Kasam Dosti Ki -ChaTya FF

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Posted: 9 years ago
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chatya ff (on request) from my side... #creationschhavi

Kasam Dosti Ki

Introduction plot-
Bhaiyaji gets to know about that chakor friend,reporter still helping chakor
Bhaiyaji dont know its adi but he wants to kill him as chakor on his boosting
Ran against accepting the condition of bhaiyaji
Bhaiyaji condition was she should participate in race
For azaadganj but not to win
he put condition to her that he will free imli from bonded labour if she dont win in race and still participate
but suraj sees that reporter or best frd boosting chakor confidence
He spread this news to bhaiyaji
Bhaiyaji
and suraj aims on killing aditya

story starts----

PART-1
Chakor getting to know about kamal narayan and suraj plans to kill aditya forever
she calls him
Aditya : phone uthailo
Maiyare . ..ab kya karein ...
ye to phone hi nahin utha raha
Chakor runs endless till she moves out of azaadganj
She takes releif a bit
But this tiredness didnt stop her
Chakor :adi...tum ko kuch nahin hovega ...hum aa rahe hain ...
She runs endlessly tries to find him in khet too
but no all her efforts in vain
chakor falls on her kness on ground with no hope
Chakor :jisne humri har musibat ke same raksha ki...aaj jab use humri madad ko jarurat hai to hum uski madad bhi nahi kar paa rahein hain
Daag baba humri madad karo humko adi ko bachana hi hoga
She remember aditya converation hifi best friends forever right
Tears drop from her eye
Hum apne b..best friend forever ko nain kho sakat hain
Nahin kho sakat hain. . ...
soch chakoriya soch kahaan mil sakat hai wo hume?
Suddenly chakor remembers bhaiyaji conversation with suraj jagah jagaah chaan maro us reporter ko
Humko wo apne samne chaahiye wo bhi mara hua
She remembers suraj conversation to him :par papa hum yahaan nahin laenge use choohe ko
Nahin to saare yahaan aap par shak karenge
she says :hum kasam khate hain aditya ko dhoondhe bina hum chain se nahin baithenge aur agar aaj humre dost ko kuch hogaya to humra jeene ka bhi koi laabh nahin hai
Hum khud ko bhaiyaji ke havale kar denge apne dost ki jaan na bacha pane ke zulm mein...
Chakor :daag baba ab sab kuchh ap par nirbhar karta hai
Agar aap chaahte hain ki hum udaan bharein bhaiyaji ke khilaf to humre bijli dabba ko kuchho nahin hona chaahiye
Suna apne...
she was ngry as she thinks now god is not in her side
she thinks god do not want her to take udaan therefore all this happening
She runs again to find aditya...
chakor continues her running
She tries to search.him everywhere
She sees his frds reporters there
She asks them :adi...adi kahan hai?
They tell her sadly ki wo chala gaya
Chakor asks :chala gaya?kahan?
His frd :i am sorry chakor
Hum tumhe nahin bata sakte wo kahaan gaya
Chakor :kya matlab? Kyun.nahin bata sakte?
Hum wo humra bijli dabba humra best friend hai
She places her hands on.her head in tension
Humuko nahin khosakat hain kisi bhi kimat pe ...suna tum sab ne
She ask them all again about him
All heads down.noone reply
Chakor :theek hai ...mat batao...hum apne adi ko khud hi dhoondh lenge ...
Hum uko dhoondh kar rahi hai ...dhoondh kar rahi hain
she goes from there and hides behind
She listens his friends conversation with each other
Are rahul kyon nahin bataya tune use ki adi hum sab ko chhodkar ja raha hai sab kuchh chhodkar
Sabse door
naman :tu bhul gaya usne hume kisi ko bhi batane se mana kiya tha
Specially.chakor ko to bilkul bhi nahin usne saaf saaf bola tha
Tears drop from chakor eyes
She is hearbroken

MUST GIVE FEEDBACK IF U LIKE IT AND WANT ME TO CONT WITH IT...😊
I HAVE NO IDEA IF ITS GOOD...OR BAD...JUST TRIED TO WRITE 😕

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Posted: 9 years ago
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its good .. continue with it
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Posted: 9 years ago
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continuing it
part-2


Chakor:adi tum chale gaye...

hume chhodke ...apni best friend ko chhod ke...

Par tum jaa kahaan sakat ho aakhir...

soch chakoriya soch ... She remembers rahul conversation with adi friend Samajh gaye wo hume humsab ko chhod ko jaa raha hai to wo hhume train ke station par mili hai

chal chakoria rok le apne dost ko humesha ke liye tujhko chhod ke jaane se ...

chakor runs toward train station

she searches alot And finally she sees aditya

Aditya in oops yaar sorry its busstop

she goes towards him She has tears in her eyes chakor:adi. ..adi tum ja rahe ho hume chhodkor...

aditya in teary eyes too Aditya :chakor tum mujhe jaane do ...mein nahin bata sakta main kyon ja raha hoon Bas ye samajh lo ...ki shayad humara safar yahin tak tha...

Chakor :nahin...hhum friends forever hain ...

tum hume chhodkor nahin jaa sakte ho She hold his hand and says

tum apni dost ko akela ladne ke liye chhod jaoge Aditya :tum nahin samajhti chakor Mera yahaan se jaana bohot jaroori hai Chakor : jaroori Aditya :wo Chakor :jaldi bolo...kya Aditya :wo maa...ki Chakor :maa ...? Abha mausi...kya hua unhein? Adi :unki tabet bohot kharab hai Mujhe unke paas jaana hi hoga

Chakor holds aditya hand more tightly Adi mausi ko kuchho nahin hui hai Tum chinta mat karo

Aditya :par chakor Chakor puts her finger on his lips and shuts his mouth Chakor :bas kuchh bhi kehne ki jaroorat nahin hai tum ko Hum tumri aankhon ko padkar sab samajh gaye ...

hey share an emotional eyelock

Chakor sits beside him

par jab humko ek sahare ki jaroorat thi to humra saath tumne humesha diya Ab jab tumko ek sahaare ki jaroorat hai to hum bhi tumhe chhodkar kahin nahin jaayi hain

Aditya frees his hand from hers :nahin tum jao Humara saath yahin tak tha Humko apni mummy ka dhyaan rakhna hai ab paapa ke baad wahi humse sabse kareeb hain

Par hum tumre liye akhiri dam tak lade hain for sure

Par abhi tum apni race par focus karo azaadganj ko azaadi dilao Agar kismat ne chaaha to hum dubaara phir milenge chakor aur milkar azaadi dilayenge azaadganj ko Par bas abhi tum jao yahaan se

Chakor :nahin humne kaha na hum nahin jaye hain Aditya:madam 501 se jyaada ziddi to koi aur ho hi nahin sakta ...

Chakor :correct...

aditya :to tum nahin manogi

chakor :nahin...hum nahi mane hain

Chakor try to understand ...azaadganj imli tumre maai baapu ko tumri zaroorat hai

Chakor gets more sad

chakor :hum jaanat hain par hum apne dost ko akela chhodkar nahin ja sakat hain Tumhe pata hai tumhari.jaan ko khatra hai ...

Bhaiyaji aur unke gunde tumko khoj liye hain firse Aditya: gasp emoticon really ...!!! Lekin humko apni jaan se zyaada tumhari jaan ki padi hai

He says in caring and shocking manner

Chakor :kya?

She sees him with full of unknown love on her eyes for him

Bus driver :chalo chalo chakor :ruko bhaiya ruko

Oops sorry its adi :ruko bhaiyaji bus roko

humko utarna hai

chakor shocked :adi tum kahaan javat ho ab adi moves outside the bus

chakor too moves outside with him calling adi ruko adi ruko

she tells bus driver to wait for 1 min more pls for them

bus driver agrees Only 1 min Jaldi aao Chakor runs behind adi She holds her hand and turns him towards her Mausi ki tabet theek nahin hai aur tum ho ki late kar rahe ho

hope its good...will wait for feedback ...😊




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Posted: 9 years ago
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its nyc dear continue with it...i knw its chatya ff,bt ho sakae toh vivaan ko bhi 2 to 3 scenes mein daadho,i wanna see my asesome threesome
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: abhiya_12

its nyc dear continue with it...i knw its chatya ff,bt ho sakae toh vivaan ko bhi 2 to 3 scenes mein daadho,i wanna see my asesome threesome


thx dear
And ok dear for u.i will try to make story go in chatvaan friendship way and their scenes together then
thanks alort for ur feedback
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Posted: 9 years ago
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thank you...actually in the show dey r nt showng a single chatvaan scene..dats y i askd u...

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