MG FF: Karmas of Love #3 Ch52/EPI Pg 54 6/11 - Page 34

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Posted: 9 years ago
6 yrs so wat u did complete it...thanks for dat dear...loved da last update n da epi too...will b waiting fr da nxt season
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Karmas of Love

First and foremost 6 years, 6 years. shall I capital that and make it bold lol, 6 YEARS but the more important thing is you've completed your beautiful story,

Ok I think I'm over it but still 6 years, but its ended now should i cry or be happy lol. Maybe I've just chosen the right timing or is it that I've proven to be the lucky mascot hahaha lol
JOKING lol but im super happy this amazing story has its rightful ending.

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Sonia and Geets action, more like sonia stunned and Geet in action. I love it, the girl finally got what she deserved. Geet's on fire, yippee I LOVED IT. good for Maan not to get involved warna he would have been dead meat hahaha. maaneet are acting abit too lovey dovey, not that i'm complaining but at this rate everyone in the entire village would know about their love story, finally Maan's in command lol. They make me go aww and I'm not singing Arash's song lol.

I loved the romantic tie chapter, perfect blend on KOL and Geet, the original scene mixed with your writing was amazing. Everything was going so well, their love story was building in a rapid speed then what happened now.

Geet seemed to have woken up from a beautiful dream to her harsh life, Brijs call broke the happy bubble Maan so hardly built. Arghh Brij, although he did nothing wrong yet my anger is building, why does he need to intrude. Geet's dilemma is understanding, how can she forget her mothers death anniversary, the woman who only lived for her and meant the world to her., It must be a hard blow, showss why she's running away. I get her state of mind, but Maan, poor guy will be left devastated.
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That was a complete roller coaster, there were times when I jumped in joy seeing Maan collect a distort Geet home after she ran off to meeras. I get her point in thinking she's forgotten her aim in life and for that she needs to create some distance between herself and Maan. But can she really not achieve both, forgetting her mothers death anniversary raised the curtains around her heart, and somewhere I get her point to get the woman who's been her sole reason for existence can't be forgotten yet she did and that she blames on Maan.

Then there were times when my heart dropped to the pit of my stomach. Yep you've guessed it right, well at least I hope you did lol. In the bit where Geet asks for a divorce from up front and Dadi overhears. Never mind pulling someone else's hair I was pulling my own lol. These two, well not the two just Geet really is so frustrating yet funnily enough a big part of me agrees or atleast understands her viewpoint. The promise to mothers holds the most crucial part in her life and she left with Maan around, that aim wavers. We're all human, natural instinct teaches us to safeguard our dreams and aspirations.

There were comments if I hate Geet, yet I can't say that really because maybe somewhere down the life I'm quite similar to her, and I salute her determination and grit. She has immense willpower, here I am battling my addiction for GF trying to focus on my studies then there's Geet who's willing to leave everything; her love, husband and family for her education. That's applaudable lol, maybe I'm the only one but she is commendable.

As for Maan, I just fall for him every time I read him. I love your Maan, let's put it this way his the most intelligent and understanding Maan i've read, his the perfect blend of maturity and integrity. His one of the BEST Maan's i've read, so understanding so levelheaded. So much has change she's left him to do America, yet hhis supported her all the way. Yes his way of supporting may have changed before he was friendly and now cold yet his there and even manages persuade her to take all his help.

Him coming to her home is needed, i was like not today atleast let her sit her papers and then Maan can put Geet in the guilt-trip, do you know how hard it is to focus on two things but yeah Geet passed with flying papers, so maan's entry was needed and right on point too, just when she finished so she can chase him around now. Exactly karma, before he was running and now shee is, karma has its ways lol.

This Angie character is a much needed character, finally someone managed to break into Geet's one-track mind. Geet's in love yet cant admit it or atleast didn't acknowledge but Angie pushed her into the deep end. Dadima is lovely woman, i love her and Arjun's right on his point but atleast now she has two aids who'll help her get Maan back.


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Posted: 9 years ago
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Arjun helping Geet is sweet, Geet opening up and saying her story helped the cause but also helped her break free from her past so this would help her totally move on.

You put in the Teri Deewani scene, totally needed. All that confusion and haze neededd to be cleared and what better timing than now, as for the place i have minimum knowledge about it hence i'll refrain from saying anything. Teri deewani in the show showed Geet realise her love and here Geet realised the value of him being in her life.

Maan's super annoyed but its expected, he wants to hate her but cant afterall she is his first and ultimate love. The push and pull game was exhausting, a part of me was like its OK and Geet should also know what it feels like being in Maan's shows but then being a Geet lover, i couldn't see my geet being rejected so often. You can imagine the pulling hair out of skull icon lol, itna confusion.

Anushka is whom i like she's that loyal best friend that wants the best yet wants to protect actually make that overprotect. Maan beating himself up made Geet realise, his frustrated i get it she's so close yet so far. he wants her but is scared she'll go again, she made him like that and now its her responsibility to turn him back. His family being the support system for both is what i loved, if Anushka was in Maan's team then Arjun and Dadi in Geet's, an ear and affection is always needed be that in time of distress or support. It seems like Geet hit the roadblock but i don't think she had an aim to run away, dadi is clearly the undisputed queen when it comes to fooling people.

Maan arguing yet showing his love, awww i was giggling with the family. Finally everything seems to have cleared

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We didn't see much of Meera, but can i say i loved her here. Such a beautiful friend, always present at the right time sheltering Geet. Angry Maan i like it, but its the anger but his love thats the highlight here while Geet's to shocked to respond. His so cute to declare of the divorce papers that he hates her instead of signing it, there really childish even i know how to handle such situation NOT lol


They made up FINALLY and she remembers the Raja thing, was she playing all along haha. O Maan's condition left not only Geet speechless but me also lol. Kya demand he. 'Ghar chalein' must sound amazing to Geet. They seem to have hit the right road now. Running to the outhouse wasn't the right idea i suppose, is he that predictable lol. Dadima and her gang are perfect. They were needed to get them two together. They're talking it out, like great. Thats what they should have done in the first place with a huge mug of coffee and Horlicks, i don't know how she likes that stuff. Mum used to force it down my throat when i was young but then thankfully Dad brought Neswick chocolate version making life a whole lot easier for all of us lol.

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Maans' so devious lol becahari Geet shes looking everywhere, can he not help her out a bit. and his turned lazy, is that the side effects of being in love huh lol. Charan's back, glad to know he hasn't changed his lover boy image as of yet lol but he's in love, so happy for him. His character was so sweet but you never said who his fallen for, is it anushka. What about Arjun, will he end with Meer or Angie. SO many loopholes I'm glad youre coming back with sean two. Yeh Maan bhi na, baby making time OMG i can just imagine Geet falling to the ground in embarrassment His so funny, cute yet embarrassing lol.

While reading this Story i realised some people sommenting they hate Geet but i shared no such feeling, how can you hate someone who's ambious and just wants to fulfill her mothers dream, on the way she came across a great person like Maan but she had to choose one well atleast she felt like that. When your broken and confused, you don't make the wisest decisions similarly neither has Geet but i'm glad she got her second chance at happiness and as for Maan his one of the best laid out Maan's i've ever read so thank you for giving us such a Maan whom i loved reading.



you used the quote 'If you love somebody, you should set them free and if they come back to you, their truly yours' This is one of my favourite qoutes, which i personally believe in. Ja Rule had said in a song (Free with Ashley) and it stayed with me for life also one of my fave songs lol, and this story was the perfect example of true love.


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Posted: 9 years ago
lovely story ..
loved reading it ..
thank u
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Posted: 9 years ago


thanx for completing this story...

waiting for its sequel...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hello Hello...it's been a long long long time...you say 6 years? Woahhh..thanks girl for counting for me..as I have forgotten at all.
Don't count on me...I am outta it. Just remember IF and luckily how to log and post the comment.

Wanted to Congratulate you on your accomplishment of completing a story. 👏

Hope you are well...

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