My New-ROKA fanfic,new part pg2 - Page 2

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Posted: 18 years ago
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hmm ...
no not at all itz not borin ...
i like it very much ...
u just switched da background ov robbie n kas ...
it really nice n differ ...

dont worry u will have more reader .. it just a first day n weekend too ..!!

again love it ... "pehli baar dekh rahi hoon robbie sabarwal ek ladki ki thapad milkar bhag rhi hai" didnt ubderstand da diolouge ...!! sumhow got da meanining ov it ..!! but can u write it again ..!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: robinblue91


"pehli baar dekh rahi hoon robbie sabarwal ek ladki ki thapad milkar bhag rhi hai" didnt ubderstand da diolouge ...!!

usually robbie is surrounded with gals and this was the first time raunak seen a gal instead of falling for him giving him a slap.ro was emabarresed since he could'nt stop her,he tried to go away as he know if raunak sees that he will pull ro's leg.hope u got it now

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