Ishveer OS : Her breath is my destiny

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hi my dear Ishveerians 😃😃
I was watching the recent episodes of MATSH ,I Came upon that Ishveer Consummation scene ,such a flowery and a glossy Consummation that came out of love but , I thought of making that scene a little more passionate , so thought of writing an OS on it ,hope u guys ,like it .

And ,I feel this needs a disclaimer hence 😆

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Nirbhay ,the heartless animal, shattered... the windowpanes of the confined room by pushing Ishaani the soulmate of Ranveer onto that , she slipped and fell down on the ground...
Suddenly in a grasp of moment , Ranveer had a jerk in his body ,his legs adapted a twist and he felt the pain ,it was harsh ,he shivered something happened to his love ,he guessed as he straightly pointed to a passport size photo of his Ishaani which he had kept as a valuable treasure not to be seen by anyone .
"I could feel ,there is something so fishy , my Ishaani is in the eleventh hour ,she needs me" , as he says this he carefully sticks the moustache above his lips and adores his head with a cloth made head gear ,his eyes was petrified as he was in the level to justify his deed but if he was caught then everything will be a grand failure.

He winks his eyelids ,he stoops his shoulders ,he loses his body balance,Prateek rushes to hold him and instructs him to not make even a single step but Ranveer assures him he has to meet Ishaani to know her feelings and find a solution to their problems as he put words onto Prateek's ears he leaves the place.

THat gloomy evening ,the snow had covered the peaks of the mountains nearby the city , the wind was blowing from the Eastern direction as Sun had set ,the fog had settled on the trees while Ranveer was on his way , in his disguise , was experiencing the chillness , it was too soothing .

While Ishaani was lying on the floor with the flower wreaths covering her ,
she was looking like a flower Goddess , her cheeks went so pale because there wasn't enough air that penetrated into that dark confined room , she was so tired , the windowpanes in that room ,suddenly glowed with a flash of light advancing upon that direction, upon the arrival of the flashlight , she was recollecting only her Ranveer who was the one , who brought light into her life made her feel the power of love which could lighten up the love of both the souls in love .




But a beam of light advanced her and she finally sensed someone's presence , it was a servant , who entered the room.
But Ishaani was feeling so odd, the air that touched her skinpores , was so familiar to her body , she was so sure of it, because Ishaani had received warmth from that air and even chillness from it hence she pinched her cheeks to come back to life as if she was dreaming but her conscious was given a perfect alert ,she awoke from the deep sober which she had been thriving for the past few minutes and she went close to that man who bought food for her.

She went too close to him, her breath was stiffly covered with his whole body ,their lips was too close ,his lips went to take the revenge it had wanted but before that she opened her mouth crying out Ranveer...
They both missed their balance and their statical position was interrupted as their dynamics played upon their bodies and Ranveer was feeling better , she got some relief from the spells he had been infused too.
Before they could get up from the bed ,they both rolled up together just like piles of oranges and their heads and feets jumbled upto together.

"Ishaani ,you are still the same old Girl whom ,I saw ,when I was nine years old , see the way ,you get up , you mess others too and still you are funny and my Sunny" , Ranveer uttered.

"You don't know how to handle a girl , you always run while someone is in danger ,see the way you have made me slide this floor and you got up past me and always tried to overtake me and get me into trouble ,you are the same Ranveer " , replied Ishaani.
"It means ,you are trying to underline the fact that ,I never cared for you while you were in danger my sweety, who gave you breath ? while you over consumed Alcohol, who gave breath to rescue your life? doesn't it really mean ,that I have never cared for you " as he stressed this word , he reaches even more closer to her , she couldn 't control his breath because she had starved from inexcessive oxygen but now his breath reaching her like volumes made her feel that she was drowning and she held her hands on his waist .
"You don't think, I love you ,I can say one word to let you know,
my love ,feel my heart" , as he said this ,he placed her hand on his chest ,near to his heart and asked her to feel it .
"Each and every beat of my heart only knows to pump blood but without your love it can do it , it longs for your love , it urges for your care ,it beats only for you ,please understand and accept ,I am there for you everytime , even if you don't like me and even if you don't want to feel my presence ,am I so ugly while ,I had infection on my face " as he said this he placed her fingers on his face ,feel this Ishaani all the cells in this face longs to get your careesing kiss and your sweet little pats .

Tears drops floated just like a stream as he wiped it off and placed his hands on her shoulder lifted her up and asked " Please ,tell me ,speak out your heart ,I need some reciprocation from you , Ishaani " ,cried Ranveer.
He too weeped, Ishaani was so uneasy and so upset to see him weep and all his touches gave her goosebumps all over her body and she could reflect the pain in his words hence she opened her mouth.
"Ranveer ,I consider you as the most valuable person of my life ,you are born to make my life happy , I recieved all the care, all the love, all the affection everything only from you ,I consider you as the most beautiful person who God has given me to cherish in my life ,I love only you and ever for my life even my heart beat has the same to say it has recorded Ranveer even my whole body is ready to reciprocate bodily attractions and affections only when you do it "

" But ,why did you leave me " , asked Ranveer .
"You trust my words ,no you trust our love ,then please don't leave me Ranveer" , pleaded Ishaani .
THese words were enough for him ,the looks took a three sixty dimensional turn when she said , please don't leave me !

He advanced upon her , there was not even a inch nor a distance factor that was ready to separate him from her, his testosterone started working at a high rate , it kindled a lot of feelings as his brain became so strange , he started pinching her cheeks and pinched her hip , naughtiness was at it 's peek as he reinforced his mood of complete romance on to her ,he tells to his soulmate ,

" I don't want to call it as sex but , I want to call it as the right to hold my love and feel her because were not two bodies but one soul ".
Ishaani melted in his words and she moves away from him and attempts a soliloquy on to herself " I could gasp the beat of his heart , which makes me feel that he loves me more than anything in this world,not like something that people have in their life but his love is so eternal " , she admitted .
He came and grab her waist ,patted her cheeks and laid his face on hers her mouth opened because she couldn't control Ranveer's breath which was fast flowing , then he took her fingers and placed it on his hair , while she blushed and caressed his hair and took her fingers onto his lips while he bit them with love and she cried with a sigh and he was terrified and asked if she was feeling better while she screamed with laughter and ran away.

He gently smiled and ran past her and got her and unknowingly pulled her saree and her pallu stooped down , " Ranveer ,I don't know how to drape a saree " both of them laughs with joy and Ranveer promises that he will drape the saree around her later but not now.
He went too close and placed his cheeks on her neck ,he gave soothing feeling to her body and she was completely lost in his love and she began to reciprocate by placing her lips firmly on to his ,their lips collided with one another and that was their wholesome liplock , "Your lips are so sweet rattled" , Ranveer and he slowed turned her and untied her blouse knot and placed his face onto her back , she hardly blushed to the core .

He lifted her and he took her and made her lay down , he removed all possible ornaments she was wearing that evening and gently placed them near and he placed her hands on his heart as both their legs were found crossed to each other as they found mighty happiness in each other presence he kissed her neck ,her lips ,her belly and all possible place he found find that earliest morning and he went near her heart and said,
" Your breath has now unison with me and , I can feel the heartbeat of yours Ishaani " and they both had a peaceful time with a lot of care from others because their minds had spoken millions and now their souls were working out to reciprocate it ...
Finally , The rays of sun ,hit the shores of the beach ,while it dawned , the pinky sky which had the early effect was Ranveer's usual time to rise up for his work but now he was found sleeping fast in the presence of his wife, his love ,his life ,the alarm clock in his watch tickled and the time was 9 clock in the morning , Ishaani woke up hearing that husky voice while Ranveer was still asleep , she asked him to get and leave the place but he replied

" Your breath is my destiny and I have reached my destiny hence ,
I need some rest after this " ...




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AnYa_ArMan thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hey Jenny🤗
It was such a pleasure to read this Os,
You have described it so well that I could feel it, imagine it,
Such a soothe to eyes n mind..

Well done 👏👏

Love,
Afrah.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Oh Jenny 😛it was such a cute n lovely OS 😳
Keep writing more dear 😳😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hey Jenni!! Beautifully written!

Loved it. 😃😳 your writing is so poetic. Keep writing more.😃 you have described them so beautifully. Soothing OS!!🤗 just increase the size of text.
Everything else is good.

VC
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Posted: 9 years ago
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choti.Pinch me. my choti has written dis?

well written dear. i loved it. u have described it beautifully. m proud of u my lil choti😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
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HIi jenny 🤗
it was wonderful OS dear.👏 your updates so nice and beautiful .keep more updates dear.😊
Edited by powergirlpriya - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Arey wah! Behna, this is beautiful! It's just the broader version of the same scene but what makes it different is your rhythmic lines. Any plan of becoming a poetess? ;)
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: AnYa_ArMan

Hey Jenny🤗

It was such a pleasure to read this Os,
You have described it so well that I could feel it, imagine it,
Such a soothe to eyes n mind..

Well done 👏👏

Love,
Afrah.

hi my dear Afrah🤗
Ohh ! ! I m really so happy to hear ,that u liked it 😳😳
U had the visualization impact and my OS ,Gave u that , I am really feeling so blessed to hear that from you😃😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Abhia2Twinj4eva

Oh Jenny 😛it was such a cute n lovely OS 😳

Keep writing more dear 😳😳

Hi dear Anjum😃
I m so glad u liked it dear😃😃
Yup ,will keep writing more😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: VC288

Hey Jenni!! Beautifully written!

Loved it. 😃😳 your writing is so poetic. Keep writing more.😃 you have described them so beautifully. Soothing OS!!🤗 just increase the size of text.
Everything else is good.

VC

hi Vaishu🤗
I am glad u loved my work😃😃
Yup dear ,I have increased the size of the text hope it looks fine now😊😊

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