My New-ROKA fanfic,new part pg2

hello guys,i started watching again after raunak's death but was really dissappointed by kasturi's behaviour.So thought of writting an ff on ROKA.i still did'nt think about a title so for the time being let just call it "ROKA fanfic"

Characters

Kasturi Chawla

Robbie Sabarwal

Raunak Sabarwal

Devika

JP

Introduction of characters

Kasturi is the only daughter of a business tycoon. Her mother passed away after giving birth to kasturi so her dad was overprotective and bought her up like a princess but she never forgot her family values and always. She lives in Shimla but wanted to pursue her studies in Delhi.

Robbie is from a middle class family also living in Shimla with his mom, Devika. But is studying in Delhi and is doing his 2^nd year, he also work to support his family and for the college fees. Know how to irritate people and loves to play pranks,girls are mad about him.

Raunak is robbie's childhood friend and they are always together just like a siamese twins

Devika is robbie's mom and is a green eyed monster. She cant wait Robbie to finish his studies and marry his managers daughter whose from an upper middle class family where he use to work before going to Delhi.

JP is a big industrialist who is the father of Kasturi

will continue if there is a good response,do say if i should improve or change the story line

Part1...................pg1

Part2...................pg2

hey it seems so interesting plz continue soon..I am waiting.. plz update it as soon as possible..what a imagination u have..i must say..its sooooooo cool..
update it soooooon..

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Hey does look good, characters lifestyle is quite opp of what is being shown....so go ahead... 👏

Great....doo continue.. 😃 😃

OHH WOW!! oPPOSITES!! sEEMS VEY IBTERESTING WOULD LOVE TO REAd the storry eagerly waitng!!

Gia

hey i never been entered in any ff .so i will continue please update. it seems interesting.

Thank u guys for the encouraging words

PART 1
A girl will be running back of her dad trying to pursue him to let her study in delhi, but he will keep ignoring her pleadings since he cant imagine a day without his little princess, though she is almost 19 but for her dad she is always a little girl.

After nearly an hour, her dad will agree even though he is a bit hesitant. She would be jumping with delight and zoom off to the temple for thanking God.

kasturi, kasturi her dad will callout…..yea she is Kasturi Chawla. That night she will go early to bed since her flight was early in the morning .
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ka on reaching delhi will hire a cab to her college but the driver will leave her miles away from the college since there was a strike going on. She will get down and ask a passerby, who will tell her the route.

After walking for nearly an hour ka will reach the same spot where the cab had left her, then she will realize that the passerby had tricked her. She would be boiling with rage and her face would be red like a tomato due to the heat and the anger.

All this would be seen by that same passerby who is rolling with laughter seeing her condition while his friend will feel pity on ka.

Who is this passerby and why did he fool her???

WOW!! relli nice!!con soon!! passerby = robbie and freind ronaak?

update soon
gia

PART 2
After walking for another 30min she will reach the college and would notice that it is just few stops away from where the cab driver dropped her infact it was just a walk able distance of 5min.Thinking this she was even more angry with that man. If she had found him she would have strangled him…......

ka will reach the office to fill the formalities and for the direction to the hostel, as she reached late the secretary will tell her to adjust somewhere for a night, ka will be too tired to fight back so she will just leave…...

she will sit on a nearby bench, thinking about the days happenings, she would feel dejected and will be missing her dad very much. Her arms and legs will throb with tiredness and will soon doze off.

The noise of the thunder will make her jump with fright and another thud will make her hug Robbie who was passing by.She will come to her sense and move away apologizing but the strike of lightening will make his face visible, both will be startled. As ka will realize he was the same man who had fooled her by directing her the wrong way.ka will give ro a tight slap and rushes from there as she did'nt want to see his face again.ro was feeling humiliated and will try to hurry from there when he will hear someone saying "pehli baar dekh rahi hoon robbie sabarwal ek ladki ki thapad milkar bhag rhi hai"(sorry not good in hindi ) and will break down on the street laughing he will turn around to find Raunak.ro irritated will say there is nothing to laugh too much and walk away angrily.

Ka will find a hut nearby,she will knock twice and finding no answer she will try to open the door,to her surprise it was open.

she was about to get in while she hear a voice telling her to stop.ka will turn around to find ro again both will be shocked and together say tum yahan bhi(ro could'nt afford the college accomodation for that month since his mom was sick and half of the money was spend on the medicines) .ro angrily will ask wats her problem,as first she slapped him and now sneaking into his house he would try to taunt her more but she will stop him and advices him to keep it locked and to keep it clean so that a passer by will understand that someone is living over there since his house looks like a shelter for stray animals and will storm out.

ra will again start laughing at ro's defeat,ro angrily will slam the door…….

Ka will be walking while it start raining so she will decide to take shelter outside ro's hut,her eyes was almost closing when the lights of a car flashes on her face.She froze seeing the car.

What was so special about this car that gave her a shock???

Hope there will be a good reply this time

how sad 101 views and just 8 replies 😭,do say if it's boring i will change the storyline