Making you mine 2 - Swasan OS - incomplete

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Dear readers,

Thank you for enjoying making you mine 1

I intended to write this story as a one shot, however having received several requests to continue with the story,mi shall try to continue.

I will not be able to commit to a SS or FF because I do not have the time. I have several pending stories in other forums. I have come to realize that with a SS or FF there is an expectation, commitment, a promise I am making towards the readers and myself and the story to continue it and update it often.

Also I do not watch this show regularly, the tracks more often than not wind me up... Hence I do not want to commit to a SS or FF.

What I shall do is write a series of OS where by I shall link the OS so that one can decide to read it as a comtinuous story or as a stand alone OS. This way I shall not commit myself to future chapters not give you an expectation of future chapters.

I hope this will be okay with you all.

Please note that I shall not be sending out pms. This is because majority of my buddy list do not follow the show.

Regards

Fuzz

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Making you mine 2

previously we saw that Swara assumes that Sanskar still loves Kavita, who is back from the dead. Kavita realises straight away that Sanskar no longer loves her and that he has moved on and loves his wife very much.

Sanskar is frustrated and annoyed with swara's decision to walk out of their relationship. He states it clearly that he loves her and has left it to her to decide if they have a future together. He has made it very clear that should she leave him this time, he will not allow her come back into his life.


Swara watches Sanskar's retreating form through tear filled eyes. Her mind replaying the words, "you will never come back into my life." Filled with dread and panic, she faces up the stairs as she admonishes herself for pushing him so much. "I should have found out what he wants, what he feels," she scolds herself silently.


Stepping into their room, Swara stops abruptly. Right in the middle of the room is Sanskar, his arms folded across his chest, his expression filled with anger. He bites out, "are you here because of me or because you want to be here?" Swara who was about to explain her earlier stand, stops and stares, confused with the Sanskar in front of her. "Good," he continues in a no nonsense attitude, "think very carefully before replying."


Seeing confusion and discomfort etched on her features, Sanskar smirks internally, "yes hunny, from now on you are no longer in charge nor in control of every situation." Hesitantly Swara says, "I... You... I..." Not sure what to say next, feeling very lost.


The urge to tease her, unsettle her further, Sanskar says softly with every step towards her, "I... You... I... What?" Her eyes wide, observing him, waiting to see what he will do next.


Stopping right in front of her, Sanskar raises his hand and slowly caresses her face and whispers, "were you going to say, I love you... You love me... I love you?" Her heart racing, so aware of him caressing the side of her face, unable to speak, she shakes her head. "Oh," he says nonchalantly as he continues to caress her, his finger tips lightly grazing her skin causing Swara to shiver, he continues, "were you going to say, I don't love you... You love me... I don't love you?" Too overwhelmed by the emotions she is feeling, Swara shakes her head."


Reluctantly Sanskar drops his hand as he takes a small step back, telling himself, "enough. Stop. You have teased her enough," as he reads a hint of distress lurking in her eyes. Her voice husky, she expresses her confusion,"I don't understand... You were very angry... And now you are teasing me..." Then continues in a stronger voice, "you have never teased me..." Thinking, "or caressed me..."

Smiling, Sanskar replies with understanding, "you have never left me a message saying, I love you, before..."

Feeling flushed, Swara thinks in disbelief, "I can't believe I am blushing. I never blush." Seeing sanskar's laughing eyes, Swara quickly cover his mouth with her hand and says, "don't you dare..."


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Hearing muffled laughter as she walks past Swara and sanskar's room, ragini slows down her steps, her expression that of surprise, thinking, "what the hell..."

Laksh, noticing ragini slow her steps, calls out in annoyance, "have we lowered ourselves to eavesdropping?"

"No of course not," ragini says as she picks up her pace, heading towards her room. Trying to analyze what just happened, she mutters, "Sanskar was really angry... Swara wanted to leave... Sanskar told her that she can leave... Then why is she in his room, making him laugh... Why didn't she leave..."


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Sanskar gazes at swara
Edited by angelpureness - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awe!!! Series...will love to read dear...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#4
Nice do continue... Love to have series
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Posted: 9 years ago
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ohh u r continuing this wow
love to read d series
awesome os
bt when she said she loved him i knw she had written a msg bt when n how i so want to knw
update soon
Edited by prachi_vrushan - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hey when are you going to complete it?
And when are you going to update next part of Pawn?
And also next part of your SwaSan SS?
I'm really waiting for these for sooo long!
Plz update soon!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hey dear...
Where are you??? Liked ur story writing way alot...update alll ur swasan stories...plzzz we are missing them...

Talia
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hello dear.😊
Read both the parts of the OS. Just loved it so much.👍🏼
Plzz update soon.😃

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