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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: syvalini

sai rocking...

woderful update sai
both ashlok teasing each other nicely written
date fixed for their marriage,
ankush want to make avdoot take part astha's wed but astha was not willing...
now is shlok can convince her avdoot too attend to their wed..
well written sai...
keep going...
wating...to read further.

thanks a lot akkiii
yes ashlok are always like that
arey how can u forget how aastha cried for her father haan she wont forgive him so easily wait for it
thanks again akkiii
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: ss1609

Lovely ashlok moments bro...finally they r going marry???? Aren't they??? Oh no there is still that mystery man who wants to avenge shlok and his baba...who is this mystery man bro...when is he going to come? ??? Is shlok going marry astha or not...awaiting next update for few answers from u bro...

Ps- kya baat hai janab...two stories at the same time...great going bro..thanks for making this forum so active...bro...and have look at neha' s story' s cmmt.".I am with you".. I've mentioned u there before chpt 15..😆😉👍🏼

thanks a lot sissy
yes they r going to be married dont worry
yeah mystery man is still there observing everything wait and watch how it going to clear him
he is going to come wen u ppl will be relaxing reading my boring story 😆



and sis read ur coment thanks a lot u ppl liked my story thats more than enough but u ppl r exaggerating me yaar thanks a lot for ur nice and encouraging words

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Posted: 9 years ago

Episode 30


Next morning Ankush called Shlok. Shlok "Haan Ankush tum kya hua is it anything important." Ankush "Kuch nahi Shlok a small request." Shlok "haan bolo." Ankush "if u don't mind can u request Aastha to accept Avdoot's presence in ur marriage we tried a lot but she didn't accept so if u pls ask her once I think she might obey u."


Shlok "not a pblm Ankush don't worry main hoon na I will make her to accept and Avdoot uncle will get bail and u have proof with u na." Ankush "haan Shlok." Shlok cut the call and then Aastha entered at the same time. Aastha came smiling. Aastha "Shlok ye lo tumhari file." Shlok "hmm Aastha idar aao jara break do na." Aastha "kya." And she came near her.


Shlok pulled her and made her sit on his lap. Aastha "Kya hain Shlok we have lot of work tum bhool gaye kya us Khannas ka project aaj hi khatam karna hain we r taking leave for our marriage right." Shlok "wo sab ham baad main dekhlungi lekin tum ye baat batao will u listen me." Aastha "Shlok kya hua suddenly y r u asking like that haan."


Shlok "first tell me u will listen me." And he kissed her fingers. Aastha "Wat happened Shlok is there anything serious." Shlok "kuch nahi hua meri maa don't be tensed haan I want ur Baba in our marriage." Aastha suddenly got up in anger. Aastha "Shlok kisne poocha tumhe who asked u to ask me." Shlok too got up "Baby y r u so angry I don't want to see u like this." And he cupped her face.


Aastha "chodiye Shlok everyone doesn't feel me everyone needs him no one knows wat I feel aap bhi mujhe nahi samaj sakte." And she shedding tears. Shlok "Oho meri jaan k leave it don't cry I don't want u to cry if u don't want him then its k we wont call him don't worry k leave it yaar I said na ur father will not come don't cry chup ho ja." And he hugged her caressing her face.


Aastha too hugged him "I m sorry for shouting at u I m sorry." Shlok "Its k baby ab dekho bohut kaam pada hain lekin u can never change this truth Aastha he is ur father he has every right to come to this wedding and also he has to if u don't want its k there in my family Baba is trying a lawyer to get him bailed k if u don't want its k I will ask him to not approach any lawyer."


Shlok left her and busied himself in work. Aastha stood there itself was staring at him. Shlok "Kya hua now wat r u staring at." Aastha came near him and sat in his lap. Shlok kissed her cheek "kya hua bohut pyaar aa raha hain mujhpe." She leaned her head in his shoulder "Shlok mujhe dar lag raha hain." Shlok "kya hua Aastha I m here na no need to fear at all kya hua tell me y r u fearing."


Aastha "Shlok if Baba comes to marriage and if anything goes wrong I cant bear it Shlok I cant pehle uski vaje se aai ko accident hua ab uski vaje se kuch aur hogaya tho main mar jaungi Shlok I cant bear it." And she sobbed a little. Shlok "meri rothlu bas itni si baat hain main hoon na did I ever let anything happen to u don't u trust me Aastha k if u want we can also have police protection too don't worry nothing happens to us ye khushi hone ki baat hain y r u crying like this." And he caressed her cheek after rubbing tears.


Someone suddenly knocked the door. Aastha suddenly got up and stood afar. Her hair was stuck in his shirt button. She squealed in pain "aah Shlok." Shlok "Aastha don't go away come near to me so u don't feel any pain." She again squealed "aah Shlok slowly aah..." That man who knocked the door listenend the voice and thought in a wrong way and left the cabin smiling shyly. Shlok took her hair away and said "come in." no one came. He was confused.


He went out and saw none. That man was going out and said to not disturb Sir as he was in important work but Shlok came there at the same time. Shlok "Avinash kaunsi work wat r u talking wen did I say to not disturb me."


Avinash "Kuch nahi Sir I thought I thought wo aap...Aastha mam... se... busy the isiliye I thought u were busy with her." Shlok "Avinash do whatever is said to don't act smart ab aao andar y did u knock my door haan." Avinash asked about company work. Aastha was thinking wat if Baba comes she was thinking wat would be the negatives if he comes there. She was fearing a lot she doesn't want to face any difficulty now.


The day b4 marriage Aastha and Shlok were far away they were not supposed to see each other. Atlast Aastha agreed to bring Avdoot but only on marriage day. Aastha wants to see Shlok and he wants to see her. Gauri too came to know her marriage is fixed with Shlok and felt very happy. From then she started teasing Aastha "Aastha u remember right u said u will never marry him and u also said u didn't love him but wat I said is true u loved him that time and now too haan haan achcha theek hain ab batao mujhe did he kiss u."


Aastha rounded her mouth and bet her on head "chi Gauri tum kaisi baate kar rahe hain tum bohut badmaash hogayi." Gauri "achcha then how come u came to know his love then." Aastha "arey he himself said me sach bata rahi hoon main." Gauri "Oh pagli don't be over smart haan I saw everything between u two at that night wen u came to his guest house I saw u too... kissing and then u took him into his room and I didn't see tell me Aastha wat happened that day did he.."


Aastha "haan Gauri ye... tum... Kya... baat kar rahe hain chii nothing happened like that I was just making him relax he was unconscious yaar chii tum sach main bohut badmaash and u y did u come there." Gauri "That day hmm ur mother called me since u r not lifting call she thought u came to me she said to stop u in my home itself until rain stops I didn't say anything I said k I thought u might come there so I came there and then I saw u 2 tell me Aastha hows it." Aastha "chi chi chi Gauri ab chalo tum yaha se chalo first aai aai." Gauri "achcha teek hain jaa rahi hoon main cool down badi aai mujhe darane ki." And she left. Aastha never felt so embarrassing she took her pillow and held it to the face tightly and smiled in pillow and lied back.

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He came to know there marriage was fixed and was pacing in the room he thought by disgracing they might fight with Niranjan and Shlok but scene got reversed here ye kaisa hua hmm bhairav isne kya kiya and then his wife came to their. His Wife "kya hua aap itni tension kyn hain." He "Kal Shlok Agnihotri ka shaadi hain main aise nahi honedoonga nahi honeddoonga." His wife "arey aap shaant hojayiye pehle shaant hojayiye main abi nimboo juice laati hoon." And she went out to bring lemon juice.


He called Sameer and asked him to know about the rumour and immediately call him. In this mean time his wife came and gave juice to him he drank it and felt uneasy and then Sameer called him. He was going to talk with but his wife saw him going into sleep and took phone away from him and made him sleep and smiled at him caressing his hair and she said in phone "Sir busy hain baad main call karo." Sameer "Lekin...." That's it there was beep on other side.

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Shlok was very eager to see her. Aastha got ready beautifully. Kalindi didn't call anyone bcoz no one helped them in their bad condition she just called her mother Ajju. Varad was also teasing Shlok to not go near Aastha. They were sufficed with having messages and also mms. The day has arrived. They were going to get married. Avdoot too came with police protection. Avdoot also made kanyadan for her.


After marriage he apologised for all his sins he made. Kalindi was also in tears but Aastha didn't even give a look at him she is so stubborn even Shlok tried to make her accept but no she is really very stubborn. She didn't talk with him at all. Avdoot pleaded her so much. But she didn't talk only she knows how much she cried for him wen he was missed but wen she knew he turned out to be an accused then she lost all her concern on him.


While leaving she cried a lot with her aai. Avdoot cried infront of Shlok to take care of her. Shlok assured them. In their marriage Jyoti too was present. She bcame very friendly with them. She also thanked Kalindi so much and cried in embrace of her. Shlok consoled her and Anjali too. Shlok was confused y is she crying for just moving from one house to other and that too not too far haan ladkiyaan for every question there is an answer by girls or from girls or the girls itself. He smiled for that. Avdoot was very happy for her. Avdoot also thanked Ankush for everything. Aastha also thanked Ankush a lot.


Everything was done beautifully Ankush also got a job offer in some MNC. In AM they welcomed Aastha with all rituals. Niranjan was also very happy for his son. Anjali cant express her happiness. She was in tears all the time. Sojal used to console her. Shlok and Aastha were very tired. Aastha was still looking dull. She didn't go to his room.


She went to Anjali "Aai aap kya kar rahi hain." Anjali was wiping her tears and saw at her smiling. Anjali "kuch nahi beta kya chahiye tumhe mere bachchi ab bahu hogayi." Aastha "nahi aai aap hamesha meri aai hi hogi." Aastha "aai ek baat karni hain kya aap log I mean will u ppl ..." Anjali "kya hua beta bolo." Aastha "I mean do u ppl.." and she drank some water.


Anjali "Aastha don't ever hesitate to ask me anything." Sojal came in and said "Kuch nahi Aai she was asking me whether u ppl allow her to go to office daily." Anjali saw at her seriously and said "nahi Aastha aisa sochna bhi mat nai nai shaadi hui u want to go to work and Agnihotri bahu wont work at all samajla." Aastha disappointingly nodded looking down.


Anjali saw Sojal and laughed out loudly "mere bachchi u can go wenever u want but not so soon haan after somedays k." Aastha again cheerfully nodded and said "not bad aai aap bhi majak karte hain chalo main jaake nahan lethi hoon bohut tired hoon main." And she left. Sojal "Aai bohut achchi couple hain ye dono."


Anjali "haan Sojal kisi ki najar na lage haan Sojal did u pack all those clothes." Sojal "haan Aai aur Kavya so rahe hain isiliye main us room ka arrangement nahi hopaya shaam tak sab arrange hoga aur aap tension mat le main hoon na." Aastha went to Shlok's room. Shlok was working in his laptop. Aastha was tired and saw him and was surprised. Aastha "Haan Shlok r u not tired y r u working now leave it." And she took away the laptop.


Episode 31


Edited by Saibhargav - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
awesome update..
ankush telling shlok to talk to astha abt avdoot...
astha bursts at him..
shlok pacifies her...
finally astha agrees for getting avdoot out only on marriage date...
ashlok get married..
loved gauri-astha talk...
sumone is not happy with shlok getting married..
but his wife pacifies him..😆😆
continue soon..
thnks 4 d pm..

1 question..
is the villian sumone whom niru baba & shlok had destroyed.. or revealed his bad doings so now he is on revenge??
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Posted: 9 years ago
Thank you sai for this nice update
Who wants to get the revenge?
Waiting for next update and ashlok romance

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Posted: 9 years ago
hai,very nice update,waiting for the next one
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hai Sai gud evening yaar. Thanks for your update and pm
Thanks for giving me a superb reply for my comment yaar.
Thank u so much. Thank u thank you so much really yaar.
Sai u asked me to write an OS haan but I don't know Sai only I know to read and enjoy it.
There are so many guys like u r writing yaar. That's enough yaar.
I am really enjoying ashloks stories yaar. Who writes I like it. U rwa making a great effect on us yaar.
V will always wait to read ur updates Sai. Once again thank you so much yaarBR]Ankush calling shlok to tell astha to accept avdoots for their marriage waw Ankush u know how to make astha accept. Shlok also agreed that he will make astha understand.
Asthu came to his cabin shlok called her and made her sit on his lap and told her that he wants her father for their marriage. But astha got angry and she told no one is not thinking about her ad cried.
The consliing of shlok and making astha understanding everything was superb.
Arey astha v understand wat shlok said to u the y can't u haan. 😲
V know avdoot made mistakes but try to understand him also 😉
Arey Sai u entered one more new character Mr. Avinash. Arey waw he is working in shloks office and he said don't disturb the boss shlok because he is too busy. But shlok u caught him right time yaar otherwise there will be spread a gossip yaar. Waw Sai u r creating so many characters yaar. But reading this I want to ask u something is there any character name shernu in ur update yaar hahaha hahaha.
Just joking yaar. 👏
Arey before their marriage they can't see both together but they want to see. Its called love yaar.
Gauri and asthas chatting was superb. Arey gauri u r naughty u saw their kiss. And y asking astha how was it wat yaar . How can anyone tell about their romantic moments yaar. Its personal hahaha hahaha 😆
Some one r behind niranjan and shlok. Please sai don't separate ashlok. V won't like it yaar. Wat problems come don't make any wrong in ashloks life.
Sameer called someone and told about ashlok marriage.but the who is the second man Sameer talked.but his wife was a good character. Y done a nice job yaar I don't know who u r but I liked u so much yaar.
Ashlok was getting impatient because they can't talk but only sending mgs and mms waw.
Avdoot came with police protection. Arey asthu because of ur hero u agreed for that ur baba came for ur marriage henna nice yaar 👏 👏
Avdoot made the kanyadhan. Waw he apologized to everyone for his sins wat he made . ⭐️
Avdoot apologized astha but astha didn't look him or forgive him. She was stubborn. Arey shlok tried to make astha accept but she didn't. Y asthu.
I am not asking astha y Sai didn't u forgive avdoot yaar.hahaha.
Avdoot was happy and thanked shlok for saving astha.
Then the crying part it was nice. Every bride will cry . Its really very sad to see it.
Ankush got job in MNC. It is nice yaar.
Astha entered AM in all rituals. Hey jyothi came and Sai us jyothi married.
And astha y r u sad ur marriage is done henna.
Anjali and sojal teasing astha it was superb. So our ashlok will be always together thanks Sai.
And in their suhagarat but shlok is also working in home waw shlok 👏
Anyway Sai thanks for ur updates. I enjoyed it keep it up and continue soon.
Edited by sudhamadhu - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
So finally Ashlok marriage happened without any fuss. But God knows (obviously you) what's in store for them ahead. That phone calls are very strange indeed!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
Superb and amazing update
Surprised...finally they got married without any problems
Thank you😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
Nice Sai... I am happy they married
Is swati and his the villian...
Swati is still a mystery. Hope nothing wrong will happen to ashlok...
Shlok working on his wedding night... 🤣

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