Twinj OS: The Last Battle

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Hi all
I am back with an OS for all of you. It is based on the precap where Yuvraaj tried to force himself on Twinkle in Twinj's bedroom. I am very sorry for the delay but I had some commitments that didn't give me time to complete the OS! I have written the OS over a period of a few nights where I stayed up till 2 am ti write the OS! The OS is not proofread at all so there may be some grammatic and spelling mistakes so please pardon them. Also the OS is very very long so hope you don't get bored I'll the end! Do leave your feedback I will try to reply back to the soonest!
Hope you like it!

Disclaimer- I DO NOT promote any sort of injustice or violence against women or in fact against any innocent! I criticise such behavior and am highly against it!

Hope you like the OS do leave your feedback good ya bad!



Twinj bedroom
Twinkle is surprised to see rose petals strewn all over the room and the bed.

She is looking around with her back towards the door when suddenly she hears the door click shut and feels someone's hand on her shoulder. She immediately recognized the touch it wasn't the respectful and loving touch of her loving husband Kunj it was HIS touch.

The person she hated the most. The touch that she'll never forget as it was the touch that she disgusted. It was the touch of the person who had tried to take advantage of her numerous times then let it be at the farmhouse where HE tried to frame her husband for his wrongdoing or even the numerous times after her marriage with Kunj when he kidnapped her and tried to force himself.

Twinkle immediately turned around and faced the monster, the villain of her life.

"Yuvraaj tum yaha kya kar rahe ho? Kyu aaye ho tum mere kamre mein? Ab kya chahiye tuzhe?" Twinkle asked agitated!

"Offo baby, ohhh sorry wify! Tum shayad bhool gayi ho ke main tumhara pati hoon to jahan tum wahin main. Aur rahi baat mujhe kya chahiye is sawal ki to mujhe tu chahiye!" Yuvraaj replied with an evil smirk on his face!

Twinkle hearing this got scared but used her brain and started the camera of her mobile that was currently and thankfully in her hand hoping that Yuvraaj won't notice. So that even if nothing is seen she would atleast have his voice recording as proof against him.

"Yuvraaj chahe kuch bhi ho jaye main tumhari kabhi bhi nahi hongi! Main hamesha se Kunj ki thi aur Kunj ki hi rahoongi! Samjhe tum!" She said trying to muster all the strength, courage and confidence in her even though she was clearly scared.

Yuvraaj started walking towards her making her walk backwards, "Yuvraaj paas maat aao dur haato mujhe se! Stop Yuvraaj don't move forward! Kunj! Kunj jaldi aao! Kunj meri madat karo! KUNJ!" Her legs hit the bed and as she fell on the bed she loudly screamed Kunj's name!

Now Twinkle was laying on the bed with Yuvraaj almost on top of her. Yuvraaj harshly removed Twinkle's dupatta which was pinned to her shoulder resulting her sleeve to tear slightly and he threw the dupatta away!

He tore the already torn sleeve even more getting happy hearing her agonizing cries telling him to stop! "Yuvraaj ruk jao! Please aisa maat karo! Yuvraaj stop!" Twinkle kept yelling at the top of her voice! He tore the other sleeve too.

Not able to take any more Twinkle using all of her strength pushed Yuvraaj off her and ran towards the door but didn't reach it!

Yuvraaj had grabbed her hand and twisted it behind her behind her back making her shriek in pain. He kept on twisting it making her shrieks get louder and louder.

"Aaa Yuvraaj chodo mera haath! Aaa chodo please bohot dard ho raha hai! Aaa! Kunj! Help! Yuvraaj aaa chod mujhe! Aaa!" Twinkle was in extreme amount of pain now. Her face had tears streaming down it!

"Dard ho raha hai acha hua! Ab tuzhe pata chalega mujhe kitna dard hota hai jab tu aur tera woh looser pati Kunj paas aate ho naa tab mujhe kitna dard hota hai! Aur chikh! Aur jhor se chikh teri cheekhe sun sun ke mujhe bohot accha lag raha hai! Cheekh aur zor se cheekh!" He said twisting her arm further. Making her yell in pain!

"Tu aur teri family kitni badi bewakoof hai tuzhe pata hai! Ye shadhi jayas(legal or correct) hi nahi hai! Kyun pata hai tuzhe?! Kyunki pehli baat toh meri aur tumhari uss stupid, ugly aur haklati behen ka abhi tak divorce hua hi nahi hai. Aur doosri baath sirf sign karne se divorce hota hi nahi hai uske liye tuzhe aur tere pati ko court proceedings karne padte hai aur court main divorce papers submit karne hote hai par woh toh hamne kiye hi nahi naa! Hahahahaha kitne stupid ho tum log!" Yuvraaj said not knowing that this all was getting recorded.

Twinkle thanked her babaji that she used her brain and started to record all this now this will work against him.

Yuvraaj now released Twinkle from his grip and pushed her! Due to the push her head hit the glass centre table making the glass pierce her head and it started bleeding. Making her shriek out again in pain. She started to feel a bit faint due to the injury and seeing this Yuvraaj threw water on her face.

"Arre arre tu behosh nahi ho sakti mujhe tuzhe aur bohot torture karna hai." Yuvraaj said evily! "Teri wajah se maine aaj tak kitne thapad khaye hai ab teri baari!" He said with an evil smirk.

Twinkle realised what he was about to due and started shouting for help, "Kunj! Bebe! Mummyji! Cherry bhaiya! Aaa!" she couldn't continue as the first slap hit her hard making her yell in pain!
"Maaa! Kunj! Anand bhaiya! Jaldi aoo! Aaa!" she yelled again as the second slap hit her! But thankfully by this time her call for help had been heard.

Kunj, Bebe, Leela, Usha, Anand, and Cherry where sitting in Bebe's room discussing the further plans when they heard Twinkle shouting for help! Kunj heard it first and immediately rushed towards the direction where he heard the calls for help.

Inside the room
Yuvi slapped her a third time making her lip bleed and her cheek swell. She again landed on the centre table but luckily this time she didn't hit her head but she saw the knife kept there to cut the fruits. She grabbed the knife and stood up and faced him.

"Yuvraaj dur haato! Paas maat aao mere varna aacha nahi hoga!" She said threatening him with the knife in her hand!

"Acha kya karegi be tu iss chaku she maaregi mujhe? Maar naa! Iss chaku se mujh par koi pharak nahi padhne wala! Samjhi tum!" He said moving forward towards her!

Twinkle in self defense lunged at him with the knife. The knife hit Yuvraaj's body and made a deep cut on his shoulder making him scream out in pain and anger.

Meanwhile
Outside Twinj room
Everybody could hear what was going on inside the room.

Kunj furiously started banging the door ordering Yuvraaj to open the door. " Yuvraaj darwaja kholo abhi isi waqt! Twinkle don't worry mai aa gaya hu tuzhe aab kuch nahi hoga! Yuvraaj darwaja khol warna mai todh dunga!" Kunj said!

Suddenly they heard Yuvraaj shout out in pain!

Inside twinj room
Yuvraaj hearing Kunj knocking on the door got even more agitated and desperate and he lunged towards Twinkle and grabbed her hand which had the knife in it making her shout! A scuffle started!

Outside Twinj bedroom
Kunj decided that he now had enough and the shout from Twinkle further forced him to now break open the door! So he along with Anand and Cherry decided to break the door!

The door broke open and just as they all entered Yuvraaj got furious and in a fit of rage he stabbed the knife not knowing what he had stabbed!

"Aaa! Kkkuuunnnjjj Bbbaaacchhaaoo!" Twinkle yelled as she placed her hand on lower left side of her abdomen and held it before her eyes only to see it soaked with blood as she slowly felt herself falling towards the ground! She never hit the ground as Kunj rushed towards her and quickly held her in his arms and slowly placed her on the ground with her head on his lap!

"Kkuunnjj camera mai 'breathes deeply' sab record 'again tries to breathe' kiya hai! 'Struggles to breathe' Yuvraaj ke aur Anita Aunty ke khilaf saboot 'breathes' hai... police ko bulake... arrest karwa... lo!"

Anand and Cherry had by now captured Yuvraaj while Bebe took the camera which was on a pillow at such an angle that the whole scuffle that happened at the end had been recorded! Bebe turned the camera off while Leela though distraught called the police while a highly weeping Usha called up an ambulance.

Hospital

The doctor had taken Twinkle inside and they were operating on her for a long time. Twinkle had lost a lot a blood the nurses rushed in and out of the operation theatre but whenever Kunj or somebody asked something they wouldn't reply and go off making kunj and the family members even more tensed.

A nurse came to Kunj and took him aside, "Sir aap patient ke kon lagte hai?" the nurse asked.

" Main patient ka pati hon! Kya hua hai why are you asking?! Twinkle theek to hai naa?!" Kunj asked getting more and more hyper and worried by the second!

"Sir the thing is that we are going to need a lot of blood so please arrange enough blood for the patient! Unka khoon bohot be chooka hai and right now for her to survive she needs blood and lots of it! So I'll suggest that you immediately visit our blood bank and arrange for the blood to be provided!" saying this the nurse left a shocked Kunj!

Kunj was shaken out of his reverie when Cherry shook him and asked what did the nurse say! Kunj who was in tears brokenly told Cherry what the nurse said!

Cherry gave him a tight hug " Kunj mai Twinkle bhabhiji ko kuch nahi home dunga! Mujhe pata hai maine past mai bohot saari galtiya ki hai aur Devar Bhabhi iss rishte ka disrespect kiya hai but ab mai vo purani galtiya kabhi nahi repeat karunga! Tu fikar naa kar kuch nahi hoga bhabhiji ko! Ab tu Leela aunty, Usha chachi aur Bebe ke saath doctor ke aane tak intejar kar mai aur Anand bhaiya blood ki arrangement karke aate hai! Fikar naa kar hum sab iss problem ko ek saath milke saamna karenge aur bhabhiji ko kuch naa hone denge! Thand rakh aur rab pe bharosa rak! Babaji sab thik kar denge!" saying this Cherry broke the hug and patting Kunj's back left with Anand to arrange for the blood!

After a few hours
The red bulb outside the OT turned off and the doctor stepped out!

Kunj rushed towards the Doctor and started enquiring about Twinkle's health!

The doctor placing a hand on Kunj's shoulder, " Mr Sarna we have operated your wife but the wound was very deep and the amount of blood lost was also very high! Right now we can't say anything! Mrs Sarna must gain conciousness within the next 24 hours or else the chances of her surviving will be very less and I'm sorry to say but we might even loose her!"

Kunj was highly shocked! " Kunj can I stay near her please?" He asked with his voice trembling with fear of loosing his lovely wife! The doctor nodded saying that only he can stay by her bedside and nobody else!

Kunj sat next to her bed tears continuously flowing from his eyes! The images of their moments together sped before his eyes! Their first meeting, their tashan e shadi, Twinkle's first karwa chaut where she was laying on the bed he had prepared the seive for her, Twinkle scolding kunj for coming late for lodhi celebration, the scene where he saved her from falling off the cliff in Goa, during Mrs.Amritsar contest where she went to the cheap lodge just to save his father's image not caring about herself, saving her from drowning in the pool in the last task, their almost confession, their fight after his father was admitted in the hospital after his heartattack, their confession after Rajjo's wedding. all the moments kept coming before his eyes, "Twinkle mujhe chod ke maat jao mai nahi reh paonga tere bina! Hame aur kitne saare yaadein banne hai ek saath! Uth jaa na Twinkle, tu lad mujhe se, khub saare siyyape kar, kuch bhi kar mai tujhe kuch naa kahoonga bas tu aisi leti maat reh aisi achi nahi lagti tu please Twinkle!"

Suddenly Twinkle started breathing heavily kunj immediately shouted for the doctor! The doctor came rushing in and gave her an injection stabilising her condition!

Once her breath stabilised the doctor smiled at kunj and said "Mr.Sarna your wife is now completely fine and she will now gain conciousness! It seems that your love has saved her life!"

After a few hours
Twinkle slowly opened her eyes at first the bright light that fell on her eyes bothered her making her immediately close them. She slowly opened them again and she saw Usha and Leela sitting by her bedside on both sides while Bebe was near her feet!

"Kunj!" Twinkle said in her feeble voice trying to get up only to be restrained by Usha's motherly touch!

"Naa Puttar tujhe uthne se kuch dino ke liye sakt manayi hai atleast till the doctor comes and checks you, you have to keep lying down! Aur Puttar Kunj police station gaya hai aata hi hoga!" Usha said stroking Twinkle's hair with love happy that her bahu kum beti had finally gained consciousness.

"Puttar woh Yuvi aur Anita ke khilaf complaint darj karne gaya hai! Ab woh dono nalyak Maa Bete ki jodi hume kabhi bhi naa satayegi!" Bebe said with smile!

"Puttar tenu patta hai kunj ne uss Yuvraaj ki khub pitayi ki hai!" Leela said with pride!

Flashback
After calling the ambulance and leaving Twinkle in Bebe, Leela and Usha's care placing her almost lifeless body on their bed Kunj reached Yuvraaj taking two long strides!

"Nalayak, besharam tumne meri biwi ko haath bhi kaise laga!" Kunj said as he placed a punch on Yuvraaj's cheek making him fall down!

"Hame pata tha ki woh divorce legal nahi tha aur ab toh tune khood accept kiya hai ab tujhe koi na bacha sakta hai!" Kunj said kicking Yuvraaj hard!

"Aaj tumhari wajah se meri Twinkle ki itni buri halat ho gayi hai aur tujhe pata hai yeh jo tune isko pita hai aur uss pe aatyachar kiye hai naa aur jo tune iske peth mai chura maara hai naa yeh sab record ho gaya hai! Ab toh tu aur teri woh besharam Maa jail mai umra bhar sado ge!" Kunj said kicking him again!

"Agar meri biwi ko aaj kuch bhi hua naa toh tujhe teri maut se koi nahi bacha payega! Aur tu woh maut mere inhi haato se marega chahe mujhe uske liye jail bhi naa jana pade par tu zinda nahi bache ga!!" Kunj said shouting and kicking Yuvraaj!

Kunj had now gone wild! The only image that kept coming infront of his eyes was Twinkle almost lifeless body with blood flowing from her lower left abdomen area, blood coming from her forehead and lips, and her cheek swollen and her hands having marks of Yuvraaj's finger! These images made his blood boil and he started kicking and punching Yuvraaj even more and only after the police came and took Yuvraaj away did he stop!

Flashback ends!

Hearing this Twinkle had a small smile on her face but before any of the three mother's could ask the reason behind the smile Kunj burst into the room and exclaimed Twinkle's name and rushed towards her bedside which Usha and Leela had left seeing that Kunj had arrived!

Kunj sat by her bedside and took her hand in his, "Twinkle, Maa, Leela Maa, Bebe aaj ke baad woh dono Maa Bete hame kabhi bhi nahi takleef denge! Vakil sahab ne kaha hai that according to the proofs presented and everything those two would either rot in jail till death or they might even be hanged and they have attempted murder many times! Ab woh hamari life mai kabhi bhi jeher gholne nahi ayenge!" Kunj said happily while stroking Twinkle's hand with affection.

"Kunj ye toh bohot vadiya gaal ki hai tumne puttar! Ab hame kabhi bhi koi fikar naa hai! Ab tum dono hamesha kush reh payenge! Aur haan Twinkle puttar jaldi se acchi ho jaa kyunki jab tum ghar aogi hum tum dono ki phir se shadi karwane wale hai samjhi!" Bebe said placing her hands on Kunj and Twinkle head blessing them with 440 volt smile on her face while Leela and Usha nodded their head in agreement!

The mothers left the two alone. Kunj placed a tender and loving kiss on Twinkle's forhead and their entwined hands! "Toh Mrs.Sarna ready to again become Mrs.Sarna?" Kunj asked in a teasing tone only to be hit by Twinkle and making her hold her hand and wince in pain seeing which Kunj immediately rubbed her hand trying to soothe the pain while glaring at Twinkle!

"Twinkle ab woh hame kabhi bhi nahi satayega! Ab hamare life mein sab theek ho gaya hai aur iss shadi ke baad hum hamari shadi ki ek nayi shurvat karenge jiss mein sirf aur sirf khushiyan hi hongi! Ab main teri life mein itni khushiyan dalonga ke tu dukh aur dard kya hai yehi bhool jayegi! I love you Twinkle a lot!" Kunj said kissing her on her lips!

The kiss was slow, but passionate that conveyed their immense love, respect and trust on each other!

After breaking the kiss, "Mujhe tum par pura bharosa hai! I love you too!" Twinkle said in her feeble voice but a voice that contained sincerity, trust and lots of love!

After a few days
Twinkle was finally released from the hospital and brought home! She still couldn't walk properly due to the wound so after reaching Kunj picked Twinkle up from the car itself and carried her to the door of Sarna Mansion where upon her telling him to keep her down for the aarti did he only keep her down and again after the aarti Kunj picked her up and placed her on the sofa!

Just as he placed her on the sofa his phone rang after talking and then hanging up he had a full blown smile on his face showing how happy he was!

"Arre Kunj kiska phone tha jiski wajah se tum itne khush ho?" Anand finally asked not able to bare the suspense any longer!

"Arre Anand bhaiya vakil sahab ka phone tha Yuvraaj aur Anita ko life long imprisonment mili hai where Yuvraaj will be living in the mental asylum till his mental state is recovered!" Kunj said very happily.

"Arre ye toh bohot hi vadiya gaal hai accha hua unke saath. Woh Yuvraaj ab uss mental hospital mai sadega!" Bebe said with happiness! "Accha Kunj aur Twinkle puttar aaj se do dino mai tum dono ki dobara
shaddi hai iss liye ab Twinkle kuch dino apne maiyke rahegi aur phir hamare ghar vapas aayegi! Samjhe?" Bebe asked.

Kunj on hearing that Twinkle will be staying at Taneja house for two whole days exclaimed, "Maa Twinkle do dino keliye Taneja house kyu rehne wali hai?!" before he even understood what he had said everybody was in fits of laughter.

Usha came and caught her son's ear,"Offo Puttar sirf do dino ki toh baath hai uske baad Twinkle vapas din raat tumhari hi najnoro ke samne hogi samjhe iss liye fikar naa karo. Aur waha to Leela ji, RT ji, Raman ji, aur Pinni ji bhi hai naa tumhari biwi ki dekhbal karne samjhe." Usha said teasing him making him go red with embracement while everybody laughed their hearts out and Twinkle turned the darkest shared of red blushing.

Kunj just nodded his head in response. "Maa but mai kamse kam usse Taneja house tak chod ke atta hu because she isn't allowed to walk or climb stairs naa." saying this without waiting for anybody's response he picked Twinkle up making her gasp and rushed towards Taneja house making all the elders shake their heads!

On reaching Taneja and placing her on the bed he placed a peck on her lips and left saying fmeaat ko window khol ke sona mai milne aunga.

The two met at night and spent the night talking about their bright future ahead and planning out their life.

The two days passed away in a breeze and the day of the wedding arrived the Taneja and Sarna Mansion both were decorated beautifully with lights and flowers. Mahi had flown in from London for her Di's wedding she had now filed for a divorce with Kunj's help. She had missed her Di's first wedding but now she was there with her Di who was waiting eagerly for the new start in her life. A life whoch would only hold happiness now.

Twinkle was brought to the mandap which was at Taneja house. In the mandap sat the love of her life. While walking down the stairs Twinkle was experiencing heavy pain. Kunj saw this but couldn't move from the mandap now that he was seated so he signed Cherry and Anand who understood what Kunj wanted to say and rushed towards Twinkle.

Cherry on reaching her said, "Twinkle bhabhiji mujhe pata hai jo kuch bhi maine past mai kiya hai uske liye mujhe bohot afsos hai. I hope that you will forgive me. Aaj ke baad mai pehele tumhara bada bhai hoon aur uske baad saare naate rishte aate hai!"

"Cherry bhaiya jo kuch bhi past mai hua woh hua lekin aaj ke baad hum sab past ko bhul kar sirf aur sirf hamare present aur future ki hi sochenge. Aur rahi baat maaf karne ki toh jab apne Anita Aunty aur Yuvraaj ki side chod kar hamari side join kardi tabhi maine aapko maaf kar diya tha. Aur mujhe agar aap jaisa bhai mile to mai khud ko bohot naseeb wali samjhongi ki mujhe aap jaisa bhai jo apni behen se itna pyaar karta hai mil gaya hai." Twinkle said as tears glistened in both her and Cherry's eyes!

Cherry and Anand picked up Twinkle and placed her between them and carried her down.

When Twinkle had to get up Kunj immediately helped her up without even her telling him. The phera's were completed with Kunj holding Twinkle's hand firmly not letting her trip.

A teary bidai and a joyous grahpravesh took, and then the remaining rituals passed with losts of teasing as finally Surjeet and Manohar had buried their dispute and Nikki returning with Ishan the family was finally complete. Kunj and Twinkle headed towards their bedroom and fell asleep in each other's arms seeing beautiful dreams of a bright and beautiful future. Kunj had told Twinkle that he would wait till her wound completely heals as he would always put her comfort and safety before his pleasure as he loves her far more! Their life finally was on the right track and all they could see now was the beautiful moments they would spend together!

The End
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wow dear such a amazing and lovely os
loved it
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Omg I love long one shots! This was so gripping and exciting omg dude! Literally my blood boiled when Twinkle was being abused but then seeing her fend for herself and Kunj beat him up later gave me a lot of happiness. Cherry being there for them was amazing! I loved how all the characters played such an important role. Well written and it gave me so many fees haha awesome piece!
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Loved the OS 😳
Brilliantly written
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Mindblowing OS Sayli. loved it <3
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wow awesome mindblowing os dear
i just loved it to the core of my heart

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I'm glad you finally posted this! Your ending was much more intense than I imagined in my head so great going Sayli! This was awesome 😎
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Originally posted by: priyanvs

wow dear such a amazing and lovely os

loved it


Thank you!
Glad you liked it!
It was a very difficult peice to write!
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Sayli love u for this long os😊. It was intense, dramatic and emotional.
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Originally posted by: teddyyy


Omg I love long one shots! This was so gripping and exciting omg dude! Literally my blood boiled when Twinkle was being abused but then seeing her fend for herself and Kunj beat him up later gave me a lot of happiness. Cherry being there for them was amazing! I loved how all the characters played such an important role. Well written and it gave me so many fees haha awesome piece!


Thank you soo much!
I wanted some nice scenes between cherry and kunj. And I also wanted cherry to ask for maafi from Twinkle so.
Thanks again!
I'm very happy I could make you experience so many feels!
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