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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: coolhi1988

awesome update...
gud going..
shlok msgd astha.. & made her fear.. astha came to know his plan & in turn made him restless..
niru pacifies both ashlok..😆😆
but astha thinks wat if the threat is for real..😕
& she goes to terrace..
anjali follows her there...
anjali consoling astha...
sum1 actually came to guest house to threaten astha..😲
then y dint that oerson take away astha..😲
m sure he could hv easily... coz that time there wer astha, anjali & niru baba at home...
now astha having police protection.. 😲
she remembers a person who was their family frnd...
continue soon..
thnks 4 d pm..


thank u didi
arey how can he take her yaar whoever came he is only one person he thought to take her if she was alone but Niranjali too were with her na
k didi aap ab tak padliya na ab aap batayiye story kaise turn karna chahte hain aap
anyway thanks for commenting
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: vaishux

Really nice update ...

Just loved the message prank of shlok..😛
Thank you


hmm thank u vaishux
akhir Shlok hi aisa kar sakta hain Aastha ke saath
wait and watch for more exciting updates on the way
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: dazzles

A mysterious story... Nicely written...


thank u anu
at one stage there wont be any mystery u will like it a lot yeah keep an eye on my updates bcause coming updates r crucial
Edited by Saibhargav - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Catherine06

Very interesting...

But aastha is suffering a lot,so pl tell about her father soon, feeling sad when she cries this much.


Nice it is, the way u taking it ,keep it up...


k k wait for few more days u will be thrilled pls na jus few more days i mean 2-3 days thats it i wont make u wait for her smile k
thanks for liking my writing there is more to come jus stay tuned to this ff
thanks a lot for ur support and comments those means a lot to me
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: chickyhoney

Very nice update hope these problems bring ashlok together n they fall in love soon


thank u
yes these problems r going to end soon
and wat u r expecting is also on the wat so stay tuned to this ff
thanks for ur support
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: rd0309

Another good update, It's getting twisted day by day!!


thank u
get ready for more roller coaster ride and fasten ur seat belts
its going to be interesting from now
thanks for having patience till now

Edited by Saibhargav - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: nadeeka1200

Why didn't shlok accept his feelings?

Nice story sai thank you
Waiting for next update


hmm Shlok hain na thoda akdu tho banta hain
sabar rakhiye na u will njoy it
thanks for ur support
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: chandalekha

Someone came to the guest house??😲

naughty shlok frightening aastha, poor girl
waiting for the next...


yes someone u will get to know about him later
Aastha hain hi itni buddhu kahne keliye America main padliya lekin bilkul buddhu hain
thanks for ur comments

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Saibhargav


hmm thank u chechi
u have to wait for few more days to see her smile but i m saying i wont disappoint u sabar kijiye k
ur comment always encourages me gud keep it up
hmm wait and watch wat is on the way in Aastha's life

Arey Sai r u going to make astha cry more. Please yaar don't do this. U always like her henna

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Posted: 9 years ago

Episode 17


From then Aastha was not eating properly. Anjali observed this. She was always lost in thoughts. Sleep too was very far from her. Every second she was dying inside thinking of her Baba. Niranjan too bcame busy in finding him. Shlok too bcame tensed now and then. Wat to do and who is this Salman how to find him. He was playing with his keys and went to one of Avdoot's friend's home.

It was locked. He kept on finding his friends. No one was there except one. Atlast he went to Sharma ji. Shlok asked him whether he knows Salman who is close to Avdoot. He nodded no but Shlok found a bit awkwardness. He said he wants to know it bcoz Aastha is in danger. Sharma ji still refued to answer. He said no again.

Shlok lost his temper and shouted "how come u don't know damn it u r his friend and Salman too then how come u don't know him haan." Shlok "I m sorry I m sorry." Sharma "dekhiye I don't know who is he but Avdoot has maintained it secret we too asked about him he said childhood friend so we didn't ask much about him I think both of them left this country." Shlok "Kya u mean whatever is going on is true did Avdoot uncle really do this." Sharma "mujhe nahi pata but consequences r like that." Shlok "U can also think Salman might have cornered Avdoot uncle." Sharma "If he does then y both of them r just vanished." Shlok kept a thoughtful look and also remembered kalindi's words "bhaag jao bhaag jao." Iska matlab Avdoot uncle but Aastha is so confident that he didn't ab kya sahi hain kya galat hain. Shlok said thanks and left him.

He began roaming and also tried to find out who is behind all these. He also thought that Kalindi's death has something to do with it. Aastha was worrying a lot. She was in dilemma. Oh God wat happened to her. Y God is doing this to her how cute and friendly she is y is this happening to her.

Anjali kept on staring at her from afar. Aastha didn't notice it. Slowly tears were started in both of them. Anjali wiped hers and recalled her name "Aastha Aastha mere bachche." She slowly got up and went near her. Aastha noticed it "Bappa mujhe bhi le...."

Anjali put her hand on her mouth. Anjali "Aastha don't say like that ham sab hain na tumhare liye Bappa sab theek karega." Aastha "kab aayi ye sab kya ho raha hain kaun kar raha hain kaise pata karna hain I never hurt any one Aai but y God is punishing me Aai wat did I do meri Aai hamesha kahte hain achche logo ke saath achcha hi hota tho kya main kaunsa bura kaam kiya hain I don't know wat to do mujhe nahi jihna hain Aai nahi jihna."

Anjali shouted "Aastha aisa kabhi mat kahna aur bura vakt hota hain jindagi main u should face the situation u will be happy believe me main vaada karta hoon Aastha I will be beside u everytime I m with u main tumhari aai hoon k I cant see u like this tum mere bachchi jaisa hain k ye sirf bura vakt hain don't cry mere bachchi papa aajeygi." Aastha just came to her and slept in her lap.

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Niranjan in his office thinking about the current situation. He was helpless and was rotating the pen stand on his table then suddenly police came to his cabin. Niranjan saw him and was surprised to see him there. Mahesh the same man. Niranjan "aap log yaha." Mahesh "haan Niranjan ji we want to ask u something we need some answers pls if u can co operate us."

Niranjan "Ji kahiye." Mahesh "dekhiye I m really confused dekhiye u r the one followed him after Kalindi's death we cant put our fingers on exact point but I have to ask u y did u follow Avdoot since his wife's death dekho I m not accusing u but pls we have proof we got it in cc u r the guys following him I don't know y r u protecting Aastha we also went to her home we didn't find anything pls if u can tell me wat is all these."

Niranjan "I know wat u r thinking but we r here to protect their family as far as I know Avdoot is not such a person but I don't know where he is but I just know he is in danger but I wont let anything happen to Aastha k if u want to know y I m doing all these I m ready to say but I cant understand y her mother said her to run away k I will tell y we r doing this." And he said everything.

Mahesh "Oh achcha did she say anything else." Niranjan "nahi pls if u can find him soon it will be a great help from us she is really sad very sad she cant bear this u know how ladies will feel she is a child y should she bear all this in this age haan she had lot of dreams she is saying she will die and all that she is our daughter too but who r they y r they doing all these yesterday they came to our house wat do they want haan we will protect her at the cost of our lives don't worry and thanks for protection if u need any help in financial point of view then I m always ready."

Mahesh "I can understand wat u r going through but for now I can say u r safe we will also give xtra protection don't worry we will find him soon we also checked bank cameras we didn't get anything but don't lose hope and don't worry he is alive as far as I know bcoz atleast we could have found his dead body but we didn't get anything like that I think some one intentionally doing all these aap fikar mat kijiye." And he left.

Shlok was coming to his cabin and found police there and was surprised. Mahesh went out. Shlok "Baba ye police kyun aaya." Niranjan "kuch nahi beta they want to ask something about the case uff pata nahi wo kab milenge." Shlok "baba aap pareshan mat ho jo ho raha hain hone de aap itni tension kyun le rahe hain chalo aap thodi der haram kar main yaha sab kuch sambhalunga aur baba I also searched for this Salman I didn't find him but I came to know he and Avdoot were meeting secretly I don't know wat is behind all these did Avdoot uncle really responsible for all this."

Niranjan "nahi I don't think so if it is the case then y would anyone try to harm Aastha I think he was held as hostage." Shlok "theek hain Baba aap ghar jayiye aaram le thodi der." Niranjan smiled and patted him. Shlok smiled. He want to go to Aastha. He didn't think anything but said "Baba I will talk to Aastha once."

Niranjan "Ji beta." Shlok went to his guest house. He want to be beside her. Anjali saw him going to her room. Ye Shlok ab kyun aaya she thought. Aastha just lied there watching pigeons. Shlok just knocked the door. Aastha opened the door and saw him "Baba mil gaya." Said she with cheerful face.

Oh God how can he say no how can he see her disappointed. Shlok "nahi Aastha lekin.." Aastha "aap andar aayiye." Shlok went inside. He came and sat beside her. Shlok "dekho Aastha I know wat u r feeling." Aastha "really." Shlok "Aastha pls listen I searched every friend of ur father's but only one of them is present every one left city with fear anyway he too said he doesn't know this Salman too." Aastha looked down.

Shlok doesn't know wat to talk. Shlok "hmm khana khaliya I m sorry for teasing u yesterday." Aastha "its k." Shlok "ab batao did u have lunch." Aastha nodded a no. Shlok held her hand and said "Aastha baba mil jayega ab jao khana khalijiye or do u want to go to mandir." Aastha with tearful eyes "haan pls will u take me there pls."

Shlok "theek hain ham jayenge lekin pehle tum khana khalo." And he just kissed her cheek. Aastha saw him and nodded. Shlok "ab aao we both will eat today come with me." Both Aastha and Shlok went to dining and both sat there. Anjali was surprised. She was begging her to eat since last one hour and Shlok came just now and he brought Aastha down to eat.

Shlok fired at her "aap kya kar rahe hain yaha ab tak Aastha khana nahi khaya aur aap yaha hone ki kya phayda hain." Aastha was shocked. Aastha "Shlok ji aap apni aayi ko kyu daant rahe hain don't say anything to her I refused to eat pls mere vaje se aap log mat maarna. Pls." Anjali "Aastha yaha aao khana khalo." Aastha and Shlok sat there. Anjali thought kya Aastha ko Shlok pasand hain.

They both ate silently. Shlok finished the lunch and said "ham mandir jaa rahe hain aap aana hain tho aao." Anjali "nahi u ppl go and also with security samajla." Shlok nodded. Aastha too went with him. There was full security. Shlok called Suresh and said he will be late. Aastha saw him with tearful eyes.

Shlok "arey chalo." Aastha "hmm chalo." Both went to the same temple. Aastha again cried and prayed to Bappa. Shlok "hmm ghar chele." Aastha "I want to sit here for sometime." Shlok and Aastha sat there. Aastha just leaned her head on his shoulder and caught his arm with her hands and was rubbing his hand. She just closed her eyes. Shlok saw her. Shlok held her hands and said "Aastha daro mat main tumhare saath hoon nothing happens to u aur nor to ur Baba don't worry."

Aastha didn't say anything. Aastha "kya ham ek baar mere ghar chelte pls." Shlok cant refuse her. Shlok "achcha theek hain chalo abhi." Aastha got up and he too went to their house. They too entered home through back door. No one saw them. Aastha just entered her room and sat there and just leaned on her bed. Shlok thought ye ladki kya kar rahe hain. Shlok "Aastha tum kya kar rahi hain." Aastha "Shlok pls let me be here for some time." He didn't say anything but roamed in room and something caught his attention.

Episode 18

Edited by Saibhargav - 9 years ago

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