Sorry... I get this sudden urge to res on ur post whenever u res...
So i m resing since u have resed the just in case post too...
Sorry again dear!😳
Excited to read this new story from u...😃
Wow! Jeeju saali combo! Great! I m even more happy that its a duology so i would get one more story in this genre to read... 😉 Cool!!!!
Read part 1 & 2... So will comment for that now & later edit my comment & share my views regarding the rest of the story...
Part 1
Loved it! Rk seems very sweet & caring.. Dipali is such a big looser ... She called Rk and madhu idiots... But she is idiot one here...
I hate dipali... This is how she behaves with her sister?
Madhu doesn't feel comfortable to stay at her own sister's house...
Hehe... I could so imagine Rk's face when he asked Madhu whether she is going to cook chicken for him lol!
But he shld actually feel glad atleast she cooked him something unlike his so called wife...
And how he teased her next day tasting her brilliant chicken & saying it was okay lol! That was one cute funny moment between jeeju & saali...
Then the big truth came out... I was so glad it came out soon & that too thru madhu or else rk would have been so hurt... & he would have no one to soothe his pain...
When he had tears while chopping onions i was laughing but when he cried sitting on the floor & then madhu hugging him closer making him bury his face on her bosom & let him cry... God! My heart went for him there... I too had tears... It always hurts me when a man cries... & the man is Rk then it hurts me more...
I loved the place where madhu begs her jeeju not to go behind her guessing he would kill her & ruin his life completely... He respected her & stayed back & did one good deed... He made love to madhu... Fantastic!
I didnt feel this as adultery or a sin... What they did was right... Someone so good like Rk deserves someine so pure & loving like madhu... She couldnt see her jeeju in pain & to erase off his pain she gave herself to him... I respect this madhu deeply! U have showed Madhu's character so nice & so strong... & of course as ever ur Rk is heart achingly sweet!
Part 2
Dipali is one nasty piece of shit... She has the nerve to hurl false accusation on him.. She shld have better moved her ass out of his house & ran to her cheater lover... But sullu & dips r made for each other couple... Both r deceiving their spouses... I feel so disgusted of them... & i feel disgusted of madhu's parents too... Shame they were supporting their pyaari daughter who ruined a nice man's life for her pleasure... Shit!
Thank goodness.. For creating this madhu so honest & stood for her jeeju & proved in front of the court the her jeeju is innocent... She very tactfully handled the court case... She actually hid abt the fact that they were together & what they did... But she didnt fully lie too... She atick close to truth... She nicely twisted the defense counsel by asking him "wer cld he ve followed her too?" Lol! She has ready wit & smartness...
Aww... Rk easily trust others i guess... But madhu didnt taint his trust... Like dipali... She was so loyal to him & fought for him & got justice to him...
I was jumping in joy when dips & rk got divorced.. Now only rishbala's love romance... Awesome!
Loved this story so much so far & i know i will love the rest too... Hope u have posted the remaining story...
Will go read it now & edit my comment... Thanks dear!
Part 3
Omg! I have no words to praise u ... I m speechless after reading the final part of this beautiful story...
This is one Outrageously awesome ending lazy dear...
This part is the best among the entire story... Loved it loved it loved it..
Gosh! Is Radha aunty for real?? She is so cool as cucumber & clever too yaar... Radha aunty take a bow for your brilliance... She didnt give a chance to her son or madhu to explain their relation... I guessed that she knew abt her likings for her right from her happy smile in the court hall when madhu walked in & sat beside her... And also there was some hidden happiness in her voice when she called madhu to thank her... I m glad she & mohan accpeted her warmly inspite of what her sister did to their son... They didnt jeopardize madhu's love with her sister betrayal & create problems in rishbala's relation...
Haha... I did a victory dance when dipali got ditched by sultan... Which was expected only...
That bloody bitch.. How dare she come running to rk expecting him to take her back? Rk did the right thing by coming open & letting their families know abt his relation with madhu...
Aww... Like a sweet darling daughter she convinced her parents & made them understand her side of reasons too...
Finally... Rishbala happily settled with their daughter Mishka in motihari... Great!
That end like of Rk's "i would love to hold my girls in my arms" was like a cherry on top of the cake!!
U nailed it dear! 👏
This story is so perfect... It has love romance pain tears happiness joy... So wonderful!
Love u for writing this brilliant piece!
Thanks dear! Do write more & more on rishbala!
Oh i missed to mention abt that fabulous song... Thats one of my fav. song... I m a die hard fan of director mani ratnam & i guess u r too... Bcos u have written Village belle & now this song from his movie... That song perfectly fitted to this story... It clearly explains Rk's love for madhu... U have nicely translated in English! It was like... U have written it on your own in english..😲👏
Edited by madhurish - 9 years ago
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