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Silverrmoon

@Silverrmoon

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Posted: 9 years ago

#81

Wahh chupa rutsam 😆 meri choti behina 😆 not fair you left in hanging in the air ...i was like huh where is rest of the story 😆 Do continue ...good viplav is using his brains well 😃 Good job Barbie doll 😃😃 make a longer version next time.

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Wanderlust

@titli_314

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Posted: 9 years ago

#82

Originally posted by: ~DaZZ|ing~
Loved the second part, Barbie! So, Viplav's faking his anger to protect Dhani and nail Raja at the right time. The poor guy feels so much guilt for ignoring his precious wife. I can't wait for the romance to begin in the next part! Please update soon. 😊

yes i will update in the evening...i am glad that u liked the 2nd part ..thanks😊

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Wanderlust

@titli_314

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Posted: 9 years ago

#83

Originally posted by: Meenakshi-rg

wow barbs , this is really getting interesting, So viplav baba putting up an act. i think we will see something similar in the show too. vidha putting up an act.
nut yours is more interesting.

You have done a great job. waiting for the update. and Romance !!!!!!!

thank you meenu...romance will come..i will not try to be close with viplav by keeping dhani away..😃

i think u know that "jo cheez tumhara hai woh toh tumhara hi rehta hai"😆..vipu toh hai mera hi nah😳😆😆

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Wanderlust

@titli_314

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Posted: 9 years ago

#84

Originally posted by: --HANSA--
wow dad for viplav knowing tge truth he willvhave to be rude with dhani
awesome updt i want vip to beat this raja a lots

i was planning to make viplav mahatma gandhi who loved peace 😆😆...but now i am thinking to change my plot and make viplav beat raja black and blue😆..

thanks for reading it😊

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Wanderlust

@titli_314

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Posted: 9 years ago

#85

Originally posted by: sura123
Wow barbie...story is very interesting..i always want something like this in IKRS but never got.

Thank you for the awesome story. excited for next parts

thanks for appreciating sura...i will update soon😊..me too wanted to see something like this...intensity in love without MU...so put it here in my story😳

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Wanderlust

@titli_314

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Posted: 9 years ago

#86

Originally posted by: Ksfandishi
Wow nice story
will wait for the next part

thanks for reading dear😊..i will update the 3rd part today itself😊

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Wanderlust

@titli_314

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Posted: 9 years ago

#87

Originally posted by: pearl100
Wahh chupa rutsam 😆 meri choti behina 😆 not fair you left in hanging in the air ...i was like huh where is rest of the story 😆 Do continue ...good viplav is using his brains well 😃 Good job Barbie doll 😃😃 make a longer version next time.

my vipu is intelligent meri badi bahina🤗..finally u read it...thanks for praising my story...achcha next time longer version likhungi😆😆

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Tahsinomi

@Tahsinomi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#88

Baarbie ...
Wonderful.
👏
Ekdom fatafati viplab faking his hatred for dhani.
Awww ami vablam holo ki hotat viputo emon na.
What u am liking about ur ss is u havent changed any of d characters and its about d current track.
Cant wait for d next part.

Edited by simplejoy - 9 years ago

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Wanderlust

@titli_314

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Posted: 9 years ago

#89

Originally posted by: simplejoy
Baarbie ...
Wonderful.
👏
Ekdom fatafati viplab faking his hatred for dhani.
Awww ami vablam holo ki hotat viputo emon na.
What u am liking about ur ss is u havent changed any of d characters and its about d current track.
Cant wait for d next part.

actually i dont believe in changing characters and bringing in new story line..we love this show for its own unique story...so i did not change it...

amr khoob bhalo laglo je tomar pore bhalo legeche...dhonnobad😊

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Wanderlust

@titli_314

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Posted: 9 years ago

#90

So here I am back with my 3rd part..

leave ur comments and feel free to write about anything which u did not like..

So here we go..

PART 3:

Dhani was sitting outside her small room, when she saw Raja standing at a distance and smiling at her...he came towards her and said "You wanted to be with me nah?...Its a beautiful morning...lets go inside and make this morning a memorable one"..Before Dhani could react, someone turned Raja to the right side.. A strong Iron like palm slapped his right cheek...The slap was so hard and with so much force that Raja lost his balance and fell down on the ground...He shouted "AAHHH"...Shalu, KT, DT, Sushma and sulakchana came out running...they suurounded vidha and raja and a furious Kanak started shouting at Dhani..

Before Raja could say a word, Viplav started "So everyone is here right??...ok lets go inside AN...I have something so show you...A super hit movie...Dhani u too please come inside.."..

Everyone entered the drawing room of AN..viplav asked everyone to sit down...Raja was terrribly sweating and wondering what would happen then...Viplav dialled a number and within 5 mins Raj and Pankaj arrived with a projector and a big screen...Raj Laxmi arrived and handed over an envelope to Vipu...

Viplav smiled and looked at his confused family "So my dear family are you all ready?...Pankaj please play this Romantic Silver Jubilee hit movie"...And a video started playing on the big screen and the whole family was watching it with open mouth...

Scene 1:

Raja talking to his mom: "My dear Dhani Bhabiji thinks her to be oversmart...She tried to trap me but how cleverly i trapped her and separated her from my dearest Bro-in-law"...Sulakchana aprreciated his son..

Scene 2:

Raja was sitting alone in his bedroom and was watching P**n videos in his mobile..😛

Scene 3:

Raja was talkng with his mamiji on phone "Mamiji I stole quite a few jewelleries of Shalu...u meet me tomorrow at the Benaras station..Iwill give them to you...please keep them safely"..

Scene 4:

It was today's morning...Dhani was sitting outside...Raja came and said with an evil smile on his face "lets go inside and make this morning a memorable one"...Viplav slapped Raja.

The video stopped and the screen went blank...

Viplav, with a pride on his face said "Raj and Pankaj had helped in installing CCTV cameras in Raja's room..i had to keep cameras in Dhani's room too for I did not want to take any risk.. and thanks Raj Lakshmi..u helped me a lot by bringing this CD from Mr. Sharma.(guys dont ask me who is this man...i have no idea😆😆)....actually i had given him the CCTV footage and had requested him to prepare this CD for me.. I did not want to leave AN even for a second because i knew that my wife is not safe here in my absence..."..Viplav stopped to look back at Dhani..She was looking at him with tears in her eyes...Viplav continued "You had trapped my innocent wife by showing her video and misleading everyone...So I thought Why Dont I make this a win-win situation for both the parties...You were happy that u had very cleverly captured a video of Dhani and I am happy that I, more cleverly, captured quite a few mean actions of yours..So, My dearest Jijaji what u want to say now?"...

Raja got up from the sofa and was about to start "It was Dhani who had tried to seduce ..."..before he could complete his sentence, viplav held him by the collar and Phaaatttaaak, one tight slap across his face and Raja on the floor...The sound of the slap was such that it send jitters down the spine of Sulakchana...Viplav kicked him hard and knelt down on the floor and punched on his chest...Raja cried in pain...Viplav was fuming in anger..He roared"You had been playing games with us since a long time but this time u crossed all the limits by trying to create MU in my mind for dhani...You cheep fellow...I will bury u alive"...His two well wishers Raj and Pankaj came running to stop him...Raja laid on the floor in half-conscious state..He was badly injured..Pankaj advised Viplav to inform the police...Viplav nodded in yes but before leaving Raja, he gave one punch on his teeth with full force and He started bleeding even more....Viplav moved aside and its now time for the dumb , super intelligent Ayodhya wasis to take over the act of their Ghar Ka Chirag...Kanak and Shalu started bad mouthing Raja...Ignoring everyone, Viplav came and stood in front of Dhani who was standing at the door...

Dhani expected that Viplav would held her hand and take her inside but No he did not do any such thing...Dhani was looking at the man in front of her..He was standing and not saying anything...

A crying Dhani went running inside her room and Viplav too followed her..

P.S. so friends romance in the next part for sure...I dont think i will be able to drag my story...but i will give u romance and end it..So for now enjoy this part..

No one is allowed to copy this SS without my permission...No one is allowed to post this SS anywhere else without informing me..

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Edited by Barbie_KK9629 - 9 years ago