Twinj ss: Neki ki raah par. Pt 1 up pg2

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Guys its slightly sad story.
Character sketch.
Twinkle taneja- A bubbly, chirpy, modern yet traditional good looking girl whose passion is teaching. Bff of kunj and uv. The only daughter of leela taneja.

Kunj sarna- a slighly lazy yet handsome byronic guy who never smiles except in company of uv and twinkle. He is a businessman. He lost his gf in car crash.

Yuvraj luthra- devilishly handsome son of a dreaded drug dealer who no one knows of. Undercover gangster who no one knows of not even twinj.

Leela taneja- a single mother of twinkle whose wish is to see her daughter married off to kunj sarna.

Usha sarna- mother of kunj whose only desrire is to see her son happy by no means.

Anita luthra- the dreaded, ruthless lady drug dealer whose mission is to see herself happy by no means.

Bebe- aunt of kunj who wants twinkle kunj married. Doesn't like yuvraj at all.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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cant waittt
please updateee
okay that rhymed
but please jaldi se update na
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Posted: 9 years ago
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plzzz update fast
can't wait after these amazing character sketeches
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow...amazing intro..plz update soon...TWINJ and UV bffs omg...tat was awesome...so kunj had a gf...thk god she is dead..
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Teaser.
Two goons were following twinkle. Twinkle was caught within some time. Yuvraj came there and took twinkle by hair. Yuvraj: tu meri baat aise nahin maanegi tu chhod kyun nahin deti uss kunj sarna ko woh tera lagta kya hai. Twinkle woh mera sabse achcha dost hai aur main usse pyaar karti hoon. Yuvraj: arre dost to main bhi tha tera tune kabhi mujhse pyaar kyun nahin kiya. Tum dono ko mere kaam ke baare mein pata chal to gaya hai lekin ab tum dono zinda nahin bachoge. Twinkle: tum to hamare dost the na woh bff to phir ye sab. Yuvraj: dosti jo maine ki us bewakoof kunj se woh shuru se tere liye hi ki thi. Rehti tu mere saath thi lekin hamesha baatein us bewakoof ki karti thi. Twinkle somehow got out of his grasp and again ran away.

10 minutes later.

Yuvraj: Twinkle main tujhe to jaane doonga aakhir main tujhse pyaar karta hoon lekin us kunj to maar doonga. Tu agar uski jaan bachana chahti hai to mere saath chal use chhod de. Twinkle jaise dost par laanat hai aaj ke baad apni shakal nahin dikhana. Uv: baby sun tera kunj is waqt mere paas hai. Tum dono ne neki ki raah par jaakar bahut galat kaam kiya hai mera business babd karvana chahte ho yeh kabhi hoga. Ab tu baby marne ke liye taiyaar ho ja. Uv points a gun at twinkle and presses the trigger...


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Posted: 9 years ago
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omg omg its really interesting
teaser is just awesome
plzzz do continue soon
and do pm me 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
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superb update tikit. absolutely lived it. pls continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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This is awesome Eshu,
Loved d new concept
Yuvi, Kunj and Twinkle are BFF's nice
I can't wait for d next part
Very well written
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Omg...its sooo interesting... So twinkle loves kunj and UV loves twinkle...nice...
Plz update soon...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Three families and best friends. Rajat luthra anitas husband, manohar sarna and raminder taneja are best of friends. There children uv, kunj and twinkle are bffs. One day changed there life forever. The age difference of kunj, twinkle, uv is not much.

Part 1

7 years back.

Usha calls kunj and kunj is nowhere to be seen. Usha: kunj beta kahaan ho tum. Bebe: oho usha rani kyun cilla rahi ho. Usha: dekhiye na bebe kunj kahin dikh nahin raha hai. Bebe: offo usha tu bhi na kunj twinkle ya us bevakoof uv ke saath khel raha hoga. Twinkle comes there wearing a pretty frock. Twinkle: aunty aapne kunj ko kahin dekha hai. Bebe, usha are surprised to know kunj is not there with her. Bebe: ho sakta hai twinkle ki kunj us uv ke saath ho.

Twinkle goes to garden and finds kunj cutely counting roses. Kunj is looking handsome in jeans and t-shirt. Twinkle- yeh tum kya kar rahe ho? Kunj: maine yeh apni gf ko flowers dene ki prsctice kar raha hoon. Tujhe koi problem hai? Twinkle: waise tumhari gf kaun hai? Kunj: yuvraj. Twinkle was shocked. Kunj: tu badi stupid hai bas tu mere saath chal. Kunj took her to a room which had a mirror in it. Tujhe jaana tha na ki meri gf kaun hai to yahaan dekh. When twinkle saw in the mirror she someone was standing there with something like a pointed thing like injection. The person stabbed kunj with injection. Twinkle tried to wake up kunj but was no use. Uv came there too and both starting waking up kunj but it was of no use. Everyone came there and were shocked to see kunj lying on ground.

Half an hour later kunj got up but was unable to remember whatever happened. Kunj said he was alright. Yuvraj: mere yaar tu thheek to hai na. Kunj: main bilkul thheek hoon. Bebe: twinkle puttar tu thodi der ke liye kunj ke paas ruk ja. Leela said haan haan puttar bebe bilkul thheek keh rahi hai. Yuvraj: ek kaam karta hoon main bhi ruk jaata hoon woh kya hai ki teenon dost saath mein rahenge to achcha hoga. Bebe: thheek hai to phir hum yahaan se chalte hai. Kunj: tujhe pata hai main woh flowers kis ke liye laaya tha. Yuvraj interrupted kunj: dekh yaar teri tabiyat thheek nahin tu baatein waatein baad mein kar lena. Twinkle: yuvraj bilkul thheek keh raha hai tujhe apni tabiyat ka khyal rakhna chahiye. Kunj: jaao main tum dono se baat nahin karta. Yuvraj and twinkle both tickled kunj and kunj stsrted laughing. Twinkle( in her mind) mujhe pata hai ki tu flowers kiske liye laaya the.

A week later.

Raminder comes to know from his friends that rajat is a dreaded gangster. Raminder tells this to manohar. Both of them go to confront rajat. Rajat was horried that his friends have come to know about him being a criminal. Rajat could not face his friends. Rajat decided to stab himself. By the time raminder and manohar could reach rajat stabbed himself. Raminder and manohar in order to save their friend took out the knife from his body but it was too late. Rajat had died. Raminder and manohars fingerprint were on the knife. The whole famiky reached the place. Both raminder and manohar realised what it must have looked like with knife in their hands thst too with blood snd body of their friend rajat.

Tbc.

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