Ashlok ff: Ye Dil Maange More updated Last Episode 50 - Page 56

Originally posted by: sudhamadhu

Hai Sai gud evening yaar. Thanks for your update and pm
Thanks for giving me a superb reply for my comment yaar.
Thank u so much. Thank u thank you so much really yaar.
Sai u asked me to write an OS haan but I don't know Sai only I know to read and enjoy it.
There are so many guys like u r writing yaar. That's enough yaar.
I am really enjoying ashloks stories yaar. Who writes I like it. U rwa making a great effect on us yaar.
Thanks a lot chechi i know u wil be my huge support all kudos to u for making such long comments and cheering me to write more all thanks to readers as well they encouraged me to do it
V will always wait to read ur updates Sai. Once again thank you so much yaarBR]Ankush calling shlok to tell astha to accept avdoots for their marriage waw Ankush u know how to make astha accept. Shlok also agreed that he will make astha understand.
Asthu came to his cabin shlok called her and made her sit on his lap and told her that he wants her father for their marriage. But astha got angry and she told no one is not thinking about her ad cried.
The consliing of shlok and making astha understanding everything was superb.
Arey astha v understand wat shlok said to u the y can't u haan. 😲
V know avdoot made mistakes but try to understand him also 😉
Arey Sai u entered one more new character Mr. Avinash. Arey waw he is working in shloks office and he said don't disturb the boss shlok because he is too busy. But shlok u caught him right time yaar otherwise there will be spread a gossip yaar. Waw Sai u r creating so many characters yaar. But reading this I want to ask u something is there any character name shernu in ur update yaar hahaha hahaha.
Just joking yaar. 👏
Arey Avinash matlab wo nahi hain kai aur hain dont think like that there is no shrenu in it samajla
Arey before their marriage they can't see both together but they want to see. Its called love yaar.
Gauri and asthas chatting was superb. Arey gauri u r naughty u saw their kiss. And y asking astha how was it wat yaar . How can anyone tell about their romantic moments yaar. Its personal hahaha hahaha 😆
Yes how can she lready aur Aastha is very shy u see wat she does in first night today she is really shy one and gauri kitni besharam hain Aastha ke saamne uski hi kiss ki baare main baat kar rahi hain
Some one r behind niranjan and shlok. Please sai don't separate ashlok. V won't like it yaar. Wat problems come don't make any wrong in ashloks life.
Sameer called someone and told about ashlok marriage.but the who is the second man Sameer talked.but his wife was a good character. Y done a nice job yaar I don't know who u r but I liked u so much yaar.
Yes u will know about her today she is nice but u have to know a lot more for that keep reading it dont go anywhere understood
Ashlok was getting impatient because they can't talk but only sending mgs and mms waw.
Avdoot came with police protection. Arey asthu because of ur hero u agreed for that ur baba came for ur marriage henna nice yaar 👏 👏
Avdoot made the kanyadhan. Waw he apologized to everyone for his sins wat he made . ⭐️
Avdoot apologized astha but astha didn't look him or forgive him. She was stubborn. Arey shlok tried to make astha accept but she didn't. Y asthu.
I am not asking astha y Sai didn't u forgive avdoot yaar.hahaha.
arey yaar not me astha has to forgive him yaar u should think like that k aastha only knows how she suffered those days so she was still in dilemma dont worry k
Avdoot was happy and thanked shlok for saving astha.
Then the crying part it was nice. Every bride will cry . Its really very sad to see it.
Ankush got job in MNC. It is nice yaar.
Astha entered AM in all rituals. Hey jyothi came and Sai us jyothi married.
And astha y r u sad ur marriage is done henna.
Anjali and sojal teasing astha it was superb. So our ashlok will be always together thanks Sai.
And in their suhagarat but shlok is also working in home waw shlok 👏
Anyway Sai thanks for ur updates. I enjoyed it keep it up and continue soon.

Episode 31

Shlok "Aastha ye tum kya kar rahi hain important kaam hain." Aastha "haan haan main jaanti hoon wo Mumbai ki instituitions ka hain na I already talked with him yesterday in function he said he will wait for sometime no worries chalo rest for sometime." Shlok "arey wa mere pyaari si biwi mera kaam kam kiya chalo theek hain areyy kaha jaa rahe hain."

Aastha "kuch nahi Shlok I m very tired I want to sleep I will change my dress and will come u wait here." Shlok "arey wait me too have to change this sherwani will suck my energy come lets change simultaneously." Aastha "haan besharam ladka jaao tum main change karke aati hoon." Shlok "arey arey Aastha.. hmm madam bohut shaan hain kuch karna padega iski tej ko brake lagana hain."

Aastha came and tried to sleep on the bed. Shlok saw her "arey tum kya kar rahe ho tumne time dekha abhi." Aastha "Shlok pls I m tired mujhe bohut neend aa rahi hain if u disturb me now I will shout loudly pls go now." Shlok "haan haan so jao jitna sona hain abi so jao kyun ki raat ko tum bachne nahi vala tum nahi sogi raat ko." Aastha "haan chiii bohut badmaash hogayi tum Shlok bohut badmaash hogayi jao abhi." And he left her.

Aastha had a sound sleep after a hectic week. At dinner Shlok came and woke up her. Aastha suddenly woke up and saw here and there "kya hua kya hua.." She saw everything strange then she realised she was married. She slowly looked at him with tearful eyes. Shlok "Aastha kya hua kyun ro rahi hoon."

Aastha "thought I m still in my home." Shlok "Aastha tum theek tho ho." Aastha simply got up and hugged "If u r by my side wat happens to me." Shlok "chalo khana tayaar hain." Aastha was shocked "Kya raat hogayi arey tumne mujhe uthaya kyun nahi." Shlok "arey u said u r tired so I didn't wake u." Aastha "Shlok tum bhi na pata nahi sab kya soch rahi he mere bare main u don't know anything Shlok appki vaje se late hua." Shlok was shocked wat did he do now. And she left quickly.

Aastha came down running saying "sorry sorry sorry aai I don't know wen I slept.." Anjali "Aastha Aastha slowly y r u running ago Aastha gir jaogi." Aastha came rushing "I m sorry aai I was very tired." Anjali "no pblm Aastha go and see how ur Baba is still sleeping no pblm come and sit khana tayar hain aur pehle Shlok ko bulao." Aastha "haan." And she got up and turned to see Shlok there.

Aastha "aai Shlok aagaya Kavya come here." Kavya came to her smiling and sat on her lap. Aastha "Kavya aaj tumhari chachi tumhe khana khilaogi teek hain." Kavya "nahi I wont eat except u promise me that u wil tell story today." Aastha "oho meri cutie Kavya teek hain I will tell u don't worry ab khao." Shlok too sat there. At the end of the story Shlok spat the water out from his mouth.

Aastha "Shlok kya hua." Shlok "kitni bakvaas story hain ye." Aastha "arey bhai Kavya ko achchi lagi hain na Kavya." Kavya nodded cheerfully. Shlok "tumhare saath rahungi tho Kavya bhi pagal hojayenge chalo Kavya mere tab main games khelte hain ham." And he took her with him. Aastha saw at him angrily. Anjali "achcha Aastha ab tum khalo." Sojal and Jyoti too laughed. Jyoti "vahini aap bhi bilkul Kavya ki tarah hi hain aai aaj se hamare ghar main do bachchi hain ye kya kah rahi thi."

Varad "Kya ho raha hain kyun Aastha ko tang kar raha hain aap log." Aastha "dekh Dada sab log mera tane maar rahe hain aap mera side hain na." Varad "haan Aastha kyun nahi lekin eat first see ur plate and u should not be this childish too aaj aap logo ki SR hain Shlok intejaar kar rahe hi honge." Aastha was stunned and saw at him shocked and blushed and looked down. Everyone laughed again. Aastha was feared a lot. Aastha rarely touched food ate less. She was going to her room. At the same time Kavya came out and said gud bye to her new chachi.

Niranjan and Anjali were in their lost somewhere. Niranjan "kya soch rahi hain Anjali." Anjali "kuch nahi Sahab soch rahi ki Shlok ko shaadi hi nahi hoga lekin Aastha jaisi achchi dil ki ladki mila usko aur kya chahiye itni matches ke baad Shlok ka shaadi hui shayad Aastha aur Shlok ek hone keliye ye saare marriages cancel hua uska.." Niranjan "haan Anjali tum sahi hi kah rahe ho lekin main soch raha hain ki agr aaj Govardan hain tho....."

Anjali frowned at him suddenly she then realised him wat he must be going through. Anjali "sahab don't worry wo oopar se sab dekh rahe hain aap Agnihotri Institions ko itni achchi se dekh rahe hain wo uska aatma jaroor khush honge." Niranjan "lekin main ... teek hain teek hain Anjali ab bohut raat hogayi chalo so jaate hain." Anjali knew he doesn't want to show his grief to him. Niranjan pretended sleeping and was thinking of the accident which changed his entire life.

Aastha went in with nervousness. She saw all the decoration this made her more nervous she doesn't know y is she nervous but she is feared really feared her heart raced 1000mph. Her hands were shaking. At the same time Shlok came out from washroom. He saw Aastha staring at decorations. Shlok saw her and approached her. Aastha looked him and was worried even more. Shlok didn't go near her he went to door and locked it.

Aastha was feared even more "aap..." and she gulped. Shlok came near her. She was really feared so much for wat has to come. Shlok came near her and held her face. Aastha suddenly blurted out "Shlok dar lag raha hain mujhe bohut dar lag raha hain." Shlok "Kya!!" She saw his confusion and hugged him and said "bohut dar lag raha hain Shlok pls." and she sobbed a little.

Shlok "Aastha Aastha ya hua kyun ro rahi hoon." Shlok was shocked and confused. Aastha "pata nahi Shlok bohut dar lag raha hain mujhe pls aap.." Shlok "achcha teek hain yaha baitho pehle." Aastha sat on bed. Shlok got water to her. Aastha drank everything in one gulp. Shlok "kya hua Aastha ab batao mujhe I will do whatever u say."

Aastha saw him with tearful eyes. Aastha "Shlok aaj... Aaj wo.." Shlok "bolo Aastha kya pblm hain." Aastha again got up and hugged him "I m sorry I m sorry Shlok mujhe dar lag raha hain pls aap samaj lijiye I m still a small girl Shlok I cant pls mujhe thoda vakt dijiye pls." and she sobbed a little. Shlok now understood "Aastha Aastha chup hojao dekho meri taraf dekho." And he made her to look him.

Shlok held her face in his palms. Aastha saw him with tearful eyes. Shlok "Aastha don't cry u don't need to say sorry I can understand even it is first time for me k now we will take it slow k ab tum mat ro hamesha tum rote hua achcha nahi lagta mere liye ab haso pls mere liye." Aastha smiled in tears and hugged him tightly and said "I love u Shlok I love u so much." Shlok "Love u too Aastha love u too."

Shlok "chalo ab kal se office jaana shuru karna hain mujhe bhi neend aa raha hain."Aastha "chalo." Both slept on bed. Aastha "Shlok I cant come to office for few days I have to learn house work then I definitely will come after wards." Shlok "achcha teek hain." Aastha was hugging tightly. Shlok "Aastha kya hua y r u fearing that much haan." Aastha "R u not angry at me." Shlok "hmm u r still stuck in that wat will u do if I say I m angry haan." Aastha "Shlok pls don't say like that." And she hugged him even tighter.

Shlok suddenly turned to her and came near her "hmm atleast kiss tho kar sakte hain na nahi tho uski bhi permission..." She didn't let him complete the sentence pulled him quickly and kissed him impatiently. Shlok too kissed her hard and came on top of her. Both were kissing each other ferociously. Shlok was losing control he came down and gave wet kisses on her neck. She arched. His hands were exploring her.

Wen he touched her breasts. She came to earth and stilled a minute. Shlok understood and smiled at her and just gave a peck on her lips and rolled away and said "don't worry I keep my promises at any cost." Aastha looked at him shyly and hugged him tightly and said "thanks a lot." Shlok "Aastha sleep now u r making me difficult to keep my promise." Aastha bet him on shoulder and slept peacefully.

Next morning both of them woke up at the same time. Shlok saw her in his arms. Both smiled at each other. Aastha "Shlok bas mujhe kuch nahi chahiye har subah I have to wake up like this promise me Shlok u will never leave me." Shlok "nahi baby ham dono ek hain how can we part haan aaj ke baad aisa kabhi mat kahna k." and he kissed her on forehead.

Aastha smiled and kissed him on his nose. She smiled and got away. She got ready and also warned him to get ready soon so she will make breakfast. Shlok got up after she got ready. Aastha went down and saw all of them in the hall. She went to them and said gud morning to hall. Niranjan "gud morning beta." And she took blessings of all. Aastha went to kitchen followed by Anjali and Sojal.

Anjali "Aastha today u have took everything and also u have to make sweat for Shlok k now start everything fast." Aastha "theek hain aai lekin u have to tell me everything about ur tastes wat do u eat I will make something special today aap chinta mat kijiye sab main dekhlungi." Varad and Niranjan were reading news paper. Kavya came running to her new chachi.

Sojal "Kavya didn't u get ready yet haan chalo kitni baar kah chuki hoon ye pagal ladki ko." Aastha saw them and started her battle with all the items. Anjali was there to guide her. Aastha was always smiling. She never thought she would be this much happier in her life. That's a god gave gift for her. Shlok bcame everything to her slowly. Aastha made everything and took the dishes to dining table. Every one tasted it and praised.

Varad "Aai u take rest from now we r bored of ur food let Aastha take some charge" and everyone smiled. Shlok ate everything silently. Varad "Kya hain Shlok don't u praise her." Shlok smiled at him and said "u don't know now if I praise her she will go on asking daily." And then Shlok and Aastha left to their room.

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He woke up slowly and found ceiling. He suddenly got up. His wife came to him and stopped "aaram se aaram se sambhal liye." He "ye kya hua mujhe aise kaise so gaya main ne aur Shlok ka shaadi." His wife "pehle aap shaant hojayiye aur dawayiya lelo." He angrily got up and called Sameer. He came to know he married finally.

He angrily threw phone and shouted "haaa Shlok Agnihotri itni mehnat karke saare marriages cancel kiya iss baar kaise miss hua Shlok Agnihotri u r gonna pay for this." His wife "shaant hojayiye aap pls shaant hojayiye pls." and then he thought agar main hosh main hain tho ye nahi hoga iska matlab and he thought she giving lemon juice after that nothing he was jus asleep and he caught her tightly gripping her at her hands tightly "kya kiya tumne batao mujhe kya kiya tumne haaan us lemon juice main kya tha." She really cant see him like this at all with tears in her eyes "main kuch nahi kiya abi doctor aaya kah rahe hain ki aapko low BP hain isiliye aapne hosh kho chuke hain chodiye mujhe pls dard ho rahi hain."

He saw her tear eyes and left her and faced aside and slowly murmured sorry. His wife "pls aap aisa kyun kar rahe hain kya un logo ko kyun nahi chod sakte ham ab khush khush hain na tho fir kyun un logo ko itni takleef dena chaha." He "don't talk about it to me as u know everything pls leave me for sometime."

She saw him and left him. He called other persn and said make it soon and also warned him that his mother will be fed only 2 times a day. He fearfully said "pls aayi ko kuch mat kijiye ye kaam almost hogaya pls aap kuch mat kijiye main aaplogo ko phone karta hon k tab aap log action le sakte hain." He cut the call and thought ab dekhlena aap sab logo ki kya haal hoga and thought jaldi hi aap log jawab dena hi hain.

Episode 32

Originally posted by: sudhamadhu

Hai Sai gud evening. Thanks for ur updates and pm. Thank u so much yaar for giving a lovely reply for my comments yaar. U know now I am waiting for updates and same curious to read ur reply for our comments yaar. Really I have no words to tell what I felt when I read ur updates and same my comments. Once again thanks yaar 👏 👏
Arey yesterday astha took the laptop from shlok. Now shlok us asking wat is she doing. He has to do some work. Arey waw astha u already done the work waw superb. Mumbai institutions Ki kam she done it. That's our asthu. Now shlok u want to learn from ur baby doll.
She us tired and she wants to change arey shlok u r so naughty hahaha. She wants to sleep but shlok u allowed her but his words made naughty. 👏 😛 😉 Yes our astha said the truth really shlok is badmaashi. And u also is naughty.
U want to sleep at evening and u will shout loudly when shlok come to u arey asthu no one will come yaar hahaha
Astha was sound sleep. She was so tired. Shlok didn't wake up her. But at night he called her for dinner the part was so nice because first she didn't realize the place.

now she understand where she is and hugged him and cried. Really she was so innocent henna. I liked their talking it was superb.
Astha went to down calling Anjali and saying sorry but Anjali only smiled and told her to call shlok but he came down. Arey Kavya and asthu's chatting was super. Then the teasing part it was an excellent script yaar. Sai u r an excellent writer.Arey only varad was with astha and everyone was laughing at her really enjoyed that part.varad told about suhagarat it made astha blushing really y r u afraid it is ur shlok henna.when she entered the bedroom her reactions was nice. It remembered our show back. When shlok started loving astha he decorated his room with rose petals henna. In the show that part was also nice. She asking water to avoid the intimacy waw how to describe our shloks chemistry.