe, who was uber cool and hence her name was bebo, instead of bebe. credit to twinkle.
kunj got troubled by the fact that twinkle didnt call these people normally, not with their given names, nor did these poeple call them twinkle or leela, it was utterly different, twinkle was tara, (kunj felt a pang of jealously, he never called her tara, nobody can name his wife)and bubbly was pari, pinni mami was choti ma, and leela ma was just ma(kunj's blood boiled, no he wasnt sharing his mom with anyone,) mamu was alu, (he actually enjoyed being called alu, mamu confessed,) chinky was chicks and bebo was bebo, aditya was adi , kushank was kush and anant was bhai.
he had never imagined such names! he had thought he was a genius at names but who could have thought of tara? well, he was told taht adi did...alu was something he would never dream of calling mamu, perhaps out of respect, but here mamu treated the boys as if they were not his bhanja's but as if they were his brothers.
the mothers were already showering love on them and he could imagine his face when leela called them her bete's. he was hurt. no, more than that, he was JEALOUS.
the three boys, were in army, thus didnt attend teh wedding, bebo was a coma surviver. and that explaiend twinkel's breakdown on seeing her first.
the family extension was here for months and kunj could feel bad already for himself. he seemed like a small star, who used to be the only star, thus was given the most importance, but here came the moon, who stole all his light and took away the attention. he buried his face in his hands as he got up and looked at the mirror.
he was THE kunj sarna, he had been the most eligible bachleors in amritsar, he had a huge crowd of girls gaping at him wherever he went, he was his bebe's ankho ka tara, he was twinkle's love of her life, he was leela ma and usha ma's favourite boy and he was mamu's best buddy, he was bubbly's big brother.
his heart pained as the scenes he had just witnessed, he felt a pang of something he reconized as jealousy. he was new to this, as he had never been ignored before this way.
but what hurt him most was twinkle forgetting him, and the fact that his place in everyone's life seemed like a tenmorary replacement, the true owners being back.

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Posted: 9 years ago
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awesome blossom loved it. . 😳
keep it up.. 👍🏼
and keep writing more! 👏
10000/10000 ⭐️
you are the best 🤗
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Plz continue soon! I love it so far! Can't wait for the next part! Great work!
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awesome start Sakshi. loved it <3
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Hey this is nice, is the story from Kunj's POV, he sounds like such a siyappa King, who wants all his wife's attention.
Do update soon.
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Loved the start 👍🏼
Continue soon
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Army men.☺️ i cn jus imagine hw kickass handsome thy r..
Kunj jealous totally Justified.
Loved it..
Update soonish..
Its interesting...
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Nice OS
Kunj feels neglected so cute
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Wow..awesome..
Jealous kunj was nice..
Poor guy wants his wife attention fully only on him..
Continue soon
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Awesome start 👏👏
pls continue soon😃

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