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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: rd0309

Shlok's past is still a mystery... Niranjan's accident seemed a little fishy to me... Now waiting for Shlok's surprise for Aastha

yes it is still a mystery
fishy jus wait and watch
hmm surprise kuch nahi hoga sorry to say this
hope u liked this part
thanks to ur support
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: vaishux

Nice update...

Feeling sad for anjali...shlok should not have talk in this way😔
Anyway...eagerly for shlok surprise
Thank you

thank u 😳
yes Shlok should have talked with her like this very bad boy Shlok is
hmm sorry there wont be any surprise
hope u like it
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: nadeeka1200

Sorry Sai
i can understand that
thank you for the replying me
nice update today
waiting for shlok's surprise

dont be sorry yaar
u jus asked it wat is there to feel sorry haan
i m sorry for disappointing u
hmm u lked the update na thank u
sorry again there wont be any surprise he thought to give but circumstances doesnt make him to do
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: sudhamadhu

HAI SAI " 😛 HAPPY BIRTHDAY 😛 TO YOU.
.MANY MANY HAPPY RETURNS OF THE DAY.
Thanks a lot chechi thank u so much
Hai Sai gud evening yaar. 😊 .
Thanks for ur updates and pm. 👏 .
I am really thankful to u for ur beautiful reply for my comments.😛.
Ur reply give me so much encourages for me to write more Sai. 😊
I really didn't expect this much appreciation. 😛
Anyway thanks for making me happy giving like beautiful comments and same as beautiful update of our sweetest couples our cute ashlok. 😛 Really liked ur updates and I enjoyed it . Thanks Sai for ur treat for us like giving us a beautiful ff.
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Oho chechi u too praising me a lot really u liked update na thats all i need dont worry i wont disappoint u really u ppl r boost and horlicks to me gives me lot of energy in the form of comments thanks a lot
Sholk rushed to the hospital and saw his father. Siddarth told about the accident to shlok. But after reading this in my thought the accident is created by someone sure.Anyway only his leg broken. Thank god not too dangerous.k. He informed astha and astha told to Anjali and both came to the hospital and was crying. Wat to do astha is consoling Anjali its nice 👏 .
Yes his leg broke poor Niranjan hmm Siddharth saved him so be thankful to him anyway Aastha and Anjali always have different bond
Doctors allowed them to take niranjan to home but there will be a male nurse with him. Siddarth went with them to AM. But y he signed jyothi. I think they r in love.
Coming home shlok told niranjan he will take care of everything waw. And telling asthu is with him waw shlok yah from now astha will also be with u in the office. Kamal hey. When astha came room shlok was feeling bad for some reason hey don't worry shlok ur baby doll will be with you always 😛
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Yes Siddharth and Jyoti in love but will be revealed in a dramatic way for now ab Ashlok ki romance baki hain na wait for it k hmm Aastha is always with Shlok dont worry she never leaves him nor he leaves her
Siddarth is staying in their guest room. Astha went to take coffee for shlok. She saw Jyoti smiling but didn't know the reason. She gave the tea for niranjan in sojals hand took coffee to shlok. Drinking coffee he was checking the file. She took it from his hand told from tomorrow he will be with him in office also. Waw asthu u r right. Help ur hubby in office . 👏
Yes Aastha is always helpful to him in everyway slowly she will bcome his entire life she trusts him the most and he trusts her
Astha want to visit shlok guest house once again so she asked shlok but shloks answer was superb. She doesn't want romance then y going to the house alone. But she wants to remember her old days waw astha take shlok with you hahaha.Anjali was crying and niranjan is consoling. She us afraid y Anjali. Haan siddarth u came the right time with juice.
Yes Siddharth came in the right time y u will kow soon dont worry nothing happens to ashlok
Astha saw siddarth signing jyothi she was confused. Shlok y he always angry with Anjali 😡 😡😡. Y he can't buy at least medicines for his mother. But astha u shouted at shlok. For that astha vegan to search the reason behind shloks anger against Anjali. She went to shloks study room and started to check but before that our shlok came. Arey shlok y u shouted at her she is asking the correct question henna. Now she is gone out from the study room by crying. Shlok how to console yaar ..
Yes i too dont like this Shlok always angry at Anjali but he will regret it dont worry hmm Shlok too doesnt wanted to shout at her it was Aastha first shouted at him dont worry they cant be like this for a long time k
Sai I liked ur ff. I enjoyed it . It was awesome. Really waiting for the next update yaar. Don't make any wrong between ashlok. V trust u very much. U rocked again keep it up. Continue... Soon.
Yeah will update in few minutes hmm u liked it na thank u so much chechi yes i wont disappoint u hope so have trust in me
"Happy birthday to you, Happy birthday to u,Happy birthday to u Sai, Happy birthday too you". Many many happy returns of the day. Be always happy yaar. Keep smiling every seconds every minutes every hour every months every years till u last breath. All the best for ur wonderful future. Once again Happy birthday wishes to you. 👏Thanks a lot chechi ur wishes means a lot and yes i always try to be happy dont worry hmm thank u thank u thank u so much for wishing me and u did nice thing editing ur new topic u should have learnt this forum rules anyway thank u so much my day bcame more brighter with ur wonderful wishes thanks a lot chechi.

Wat a wonderful and colorful comments thanks a lot chechi ur comments always encourages me and i love to read ur comments i eagerly wait for ur comments daily ur comments means a lot to me keep it up hope u r enjoying updates and i will deliver more interesting chapters coming up keep following and keep commenting
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Posted: 9 years ago

Episode 35


Aastha came to room with tearful eyes wat happens if he shares it to me am I not his half am I not everything to him then y is he hiding it from me but she is not that weak she wiped her tears and went to Anjali. Anjali saw her and asked "Kya hua Aastha sab teek hain na tum rone jaise lag rahe ho kya hua mere bachche."


Aastha "kuch nahi aai I just want to sleep in ur lap for sometime." Anjali "kya hua Aastha sab teek hain na." Aastha "haan sab teek hain." Anjali made her sleep on ther lap suddenly Kalindi called Aastha. Aastha suddenly got up from there cheerfully. Anjali too listened. Aastha ran to her. Kalindi saw Aastha coming running. Aastha "aai."


Kalindi "Aastha kaisi hain tu sab teek hain na yaha." Aastha "haan aayi sab teek hain aap yaha achanak aur Ankush bhai sab teek hain na ghar pe." Anjali "arey Kalindi ji aayiye aayiye bhaitiye yaha." Kalindi "nahi nahi Anjali ji ham Niranjan ji ko dekhne aayi hain ab kaisi hain wo." Anjali "haan aap aayiye andar aayiye." Ankush "Ji aunti aap kaisi hain." Anjali "main bilkul theek hoon beta aayiye aap andar aayiye na."


Kalindi and Ankush both went in. Aastha stood behind Kalindi. Ankush "didi aap yaha theek hain na." Aastha nodded. Kalindi asked his well beings. Niranjan asked about Avdoot. She said he was k. Then all of them went out leaving him to take rest. Kalindi was asking Aastha "Aastha ek baar ghar aaona pls tummhari Baba bhi tujhe dekhne ka man kar raha hain." Aastha "teek hain jald aaongi but u don't think that I will come for him k."


Ankush "didi y r u still angry on him he was regretting wat he had done he really wants to see u once y cant u forgive him once and for all." Anjali was there too "haan Aastha u cant do like this how long will u be without talking to him haan he is ur Baba." Aastha "jaanti hoon aai u r there with me wen I was abandoned by everyone u know how I felt u know I never considered him as accused but aap log nahi samajsakte mere dil pe kya bheet raha hain abi."


Kalindi "achcha teek hain Aastha lekin aana mat bhool jao." Aastha "teek hain." And they both left. Anjali said to Aastha "Aastha tum aisa karna achcha nahi hain wo tumhari Baba hain tumhe janam diya hain kyun kar rahi hoon aisa aisa karne se kya paogi tum wo prayaschit kar rahe hain na." Aastha "aai aap bhi na pls aai mere taraf se socho jaraa main jaa rahi hoon mujhe kuch kaam hain." And Aastha left to her room.


Aastha in her room was thinking kaha hain Shlok aap, mujhe aapki jaroorat hain and she was thinking about her father kyun Baba kyun kiya aisa sab kuch theek tha na tho fir kyun kiya aisa. Aastha remembered something and went to kitchen and took milk to Baba. She went in and asked again "Baba ab aap kaisa hain."


Niranjan "teek hoon beta Shlok kaha hain nahi aaya ab tak." Aastha "nahi Baba abi tak nahi aaya shayad kaam hain bohut." Niranjan "teek hain beta tum khana khaliya." Aastha "nahi Baba Shlok aane ke baad ham dono milk kar khaenge aap rest lejiye ab mujhe batayiye aai aapko achchi se dekh rahi hain ki nahi batayiye mujhe if u want we will change aai no pblm Baba."


Anjali "haan Aastha bohut hogaya tumhara bachpana ab jao jaake khana khalo pata nahi Shlok kab tak aayenge kaam ki din main Shlok aisa hi late aayenge tum jao tum khana khalo." Aastha "nahi aai aap chinta mat kijiye main khana khaloongi Shlok aane ke baad I will call him don't worry." And she left them. Anjali "Sahab meri choti bahu bohut achchi hain na Shlok sach main bohut khushnaseeb hain I thought Shlok wont marry again ab sab theek hogaya Sahab main bohut khush hoon Sojal aur Aastha ke saath."


Niranjan "aap kabhi galat hoyi nahi sakte Aastha bilkul achchi bahu hain itni caring hain ab aap hmm Anjali main soch raha hoon ki ham dono ek holiday lenge kya kahogi mera kaam Shlok dekhege aur tumhara kaam Aastha hain na sab dekhenge wo log kya kahogi." Anjali "pehle aap rest lijiye iss halat main kaha jayenge ham aap sojayiye main Shlok aane ke baad aaongi Aastha se kuch baat karni hain."


Anjali came to Aastha. Aastha suddenly hid the photo. Anjali "Aastha kya hua kya chupa rahe hain mujhse." Aastha "kuch nahi aai aap yaha kya baat hain kuch chahiye aapko." Anjali "kuch nahi mere bachche tum aao yaha mere saath sona hain na tumko aao yaha sojao mere bachche." Aastha came to her and slept on her lap. Aastha "aai main aapse kuch poochna hain."


Anjali "Kya hain." Aastha "Aai I don't know y I feel that way but I have to know Aai Shlok ki ateet ke bare main mujhe jaanna hain." Anjali "kyun Aastha r u not happy with him kya hua usne kuch kaha hain kya." Aastha "nahi aai main bohut khush hoon uske saath." Anjali "sahi vakt aane par main hi batadoongi Aastha lekin mujhe vaada kijiye tum Shlok ko kabhi nahi chodungi."


Aastha suddenly woke up and saw her "Aai aap kya baat kar rahi hain Shlok meri jindagi uske bina main adhuri hoon dekho aap ye photo dekh main uski bare main hi soch rahi hoon haalat jo bhi main Shlok ke saath main nahi chodungi nahi chodungi aap aisa baat hi mat kijiye mujhe bohut dar lagta hain pls aai."


Anjali "arey Aastha tum chinta mat kar ab sab theek hain bas Shlok ke saath bohut bura hua tha lekin ab bohut hogaya ab sab theek hogaya Aastha koi bura nahi hone wala hain tum chinta mat karo Shlok ke saath khush raho aur ye yaad rakhna Aastha mujhe sab se pehle iss ghar ki vaaras chahiye wo bhi Shlok se samajla."


Aastha shyly nodded. Anjali "pagal aisa sharmana se kuch nahi hoga meri baato ko dyaan rakh haan teek hain ab jao kitni der aisa bhoogi rahogi khana khalo Shlok aaega." Aastha "aai aap jayiye main khaongi na Shlok aane ke baad aap jayiye abi Baba tera intejaar karenge." Anjali "teek hain gud n8." Aastha "gud n8 aai." And she left. She again took his photo and kept infront of her and rested her head on her hand and smiled at him.


She didn't waste a single second she called him. Shlok took the call. Aastha "Shlok kaha hain aap itni raat hogaya kya kar raha hain khana bhi nahi khaya itni kaam hain kya kya main aao vaha bolo Shlok." Shlok "Aastha don't disturb me Baba nahi hain na isiliye late ho raha hain aur main khana kha chuka hoon tum bhi khalo aur sojao mere liye intejaar mat karna." Aastha "haaan aap khana khaya aur mujhe bataya bhi nahi aap jaante ho main kitni bhoogi hoon agar main phone nahi kiya tho.."


Shlok "Aastha Aastha Aastha kaha na tum khalo mujhe kuch kaam hain pls leave me for sometime." Aastha "Shlok utna kaam hain kya kya main bhi aaongi udar." Shlok got irritated and yelled at her "Aastha nahi chahiye tumhari madad main ne kaha na ek baar tho tum khalo and sojao bye." Aastha was disappointed again kya hua iss akdu ko aaj aisa kyun baat kar rahe hain mujhse bohut bada vala akdu hain mere patidev duniya bhar ki khadosiyat mere pati main hi daalna hain baki ko kuch bacha hi nahi sadu kali ka. But she got up and went to kitchen and ate soullessly.


Shlok again thought I shouldnt have shouted at her. He again called her to say sorry but she didn't lift the call she is eating on the dining table phone is in the room. Shlok left the phone and started working again. Now again his phone rang thought it was Aastha but it was anonymous call. Shlok picked up the call. Shlok "hello kaun hain." There was no response.


Shlok was going to cut the call but on the other side "hmm Shlok how r u." Shlok "kaun hain." Other man "mere bare main chodo suna hain ki tum shaadi Karli kaisa hain tumhari ye nai jeevan." Shlok "hello kaun hain be." Him "wait and watch Shlok bad time starts to u." and he cut the call. Shlok was confused "hello hello kaun hain." And he suddenly got up. He saw the number it was from tele booth. Ye kaun ho sakta hain and he again called Aastha she was not lifting wat the hell Aastha pls lift the call once.


He tried no.of times he was restless. Aastha finished her dinner and was leaving to her room but Shlok called to home. Aastha heard phone ringing ab kaun hosakta hain. Aastha went and lifted the phone. Shlok "hello Aastha." Aastha "haan Shlok." Shlok "Aastha tum theek hain na kaha rakha tumhari phone ko haan how many times I called u wat were u doing haan phone kyun nahi uthaya tumne haan."


Aastha "Hello Shlok shaant hojao main kha rahi thi and y r u tensed so much haan y did u call me phone was in room ab kyun kahna baaki hain ab disturb nahi ho raha hain kya aapko main rakhti hoon bai." Shlok "Aastha Aastha Aastha." Aastha "haan ab kya." Shlok "Aastha I m sorry I love u." and he kissed in the phone. Aastha blushed then and there.


Aastha "Shlok aap kab aayenge." Shlok "hmm jaldi aaunga tum sojao baby." Aastha "nahi I will wait for u don't worry come soon." Shlok "achcha teek hain." And he cut the call. Aastha was thinking isse kya hua achanak and she went to her room.


Shlok was thinking who the hell he is he how come he know everything about him and he called again to that number but he came to know it is public tele phone booth. Shlok was worried and was also confused who the hell is he and he closed the laptop and again he got call. Shlok lifted that too and the same voice again "hmm bohut dar gaya tum Shlok tum jaante ho Swati ko ya phir bhool gaya kya." Shlok "who the hell r u wat do u want from me."

Episode 36&37

Edited by Saibhargav - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hai Sai gud evening yaar. Thanks for ur updates and pm. Thanks for ur wonderful comments reply. Really I liked and loved it so much yaar. Hey Sai u wrote one more funny story. Shopping henna. Reading that laughed. Ur writing skill is super yaar. V always wait for your ff yaar. Because it has so much twist in that ff. Reading ur ff v always being curious to know what will happen the next. Its brilliant yaar.
Astha was crying y Sai u always making her cry. U promised us that u will not make her cry once more. 😡 She was thinking y can't he share everything to her. Anjali saw her and asked what happened but she didn't say anything. Kalindi and Ankush came there to see niranjan waw it was nice yaar. 😛
Kalindhi asked to astha y she didn't come to her home . Come and ur is wishing to see u. But after everyone forcing she agreed but said not for her father. Anjali also astha don't punish avdoot so much atlast she will regret. Really avdoot was living in guilty because th sins done by him. Really I also feeling sad yaaar. 😭
Astha was thinking about shloik he didn't come yet it is night. She didn't eat because she was waiting for shlok. She took milk for Niranjan . Niranjan and Anjali was happy because they got a nice and cute bahu for them. They thought shlok will not marry but he got a nice pair. Haan niranjan and Anjali v also know that shlok got the correct pair in his life. Arey they r going to take leave. Shlok will look the business and astha house waw. Wat a comedy yaar hahaha 😛
Astha was watching shloks photo suddenly Anjali came and their chatting was superb. Astha wants to know about shloks past but Anjali told if the correct time come she will show and told don't leave shlok. Arey Anjali our asthu can't live without shlok so don't be afraid. Astha called shlok but he refused to come home and told he already ate. He shouted at her 😡 😡. How can he do this to her. She also thought how akdu was he. Hahaha
Astha went to kitchen to eat food she left her phone in bedroom. Shlok felt sad and called her but she didn't hear. So he cut the call m but after some time someone called and asked about his marriage life. And told something is going to be wrong. Shlok again calling astha but she didn't hear to pick the phone. He called in land line astha took and talked to shlok . Now shlok was relief. He said sorry and love to her m waw. But after cutting the call once again some one called. And asked him about Swati.
I think some one is related to Swati.

Thanks Sai for ur valuable comments and a super update. Thanks for encouraging me. U r rocking keep it up . Try more yaaar. V r waiting. Continue soon...
Edited by sudhamadhu - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Oh god I.am tensed now... Who is that...
Astha and shlok are a treat to watch...
Waiting for next update
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Saibhargav

hmm didi thanks for ur lambiii vali comment
hmm Niru Baba's accident hmm dekhte ham kya hua kaise hua
arey Aastha doesnt cry matlab sirf ek aasun bhi nahi aana hain kya ye kaisi nainsaafi hain haan
kabhi kabhi hota hain dont worry Shlok loves her a lot he never let her down k
yes but u r right Shlok shouldnt have shouted at Anjali like that i accept it without knowing truth he shouldnt have shouted at her like that bura hain bohut bura hain Shlok but wat to do he was blind folded dont worry i will make him realise have trust in me
arey she is mother right how can she not talk with him haan she was hoping each and every second for him to talk with her
Sid-Jyoti story hmm well thank u jus got an idea to bring him in
arey diduuu u r the only person caught it thought every one feels it funny pchchc poor try from me anyway u got it and laughed na its k atleast one found it and felt it funny
i know boys r ward boys 😆
hmm will continue today



haan astha cant drop a single tear.. samjhla..😡
hmm make shlok realise soon..
yeah laughed out so much...😆😆😆 still laughing on it...😆😆
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: coolhi1988


haan astha cant drop a single tear.. samjhla..😡
hmm make shlok realise soon..
yeah laughed out so much...😆😆😆 still laughing on it...😆😆

k k aayinda dyaan rakhoonga forgive me this time but not due to Shlok k
hmm hmm hasiye hasiye lekin koi nahi dekha wo part
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Posted: 9 years ago
awesome update...
kalindi ankush come to meet niru baba...
kalindi asks astha to cum at her place to meet avdoot..
astha doesnt want to forgive avdoot...
haye ashlok... 😳😳
mystery mystery mystrey...
continue soon...
thnks 4 d pm..

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