Ashlok ff: Ye Dil Maange More updated Last Episode 50 - Page 49

Originally posted by: nadeeka1200

Is this couple means swathi?

Why always shlok behaving rudely

Waiting for next update sai

Thank you

yes it is Swatis couple
hmm wen did he behave rudely with her haan he was very soft in this ff except in first few parts i think u r thinking about SS
anyway thanks for ur comments

Originally posted by: rd0309

Great update, Shlok's in a dilemma, Aastha is confused... Wonder if Aastha will agree to the marriage out of frustration!!!!

thank u 😳
Shlok is not in dilemma he wants Aastha for sure
NOOO how could u think like that
anyway gud guess but i wont do like that k

Originally posted by: vaishux

Wow...superb update...

Waiting to know about..

Aastha's reaction about her marriage alliance

Thank you👍🏼

thank u 😳
will update today
U will know soon
pleasure is mine

Originally posted by: syvalini

nice update sai.

anjali niru want to ask astha for shlok wow... but kalindi had other ideas wat now,

here shlok is in dilema n y cant he think normally always shows anger on who loves him.

now wat will do astha due his behaviour, may be take wrong decision in haste...no no she was our drama queen never do like akudu shlok hey na sai..

keep going...

waiting...

thank u akki
Shlok is not in dilemma yaar he wants Aastha for sure u will know that wait and watch
Hmm yes Aastha is not like our akdu Shlok dont worry
thanks for ur support

Originally posted by: sudhamadhu

Hai Sai gud evening yaar. Thanks for your update pm & reply for comments.
V r really blessed because v got a such so much writer's like u. U people are doing a great job.
V r enjoying ur all ff ss & os.
Ur all stories means always Ashlok will be together.
That means Ashlok forever.
Thanks guys who ever writing stories a big Clapp for everyone. 👏 👏.
Shloks and astha's closeness took them to another world. They are equally affected by other person.
They two want to stay like that astha came back. Then she asked to shlok wat is this and she told the truth. Really she said the right henna did a friends kiss like this no only lovers or husband and wife.
Think shlok who r u to her. She also confessed to him she only love him and wait for him. 😉
Shlok under that he kissed her before but don't know when.
Astha got shloks dairy and she read it she felt crying because she thought if shlok loved his past then y did he kissed her. She was confused
She thought to give some time for him to realise wats happening arey waw astha superb.

Astha came to the hall Anjali gave bangles 😉
Kalindi invited them to their home tomorrow.
Astha asked y but kalindi didn't telll 😡
Ankush was confused by astha's behaviour.
She was thinking did he love her. Will he marry her.
If he didn't she will kill him hahaha.. 👏
Shlok was also confusion he understand that he kissed her before. She said that she loves him.
Now he also want to live with her.
He decided to talk to his baba about astha arey waw nice yaar. 👏
Niranjan and Anjali's talk was nice.
Niranjan has full confidence in shlok and astha. He know they will be one. So he told to Anjali to be cool.
Next morning astha went to office in scooty.
Shlok also went to office.
But on the way he saw a couples in car.
It boilled his blood. That means it is Swati. Really Swati v hate u 😡
Because of u astha cried today. 😭
Astha went to his cabin and called shlok but shlok said to call shloksir and she gave the file to sign.
He said to leave. She was sad she didn't know y she thinked he is refusing her proposel.
Next time when she heard the voice she went to his cabin. He shouted to her but she also didn't go back she also shouted and tied his hand with her kerchief. Waw asthu.
Niranjan came and asked butt shlok didn't say anything.
Asthu was crying and Sai wat r y doing. Y did u make astha to go away from him haan.
Really for this I am angry at u and she also crying. U promised us u will not make astha crying again 😡 .
The last part was too sad yaar.
Anyway Sai enjoyed ur update.
Keep it up and rocking.
V r waiting. Continue soon...

thanks a lot chechi u wrote it beautifully

Episode 27

Shlok just stared at her. She went to a park where she shed all her tears. She just lost herself and cried out loudly. Shlok too was hurt by her words. There is a limit to akdu for everything there is a limit. Y cant he just accept or doesn't he want to be with me then y he said he doesn't want me to leave him y did he y did he and she cried again. Slowly she got up and took her hand bag and left to her home.

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Him through phone "teek hain teek hain achcha hua accident nahi hua agar accident hua tho Shlok ek hi second main mar jaayega don't worry I want him to rot in hell vaise bhi plan B hain na Bhairav ko bola na sab." Sameer "haan Sir Bhairav ko sab kuch bataya K Sir leki kaam keliye paise." Him "koi paise nahi milne vaala hain baad main milega bye."

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She wiped her tears and went away. Slowly she parked her scooty and saw Scorpio infront of her house. She was surprised. Aastha went to her home quietly. She went in and saw some ppl were sitting on sofa. She also saw her Aai. Kalindi "arey Aastha u came so early anyway aap dekhiye na yahi hain meri beti Aastha." Bridegroom keenly saw her. Aastha saw at them confusingly.

Niranjan and Anjali were also present. Aastha "Aai kaun hain ye log." Kalindi dragged her to kitchen and explained her everything. Aastha was shocked. Aastha "Aai aap itni badi baat mujhe kyun nahi bataya main nahi aaongi aap jo karna hain karlijiye aai mujhse kyun nahi bataya pehle aap pagal hogayi kya main nahi aaongi do whatever u want main jaa rahi hoon." Anjali came there.

Aastha "Aai aap dekhiye bina bataye ye sab kya hain." Anjali was surprised "Kalindi didn't u say to Aastha." Kalindi "nahi wo main jaroor nahi samja I thought she accepts whatever I choose for her." Niranjan from out "Anjali.." Anjali "dekho aisa mat kaho first come and see him then u decide whatever u want but don't disrespect ur mother infront of them k."

Aastha "Aai aap bhi." Ankush "haaan didi first go there they all r waiting for u u can say decision later no pblm." Aastha nodded.

All three of them went to hall. Aastha was with tearful eyes. She excused herself and went to her room and cried a lot. Niranjan too didn't like it, he was thinking about Shlok. Anjali saw him. Kalindi called Aastha again. She wiped her tears and went down. He saw her keenly again.

Bhairav Kumar is the bridegroom he saw her and said "I want to talk with her." Kalindi smiled and said Aastha to take him to her room. Aastha hesitatingly took him to her room. Aastha went in. Bhairav "Hmmm tum ho Aastha I didn't know that u r Aastha k I will come to the point u don't like this proposal or do u."

Aastha nodded a no. Bhairav "Well y m I not surprised I know about u haan u r the girl right..." Aastha "Kya wat r u talking mujhe kuch samaj main nahi aa raha hain." Bhairav "don't act smart I know about u, u were the one held as hostage by him right." Aastha was shocked "ye aap kya baat..."

Bhairav raised his hand implying her to stop "I said don't act smart u were held as hostage by ur ex boy friend haan or did he get bored in bed haan u were 7 days and 7 nights in his guest house and wat can we expect from such a cheap girl is there anything left in exploring him haan and u r acting innocent here I know ladies lik...."

She didn't let complete the sentence a huge blow crossed his cheek. Aastha "How dare u how dare u insult me haan u cheap." And she cried again and ran from there and ran down and hugged her mother and cried a lot. Kalindi "Aastha kya hua beti kya hua.." Everyone stood up. Anjali "Aastha kya hua bolo."

Bhairav came there and shouted there "Baba lets go from here u brought this proposal to me I cant believe u do u even know her character she was with someone else's guest house for 7days how could u let me marry with such a cheap girl haan." Niranjan yelled "Bas ek aur shabd nahi samje tum wo guest house mera hain aur wo mera bachcha Shlok Agnihotri don't ever dare to say against us samje tum I will see how u will survive in Pune."

There was a lot of heat words exchange between them atlast Niranjan bet Bhairav and threw them out of the house. Aastha was still crying holding her mother. Kalindi "Aastha mat ro." Anjali doesn't know how to console. Anjali "Aastha beti mat ro." Aastha "aap log kuch nahi jaante." And she went to her room and cried a lot.

Niranjan "mujhe maaf kijiye Kalindi hamari vaje se.." Kalindi "nahi nahi Niranjan ji infact I should thank u I came to know him exactly he is not suitable to Aastha chodiye jo hua hamari achche keliye hua." Anjali "Kalindi ji I will talk to her once." Kalindi nodded. Anjali went to her room and knocked from outside. Anjali "Aastha darvaja kholo."

Aastha didn't. Anjali "Aastha bachpana chod do aur darvaaja kholo." Aastha then opened door. Anjali came to her and hugged her and consoled her "Aastha chup ho jao mere bachchi chup ho jaa kyun ro rahe ho itna dekho meri taraf arey tum ro the huye achchi nahi hain dekho ur face in the mirror." And she shown mirror to her. Aastha saw herself and smiled. Anjali "Haan that's my girl u have to smile like this ab batao y r u crying haan wat doesn't u want us to know tell me Aastha main teri aai hoon na mujhse nahi baat karogi kya."

Aastha "aise nahi Aai main kaise batati hoon aapko." Anjali "Aastha tum kisi aur se pyaar kiya hain kya." Aastha "Haan aayi pyaar kiya lekin sab khatam hogaya Aai sab kuch khatam hogaya." Anjali "Kya hua mere bachchi kaun hain wo mujhse nahi bataogi kya tell me Aastha wat happened." Aastha "nahi Aai I cant tell u aap pls chodiye ye baat ko yahi meri kismet aisa hi hain pata nahi kyun bappa meri pariksha le rahi hain."

Kalindi from back "Aastha tum aisa kyun baat kar rahe ho wat happened Aastha whom did u love and y didn't u say me meri galti I didn't ask u kaun hain wo tell me Aastha don't cry mujhe batao kya hua." Aastha "nahi Aai ab sab kuch khatam hogaya ab aap jaisa kahe vaisa hi hoga mujhe kuch nahi chahiye aai he doesn't like me aayi." And she cried in her arms. Kalindi "Aastha beta chup hojao don't cry shshsh beta bas bas don't cry he is unlucky guy to reject u, u don't cry beta."

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Bhairav called him "Sir kaam hogaya ab Aastha Shlok se shaadi nahi karega aap chinta mat kijiye lekin Sir usne mujhe maara isiliye mujhe aur jyaada paise chahiye." Him "dekhte ham agar Aastha usse shaadi nahi ki tho bohut jyaada pasie milega." Bhairav "Ji Sir lekin aap job hi kaha main vahi kiya." Him "hmm teek hain baad main milta hoon agar tumhari jaroor pade tho." And he cut the call.

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Anjali "Aastha don't cry achcha will u come with me to my home u will feel free for sometime." Aastha "nahi nahi aap jayiye I want to sleep for sometime." Anjali "theek hain Kalindi ji tho ham chelte hain Aastha mat ro if u want to come u can come at anytime to our house k." Aastha nodded. Niranjan and Anjali left. Anjali "Sahab wo Aastha kisi aur se pyaar kiya tha lekin kah rahe ki ab khatam ho chuke hain wo ladka kaha tha ki wo Aastha ko pasand nahi karte hain."

Niranjan "lekin wo Bhairav kya kah raha tha I will.." Anjali "Sahab aap gussa mat ho." Niranjan and Anjali left to home. Shlok was seeing her kerchief ye kya kiya usne. Iski problem kya hain kyun nahi maan rahe ho apni pyaar ko. He didn't think much, he want to go to his home. He searched her in her cabin. She was nowhere. He too left with heavy heart. He drove to his room directly.

Niranjan didn't like wat happened on that day. On the dining table everyone was silent. Varad "Baba aap aaj kaha gaye the u were not in home aur aai aap log kaha gaye the." Anjali "kuch nahi ham Aastha ke ghar gaye the." Shlok immediately raised his head. Niranjan "Wo Shlok tum Aastha se shaadi karna padtha hain." Everyone were shocked. Shlok "Kya!! Lekin kyun kya hua."

Niranjan "Today we went to Aastha's house.." and he said everything how they refused by questioning her character. Shlok was shocked beyond words. Shlok "Kya but Aastha didn't say about me anything like this."

Anjali "actually Aastha too doesn't know and she doesn't like that proposal from the beginning itself bichari she was crying continuously she was also saying she loved someone but he too rejected her she was crying continuously bichari pata nahi Bappa hamesha uske saath aisa kyun kar rahe hain." Niranjan "Shlok tumhari vaje se Aastha ki shaadi tooti so u have to marry her whatever the matter is." Shlok "mujhe kuch samaj main nahi aa raha hain main Aastha se baat karna hain." And he went away.

Varad "Baba lekin Shlok kyun Aastha se shaadi karna hain if she loved someone else." Anjali "U don't know Varad wo Shlok se hi pyaar kiya tha pata nahi dono ki beech main kya hua that's y we r making him to accept this at any cost so we r bringing Aastha's character into this so he could say no, bichari bohut pyaar kiya tha Shlok se I know I saw in her eyes but she is not saying to anyone that she loved Shlok bcoz Shlok should not be affected with all these."

Varad "Kya wo pagal hogayi kya lekin Baba aap unse shaadi kaise kar sakta hain uski Baba jail gayi hain aur hamara ijjat ka kya." Niranjan "dekho Varad this is between Aastha and Shlok there is nothing to do with Avdoot and did u forget how her mother helped us in saving Jyoti we should be thankful to her and u know Aastha very well sets into this house don't worry nothing will happen and u don't publicise all this negative thoughts we will make it simple don't tell this to Shlok I think he will talk to Aastha don't worry they will patch up mostly Aastha is not the one who breaks the relationship easily."

Varad "achcha teek hain lekin Shlok kya soch raha hain did she propose him y did Shlok reject her I don't see any negative in Aastha then y." Niranjan "haan this question disturbed me a lot don't worry I will look into this."

Episode 28

Something is cooking between the stranger and this Bhairav guy... Why do anyone want to hurt Shlok??!!! Anyways good update, hope things will patch up soon between Ashlok!!

nice update...
poor astha.. still crying... 😭😭
bus karo bhai aur kitna rulaoge astha ko...
that bhairav guy.. i think he is d most stupid person on this universe...
infront of shlok's parents he demeaned astha's character saying she had relation wth shlok... then it is so obvious they would want to save her grace.. & ask shlok to marry her...
niru baba telling shlok he need to marry astha to save her grace...
wat wil shlok do?
continue soon..
thnks 4 d pm...
if 1 more update astha cries.. & i promise not to give long comments on that update...

Nice update sai

Hai Sai gud evening yaar. Thanks for ur updates and pm.
Hai Sai how was your exams. I think u wrote well.
But Sai in ur exam period also u wrote and updated ur ff for us. Thanks I think this is ur last semester exam. Anyway all the best yaar.
Really ur ff is superb. Astha is crying and she is confused of shlok's behaviour.
Hey Sai v r angry at u 😡 . You promised us that u will not make astha cry again. But after 26 chapter also she didn't stop her crying. 😡 wat yaar where gone ur promise. Really I am angry with u 😡
Sai today also u entered a new character Bhairav. And Sameer is connected to Bhairav. They want shlok to cry y something is wrong. I think Swati is also with connected with Bhairav..quite interesting yaar. I think the story is turning to something connected to shloks past. Really waiting for the next part. 😉
She went to home with heavy heart but she got another shock waited there. A bride groom was there to see astha for asking her hand for marriage. Really twisted.
She refused the proposal to her mom and Niranjali was also there really she got shocked.
Anjali is also convincing astha to get ready. She said she don't want the marriage because she is in love with someone. Anjali know that it will be shlok but they tried to convince her. Atlast she agreed to come there only. Waw astha u f lucky ur mother in law is with u yaaar
She told to Anjali that her love has failed because the man who she love is not loving her.
Kalindi said sorry to astha now she is really broken.
Astha don't cry ur prince will come to u yaar.
Bhairav what u said haan u r asking about her character waw. Arey she is hundred % pure yaar.
Niranjan did the good job slapped bhairav. And throw them out. Thanks niranjan.
They came to AM. Niranjan told about everything to his family and told to shlok that he wants to marry astha. Hey now the route is clear henna.
Shlok want to talk to astha.
Varad asked about it to his baba. They told that astha is loving shlok. So let them speak .
One thing is clear Sameer is came to give shlok hurt.
They don't want shlok marrying astha. But they're wrong. Ashlok will always be together.hahaha buddhuus.
Anyway nice update yaar I enjoyed it keep it up
U r rocking Sai . Continue soon...