BONUS-TRACK THREAD:The Marriage Story: RagNa FF,Thank You, P-45,7/4/16

chahat4u thumbnail
17th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 10 years ago
#1

Some things just happen without you planning it, the same happened with me because of which I ended up writing an "alternate version" or "bonus track" for: "The Marriage Story: RagNa FF". I am happy for those reasons now since because of them I imagined the story differently. I am sharing with you that alternate version as "Bonus Track" here now. It may not be entirely different from the original version which I have written or which I may show in future. But some things surely are different. So please forgive me in advance for any overlapping you may see in any of the both versions. I know I am not that creative so shortcomings might be there in this or other version in future. But still hoping with a happy ending of RagNa you all may forgive me!

For now, please read this and give your feedback to me. The next update of the original version is also ready and I may upload in Second Thread soon.

The "Bonus Track" will end in five-six parts more.

For consistency, please refer to "Part-1 to Part-9" of "Thread One" of "The Marriage Story: Ragna FF".

LINK TO "THREAD ONE" OF "THE MARRIAGE STORY: RAGNA FF":

(Parts 1 to 9) : -

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/ek-mutthi-aasmaan/4065297/the-marriage-story-ragna-ff-part-23-part-24-edited-pg-131-31-10

INDEX

PART-10: Page-1

PART-11 : Page-5

PART-12: Page-10

PART-13 : Page-16

PART-14 : Page-19

PART-15 : Page-24

PART-16 : Page-29

PART-17(LAST) : Page-34

THE EPILOGUE : Page-40

Thank You Note : Page-45

Edited by chahat4u - 9 years ago


DO NOT COPY THIS POST AS THIS IS EXCLUSIVE TO INDIA FORUMS


Created

Last reply

Replies

312

Views

44.1k

Users

57

Likes

856

Frequent Posters

chahat4u thumbnail
17th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 10 years ago
#2


THIS IS A "MEMBERS ONLY" POST
The Author of this post have chosen to restrict the content of this Post to members only.


Aru18 thumbnail
11th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 10 years ago
#3
res
unres
Awesome charu..bonus track also to good..
you show everyone's emotion clearly..loved it..
kalpi is so sweet she still think about pakhi..and pakhi don't want to talk about her..
raghav distroy only sahil kapoor not pakhi...he is really a gentleman..
continue soon..this version also very exciting..
Edited by Aru18 - 10 years ago
shahsb_26 thumbnail
18th Anniversary Thumbnail Visit Streak 365 Thumbnail + 9
Posted: 10 years ago
#4
I read way before u updated I feel <3 for some reason.. :D
sweet1308 thumbnail
11th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 10 years ago
#5
Res
Unres
Wat a lovely update oh I so much live this rag he truly love kalpi n gaur I will understand as kalpi n rag will make her realise👏
Edited by sweet1308 - 10 years ago
maarushkaa thumbnail
11th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 10 years ago
#6
haahahaha...charuuu...u indeed are a wonder girl !
Mere se idhar ek storyline sambhli nahi jaa rahi thi & here u r ...u r worth admiring yaar !!😃😃
What abt celebrations ..usko update karne ka muharat kab hai ?? 😉😉

MARUSHKAA
SamBricka thumbnail
11th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 10 years ago
#7
nice Dida i luv it... I m supr hapy dat raghav is not marrid 2 PK... Wow...
laavanya4u thumbnail
11th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail
Posted: 10 years ago
#8
Excellent thinking and an excellent update.
I must say ,that,you have given the alternate version in a more crisp manner.
Though,wanted to punish the kapoors,he had made a very very wise plan,so that
the kapoor's doesn't suffer like him,when the kapoors forced him to flee from his own
country.
I had really like the part" When Raghav said to Pakhi,though I had come for this fake marriage,
I can't marry you,as my lovely wife will never approve for such an action of mine and I am giving your life back to you"".
But,Gauri will not leave this issue so easily.After slapping Raghav so hard,will she take all
her enemity towards Kalpi?????????///
WAITING FOR THE PART 11.
abxetz thumbnail
10th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail
Posted: 10 years ago
#9
Hai charu its interesting 👏 I like that part raghav poo 😡 ke moo par kehdiya ki he is madly and crazily love kalpi and only kalpi 😛
IThinkALot thumbnail
11th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 10 years ago
#10
Bonus track!! Even this alternate version is so nice!

Related Topics

Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".