New Asya FS ~ Sab Teraa ~ posted part 4 (15/7/2016) - Page 9

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Asia kya tha gif mein

U wanna res na

15 pe??? How many spots
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Asia kya tha gif mein

U wanna res na

15 pe??? How many spots



rehne de kyun time wasting mujhpe

main kar lungi manage slow & steady wins d race

Kuch logon ki kismat main tanhayian hi hoti hain Mr Khan
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Thoda or taunt kr ly



I m rresing on nxt pg 😳

& shuru kisne kiya tha
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Hello Readers🤗

Thank u so much 4 d heart warming response u gave to this FS🤗... I m really humbled & delighted 2 see ur support 4 this 1 so thanks a tonn 4 all ur awesome support😃

I know i said nxt part was ready😆 but i had 2 make many alterations by adding Zara's scene's cuz u all really adored her in chapter 1😳... but along wid that i wanna say that this FS is basically Asya centric so u might not get much of Zara's scene's due 2 that & also keeping in mind its just an FS so i don't want 2 stretch it much cuz than it will b really draggy so plz forgive me if u had any hopes 4 that😳


Also this story is just about Asad Zoya basically only Khan villa related & there will be no story of Rashid & second family only bcuz they r not needed here & i didn't liked them much 😆😆

So after the thanks & clearing this thing u may now scroll down 4 d updt😛


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~*~ Sab Teraa ~*~


Chapter- 2 (A)


Days kept passing while the atmosphere in Khan Villa changed a lot after Zoya's arrival. Zoya's entry in Khan Villa at first was very smooth & everyone including Asad was glad to meet her after years but only on the second day all his impression about Zoya changed when he met the real Zoya.

She was a very bubbly girl who was full of life just like what her name means. She was very enthusiastic & loved to spread happiness in everyone's life. She was chirpy, naughty, messy, stubborn, loved to recite her infamous couplets which often doesn't makes sense. But this was just the outer layer from inside she was very innocent, brave & courageous girl who stood her ground. She was totally exuberant & didn't fear to express her feelings.
But Asad has become totally opposite of her while growing up. He didn't like her these qualities as he was very reserved & disciplined man. He was a simple man who loves silence, Discipline & Cleanliness like a freak.
Thus their contrasting natures lead to many fights between the two of them from the second day itself. Initially Dilshaad & Najma tried to stop & resolve their fights but later they too stopped & both Mother daughter Duo started enjoying this free ka show.
Another person who loved Asad & Zoya's Tom & Terry fights was the little Miss Zara Khan who was a regular spectator. She used to sway her head from one side to another innocently when Asad & Zoya used to pass remarks to each other. Sometimes her giggles, claps or cries on being ignored only stopped their silly banters.
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It had been a week since Zoya's arrival. It was late noon & the ladies of house were having routine chit chat over the cup of coffee after lunch sitting over the rug in living room. Dilshaad was feeding biscuits to Zara after dipping them in coffee so that they are soft for her to chew. Najma was surfing over net while Zoya was busy in her thoughts.
-ynmm unmmh aaa... She was making merry sounds as Dilshaad fed her another tiny piece.
-Ammi she totally loves it nahi?... Haina Zaru baby you love that right? Don't worry aap jaldi se bade ho jao than Phuphi will get so many yummy yummy things for you ok? Najma said putting her Ipad down & teasing Zara's lower lip with her index finger making the baby erupt in giggles.
-haha.. Yeah right! jaise Mr Khan tumhe khilane denge? I m sure he'll make a strict diet chart for Zara.. no junk food.. no cold drinks.. no ice cream.. only healthy fruits & salad's for Abbu ki shehzaadi right Zaru... Zoya complained animatedly & looked at Zara who was hearing her words interestingly.
-eehaaak..eddeesh...aohhh Zara shrieked loudly as if already announcing her Bhookh Hadtaal against her Abbu jaani's military list of rules.
-awe poor baby... dekha phuphi even our little munchkin doesn't want to be grounded.
Dilshaad smiled at her remark shaking her head. This was a routine thing whenever Asad was out in office Zoya would often complaint of his strict rules. She forwarded another piece towards Zara who took it as last bite & started crawling towards her fvrt play cum crime partner Zoya.
-come come come my munchkin yeah yesh... Zoya motivated Zara & as she finally reached her, she threw her in the air making her shriek in elation.
Placing Zara in her lap she brushed their noses & than tickled her making Zara laugh hysterically in helplessness. Dilshaad & Najma smiled brightly hearing the little bundle of joy having a hearty laugh which was so infectious that it brightened her Home like the rays of Sunlight.
-No really Najma ! I don't get it what's wrong with Mr six packs. Jab dekho angry young man wale looks dete rehte hain. I can't believe he's the same man I met on the first day. He is so different with all of us & when it comes to his Shehzaadi it seems like he is her gulaam... Meri toh har cheez main unhe kami lagti hai. hmp. Zoya huffed annoyingly.
-Come on Zoya Asad itna bhi bura nahi hai... Aur tum mere hi bete ki burayi mere hi saamne kar rahi ho. She fake scolded.
-aaaeeekkk Zara too shrieked loudly agreeing with Dilshaad.
-hehe...Sorry Phuphi ! Zoya said holding her ear with free hand. & you too Abbu ki chamchi... I m sure Mr Khan takes daily updates from you like a general of cell... Aah sorry sorry Phuphi.. she quickly said when Dilshaad raised her brow.
-I know Asad is serious Zoya... but he was not always like that, he too used to be happy & playful like children of his age... He was quite obedient & intelligent since childhood... Par han being our eldest son he was quite sensible instead of mischievous... Dilshaad chuckled... But when Rashid broke my trust & betrayed me... her sound held pain.. he started hating him... He grew up sooner than his age mentally & became man of the house because he couldn't see me struggling for our basic expenses... That rough patch taught him a lot & turned him into a serious, reserved & no nonsense kind of person.
But trust me, I m not rueful about it... Infact i m proud of my son for how he turned out to be... Just imagine many people bend down when difficult situations arises in life, But my Asad stayed strong,.. he faced them all & turned his odds in his favour.
He might not be the most likable or friendly person but he is good at heart... He loves his family immensely and his world revolves around us all... With his sheer hard work he succeeded in achieving a respectable place in the construction industry.. making Dilshaad Constructions the top firms of India.
While His father stays away with his other family... Asad made a Home for US, A Home we can call our own, where we live together more than happily, content with whatever God has blessed us with. She ended with a faraway look her eyes shining with proud for everything her Son achieved.
Zoya heard Dilshaad's every word keenly, her each word showed the pride she has on her only Son's achievement & Zoya's heart warmed too. It wasn't like she didn't knew the struggle this family had to go through but hearing it from Dilshaad made her heart swell with pride too.
The cute little Zara was intently looking at Dilshaad all the time when she was speaking about Asad as if she was narrating an interesting story of a Superman & true that her father was nothing less than a Superhero for her.
When she stopped Zara blinked her eyes thinking she'll tell more but when she didn't she turned her face towards her Phuphi who was also smiling fondly. Then she looked up at Zoya who was also having this soft smile & so she turned her face again towards her Dadi.
Thinking that it was end of the story & all were supposed to smile she too gave a big radiant smile & started clapping making them all look at her.
-Hehe.. abb.. abb.. abb.. she cooed
-aah.. Meri bachi come... Dilshaad smiled teary eyed & raised her hands calling Zara to come to her.
Zara jumped out of Zoya's lap & excitedly started crawling towards her wobblingly. As she reached, Dilshaad picked her & hugged tightly kissing her chubby cheeks.
-eehhh... Zara sang happy on receiving all the love from her dearest Dadi.
Najma ruffled her soft hair while Zoya threw a flying kiss her way.
-Sahi main Phuphi Zaru is the cutest kid in the world.
-Woh toh hai Zoya afterall she's my niece. Najma said pulling her imaginary collar up.
-Acha jee.. Zoya laughed.
-Bas karo tum dono meri Poti ko nazar mat lga dena. Dilshaad scolded them & put a little kajal behind Zara's ear after dabbing her finger with it from her eye. Meri jaan ko kisi ki nazar na lage. She sweetly said kissing Zara again.

-Par jo bhi ho Phuphi, ek baat toh sach hai ki aapke bete ko mujhse koi problem toh zaroor hai... Jab dekho mujhse ladne ko amada rehte hain... I m sure he hates me...Zoya lamented... Tabhi toh he always behave so uptight & rudely... You know what Najma ! sometimes i feel like how can we were friends in childhood..She shrugged... He's so Akdu & Khadus and I m so sweet & joyful... We r class apart like he's south pole & I m north pole... It's so unbelievable. She wondered in bewilderment.
-Nahi Nahi Zoya don't think like that.. I know believe karna mushkil lagta hai... Jab Ammi ne mujhe bhi btaya tha,.. mujhe bhi yakeen nahi hua tha ki Bhaijaan can be like that in Childhood... But then she showed me your Childhood pics...Najma revealed her brow dancing naughtily... Actually aapke aane se pehle i wanted to know about you,.. so i asked Ammi to tell me & than she told me about your strong friendship... And trust me even I was shocked ki Bhajaan aur aap itna close the bachpan main... I mean Bahijaan ki toh collage main bhi kisi ladki se friendship nahi thi... so you know how difficult it must be to believe... She laughed while informing Zoya.
-Really phir mujhe bhi btao... & Phuphi i want to see that album too. Zoya got excited.
-Aree..
-Please Phuphi pretty please.. She made the perfect puppy face.
-Acha theek hai... You just look at Zara I'll bring it... It's in my room. Saying so Dilshaad got up placing Zara near them who left her toothing keys aside & grabbed a piece of carrot to nib on.
-Ok Najma start... Zoya said after turning towards Najma.
-hehe... ok so aapke bachpan ki story kuch aisi hai that Your family was our neighbour & I mean You must know that much that after your Abbu expired you guys shifted there... That time we didn't had this house we used to live in a rented apartment & Your Ammi Zainub Khala... she used to visit us very often.
And during those days you & Bhaijaan met..Najma said with a nod of her head.. Bhaijaan as you know, became quite serious after abbu left us... but still being mature he handled himself very well even in such young age... He used to be with you because you too became very quite after losing your father, you were very close to your abbu & his absence from your life affected you a lot... But Bhaijaan, He used to always stay around you trying to cheer you... He used to involve you in his talks or games and was quite caring & protective about you...She smiled.
As time passed you started coming out of your sadness & soon both of you became the best of friends...Najma told with a beaming smile on her face.. Ammi says you became each other's shadows... Jahan jaate the saath rehte the... Bhaijaan used to help you in studies & even have to play girly games with you, me & Zeenat aapi just imagine. She laughed & Zoya to joined her.
-Here.. Dilshaad returned & gave the album in Zoya's hands.
Feeling curious Zoya quickly opened it & started going through the pictures.
-And Being protective towards you came naturally from him when you joined school too... Sach jab bhi main aur Zianub PTM meeting main jaate the hamesha tumhari class teacher se sun ne milta tha that he always takes care of you... He used to spend time with all three of you during lunch time but even during class periods he used to come to check on you that you don't have any problem or no one tries to bully you...Dilshaad chuckled informing her remembering those days.
And Miss Zoya even you were very fond & dependent on Asad. Even the smallest of things you loved to share with him not with Zainub or me... She supplied with a smirk... You always seek his advice for everything... as if his opinion & approval was needed for you & whenever you needed any help Asad was the one you would look upto.
-Really Phuphi hum itne ache Best friends the? Zoya asked in wonder.
-Bilkul just like two pieces of magnets whom doesn't matter how far you put/pull will come back together in the end. Najma woh abhi kuch der pehle kya keh rahi thi Zoya? Dilshaad mocked teasingly.
-Aah... Like North pole & South pole Ammi.. Najma reminded as both mother daughter teased Zoya who stated blushing seeing them make fun of her.
-But Phuphi than why he always fights with me now? Zoya whined.
-hmm... woh isliye Zoe because the Zoya in present is very different from the little Zoya he met years before. Najma quipped this time raising her brows.
Zoya became silent for a second & than looked down in the album at their picture. She was laughing sitting on a swing while Asad was pushing her from behind. His face too had a rarest of smile that she never saw before, as if he was enjoying his childhood with Zoya. Her hand softly caressed his face in the picture.



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~*~ Sab Teraa ~*~


Chapter- 2 (B)


A whole month has been passed with Zoya's stay in Khan Villa. It was Zara's first Birthday & Zoya along with Khan ladies throw a small kids party inviting the neighbour's kids. It was Zoya's idea who arranged it even after Asad refusal thus leading to another spat between the two.

She was in the Kitchen when taking her elbow Asad swiftly turned her face towards himself.

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-How dare you Zoya Farooqui. Mere mana karne pe bhi how could you do this. Asad questioned gruffly.
-Asad leave my hand, You are hurting me. Zoya hissed.
-Hurting you. How can anyone hurt you Zoya. Hurt toh tum karti ho sabko. Aaj hi ke din Ayesha ka intkaal hua tha. She couldn't survive in the delivery. Aaj ek saal ho gya hai usse gaye hue aur tum iss ghar main party kar rahi ho. Asad hissed in taut voice.

-Asad main sirf Zara...Zoya tried to reason but Asad cut her in the middle.
-Zara meri beti hai. Aur apni beti ka khyaal main ache se rakh sakta hun. Tum door raho uss se. Saying so with anger filled eyes Asad left Zoya's hand & went in his room leaving Zoya in tears.
She rubbed her hand where he was tightly holding few seconds ago & knew it would have left bruises. She wiped her tears away & as she turned her eyes caught Dilshaad's sight who was worried & painfully looking her way. Zoya tried faking a smile but she knew Dilshaad has probably saw all the incident. Ignoring her pain Zoya picked the tray filled of refreshments & cake and brought that out in the living hall where all kids were waiting.


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The party was over & Dilshaad & Najma along with a maid were cleaning the living room while Zara was still playing not in the mood to sleep.
Zoya smiled seeing her enjoy & made her way towards the back garden where she knew the angry lion must be. Just like she thought he was sitting on the bench staring at the blank sky.
-Asad itne gusse se asmaan ko ghoor rahe ho ki taare toh kya aaj toh Channd bhi darr ke maare bahar nahi nikla. Zoya entered giggling on cracking her silly joke.
Placing the tray containing his coffee & a piece of cake on the bench she sat on one side. While Asad was still sitting ignoring her presence.
-Kya Asad yun bachon ki tarah mooh phulake bethe ho. Tum toh Zara ke bhi baa.. I mean woh toh Tum ho hi Zara ke Abbu. Biting her tongue on her foul language Zoya managed to say.
Still Asad was mum.
-Dekho na Zara ka Birthday cake I saved a piece for you too. Have Some? Zoya said forwarding him the plate.

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-Nahi Chahiye. Asad got up saying so.
-Asad...Zoya stopped him holding his hand & got up too.
-I know it Asad. Main ache se janti hun aaj ka din tumhare liye kitna dard bhra hai. You lost your life partner this day & I do feel for you...Zoya said taking his hand between her both hands... Main janti hun yeh dard koi baant nahi sakta, par jaane wale ke baad hum jina toh nahi chod sakte. Humein jina padta hai apne liye aur apno ke liye... She said in a small voice.
I m not asking you to forget Ayesha. Main janti hun woh hamesha tumhari yaadon main rahegi. Par ek baar mod ke Zara ki taraf dekho Asad kitni Khush hai woh aaj.
Asad looked at her way & with her encouraging nod looked inside the living room where Zara was merrily giggling playing with gifts she received out of which she opened some & some were still packed. She was making a mess & Najma was her playmate.
-kisi apne ko khone ka gum main ache se samjhti hun. Zoya emotionally said & Asad looked back at her knowing where was she coming from.
You lost Ayesha this day Asad but Allah blessed you with Zara too...Zoya said smiling a little..Allah knows everything Asad.. if he take something away he gives us twice in return... Usne Ayehsa ka chahe wapis bola liya ho Asad but Zara ko tume dekar tumeh jine ka ek Maksad de diya hai. You have to live for Zara Asad. Uss nanhi si jaan ka tumhe ab har Khushi deni hai..She pressed articulately... And we should look at the brighter side...the happiness we got on this day with Zara's arrival in our lives...so that when she grow up she doesn't feel depress on this day... She should feel happy on her Birthday just like any other person...it's her right & moreover It wasn't her fault na that Ayesha couldn't make it... we have to ensure this so that she doesn't feel guilty over it in future... Agar aaj Ayesha Zinda hoti toh woh bhi yehi chahti Asad. Nahi?
Zoya shook her head asking Asad who also had tears in his eyes just like her. He nodded his head in a yes not being able to say anything & being emotional he pulled her in for a hug.


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It was like damn of sorrows broke down. He let his guard down & all the built in pain of a whole year came out in the form of tears. Hugging Zoya close he cried his heart out while she too shed tears for her best friend who in order to protect & provide everything to his family caged all his feelings & sorrows in the depth of his heart not letting anyone see it.
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Ayesha was a very understanding companion for him. When Asad settled in his professional life Dilshaad asked him to fulfil her desire of seeing her Son getting married and Asad being a obedient Son agreed for it. So it was Dilshaad who selected Ayesha a simple, homely girl the way Asad wanted. She was very similar to Asad in many ways both were calm, polite, reserved, Loved & respected their families and have lots of understanding between themselves. These qualities helped them a lot after marriage as they developed mutual admiration for each other.
They didn't fell in Love but learned to Love like most of arrange marriages. Asad was happy because she accepted his family as her own which he always wanted & Ayesha was happy to get a family who embraced her whole heartedly. When the news of Zara's birth came the whole family overjoyed with happiness. But they weren't aware that their happiness was short lived & soon everything will crumble down in pieces. Ayesha was having some complications in pregnancy which she didn't shared with anyone which worsened at the time of deliver.
When Asad lost Ayesha he felt like his life fell apart. He lost his wife, companion, a supporting friend with her. He didn't knew how to bear the lose & specially with a daughter who lost her mother when she needed her. He was scared, lost but Dilshaad gave him strength to bear the lose for Zara's sake who needed him the most now. And after that day it was just Zara who kept him going. He forgot to live for himself only Zara & her happiness was his priorities.

But In order to stay strong for his family he was neglecting himself. Although his mother could see her Son being caged behind the walls of pain but she couldn't do anything because he didn't liked showing his pain. She knew he always become strong for his family ignoring that he is also a human & needs someone to share his problems.
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Dilshaad who was seeing all this from Asad's bedroom window wiped her own tears seeing her only son cry openly in Zoya's arms. She came to check on him & scold for his behaviour with Zoya but he wasn't there. When she was about to go out she accidently caught sight of Zoya holding his hand & witnessed the scene.
She was happy to have Zoya in their Home, from the time she came she spread happiness in their gloomy life specially Asad's. Before her arrival her family was living a dull life but she brought the colours of love which were missing in her family. Seeing Asad cry in her arms she was strangely content as if she will now get her Son back who lost himself in pain & responsibilities. She was glad that now he has a great friend in Zoya to relay on to share his pain & feelings. Looking above she thanked the creator for bringing Zoya in their lives.




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Ok it's enough 4 now.., how u like it 😛 Well i m happy wid my chapter, let's see what u guys say 😳

I know i m late but no1 asks 4 updt pouts than how will i updt 😆 so isliye main apni manmaani karti hun😆

but 2 make up 4 d wait i gave a long updt this time so be happy & show me some love too ☺️ will wait 4 ur response😃

Sorry Anopama no subtitles this time...I was super lazy😳 but d updt is mostly in English, don't feel there will b problem in understanding 😳

Ignore errors if any...suggestions & positive criticism always welcomed...

Every1 plz make ur presence in d comnts...Silent readers don't forget 2 leave me likes😳


Chalo than see u wid nxt updt after 40 likes this time😉 lets raise d bar 😆😆
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