BONUS-TRACK THREAD:The Marriage Story: RagNa FF,Thank You, P-45,7/4/16 - Page 30

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Posted: 10 years ago
Aww Charu, that was fantabulous. Truly great! Awesome! Superb! All rolled into one! Wish I could hug you right now 🤗 You are simply amazing! Mwah

From the moment Kalpi had that discomfort I started getting emotional. When they sat on the bench on the terrace, memories of their special moments came flooded to me. I had started crying long before they reminisced their memories of the family. Tears wouldn't stop however hard I may try and I decided to take some time to compose myself before I could comment. Quite an emotional one, it was.


There was no flaw in the whole update, not that you makes mistakes. But really admire the way you have woven all the characters together to make one big happy family, considering the past . You have shown how people change in a good way , also how one can learn from their mistakes and change for better.


Ragna has lived a happy life with the love and support of their kids, friends and family and when the time came to leave the world, they did it together for one cannot live without the other. The life they led was successful, inspirational and remarkable not only for their kids but also for others for many found Raghav and Kalpana their role models.

Loved every bit of the journey of the bonus track as much as I love the original and I would like to thank you for giving us two different versions though it was tiring for you .

Keep up the good work and god bless!

Love you dear! Thanks for liking the username 😃 🤗❤️
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Posted: 10 years ago
Wow charu,This is too good,I'm crying Yaar,it's truly sad🥺,I can't even write,i's too sad and beautiful,you made me cry Yaar😭😭,My comment is too short but I can't write anything else😭😭😭 My RagNa😭😭😭

Okay a few hours later 😆😭
I'm Better now so this update was amazing charu,I like how Prem,Paakhi had their family and how All were friends and the children are bonding that so sweet😳 RagNa so old Yet so in love Awww butterflies again😳And everyone is understanding their love that is truly amazing and beautifully wriiten,As soon as I read Kalpi wanting a hug from Raghav and Kisses also i can feel the sad Part comming up,I know it too well.Aww Shameless Singhaina is back,Love you for that😉,I guess this is the first FF that made me cry,Charu you made me cry Yaar,And I'm tearing up again,This ending was so sad yet so beautiful It reminds me Of Pavitra Ristha😆😉😭,Ohh if My Chocopie had die I would've Cried more,I guess that were so still attached to RagNa so much that them dying will makes us Cry,RagNa is always there,After reading this amazing update I miss RagNa even more,I truly love and miss them,Thank you Charu for a beautiful update filled with Emotions and Everything,i request Please make another FF i do Love your writing,Please always continue😉
Edited by ariarai - 10 years ago
sumasridhar thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
Chahat it was heart touching updt as it made me cry but together 4ever s that's what v needed THQ dude
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Posted: 10 years ago
Superb#fantabulous#mindblowing#awesome... Thats what i can say to u n ur writing skills...U've created such a pure love story that can be read over n over again 😭 But u made me cry so much i till cant stop crying... I felt as if i have lost some one close to me..raghav n kalpis love for each other their care their kiss their hug... Just cant have enough of it...their so nice n understanding family 👏👏👏 U've shown every thing so well ... But just one thing don't make them dead in ur origional version plz...
N do write more ff on ragna n dont forget to pm me i cant afford to miss a story by an awesome writer like u charu ❤️❤️
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice epilogue. I always will miss this ragna. Update next ragna ff soon. Ur awesome writer.thanku for writting superb ragna story.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Wonderful update charu😊...you give us a all thing in your one update...you are awesome dear...loved the update 😛
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Posted: 10 years ago
awesome update charu..
tumne toh rula diya..😭 what a story and what a end..hats off to you..
keep it up..
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Posted: 10 years ago
Just awesome!! RagNa and their eternal love😭😭 True soulmates who lived, loved and died with each other😭
Bravo charu!!!👏👏👏
And about your thank you note.. Marriage story is really really awesome ff!!!! So don't you ever think that people aren't interested.. Thandi ke thand ke wajah se log aur forum thande pad gaye hai so not many are active..
Will be waiting for other updates and stories from you.. Brilliant end to this one..😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
I don't have much to say
I love the entire chapter, although it made me cry a bucket 😭
RagNa were true soulmates in all senses
From the beginning the fought and struggle to be together
And when they finally become one it was impossible to separate them
Even death didn't win, both gone together 😭
Charu you truly is amazing writer. Thank u for this...
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Posted: 10 years ago

Charu,what an ending to Raghav & Kalpana's epic love story ! To say it was amazing,would be an understatement.I loved every bit of it.

Oh wow,I don't know how to start even.I was so overwhelmed.

Raghav Kalpana made the perfect onscreen couple for me Charu.I have loved them more than any other couple.They were perfect for each other in every way possible.
Shreya aptly wrote here on this forum long ago that "One has a lot of love to give & the other needs a lot of love to heal".They were that perfect for each other.

As individuals they were both strong & very well sketched characters but the one story of their coming together was one hell of a tale to tell.

They both were damaged,scarred,emotionally broken,kept on fighting an inner turmoil all those years of growing up.They both had their demons which wouldnt let them rest,always lurking in the shadows waiting to take over.They had seen & gone through things,noone wishes to see,both forced to grow up,mature way too fast for their age.All they ever wanted was to be normal,to live,to love,to be just happy.But destiny was too miserly when it came to giving them what they wished for,the only thing that they ever wished for - Love. Love - a powerful emotion that has the capability to bring people together,transform lives & make life beautiful like few things can.All they ever wanted was to be loved,a chance to be truly happy.

The demons inside wouldnt let them be happy,they wouldn't let them sleep,they wouldn't let them live.No matter how hard they tried,they couldn't find relief.It was a battle they were meant to lose right from the start.But stubborn as they were,they were not willing to go down without so much as a fight.After all, all they wanted back was what was rightfully theirs,that which had been snatched away from them.Life had been nothing short of brutal & unfair at its very best for them.The injustice,the unfairness of it all was tearing them apart.They wanted to put all of this to rest once & for all,wanted to finally find peace - peace that which had eluded them for so long.That they had to do this themselves,dawned on them quite early on.They wanted to set things right,turn the clock back even,to happier times,times when they could be themselves,be the kids that they never were,get back their lost childhood,laugh,play,do whatever they wanted without a care in the world.For somewhere down the line they seemed to have lost themselves. Growing up it is this quest that will go on to define them as individuals.
Driven by rage they both set off on this path to self destruction to see to it that justice was served for every wrong that they had to endure.The tempest was raging within,lashing at every ounce of strength left in them threatening to consume them,obliterate their very existence.

But this time around destiny had something else in store for them.This time,something pleasant.Ragna would find each other & in the process find everything that they ever craved for in each other - Peace,Bliss,Relief & Love.How each one of them had something that the other needed/wanted,thereby filling up the hole in their lives,meking each other complete was a beautiful story to behold.

Charu,the undying love of Raghav & Kalpana which you showed left me speechless.It was what as audiences,we all wanted to see.Ragna's love for each other wasn't the same.It just grew in time.With each one of them having the other by his side,they went on to conquer everything.The perfect house,the perfect family,social standing.They achieved everything.They were the perfect role models for their children,even thier grandchildren.Hell yeah they were Charu.They were great characters,strong,resilient,never willing to back down.They had their flaws but even if with all their flaws,they were perfect for me.They died in each other's arms knowing that they had each other now & always.I cried like anything Charu.It was beautiful.

Kalpi wishing to die ahead of Raghav was touching.Know what Charu,I had always wanted to see this side of Kalpana in the show.Because that Kalpi meant the world to Raghav,that for him she was everything was pretty evident in the show.Raghav had noone in his life & so Kalpi was all he had.But Kalpi had always had a loving family,so she might not love Raghav as much as Raghav loved her.Well she was madly in love with Raghav but it was just not the same as Raghav's love for her.That's what I think.Like Sahana once wrote "Ragna might get married & have kids someday but Raghav is always going to put Kalpana in the 1st place.She is his world.But Kalpi though is madly in love with him,might not feel the same because she did not crave for love the way Raghav did.She always had this loving family".So I thought the separation was a great opportunity for the makers to make Kalpana feel about Raghav the way Raghav feels for her.Realise how much she wanted Raghav in her life.

Beautiful family tree there Charu.Also I wanted to see this close relationships between the Singhanias,Kapoors & the Raizaadas.Sammy & Raghav's friendship is eternal.The way you portrayed

Sammy's respect,love,care for Kalpi was beautiful.It was like in the show.Sammy respected Kalpana & always knew her to be the one to be the shining light in Raghav's life.Sammy hugging Raghav's corpse & crying his heart out was heartbreaking.But was beautiful in the way that it showed the depth of their friendship.

Prem & Raghav's friendship was what I always wanted to see in the show.Prem was just spoilt,but wasnt as sinister as his father.I remember one particular scene in EMA when a fustrated Prem shouts out to his father about how he didnt understand as to why Raghav was out to get them.He was confused.He didnt know what his parents had done to Raghav way back.You showed it beautifully.That Prem wanting to set things right after everything was out in the open was what I expected.

About Pakhi,you know very well Charu,how much I like Pakhi.She was a great girl until she turned villain.But even though she turned into a vamp,I always expected her to get back to what she essentially was,sweet & innocent,but the show went bust.Showing Pakhi the way you did made me really happy.

When I was done with the epilogue I felt like it was the end of EMA, i.e. the way I would have wanted EMA to end.It was beautiful Charu.Simply beautiful.

Ragna are always going to hold a special place in my heart Charu.They were beautiful the way they were.

Will say it again,a great & befitting end to Raghav & Kalpana's love story.It's beautiful.You are an amazing writer Charu.Everything was just perfect.Simply beautiful.

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