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Posted: 9 years ago

Episode 16


Aastha saw her cell and took it and opened msg box. Khana khaliya kaun hain. Aastha was confused but typed "Kaun hain." He saw the msg "hahaha evil smile I know everything about u where u r wat u r doing very soon u will meet me ab sirf trailer hain kal se tumhari jindagi main koi nahi hoga u will be alone mark my words u will beg me to kill u however ur father is struggling here soon u will meet him too u will also suffer like him."

Message beeped in her cell. She opened and read the whole message in shock and with wide eyes. She was feared. She suddenly went to beside room and knocked the door. Niranjan opened the door. Anjali too woke up. Aastha was literally shaking. Niranjan "Kya hua mere bachchi y r u so tensed." Aastha "Uncle ye... Message... dekhiye don't know who sent this mujhe bohut dar lag raha hain."

Niranjan "kaunsi message mujhe de." Niranjan read the whole message. Niranjan "Kya hain ye sab." Anjali took the phone and read it but she saw the number and cooled down. Anjali "hmm sahab ye Shlok bhi na kuch bhi kar dete this is Shlok's number majak kar rahe hain wo bevaja pareshan kar rahe hain wo Aastha ye Shlok hain don't worry u go and sleep don't worry."

And she gave phone to her. Aastha was shocked "Kya!!" and she got angered. Aastha "I m sorry uncle for disturbing u." Niranjan "nahi beta I m sorry on the behalf of Shlok he shouldn't have messaged u like that I know wat u r feeling." Aastha "Koi baat nahi uncle aap sojayiye I will see thanks a lot." And she went to her room and angrily read that message again.

Aastha "Kaun hain aap pls batao mujhe pls mere baba ko chod dijiye if u want me u kill me but pls leave my father I beg u who r u wat do u want from me pls leave my father do u want me to come anywhere I m ready pls tell me the address pls let me meet my Baba once pls." Aastha thought akdu kahin ka what did he think of himself haan.

Shlok saw the message and laughed out loudly. Hmm ye ladki bhi na kuch bhi sach samjthe hain. But he saw another msg "dekhiye main ab nikal rahi hoon mujhe bas place batao main aa rahi hoon." Shlok was stunned. Ye ladki kya kar rahe hain. Aastha then switched off the phone. Aastha "ab dekhti kaun pareshan hota hain." And she tried to sleep.

Shlok thought arey ye ladki pagal hain kuch bhi sach maante hain and he typed message again. But it didn't seemed that message was delivered. Shlok was thinking kya hua msg kyun nahi jaa raha hain. He thought to call her to say to not go anywhere. He immediately called her but it was coming switched off. Now he is tensed. Aastha too feeling restless. Agar wo msg sach main hain tho she was fearing now an unknown fear was created by him.

Shlok just called his Baba. Niranjan in his sleep took the call and listened whatever he said. He laughed and said she was just joking and also she knows that u messaged her. Shlok was then relaxed but how dare her to tease him like that. Hmm Aastha she really will be the death now he made her restless. She cant sleep. Wat if that msg is real. She woke up and went to terrace.

She just saw up and was expecting her mother to see her. Unknown tears flown again in her eyes. Anjali who woke up for water saw her going to terrace. Anjali too followed her and saw her and felt pity for her hmmm ye Shlok bhi na she thought. Anjali went to her and placed hand on her. Aastha saw her and hugged her and cried and said "Aai."

Anjali "Aastha chup ho jao kya hua tujhe neend nahi aa raha hain kya." Aastha "nahi Aai wat if that msg is true wat if someone torturing him pata nahi kis haal main hain baba." Anjali "shsh Aastha don't cry nothing will happen to ur Baba I think he is not in the condition to come don't cry he will be come now u come with me."

She took Aastha with her and she gave sweater to her and made her sleep in her lap. Aastha slept after sobbing for sometime. She slept with most difficulty. Anjali made her sleep on the bed and she too slept with her there itself. Shlok was thinking bohut badi dramebaaz hain and he smiled and recalled her in towel and smiled and slept.

At that night Anjali suddenly woke up as she heard some sounds. She slowly took away Aastha's hands and went down. She saw someone going out of the house. She saw the shadow. Slowly she too went to find him. She hid behind the door. Suddenly she came out and found no one but door was unlocked. She remembered she closed all the doors. Then how he came and who he is. Anjali was worried kaun hain wo aadmi. She again closed the door and went to Aastha and caressed her head.

Anjali "I wont let anything happen to u mere bachci." And she kissed her and slept beside her. Anjali "bappa kuch mat hone de iss mausum bachchi ko." Next morning she wanted to say it to Niranjan but not to Aastha. She will panic. Niranjan "So Anjali lets go and Aastha don't worry we will be coming now and then k." and he patted her cheek. Aastha smiled. Anjali "nahi Sahab Sita aane de then we will leave if not then u leave u might get late to office so." Aastha "nahi Aai no pblm y r u worrying this much I wont go anywhere pls u leave uncle needs u aap jayiye." Anjali "Aastha tum jao apne kamre ko ye mera bhi ghar hain samajla." Aastha remained quiet. Niranjan sensed something different. Niranjan "theek hain Anjali ur wish." And he left. Anjali "Aastha go and fresh up I will prepare breakfast." Aastha nodded and left. Aastha went to her room and saw a paper "hmm u r missed yesterday be ready to meet ur fate." Aastha was shocked. Immediately she rushed to Anjali and shown that to her. Anjali was shocked. Aastha was crying. She doesn't know wat to do. Anjali just hugged her and cried with her and said "I never let anything happen to u Aastha main tujhe kuch nahi hone doongi." Anjali immediately called Niranjan and asked him to come there. Niranjan was worried. Aastha observed all these. Niranjan took the paper and went to police station directly. He also confronted them Police man said he will give security from now.

Niranjan assured it will be alright from now and went away. Shlok too came to know that and he too went to her. Aastha was sitting on the couch and just held her head in her hands. Anjali "Sahab I have forgotten smthng yesterday I saw someone crossing our door I don't know who is he."

Shlok came front and said "Aastha tum theek tho ho." And he shook her shoulder. Aastha looked at him tearful eyes. Aastha "Baba ka kya hoga." Shlok didn't say anything. Pain is easily visible in his eyes. Niranjan "Aastha we will get police protection from now." Aastha lost in her thoughts and nodded. Three of them worried about her.

Shlok looked painful he really cant see her like that. Niranjan was confused. Within no time police came. Aastha didn't see them and went in. Niranjan nodded to take care of the house. Anjali said "Sahab shall we take her to our home I m really worried for her kaun kar raha hain ye sab." Aastha "Aai Aai mujhe kuch yaad aaya ek aadmi hain Salman chachu he was very close to our family he might take Baba I don't kow y I accuse him pls unhe dhoondiye pls mere liye."

Shlok "kaun hain wo where does he live do u know." Aastha "nahi I don't know baba said about him wen I was in America mujhe bohut dar lag raha hain agar baba ko kuch hoga tho." She was literally shaking. Shlok just held her face in his hands and made her look him "Kuch nahi hoga tumhari baba ko I promise I will bring him dekho meri tarf mujhpe bharosa hain na." Aastha nodded in tears.

Anjali saw her emotionally "Aastha don't worry." Niranjan "Anjali we will stay here from today." Anjali "Ji Sahab." Shlok too saw her state. Y cant he see her in this condition. Wat god made is really unforgivable wat did she do to suffer all this. Shlok angrily strode out. Aastha was in dilemma y r they worrying for her. Niranjan too felt heavy. Anjali took her to her room and made her sit but Aastha slept in her lap and cried.

Anjali didn't know how to console. Aastha "Aai Baba ko kuch nahi hoga na." Anjali "Kuch nahi hoga baba ko don't cry mere bachchi ham hai na don't cry." And she wiped her tears. Aastha slowly drifted into sleep. Anjali "Kalindi main vaada karta hoon I will save ur daughter even at the cost of my life." Niranjan was tensed who has the dare to come to his own house and to warn them. Nothing came to his mind. Shlok too felt so much y cant they bring her to their home he thought but but... every where there is a dead end.

Episode 17

Edited by Saibhargav - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago

haha.. very innovative style of writing replies...😆😆
well done bhai..
i m impressed...👏
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hai Sai gud evening. Thanks for your update and pm.
Nice update yaar 😉
Shlok sending mgs to astha 😉 . Reading this she got fear. But Anjali finding its shloks no.
Arey astha also sending back him the mgs knowing that it was shlok.arey waw shlok what r u doing.
😊
Astha going to terrace. Anjali following her. Their conversation was superb.
Really some one is coming there. 😡
Anjali followed but didn't see him.
Really they all are worring for astha.
Really the letter is making me also fear.
Thank god from today there will be police protection.
Shlok was too much worried for her. 👏
He can't see her like this. Shlok this is called love yaar. Accept yaar.
Anyway nice update.keep it up.
V r waiting. Please don't make astha suffer too much.
It is really sad from the beginning she is crying yaar. It is almost has been 16th update yaar. 😡
Please enter avdoot yaar. And enter the villain 😡 . V want to see him. 😡
Continue soon...

Sai from two days u r using different colours in writing. Its nice yaar. Keep it up. Loved it.
Edited by sudhamadhu - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
awesome update...
gud going..
shlok msgd astha.. & made her fear.. astha came to know his plan & in turn made him restless..
niru pacifies both ashlok..😆😆
but astha thinks wat if the threat is for real..😕
& she goes to terrace..
anjali follows her there...
anjali consoling astha...
sum1 actually came to guest house to threaten astha..😲
then y dint that oerson take away astha..😲
m sure he could hv easily... coz that time there wer astha, anjali & niru baba at home...
now astha having police protection.. 😲
she remembers a person who was their family frnd...
continue soon..
thnks 4 d pm..
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: coolhi1988


haha.. very innovative style of writing replies...😆😆
well done bhai..
i m impressed...👏


arey yaar i was in hurry to update it at 6 so thats y
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Saibhargav


arey yaar i was in hurry to update it at 6 so thats y


i know... 😆😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
Really nice update ...
Just loved the message prank of shlok..😛
Thank you
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Posted: 9 years ago
A mysterious story... Nicely written...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Very interesting...
But aastha is suffering a lot,so pl tell about her father soon, feeling sad when she cries this much.


Nice it is, the way u taking it ,keep it up...
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Posted: 9 years ago
argh.. ab to unres karo😡

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