BONUS-TRACK THREAD:The Marriage Story: RagNa FF,Thank You, P-45,7/4/16

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ArthunaAlive

@ArthunaAlive

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Posted: 10 years ago

#301

👏👏What a fantabulous ending ! You are such a wonderful writer bringing out all the emotions so aptly that story n reality converge and become one . Hats off to you dear and loads of love for creating this immensely pleasing story and making RAGNA everlasting .👏👏

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shoonya9

@shoonya9

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Posted: 10 years ago

#302

Rags hua 80yrs ka aur Kalpi 70 ki. Donone preet nibhayi apne bachpan ki.

You made all of us cry Charu, of course u too cried before making us cry. Growing and perishing is everlasting rule of life with only change being permanent. But when the journey is of RAGNA it's simply magnificent, sweet n cute.

Only u cud take a chance of 45 yrs time leap n show RAGNA grand parents in one leap. U showed only love Is superior uniting all four families. What more one needs? Perfect soulmates living old moments again n leaving perishable world together for eternity, a perfect end of a perfect story. Love u Charu for making us cry.

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dimple

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Posted: 10 years ago

#303

Charu dear👏 👏 👏

How beautifully u showed RagNa journey..cant describe in words

u made me cry😭😭😭..

EMA cvs 😡killed RagNa without even showing their marriage

Thanks for this amazing bonus track 🤗

love u dear❤️

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pyardil

@pyardil

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Posted: 10 years ago

#304

Awesome update u made me cry realy nice ragna journy

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laavanya4u

@laavanya4u

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Posted: 10 years ago

#305

AWESOME,MARVELLOUS,FANTASTIC,EMOTIONAL EPILOGUE.

I have to scan for new words in the dictionary to appreciate the freshness,clarity and your

attachment to the characters mainly Ragna.

You had written the epilogue ,as if ,you had seen the beautiful large family and had been a part of it

right from the beginning to the end.

Those,dumb cvs,dumbla,and vitthal,should read this epilogue.not once but many times.To realise

their mistake and the power of Ragna.

It is really appreciating,that you have given equal justice,importance to all the members of the extended family.I meant to say,that though they all belong to a powerful,rich family,all the members of the younger lot are well educated and knew to value the hardwork of their parents and carried forward their legacy in their own style with due honors and respect.

Kalpi's yearning for Raghav,his closeness,his charisma were beautifully written.And Raghav's

extreme love,care for Kalpi were also portrayed exceptionally well.

Specially,the way,Raghav values Kalpi as an individual who had filled up the vacuum in his life

and had showered the beautiful love and made his incomplete life as a proper,cherishing,lovable is

possible only in fictions as in today's world,despite being highly learned and successful in theirlives,majority of the husbands

could not digest their wive's to be independent.efficient and successful in their lives.

And the wives too,are becoming arrogant and doesn't value the institution of marriage after a certain period.

SO,THIS EPILOGUE IS A REAL EXAMPLE FOR ALL THE ONES TO BE MARRIED AND WHO ARE ALREADY MARRIED.IF YOUR SOULMATE IS IDEAL AND UNDERSTANDING TOWARDS YOU,YOU CAN SURPASS A MILLION STRUGGLES AND ALWAYS SHINE LIKE RAGNA IN REAL LIFE.

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Priya

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Posted: 10 years ago

#306

Oh Charu you made me cry buckets of tears!!!! Katti!!!😭

Why did you make it sooo emotional!?? I couldnt even read it properly because of the tears in my eyes!!!!

Such a beautiful end to the beautiful love stories!!! Wish I was part of one of the love stories...It was an amazing journey my Mallika - e - Romance!!!❤️

:Loved every bit of this ff! Though I did not comment much off late but thats your fault as I --yes yes I was out of words..

Nowadays I am in the reading mode. And I cant seem to think when I am reading updates.

So all my updates are pending! But I must say I enjoyed reading these wonderful FF's!!

Thank you dear!!!!

mmmuaaahhh👍🏼👏

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Saumya

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Posted: 10 years ago

#307

Dida.. Plzzz plzzz plzz update TMS Orignl... Plzzz... Nanha munna sa baby is waitng... Nd plzz update TGW nd COF also... Plzzz

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-Maggi-

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Posted: 10 years ago

#308

OMG..! Raghav n Kalpi as Grand dad n mom I never wanted to see them that old.. (as in bhuda bhudi type)

but this was very emotional they died in each others arms was ultimate that proved their love to be an eternal, i loved there sweet convo with full of concern n love before their last breath

lots of characters in this part for my little brain to understand 😆

lovely ending for a wonderful RagNa journey 😃

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rani214

@rani214

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Posted: 10 years ago

#309

Wow charu i was not on forum for a month n u gave another version of marriage story...guess a small brk from creativity was boon to all of us n wit dis bonus track u have fullfilled our wish of no rakhi marriage

Hope u don't get bore by my long cmmnt

Part 10, 11,12- Loved this Raghav who has ability to take on Kapoors directly without involving der kids n he can't hurt love of his life n every emotion was written well

Loved dat there is no lie, no hiding marriage from the society

Loved ragna cute off romance😳

kalpi's dress was beautiful

Pakhi's realization on seeing ragna intimate dance followed by ragna n pakhi convo was superb

Pakya supporting pakhi was lovely

Ragna romantic scene at the terrace with our anthem ' tum hi ho' was beautiful 😳😳

Part 13,14- Raghav can never take his eyes away from his Kalpi😉

Prem apologizing to Raghav n ashamed of his parents deed was nice n Prem teasing Kalpi was cute

Pakhi and Pakya are married, that was a surprise but liked it...now pakhi will have kamla ma forever

Kalpi going with Pakhi and Pakya to kamla house was nice

Liked hw kalpi explained to Kamla

Kalpi trying to mend Raghav and Gauri relationship was wonderful n also loved dat Raghav recognized d taste after so many yrs n his brkdwn was emotional

Part 15,16- Omg what a power packed update n end was so scary...fear, concern, shock,suspense everything in one update

First u made us believe pakhi helping her dad n all of sudden tables were turned

Kalpi running into Raghav arms her everything and letting out all her pain was a beautiful moment

U have brillantly revealed der plan n loved dat u also gave pakya an imp role too

Raghav beating that jerk black and blue was amazing n den kalpi beating him superb

Feelng bad for Pakhi and Prem

Gun shot at the end was truly shocking

Part 17-Liked dat sahil was shot instead of ragna or pakya pakhi n prem...how dare he curse raghav for loveless life

loved the way you changed Prem's character for good... him marrying a middle class girl out of love n also Raghav, Kalpi and Jhadavs became his extended family was lovely

Naughty raghav romancing khullam khulla

Loved ragna son's name Nihanth

Happy beautiful ending

Epilogue -charu it was mind blowing fantastic awesome fabulous, marvelous, lovely emotional update...actually m speechless n still in ragna land

The moment I started to read bench scene wen raghav came I strd to cry n d way beautifully u continued further was jus amazing...loved hw u showed der beautiful journey n how in der last moment dey wanted to see der frnds n fly happy

Truly ragna r soulmates n can never b separated

This alternate track is as awesome as original ...Hats off to you girl for giving us two different versions of the same story, without repetition. U r an amazingly talented n creative writer

I can never frgt this story specially d epilogue whc u have brilliantly written n beautifully conveyed eternal love of ragna

lots of love, Hugs n kisses muaah ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗

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chahat4u

@chahat4u

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Posted: 9 years ago

#310

The countless Sunrises and Sunsets tell me how very much I am late,

The journeys of Moons to its full glory & back remind it's not the right date.

But I still wanna murmur, All my THANK YOUs are for you; stored in my heart's safe.

-Charu B.

Hello My darling Readers, especially "The Marriage Story: RagNa FF" readers. I had a teeny-weeny thing to say, for those of you who are waiting for updates of "The Marriage Story". I thought which other thread can be better than the "Bonus-Track Thread" of this story. It was the best way to thank those of you who have waited for The Marriage Story for months; and most of all this was the perfect way to say THANK YOU to each and every one of you who read and commented on the Epilogue of "Bonus-track" of "The Marriage story".

Things happen in life and things happen with me a lot emotionally. In all that hustle-bustle, I did not/could not reply to each one of you; neither individually nor through one common message. I swear, this is one time I have regretted a lot not being able to reply. Because I know how special this Epilogue was for you all; the same as it was for me. You all shed tears with me; I cried all the time while writing this part; and you all were with me even then. You all cried while reading and I take it as my best gift from you all. Thank You for feeling those emotions with me; it is a compliment for any writer that his/her readers feel the emotions in the same depth.

I take it now it will seem super-stupid, if I try to reply to the comments in this thread individually. So, I find the next best way to thank you; this post.

This post serves two purposes. First, thank each one of you who made the journey of this "Bonus-track" successful and who waited for the updates of main story. Second, is an assurance & maybe a mini-announcement: -

"The Marriage Story" will be back hopefully soon, I will try to update it shortly. With one story over, I can try to work on its updates or at least tracks now. I misplaced the diary in which I had written all the future tracks and story of "The Marriage story". I am trying to find it; but even if I don't find it. I will work on the tracks again; and it will be difficult because I take time to plan/write serious tracks. But this is an assurance that this story might be back soon, maybe sometime this month.

But if I become late again then plz don't kill me 😆. For one thing will be sure, update or no update. Tracks/updates of "The Marriage Story" are back to planning stage at least. 😳

Once again, I Love You All for waiting and loving this story 😃 🤗 ❤️