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Posted: 9 years ago
nice teaser ji
waiting for update
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Posted: 9 years ago
Interesting Teaser
Wonder what will Maan now say or do
waiting for update
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Posted: 9 years ago
Fantastic start. Good imagination. Geet is in love with Maan. Maan is married with Sameera. Maan is truly in love with Sam but for Sam this is a marriage of convince. Maan and Geet are working in a serial. Maan is attracted to Geet's beauty. Maan went to his bathroom and Geet is already there. Maan make out with her and Geet also did not stop him due to her love.
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Posted: 9 years ago
fab teaser, will b waiting
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Posted: 9 years ago
part 3

maan this word ...brought that person in reality ...and a tear escape for her eyes ...her heart bleed with that name ,yes this is fact of her love ,her life She is not sam but she is geet handa ...she control her all pain hurt ,emotions ...she press her lips tightly ...and say Maan sir

Maan feel like someone snatch his ability to think or speak ,never in verse dream he think like this that he touching other girl than sam ..his hand froze on same place and he feel like totally blank his mind stop to work and ,words went away from him..

Maan took his hand away from geet body and caressed his own hair with frustration ,he turn to other side and mummer wo,sorry muje laga sameera hai ...with that he went out and say in weak voice ...dry yourself , towel is on bed ..i send pinky here with your other cloth ..he don't have courage to face her now ...he went to pinky and say her to went to his room

Maan make excused and went to his house ...adi get confused with maan behavior he never ever went like this from shoot .

Pinky reach to maan room ,she is confused what geet is doing in maan room ...she march in maan room and found all wet geet cover in towel standing near window of maan room ...

Pinky went to her and handover her dry dress ,geet painful cry face ...make disturbed pinky ,she get worried what happen with geet why ,she is like this and what the hell she doing in maan sir room. And that also all wet .she know how much geet crazy for maan sir but ,she know about maan sam live in relationship also .She don't want geet hurt herself in innocence and love for maan sir ...pinky took deep breath its so complicated.

After few min geet come out after changing in other dress

Pinky give disopinted look to geet and ask in hard tone, kuch bologi ya fhir main chali javu miss handa

Geet once look to pinky ,geet know when pinky get mad on her she called her miss handa

Geet - wo main ,mere room main pani nahi tha ,to spot boy bola use maan sir room and when I come here ...I by mistake open shower tab and get drench in water ...and the lock of bathroom jam hai ...and unko laga main sam hu..

Pinky get worried with maan word she run to geet and hug her ...thou she know mk never missbehave with womens but she ask ...is he misbehave with me

Geet imm come out from her hug and put hand on pinky mouth ...no he don't know that I am geet ,jaise hi pata chala ,he stop to tuch me...and waise bhi pinky mere upper ,mere sharir (body) par to unka haq hai hi na ...but pinky when he took her name ...muje laga someone stab my heart with knife ..bahot dard ho raha hai ...I don't want to cry I want to enjoy this moment but ,uska naam ...pinky bahot dard ho raha hai pinky bahot dard ho raha hai ...

A tear escape from pinky eyes ,she fed up with this girl madness for MK sir .wo ishko chuke bhi gaya and she saying ye uunka haq hai ...

Other side maan went to home with all frustration and anger and when he reach to his house ,he open his house with Key ...but his legs stop near door itself when he heard a big laugh of sam and other boy and he very well know who is this ...that is bluddy SAM so called co model he hate him so much ,itna touchy rehata hai sam ke sath and ,sam also don't have objection about ,she say its part of her job...modeling carrier hai hi aisa ...he mummer carrier my foot .

He don't go upper side ,now he don't want to look that sam's so called friend ...he need time to come out from that bathroom incidence ,where his mind stuck till now .he don't want to face them now so he went to jim area which is on ground floor ...he change in his track suit and start his practice of thi chi ...

Again and again ,her voice ..MAAN SIRRR hamaring on his mind on his brain ...that is such painful voice ...in his desire he touch a virgin girl in wrong way jo sirf uske boyfriend ya fhir husband ka haq tha ,he cross a limit today and ,its question of women dignity ,he feel like he is rep***

How his hand don't get to know that ,that is not sam ,but a other person how ...he again punch hard on bricks ...with make injured his hand but he is not feeling that pain

He is surprised with his own mind game ...which once found himself guilty and next moment saying its perfect moment of his life and this thought making him more restless and more serious ...he try to hurt more and more to himself.

Other side geet pleaded pinky to that she want to go home ,pinky accepted her plea and called adi and took geet to her house ..

Geet went to her room and took teddy and sleep on her bed ...a tear continually flowing from her eyes ,her hand start move on her body where maan touch her before some time .

Pinky saw all this ,she want to scold geet ,for why she spoiling her life like this for ...a dream ,yes MK is dream for geet nothing eles ,jo kabhi reality nahi ho sakata ...

Same her phone start to vibrate its adi called ,she took it and a land escape from pinky feet ...

Maan sir quit from serial ...she mummer shut ...she once look to geet ...who is sleep now with her teddy ...a tears dry on her cheek

Pinky lock room and went from there to meet adi ,she expecting same reaction from MK ...jiska dar hua wahi ho gaya tha ...She know how much Mk respected women and this incidence may be shook him ...

Adi seated in office lost in so much thought ...pinky entered in his cabin ..and called adi sir

Adi - u know reason about mk decision ,do u want to share with me or not adi ask her ruedily

Pinky say in hard tone ,its personal so can not share with u sir sorry with that she went out from his cabin

Adi - mummer hell ...ye maan bhi kuch nahi bolega ,I know him ..pata nahi kya hua ,he took such decision like this

Upcoming part ...

Fight of maan ,sam

Pinky ,geet

Last wala teaser with this song

chhuTeya na chhuTe mose

rang tera Dolna

ik tere baajo dooja

mera koi mol na

bolna mahi bol na

bolna maahi bol na

even on trying to remove,

your color doesn't get off me..

other than you (i.e. without you),

there is no value of mine..

say, O my beloved, please say.

say, O my beloved, please say..

tere sang hansna main

tere sang rona

tujh mein hi rehna main

tujh mein hi khona

I want to laugh with you,

and cry with you..

I want to live in you,

and get lost in you only..

dil mein chhupa ke tujhe

dil naiyo kholna

mar ke bhi maahi tosey

munh na moDna

bolna mahi bol na

bolna maahi bol na

I want to hide you in my heart

and not open that after that.

even after dying,

I'd not go away from you..

say, O my beloved, please say.

say, O my beloved, please say..

chhuTeya na chhuTe mose

rang tera Dolna

ik tere baajo dooja

mera koi mol na

bolna maahi bol na


Edited by Mahimaan - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Lovely update yippee I am the first to like maan was shocked to know it was geet not Sam he touched her thinking to be Sam he left too ashamed to face her geet was in her own pain she consider maans claim on her but with Sam's name it hurt like hell pinky console her she is annoyed at geet that she is madly in love with maan who is with Sam maan reached home to see sam with her so called friend he hates he poured his anger in Tai chi he was cursing himself for touching geet he quit from the show pinky shocked adi asked pinky who didn't say anything
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Posted: 9 years ago
very painful update... geet is crazy about maan.. pinky is scared about geet and her feelings... maan felt bad for touching geet like that and quit the serial he is acting...
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Posted: 9 years ago
hi thanks 4 da amazing update! Well written! Poor Geet! Maan feels guilty! His inner turmoil well portrayed! Geet upset as Maan loves Sam! Pinky helps Geet! Geet reveals wt happened! Pinky worried abt Geet! Geet is crazy abt Maan n she knows abt him n Sam! Maan goes home! Maan upset at Sam n hw free she is with guys! Maan upset at his actions with Geet! Maan quits the serial! Geet in tears! Adi tells Pinky tht Maan quit the serial! Maan works out vigorously n hurts his hand! Pinky refuses 2 tell Adi the reason y Maan quit!
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Posted: 9 years ago
Nice update. Maan is shocked to see Geet there. He came out of washroom and asked Pinki to go to his cabin with fresh Geet clothes. When Pinki went inside she is also shocked to see Geet's condition. Maan left for his home. When he reached home , he heard Sam laughing with her co model. He silently went to gym and started tai chi. He is disturbed. Geet also went to her home and slept. Tears are coming out from her eyes in sleeping .
Maan left serial. Adi is frustrated and asked Pinki about the reason. She refused to share as it is personal.
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Posted: 9 years ago
Oye .. teri Maan geet ke saath Jo hua .. uski tension me... sam person check nahi kiya ...
bechara bach jata na...
Sam ka sab sach .. pata chalta ...
Pinky angry on Geet's naive nature and...
She feels bad.that Maan can not be Geet's ..
Maan left the show ..
Adi frustrated why all this happening...
precap ...
me waiting ...

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