MG FF: Karmas of Love #3 Ch52/EPI Pg 54 6/11 - Page 26

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Posted: 9 years ago
part 49 - shekhar-sushella ke trying se to kuch hua nahi lekin maan bohothi jyada gussa hoa gaya. and he tried to vent out on her by giving physical pain. but liked geet trying to break his wall of hared. waiting to know how will she break it fully.
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Posted: 9 years ago
awesome update plz update soon.
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Posted: 9 years ago
please update! waiting so long
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Posted: 9 years ago
Heya Peeps!!
I feel so guilty but I am really swarmed with personal and professional work. Each day I try to write at least a line so that I can finish the update. I am still half way and have the main climax to write. Thank for you bearing with me!!

I lub you peeps!
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Posted: 9 years ago
When are you giving update
Waiting for it
Update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
hi thanks 4 da note, will b waiting! dnt take too long! also post an OS wen u get time! thanks
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Posted: 9 years ago
^ Hi Madhuri,
I'm trying to write something today. Thanks for waiting!!!! :D
Edited by Maaneet099 - 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Maaneet099

^ Hi Madhuri,

I'm trying to write something today. Thanks for waiting!!!! :D

np will b waiting 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
And the wait is over 😆 Thanks so much peeps for waiting up on this. luv ya all!! ❤️🤗
The last chapter was more than 10 pages so I have split them into 3 chapters. don't worry I'll upload 2 at a time. It's my thanks for the wait 😃 I have a total of 52 chapters. Although I hate to end at that number I have nothing else to write other than the epilogue (good news half the epi is also written so you guys don't have to wait a lot 😳) I am aware that a few things still remain open ended like Geet's father's attitude, etc. I cannot touch upon that in this because it's kinda digressing now. So maybe a small sequel. So for now if you guys want any more more scenes do let me know. I'll see if I can include it if not I am going to say that's it for now folks 😃 once again love ya all!!!!

Chapter 50: Abhi Na Jao Chodkar
"Aap Ko Paa Kar Ab Khona Nahi Chatay,
Itna Khush Ho Kar Ab Rona Nahi Chatay
Yeh Aalam Hai Humara Aap Ki Judai Main
Aankhoon Main Hai Neend Per Sona Nahi Chatay"
"Dil me chahat ankhon me nami hogi
Unke raho me ye nazre bichi hongi
Intezar to tb bhi krenge unka
Jab unke pass wakt
Or humare pas sanson ki kami hogi..."
An hour ago the sunset had radiated across the cloud, turning it molten orange with bands of pink. And now the stars in the sky were nonexistent. Those balls of cotton seen during the day shifted into streams of grey like in the color of ash. They blanketed the moonless sky giving it a hazy ominous feel.
Main tumse nafrat karta hoon!' His words kept ringing through her ears. Hum dono ke beech ab koi rishta nahi hai!'
She realized she reached a dead-end. The confidence in gaining a place in his life seemed to diminish with his declaration. Had she read the love in his eyes wrong on the day they met in the dargah? Wiping away another bout of tears, she pulled out the sacred black-beaded chain she wore on her neck. "Is this our end Maan?" she asked, her vision blurred at the thought of the answer.
The icy grey sky restlessly grumbled producing brilliant shafts of light bolting through the clouds. The thick black clouds soon gave in due to the weight of water and poured over the city with a roar. The cold icy rain pelted across her pale and wet skin. Yet she did nothing to run for shelter or wipe away the water clouding her face. The world around her was just blurry and the hammering of heavy droplets was quite disorienting and her posture weakened by the weight of her soaked clothes. The harsh rain obliterated the crystal reflection of the sky and turned it into a disoriented chaos.
She felt at complete loss right now. The only thing that was there after searching for so long was heartbreak. It slowly seeped in how much of a fool she had been, living in her own dream world. She believed he would forgive her after all the things she had done to him. In reality she was just a lost star. There was no way she could go back to having the happy family she wanted. She slumped down, not caring about the gritty muck that stuck to her dress and hands and let out an agonized cry only for it to be swallowed by the roaring of the thundering rain.
***
"Maan!" a terrified voice boomed across the hall. "Maan are you there?"
He groggily opened his eyes as the shouts became louder. He rubbed his eyes of sleep to realize he had fallen asleep in the corner of the room. Watching her walk out of the room, he came to stand at the threshold of the balcony. Her words had finally pricked some sense into him. Constant battle of his heart and mind prevented him from coming to a conclusion and he had fallen asleep in a sitting position due to exhaustion. He stretched his arms and got up to see daadima rushing to his side.
"Maan, have you seen Geet?" she asked, her voice quivering.
"Voh main," he began, unable to find the right words to explain last night's encounter.
"I haven't seen her since last night beta. I went to check in her room, and there was no sign of her."
"Yaheen kahin hogi daadima. Where can she go?" he asked casually while trying to mask his fear.
"Aap dono kal raat lad rahe the kya?" she asked worriedly.
"I mean it was just," he said running his hands over his hair.
Just then Arjun came rushing into the room with a book in hand. "Daadi yeh dekhiye, I found this in bhabhi's room."
Maan took the book and hurriedly opened the pages to reveal a letter addressed to him.
Dear Maan,
I'm sorry for all the trouble I caused. Aaj se aap azaad ho, main aapko aur tang nahi karoongi. Please take care of yourself.
-Geet
Maan re-read the note left by Geet with bated breath. It finally sunk in that she had once again left him to mend his broken heart. Hurt and anger bubbled inside him causing him to throw away the book.
"Dekha daadima, she can never hold on to her words. She just left," he growled like a hurt lion.
"Isn't that what you always wanted Maan?" Anushka interrupted. Her face held no emotions. "Since the minute she stepped back in your life, you have wanted her out."
Maan stood numb. He had no answer to Anushka's question. Of course he had wanted her out of his life the minute she stepped back in. But he was only trying to protect himself from hurt. He didn't want to be left grieving for her in case she decided to break his heart once again. But that didn't mean she just walks out on him leaving these divorce papers.
"Batao Maan," Anushka prompted, interrupting his thoughts.
"Haan! But that doesn't mean she walks out again without letting me know dammit!" he screamed voicing his frustration. "She just cannot leave! I'm going to find her and give her a piece of my mind." He picked up his shirt lying in the corner and started buttoning it, "How dare she huh? I'll show her the consequences of messing with Maan Singh Khurana!"
Everyone gathered looked at each other muffling their laughter. It was fun to watch Maan in love and now it was more fun to watch angry Maan in love! Finally their plan of getting them together worked.
Daadima was quite worried from yesterday's events and began to think maybe getting them together wasn't possible after all. She knew Geet had done a huge mistake walking out but she also knew Geet had the ability to win over Maan. But with time, nothing seemed to work. Maan was stubborn to not let Geet back in his life in spite of fretting over her. Yesterday's events had scared her to the point where she had given up hopes but Maan's reaction today brought a ray of hope.
Last night she wanted to meet Geet to see if everything was okay after the jalebi incident. She tried searching for Geet everywhere but with no luck. Worried, she was about to alert Maan when she received a call on the home number from a girl called Meera. The girl identified herself as Geet's friend and informed about running into Geet on her way back home. And seeting Geet's condition, she had forcefully taken her to her house. Daadima sighed in relief knowing Geet was safe and asked Meera to keep Geet until her grandson came to get her. Meera was quite reluctant in letting Maan take Geet back as she had seen Geet previously broken too because of the same man. Daadima explained everything that happened previously and how Geet ended up walking out the house now. Listening to it, Meera agreed to help daadima in her plan to get Maan and Geet together.
Not hearing anyone voice out anything, Maan looked up only to see everyone looking at him amused. "Aap log kya ghoor rahe ho?" he asked feeling more annoyed that no one seemed to understand his plight. "I don't see what is so funny," he added feeling quite miffed.
"Arre why are you glaring at us?" Anushka asked amusedly. "Jao, apni patni se yeh savaal pooch," she said causing Arjun to burst out laughing.
"Just shut up Arjun, after I kill Geet, next is your turn," he threatened.
"Ji," Arjun managed to blurt before giggling once again.
"Just get out!" he screamed causing Arjun to run for his life. Grabbing the papers, he turned to find his phone vibrating while flashing unknown number' on the screen. "Yes," he barked switching it on. "Good, you stay there until I come," he said before ending the call.
"Vaise bete is it going to be bridal style or caveman style?" daadima asked causing laughter to erupt among the elders.
"Kya?" he roared as though his grandmother had grown two heads.
"You know last time when Geet left, you brought her back in bridal style, so I just want to make sure this time it's the same or if you are going to try a new style this time," daadima clarified with a smirk.
"I am going to let her know about her stupid behavior, not bring her back. You people have seriously lost it!" he yelled before walking out of the door.
Everyone burst out laughing as soon as he walked out of the room.
"Finally meri bahu aaj ghar aayegi!" daadima said only for everyone to nod in agreement.


Edited by madhu.pmlist - 9 years ago
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Chapter 51: Showers of Love
Maan hurriedly rang the bell of the same hostel room he visited some time back. He had suspected Geet would end up coming here and his doubts were confirmed with the call he received before he headed out of the house. He was about to ring the bell once again when he heard some movement inside. The door creaked open and he expected to see the same short and petite girl only to see the woman who stole his heart on first sight.
Meera found her in a dishealved state in the middle of the road and forced her to come along with her. Geet insisted she wanted to be left alone but Meera had managed to bring her back here and cleaned her up. Geet sat without saying anything and staring out the window. Because there was really nothing to tell. In spite of Geet's refusal, Meera managed to shove some warm soup into Geet's mouth.
Few hours passed in silence. Geet occasionally wiped away tears streaming down her cheeks. But other than that she never spoke anything. Meera gave up trying to make Geet talk and let her be for sometime. Knowing Maan would come looking for Geet, she excused herself with some emergency at the hospital.
Geet stood rooted to her spot as she opened the door to see the man who had occupied her thoughts since the day she met him.
"Really Geet?" he said jutting the papers and the note she left behind on her face. "This is how you want to end this? You just decide to leave behind a note and run away like a coward?" his screams echoing through the corridor.
Her lips trembled as tears gushed out seeing him right in front of her. Words failed to form as she stood in front of him.
"I'm talking to you damn it!" he screamed jerking her shoulder.
"Voh mmaain," she stammered her voice still shaking.
"Tum mujhe aazadi deni chaahti thi na?" he roared flashing the papers in front of her. "Yeh lo, ab hoon main azaad" he said throwing the papers near her feet before walking away.
Geet saw him walk away without a second glance. Tears pricked her eyes as she eyed the divorce papers below. The force of the throw had caused the pages to scatter around the room. And the page with their signatures stared harshly at her. She bent to pick it only to be confused to see something other than his signature. She blinked away her tears to read something other than his signature above his name. She hurriedly wiped away her tears only to read, I hate you!'
Maan walked down the stairs recalling his conversation with Anushka.
"You hate her remember?" Anushka reminded calmly.
"Haan I hate her for making me fall irrevocably in love with her. I hate her for teaching me how to dream. I hate her for making me laugh when I had almost forgotten how to. I hate her alright, I hate every little detail of her!" he broke down, tears flowing continuously.
Anushka rushed to his side and assured everyone over there that she would take care of it. Knowing Maan would need to let everything out before things could get back on track, they left Maan and Anushka alone.
"Why me Sweety?" Maan spoke in between hiccups. "Why me? Don't I deserve a chance at happiness?" He clung to her like a child while she rubbed his back trying to calm him.
"Shh Bujji, calm down first," she said rubbing his back.
"First she wanted divorce and then she decided to give us a chance. But all of a sudden she said she wants to walk away, and now she wants to come back into my life. Don't I have feelings? Am I a piece of tissue that can be used when wants and thrown when done?" he sniffed.
"No you do have all the rights to be angry with her. Tumhe haq banta hai," she assured cupping his cheeks. "Magar ek baar sirf ek baar hear her story out." Anushka voiced for what seemed like the first time taking Geet's side.
Maan was about to walk out of the hostel gates when he felt her hug his back. "I love you," she sobbed. Her grip tightened as she continuously chanted I love you'. He stood still absorbing her tears as well as her declaration of love.
A tiny drop of water landed on his nose causing him to look up to see heavy thunderous clouds gathering in the sky. Soon, it began sprinkling. Little droplets of water drenched his hair, skin, and dress. The water droplets began growing larger and falling frequently. The light pitter-patter of rain turned into wet thuds as the water raced to meet the ground. The sound of thunder rolled through the area as a lightning bold split the sky. Yet nothing seemed to bother them as they stood drenching in it. Maan had never fancied rain however it had come to become a blessing in disguise for him.
A small smile appeared on his lips as he looked up to send a silent prayer. Unclasping her arms from his shoulder, he slowly turned around to face her. Her sobs had died down with her hiccups remaining. She had her head bowed down unable to face him.
"Geet." She heard him whisper in spite of the heavy pouring rain. She immediately looked up to see his eyes shining with relief and love.
"Main," she began only for him to shut her lips with his finger.
"Shh," he silenced her shaking his head. He bent his head to replace his fingers with his lips.
There is something so heavely about a kiss in the rain, a tender moment that just cannot be explained with words. Not caring about the water that soaked through their skin he expressed his love. A sense of mutual need showed the strength of the feeling. He kissed the droplets from her lips as he smiled against hers. Unexpectedly, his hand drifted to her hip. It settled there and puller her closer causing her to inhale sharply. She was against his warm chest, chiseled to perfection. Her fingers combed through his hair as she pulled him closer towards her. He swept her hair aside and kissed her just over the collarbone. Kissing her ear lobe, he traveled down kissing her nape. He buried his face in her shoulder curve before groaning, "I love you Geet," into her hair.
"I love you Raja," she breathed unevenly causing him to jerk open his eyes in surprise.
"You remember." He said more like a statement than a question.
She bit her lips and nodded her head while her cheeks suddenly kissed like a spring rose. She looked down unable to look into his eyes as he fought hard to smile that wanted to break out. "I loved you since the day I saw you for the first time," she said continuing to look down. "The first kiss on my forehead, the way you cared for me in my sleep. But I was afraid every single time I wouldn't be able to return your love. I was scared that loving you would make me weak. I didn't realize it would only become my strength. Please mujhe maaf kardeejiye Maan."
Torrential rains pouring few minutes ago seemed to have stopped as suddenly as it came.
"Ek shart pe." His serious tone made her slightly nervous. She nodded her head hesitantly. "Since you missed a date with your husband, you will have to kiss him whenever and wherever he demands."
"Ji," she nodded without realizing what he had just asked but once the depth of his words hit her, she jerked her head up screaming, "Kya?"
"It's take it or leave it deal. Agar shart manzoor hai toh maaf kardoonga varna," he left the sentence hanging.
"Nahi! Mujhe manzoor hai," she agreed although she wasn't completely convinced.
"Good, kiss me now," he ordered casually.
"Maan!" Her eyes widedned like saucers at his shameless request.
"Tsk tsk Mrs. Khurana, just few seconds after you agreed and you are already defying it," he said shaking his head ruefully. "I might have to reconsider granting your apology."
"But that's not fair, abhi abhi maine voh," she said turning scarlet that they had actually kissed in the middle of the road.
"Kya voh Geet?" he asked trying to suppress his smile.
"I just did whatever you asked to Maan," she whined unable to mention the word.
"You did what Geet?" he asked innocently.
"Vahi jo aapne maanga," she said pursing her lips.
"Gosh Geet, it has a name. It's called kiss. K-I-S-S," he said spelling it out without batting his eye.
Blood rushed to her check and for a minute she thought her face was on fire. She suddenly felt demure and coy and went as far as attempting to hide her rosy features behind her slim fingers yet it shone through the gaps. Not having the guts to face him, she hid her face in the crook of his neck as her arms wound around his neck. He tightened his hold around her petite waist pulling her closer to him.
"Geet," he called softly after what seemed like eternity.
"Hmm?" she hummed still remaining in the same position.
"Yeh mangal sutr tumhe kaha mila?" he asked finally since the time he saw her wearing it for Diwali pooja.
"I had it all the while Maan. I took it when I left to New York with me. It was the only piece that connected me to you. Even when I wanted to go away from you, I couldn't let go of it. And I wouldn't let it go for the world," she declared proudly.
He smiled indulgently before kissing her forehead. "Promise me that you will always talk it out with me when you have any problem. You will not take decisions leaving me again in the future. I don't know how I survived this time, maga""
She didn't let him finish and closed his mouth with her palm. "Kabhi nahi!" Tears rushed to her eyes while she shook her head vigorously. "I promise."
"I love you."
She held his cheek softly while standing on her toes. He sensed her act and slightly bent to her level giving access to her. She tenderly kissed his forehead before declaring her undying love for him. "Thank you for coming into my life. Thank you for holding on to me. Thank you for everything." A lone tear dropped from her eye.
Maan quickly wiped it away. "Ghar chalein?" he asked extending his hand. She smiled contentedly and slid her hand into his.

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