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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: chickyhoney

Very nice update...it's getting interesting

U can use pink n green


thank u
at one time there wont be any mystery u will just go with the flow but trust me u will like it
hmm will think about it thanks for ur suggestion
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: rd0309

Very nice update... I guess Niranjan has something to do with Aastha's mother's accident


thank u
u will know about their relation
keep following it
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: nadeeka1200

Thank You Sai

Nice Update
I Like Black Colour
Waiting for next update


thank u nadeeka1200
hmm black but u didnt say about its mate
anyway thanks for suggestion
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: chandalekha

good one... niranjan guilty??? inspector got some clue????

poor astha, crying all the more...😭😭😭 why anjali is so sweet towards astha??


yes poor Aastha 😭 😭 i hate to say this it will continue for few more updates pls bear with these updates after that u will be relaxed and shocked thats all i can say
hmm u will know about their relation too
wait and watch
thanks for commenting it boosts me a lot keep it up
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: dazzles

You are making me confused with each passing day.. What is astha's relationship with niranjan.. Why they worried so much about her... To totally confused...


hmm u ppl r confused to their relation there r so many unsaid truths where is Avdoot who kidnapped him who want to kill Aastha who were the ppl around her house wat sin did Avdoot do and overall wat is the mystery behind Kalindi's death u cant see all these questions u got only one point wat is the relation between Aastha and Niru Baba hmm anu dont confuse k first njoy these updates u will know y i wrote it in this way i think u will like for wat i wrote
anyway thanks for commenting anu
keep it up

Edited by Saibhargav - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago

Episode15


Shlok didn't know wat to do he wants to console to be supportive to her. He recalled how she cried hugging his mother. He also recalled her scent her bare legs, her childishness wen she fought about teddy. How innocent she is. He got up and went to birds shop and bought some pigeons and took them to Aastha. He called out Aastha.

Aastha rushed to him. Shlok was surprised and said "arey aaramse y r u so eager." Aastha suddenly stopped and saw pigeons. Suddenly Gauri shouted "Aastha Aastha.." Aastha's face lit up. Gauri came and hugged Aastha. Shlok irritated bcoz of this lady. Shlok bet his forehead with his hand haan ye ladki.

Gauri came and saw pigeons and "haan pigeons wow so cute." And she was going to touch. Shlok pulled it back and said "heyy tumhare liye nahi Aastha keliye laya hoon aur if u touch them they definitely will try to fly away." He mocked her and he gave to Aastha.

Shlok "lelo ab khush ho tum." Aastha "lekin aap ye kyun laya kya jaroorat hain." Shlok "I thought ur mood will be better by playing with it but if u don't want no problem I will return it." Gauri "nahi Aastha say no I will take it dekho kitni cute hain." Shlok "heyy samaj main nahi aata hain na tumko tumhare liye nahi Aastha keliye laaya hoon."

Aastha said "nahi ye main nahi le sakta aap mere liye itna kuch kar rahe hain its enough thanks a lot Shlok ji aap pls.." Shlok "So u don't want it." Aastha reluctantly turned her face. Wat happened to her. Both Gauri and Shlok sensed something weird. Shlok "haan its k I thought u feel better if not so... then.."

Gauri "nahi nahi Mr Shlok keep it here I will talk to Aastha u know wen she is disturbed her mind doesn't work at all she doesn't know wat she says aap give it to me I will make her take it." Shlok gave it to her but his eyes settled on Aastha. Y is she avoiding him. He didn't know. He said bye to them and went away. Shlok thought now a days she is behaving weird with me aai se tho achchi se baat kar raha hain but kya hua hoga and he saw back again Gauri was taking Aastha to her room.

Gauri dragged her to her room and made her sit on the bed. Aastha "Kya hain Gauri y did u take it from him haan." Gauri "mujhe sab sach batao kya tum usse pyaar karte ho kya." Aastha "Gauri ye wat r u talking haan." Gauri "I said only truth if not so then y r u behaving like that with him haan y r u avoiding him I saw u both on the first day itself I know something is there tell me Aastha do u love him."

Aastha "nahi tho y r u asking like that he is a nice guy y do I need to avoid him haan." Gauri "then y r u behaving like this haan." Aastha "kuch nahi Gauri I m already taking a lot of help from them I don't want anything more from them already they r suffering a lot bcoz of me pata nahi baba kab milenge but I cant take this help from them I want to say something to u."

Gauri "kya hain." Aastha "Gauri don't say it to anyone today night I want to leave from here." Gauri "Kya!!!" Aastha "haan Gauri ye log meri baat ko lekar bohut pareshan hain bohut achche hain ye log but I don't want to disturb them..." Shlok barged into her room "Aastha samajthe kya hain apne aapko haan kaha jaogi tum haan jaha bhi jaogi tumhari haalat aur kharab hosakta."

Gauri "Haan Aastha he is saying it right y cant u be here no pblm at all dekho Aastha if u don't want to be here lets go to my house but I really feel u r safe here." Shlok "thodasa akal dijiye inko kah rahe ki jaogi dekho Aastha I m saying it last time u r not outsider for us really u also bcame a part of our family daily during dinner we all talk about u do u even know how much we r all worried for u haan."

Aastha "that is wat I m saying it Shlok ji u all no need to worry for me I don't know wat made u to save me but..." Shlok "Koi but but nahi hain now I m saying u will be here whether u like it or not if u want to run away then I will drag u into this house do whatever u want but u r not going to run away from me this is my guest house u will do as I say." And he left angrily.

Gauri "Aastha he is saying it right where u will go haan see how caring they r y do u want to leave haan mujhe kuch samaj main nahi aa raha hain." Aastha "chodo Gauri." Gauri went down and brought those pigeons to her. Gauri wants to cheer her up. After sometime Aastha took them and started to play with them. Gauri saw her and prayed to Bappa let her be like this all the time.

Gauri wants to pull her leg "vaise Aastha ye Shlok hain tho bohut hot hain na." Aastha suddenly saw at her "chii Gauri tum aisa kyun baat kar raha hain." Gauri "arey didn't u see him totally he is also handsome if everyting finishes then one fine day I will propose." Aastha irritated "Gauri tum na bakvaas ki baate mat karna."

Gauri "arey I m saying truth yaar y don't u believe me haan don't worry I will call u to our marriage k and also we will name our child as ur name after all bcoz of u I met him right don't worry." Aastha exclaimed and said "haan chi Gauri tum na bohut badmaash hogayi." And she bet her on head.

Aastha "vaise bhi Shlok tum jaise budhu se shaadi nahi karoge he is very talented he will not waste his life for u." and she smiled loked thoughtfully at somewhere. Gauri "Achcha tho aap batao wo kaunsi ladki se shaadi karenge kya will u marry him if u get a chance." Aastha "nahi I wont marry him bohut bada akdu hain ye dekha kaise chilla ke gaye hain akdu kahin ka whoever comes as his wife I really pity her."

Gauri "oho Aastha u no need feel pity for me I can handle him." Aastha "Gauri chi tum sach main badmaash hogayi now stop this bakvaas." And she looked angrily at her. Gauri "haan u r jealous right." Aastha "main kyun jealous hogi nahi main jealous nahi hoon now if u stop this topic now it would be better."

Gauri "achcha theek hain gussa mat ho chalo mere saath." Aastha "kaha." Gauri "arey chalo." And she took her to the terrace and shown clouds. Aastha saw clouds and smiled a bit. Gauri "Wont u dance in rain." Aastha "nahi Gauri first let Baba be caught then I will do whatever u say." And she went down.

Shlok was thinking again about her damn u Aastha damn it y do he need to lose his control always y cant he say it to her softly. Y is she thinking like that. Shlok in evenings went to his Baba's room. Niranjan and Anjali both were present. Shlok "dekhiye aaj Aastha achchi mood main nahi hain she was telling that she would run away from guest house today night I yelled at her to not go agar aap aaj raat uske saath so sakte hain tho Aastha kahi nahi jayegi."

Anjali understood he was implying her. Niranjan "Shlok u again scolded her how many times I have to say keep ur tongue to urself theek hain Anjali aaj ham dono vahi rukhenge." Anjali "ji sahab." And Shlok was leaving. Niranjan "Shlok rukho mujhe wo Virat ki project hain uski bare main mail karo aur ye file main tumhara sign chahiye do it and bring to office tomorrow."

Shlok nodded and took. Anjali "Sahab aaj ham dinner bhi vahi karenge." Niranjan "theek hain Anjali aap kuch aur lesakte bohut thanda hain bahar Aastha ko bhi sweater le aao." Anjali "Ji Sahab." And they left to Aastha within no time. At evening 7pm they went to Aastha.

Aastha opened the door. Aastha "Ji aap yaha iss vakt." Anjali "main batadungi." And they went in. Anjali "Aastha tum samajte kya hain kaha bhaagne ki kah rahe hain r we not caring u properly r we nothing to u haan y r u taking such hasty decisions haan if u talk like this then u will be arrested samajla." Aastha got tears and just hugged her and cried "I m sorry I wont go any where I m really sorry."

Niranjan "beta ham sirf tumhari khushi chahiye don't cry beta go and help her in cooking now aaj ham yahi rahenge." Aastha "kya aap log yaha kyun aap don't say me that u r here just for my sake." Anjali with round eyes "Aastha." And she bcame calm. Anjali took Aastha to kitchen and started cooking. Aastha also helped her but lost somewhere. Anjali put her hand on her and assured her everything will be fine.

Aastha cooked and brought to Niranjan. Niranjan tasted it and said "arey waa Aastha wen did u learn all these u were in America right." Aastha "but aai already taught me b4 leaving to America Aai always wanted me to be like a pure Indian I always loved her but she left me..mujhe chod ke chali gayi." And she cried again.

Niranjan "achcha Anjali aajse tum khana nahi banaogi dekho kitni tasty kabhi banaya tumne aisa dekhke seekho jara Aastha se." Aastha saw him and laughed. After the dinner Aastha was going to sleep. Anjali came to her room and saw teddy. Anjali "Aastha ye kya hain." Aastha didn't know wat to say. Anjali "Aastha r u still a small girl still playing with these haan sach main pagli hain tu."

Anjali "achcha ab tum so ja if u want anything I will be right next to ur room k don't hesitate to call us k." Aastha nodded and tried to sleep. Again she started her battle with herself. Shlok too was feeling restless he doesn't know wat to do. He wants to talk to her once y he didn't know. He is still not satisfied after sending his parents to her. He wants to see her cute face and to touch her nose as always he does. Aastha just lied on bed and thinking a lot. Kaha hain baba she was feeling now if baba and aai had been here she would be the happiest person. Message beeped in Aastha's phone "khana khaliya."

Episode 16

Edited by Saibhargav - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hai gud evening Sai. Thanks for your update and pm.
Nice update yaar. 👏
Really I loved it. 😛 😛
Shlok want to help her. He is thinking about her arey waw 👏
Love started on the way 😛
He brought pigeons for astha make her happy. ⭐️ .
It us is superb.
Arey guari u want to touch the pigeons henna.
No yaar our hero didn't allow you yaar.because it is for his drama queen yaar 😉
Arey asthu y r u avoiding ur prince. 😡
Astha want to go away from them 😡
Guari and shlok heard that. But shlok y r always being angry with her 😡
U know she is innocent henna.
After shlok left guari's teasing was superb. 👏
Arey she understand that astha started loving our hero.not bad gauri.
Gauri but I am telling u how much u try but shlok will be only our drama queens.
Shlok told about astha to his parents and they went to the guest house the part I liked.
Shlok is thinking about her. Arey waw 😉
He wants to see her to touch her nose. Shlok love started in u also. 👏
Anyway thanks Sai for this wonderful treat. 👏
Keep it up. U r rocking. Continue soon...
Hey today u wrote in red and green. Its is nice yaar.
Edited by sudhamadhu - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Beautiful and sweet update..😉
Loved the way Gauri teased aastha about Shlok👏
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Posted: 9 years ago
This Story is really nice i want to read more
Thank You Sai
Waiting for next update
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Posted: 9 years ago
Nice Sai pegion n gauri teasing is nice...

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