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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: sudhamadhu

Hai Sai gud morning. Thanks for ur updates pm and ur sweet reply yaar.
U always makes us so curious at last part. Because of that v r waiting to know wat will be next.
I am not praising u. Really u r an excellent writer Sai.
Shlok once again touching her nose and telling her she is cute waw 😉
She is blushing 😉 . But when they r together there will be romance really cute. Sai u r creating the magical chemistry between ashlok once again. Thanks dear. 👏
Then our cute Kavya's entry and shlok witness the two small adorable child chatting and smile.
He can't take eyes from both they r tickling and laughing it was the nice part enjoyed that part yaar.
Arey because of shlok there will be an accident. But astha saw the vehicle right time and shouted.
Shlok always don't look astha . 😉
Astha's head hit on the cars front side it got bleeding. He took her the hospital.
Arey Kavya u r right. Really ur chachu is a akdu hahaha 😛 [BR
Hey Sai u entered two new characters in the story Kamal and Sameer. Sameer is the boss of Kamal
But there is an another boss for them. I think Kamal tried to hit shloks car. Anyway it is scaring yaar.

Shlok took her the hospital seeing hospital kavya's speech was so cute.
And astha u scolding shlok it was superb arey asthu u asked where is his concentration and who gave him the license. Arey astha how can he concentrate in driving because u r with him and u r playing with cute Kavya. 😛
Astha know driving it was a shock for not shlok only it was ours too.waw 👏
They came to AM seeing this Anjali worried and scolded her to driving scooty and told shlok to pick up daily. Arey Anjali already shlok is the driver of asthu. Hahaha. But when she knew that accident is done because of shlok she scolded him but asthu told leave it and she is hungry arey waw she can't hear anyone scolding her prince waw superb
After lunch coming back to office he asked when did she took her belongs from guest house. V know for y he asked he wants to know about that day who kissed him. But our drama queen is nautanki henna haha.
That day she got bored but our hero was enjoying his princess waw.
Sai what to tell yaar.
Anjali invited astha's family for dinner and astha she is in cloud 9. Ankush ur guess is right astha wore the saree for her prince yaar. Kavya camee to astha but astha's eyes were searching shlok waw. He came down butt he got stunned because astha looks gorgeous like an angel from heaven. Waaw.
Their sitting position and shlok touches her feet purposely . Hmmm some one will see yaar.
After dinner shlok called her to finish the work. Arey shlok this is not office. It is house yaar.
Kalindi wat r u doing going to fix astha's marriage it will be only with shlok. Ankush and everyone got shock.
Haha again rat came. But of rat there v will witness their romance yes. The last part superb. V enjoyed ur ff so much Sai. Because of u like people who writing stories is ashlok v r happy.
Sai keep writing always like this.
Trust u m continue soon.

thanks a lot chechi
i feel so glad to read ur comments
so encouraging they r
anyway dont praise me so much jus wrote wat i felt
hope u liked it and keep supporting me like this
once again thanks a lot chechi 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Saibhargav


thank u didi 😉
hmm will try to write more on them
accident?? hmm will know later as i said everything will be answered
Akhil!! hmm lets wait and watch
thanks a lot didi hope u keep supporting me like this throughout this ff
pleasure is mine 😳


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Posted: 9 years ago

Episode 26


Shlok rubbed her lips with his thumb. Aastha moaned for his care. She left a sigh which made him smell her scent he was just few millimetres away from him. Shlok "Do u know how beautiful u are meri Aasthu." and saw her lips. He lost the little balance he has. That smell made him animal. He thought he would die if he wont kiss her. He thought hell with traditions and just brought her closer with his hand on waist and just kissed her madly. Aastha too gave in within seconds. Shlok again caressed her bare tummy which sent shivers.


Aastha kept her hands in his hair and she too started kissing him. Shlok swept his tongue into her mouth and sucking her scent. This was vigorous. Aastha too invaded his mouth. They were tasting each other for how many minutes god knows. Shlok bcame impatient. He left her mouth and came down and gave wet kisses on her neck. He also caressed her navel. Aastha want to stop but she came back to her senses after he left her mouth and stopped him from going further.


Shlok was shocked for wat he just did. He was going to speak but Aastha stopped him "Shlok ye sab friend ke saath tho nahi kar sakte just think a lot b4 u do anything I know wat u might be feeling now but I know ur intention Shlok I know wat u r feeling I just want to listen it from u I will wait for my life time pata nahi ye sab kab hua kaise hua lekin meri jindagi tumhare halava kisi ko nahi de sakti hoon main." And she again kissed him and left him.


Shlok was beyond the shock not for kissing her but he felt this was second time. He knows he already tasted her sometime, wen he thought aur ye kya baat kar rahe hain mujhse pyaar karte hain. He ran his hand through his hair its true he want to be always with Aastha wants to see her face but wen did this matter went too far without his knowledge. Aastha came out breathing heavily and just rubbed her lips. She again went into his room and said to rub his lips. Shlok saw in the mirror. Aastha was shy she quickly ran out but something got her attention.


She quickly went into that room lifting her saree like a cat. She slowly entered his study room. She saw each and every thing. She went to a diary and opened it. It was full of his love but not for her it was for someone else but y did he preserve this until now she gone through all those. A lone tear escaped her eye.


Kya ye ab bhi us ladki se pyaar karta hain kya she recalled those words Kavya said wen he brought her iski shaadi toot gayi matlab kya ho sakta hain then y did he kiss me yes he feels for me but y didn't he confess yet does he just enjoying me nahi Shlok aisa nahi hain lekin I think he needs some space to think about this but she saw his pure love in all this kachra he never did like this to her I think he still doesn't think that he loves me but us din haan in the drunken state he spat the truth but I think he needs some more time to confess he is not a bad person he wont do like that he cant kiss me if he loves someone suddenly Kalindi called her.


Aastha put all the material there itself and went away. She didn't look at him again. Aastha came to her Aai. Anjali caressed her hair and said "hamesha khush raho beta." And she gave her bangle to her. Aastha saw towards Kalindi. She nodded to take. Aastha took it and said thanks. While leaving Kalindi again reminded them to come the next day. Aastha was confused y wat happened is there any special tomorrow. Anjali nodded. After they left Niranjan left to his room. Anjali too felt disappointed a lot.


Aastha and Kalindi went to her home. Aastha was asking "Aai y did u ask them to come to our house tomorrow is there any special kya hain aai." Kalindi caressed her head and said "u will know u come from office early k that's it." Aastha didn't ask much she was in dilemma. She was lost in her thoughts. Ankush came to her and said "didi r u k." Aastha nodded no. Ankush "kya." Aastha "kuch nahi bhai just leave me for sometime mujhe akele chod de."


Ankush thought isse kya hua does she know about this proposal. Aastha went to her room and sat on bed. She felt heavy and got up and changed her dress. Aastha just lied on the bed and thinking about him y haan y cant he accept his feelings akdu kahi ka kai ye mujhse shaadi nahi karogi kya she immediately got up thinking about that she got sweat even the thought of it she would kill him if he wont.


Shlok too is in his own dilemma how could he just kiss her he didn't feel anything wrong from wen this attraction overtook his arrogance. He didn't think all that he was thinking did he kiss her first time no he also kissed her b4 he thought that night Aastha might have come there I was drunk oh god did I go all the way nahi she wont do that she couldn't be that happier if he and that means she changed my dress that means I kissed her on that day she might have understood or did I say something on that day is that wat she is saying oh god how to know wat to do now he was recalling wat she just said she loves him damn it wat does he need haan she said it he is the only one can have her.


He tossed his bed and also thought how beautiful wen he kissed her how beautiful she is hmm she is gonna kill me one day hmm lagta hain Baba se baat karna hain this went too far he smiled to himself hmm Aastha kuch to hain tumhare saath hmmm will baba accept me and Aastha kal dekhoonga tumko ready hojao Aastha.


Anjali "kyun Sahab kyun ho raha hain Shlok ke saath aisa kyun every match had been broken till now y Sahab kya galat kiya Shlok ne Sahab ek baar ham pandit ji se milna hain kyun Shlok ko shaadi nahi ho raha hain." Niranajn "Anjali Anjali mat ro sab kuch theek hoga y do u lose hopes haan Aastha might not know about it lets wait no problem don't worry."


Next morning Aastha woke up with most difficulty and got ready to go to office. She was thinking how could she face him. She slowly ate something and went on her scooty. She was slow wat would he say now she was fearing a lot. Shlok too was in dilemma wat to do now arey wat is his problem yaar he cant understand it he cant be without seeing her he is restless if he cant touch her atleast once he wants to hear her voice he wants to see her face but wat is stopping him.


He was travelling and again saw those couple roaming in the car next to him. His blood boiled by seeing her. How dare her how dare her to leave him like that how could she just use him. He increased his grip on the steering wheel then green signal was asking him to leave. He went to office angrily and parked the car and turned to see Aastha. They had an eye lock.


Shlok was the first one to move away. Aastha didn't understand him. Wat to do she thought wat will he do now does he reject me she herself saw into the mirror. She was fine slowly she entered her cabin. Aastha sat slowly in her cabin and just leaned her head back. She was feeling tensed. Slowly she woke up and went to his cabin without knocking. He is angry very angry.


Shlok saw her without expression. Aastha "Shlok ye file..." Shlok stopped her and said "Address me Shlok Sir this is not ur house and wenever u come next time pls knock the door understand." Aastha was shocked this was the least she expected y is he talking like this wat happened to him does he mean refusing her proposal.


Slowly tears started in her eyes. She controlled it and said "Sorry... Sir I wont repeat it again I m sorry I need sign on this file Sir." He took it and signed and said her leave him alone for sometime. Aastha cant hold it anymore. She just left and entered her cabin and cried a lot y y is he doing like this kya hua isko kyun kar rahe hain aisa.


Shlok was having headache he cant let go off his thoughts. He was recalling each and every word. He just got up and pacing here and there in his room. He was very angry he took the vase and broke it down. Aastha listened it bcoz her room was next to his. She got up wiped her tears and went to his cabin. She was hell shocked she never saw him like that. She immediately strode into his cabin and saw all that and saw his hand was bleeding.


She immediately took his hand and was going to tie her kerchief. Shlok shouted at her "I said to not disturb me don't u understand." Aastha cant take anymore and shouted "bas bas bohut hogaya tumhara drama ek aur shabd nahi samje aap." And she tied her kerchief to him. Niranjan came there. Niranjan saw all the trash and asked him and saw Aastha tying knot to his hand. Aastha's tears were not stopping.


Niranjan "kya hua beta kya hain ye sab." Aastha saw him with tearful. She immediately went away. Niranjan "Shlok kya hain ye sab aur Aastha kyun ro rahi hain kai uske saath kuch galat baate kiya hain kya." Shlok "nahi Baba pls leave me alone for sometime." Niranjan saw him keenly and went away. Aastha cant hold her tears she cant be there ye kya ho raha hain ye mujhse pyaar karta hain aur ye sab kya hain kyun kar rahe hain ye sab.


She doesn't want to be there. She just went into his cabin crying and said to him "Shlok kya hua Shlok aap aisa kyun kar rahe hain u don't need to bear me at all, all I want is just to be with u all the time Shlok don't know y u don't even need to talk to me nicely kya kam hain mujh main u don't even need to say I love u u don't even need to do all those wat both couples does u don't even need to take me to film at all u don't even need to buy anything for me I just want to be with u all the time Shlok lekin aap maanthe hi nahi meri galti hain aap pe viswaas rakh ke baitha kai na kai aap mujhse pyaar karte hain I m sorry I m sorry Shlok...Sir gud Bye Sir I will not disturb u again." And she left his cabin. Shlok was going to say sorry to her he thought bevaja use daant diya lekin ye hmm ab isse manana hoga but she vanished.

Episode 27

Edited by Saibhargav - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hai Sai gud evening yaar. Thanks for your update pm & reply for comments.
V r really blessed because v got a such so much writer's like u. U people are doing a great job.
V r enjoying ur all ff ss & os.
Ur all stories means always Ashlok will be together.
That means Ashlok forever.
Thanks guys who ever writing stories a big Clapp for everyone. 👏 👏.
Shloks and astha's closeness took them to another world. They are equally affected by other person.
They two want to stay like that astha came back. Then she asked to shlok wat is this and she told the truth. Really she said the right henna did a friends kiss like this no only lovers or husband and wife.
Think shlok who r u to her. She also confessed to him she only love him and wait for him. 😉
Shlok under that he kissed her before but don't know when.
Astha got shloks dairy and she read it she felt crying because she thought if shlok loved his past then y did he kissed her. She was confused
She thought to give some time for him to realise wats happening arey waw astha superb.

Astha came to the hall Anjali gave bangles 😉
Kalindi invited them to their home tomorrow.
Astha asked y but kalindi didn't telll 😡
Ankush was confused by astha's behaviour.
She was thinking did he love her. Will he marry her.
If he didn't she will kill him hahaha.. 👏
Shlok was also confusion he understand that he kissed her before. She said that she loves him.
Now he also want to live with her.
He decided to talk to his baba about astha arey waw nice yaar. 👏
Niranjan and Anjali's talk was nice.
Niranjan has full confidence in shlok and astha. He know they will be one. So he told to Anjali to be cool.
Next morning astha went to office in scooty.
Shlok also went to office.
But on the way he saw a couples in car.
It boilled his blood. That means it is Swati. Really Swati v hate u 😡
Because of u astha cried today. 😭
Astha went to his cabin and called shlok but shlok said to call shloksir and she gave the file to sign.
He said to leave. She was sad she didn't know y she thinked he is refusing her proposel.
Next time when she heard the voice she went to his cabin. He shouted to her but she also didn't go back she also shouted and tied his hand with her kerchief. Waw asthu.
Niranjan came and asked butt shlok didn't say anything.
Asthu was crying and Sai wat r y doing. Y did u make astha to go away from him haan.
Really for this I am angry at u and she also crying. U promised us u will not make astha crying again 😡 .
The last part was too sad yaar.
Anyway Sai enjoyed ur update.
Keep it up and rocking.
V r waiting. Continue soon...
Edited by sudhamadhu - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
nice...
astha confessed.. twice..
but shlok...😡
he is in delima...
but now wat..
kalindi dint say anything to astha abt d proposal..
anjali - niru baba wanted to ask astha's hand for shlok.. but kalindi's plans stopped them..
astha upset..
shlok angry... does he know anything else than getting angry..
now wat wil shlok do...
hw wil astha react wwen she wil knw abt d alliance?
continue soon.
thnks 4 d pm..
Edited by coolhi1988 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Is this couple means swathi?
Why always shlok behaving rudely
Waiting for next update sai
Thank you
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Posted: 9 years ago
Great update, Shlok's in a dilemma, Aastha is confused... Wonder if Aastha will agree to the marriage out of frustration!!!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
Wow...superb update...
Waiting to know about..
Aastha's reaction about her marriage alliance
Thank you👍🏼
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Posted: 9 years ago
nice update sai.
anjali niru want to ask astha for shlok wow... but kalindi had other ideas wat now,
here shlok is in dilema n y cant he think normally always shows anger on who loves him.
now wat will do astha due his behaviour, may be take wrong decision in haste...no no she was our drama queen never do like akudu shlok hey na sai..
keep going...
waiting...

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: coolhi1988

nice...
astha confessed.. twice..
but shlok...😡
he is in delima...
but now wat..
kalindi dint say anything to astha abt d proposal..
anjali - niru baba wanted to ask astha's hand for shlok.. but kalindi's plans stopped them..
astha upset..
shlok angry... does he know anything else than getting angry..
now wat wil shlok do...
hw wil astha react wwen she wil knw abt d alliance?
continue soon.
thnks 4 d pm..

thank u didi
he is not in dilemna now he is sure he wants Aastha now
Hmm haha 😆 😆 hmm dont worry Shlok cant be a sweet and chocolate boy in my writings k but i can say from now he wont scold her k ek scene tha i wrote one but i edited jus for ur sake k now happy now no more scoldings k
thanks its my pleasure

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