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CarpediemRose

@CarpediemRose

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Posted: 9 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: PRINCESS_ALISHA
choti.Pinch me. my choti has written dis?

well written dear. i loved it. u have described it beautifully. m proud of u my lil choti😉

I am pinching you😃😃

Yup ,I am the one ,who wrote this OS MY DEAR MANA😃😃

I am too glad ,that you really liked my work😳😳

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Sakshi

@sakshi5050

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Posted: 9 years ago

#12

Hi Jenny

Awesome dear👏👏👏
I felt the consummation scene could be even more better when I watched consummation episode because if MATSH was up to be continued Shadika could have given a best consummation scene but
after reading your OS the incomplete feeling is completely gone

you have made it superb dear lovely
the poetic lines were lovely to read

Over all a masterpiece 😛😛😛

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CarpediemRose

@CarpediemRose

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Posted: 9 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: powergirlpriya
HIi jenny 🤗
it was wonderful OS dear.👏 your updates so nice and beautiful .keep more updates dear.😊

Hi Priya😃😃

I m glad u liked it dr😃

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CarpediemRose

@CarpediemRose

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Posted: 9 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: Bloomfield
Arey wah! Behna, this is beautiful! It's just the broader version of the same scene but what makes it different is your rhythmic lines. Any plan of becoming a poetess? ;)

Hi chotti🤗

Really ,all my lines seems so poetic ,ohh it is nice to hear from u people😃

And ya ,it is a broader version of the scene we had but a little bit of renovation is made,I am glad u liked it 😉😉

And no, I am not planning to become a poetess at any point of time dear becz that needs a lot of efficiency and creativity.

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Silverrmoon

@Silverrmoon

Inactive

Posted: 9 years ago

#15

Very well written 👏 Do write more😊

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IshveerIsLife

@IshveerIsLife

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Posted: 9 years ago

#16

Hi Di!!!

First of all when you told me that you are gonna do this, then you knew my reaction 😉 and I know that this late latiff is late again. So sorry for that Di 😭 Decided to reply it on weekend so here I am!

Well, first you told me that you are doing this then I was shocked and surprise that you will do this 😆 But after reading this, one thing in my mind after reading this was, "Aapka kamal ho gaya!" 😆😳 This OS was full of passion and cuteness. They way you described Ishveer's chemistry was adorable!

Amazing job Di! Loved each and every pinch of this OS! Nirbhay 😡 But when Ranveer decided that he will just save his love and see what's wrong with her was 👏 Yea Di, the show's consummation was very disappointing and it was like 60s con scene. Really mad at Cvs for that. Bt your OS made me go to Ishveer's dreamland Thankyou so much for that Di!

Loved it very much but Love you more Di!

Yours,

Chotu 😉